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RuthlessQueen

@RuthlessQueen

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: deepak148
thnx it is my poor attemp 😊

😲 Why do you call it a poor attempt. Don't underestimate yourself. I think you've done a great job! 👍🏼

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Puja

@..FrozenHeart..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Really nice.. Would wait for next update

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Sh_Abhiya

@Sh_Abhiya

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

awesome update
feel bad for misha & sahil , what mohan kundra did really cruel father
i'm happy rishbala already in love
pls pm me nxt time
pls continue soon

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Marie_789

@Marie_789

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Awesome update.

Thanx for PM
PM me when you update.

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indira

@saijahnavi

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

awsome update deepak...

precap really interesting...

i think rk betrayed madhu...😭😭

waiting for ur next update eagerly...
do continue soon
thanks for pm.

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Aliya

@..Aliya..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Awesome dowesome beginning deepak
So u also started writing..I remember u once wanted to write a FF but didn't continue 😆
Nice storyline..what a tragic past Malik's and Kundra has 😔
And the precap 😲 I can't wait for next part
Plss update ASAP
I hope RishBala's love will end their hate 😊

Edited by ..Aliya.. - 12 years ago

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840216

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: ..Aliya..
Awesome dowesome beginning deepak
So u also started writing..I remember u once wanted to write a FF but didn't continue 😆
Nice storyline..aww what a tragic past Malik's and Kundra has
And the precap 😲 I can't wait for next part
Plss update ASAP
I hope RishBala's love will end their hate 😊

dont set ur hopes high😊 this ff maybe gona sad ending

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840216

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: sai.janu350
awsome update deepak...

precap really interesting...

i think rk betrayed madhu...😭😭

waiting for ur next update eagerly...
do continue soon
thanks for pm.

things can be different 😛 just wait n watch