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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iiDona

Congratulations on becoming a Goldie.🤗

Second, you are right. In this case, he needs to get her head straight. I hope so as well.


thank you...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank you
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Posted: 12 years ago
its okay...i understand and thnks for clearing it up.today wen i opened forum my pm inbox was empty..i thought there might be prob in my cell...well there is not u only its others too who might have removed me frm there pm list! Now first of all i will have to check ur writing index and others too
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was one lovely update..i am flummoved a bit that she still cares for him, inspite of he putting her through so much of torment ...but hope this two weeks knocks some sense in her that some people are not meant to change... hope rk shows her the way
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aphrodyte

its okay...i understand and thnks for clearing it up.today wen i opened forum my pm inbox was empty..i thought there might be prob in my cell...well there is not u only its others too who might have removed me frm there pm list! Now first of all i will have to check ur writing index and others too

glad you do. merci
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: yappingduck

that was one lovely update..i am flummoved a bit that she still cares for him, inspite of he putting her through so much of torment ...but hope this two weeks knocks some sense in her that some people are not meant to change... hope rk shows her the way

classic sign. people go back to their abuser the second they meet him or her again. the cycle is tough to break even after years of separation. best she moves away from him so she has a chance to look at things in perspective. RK guiding the way only if she lets him. Miss Stubborn😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
She had good chance of knocking him out ..
Her kiss made a different story but as update progresses it was a different picture ..
why on earth she wants to go back to rishabh 😡 hopefully RK won't let her go back...
waiting for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AroraN

She had good chance of knocking him out ..

Her kiss made a different story but as update progresses it was a different picture ..
why on earth she wants to go back to rishabh 😡 hopefully RK won't let her go back...
waiting for next update

every touch does not equal I love you. I am glad you liked it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
read both part now...truly awesome updates dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter-5~

what all that happened???
yes she had a dream of a blissful life after marriage but the reality is too different.
she is thinking of oranges, trying not to feel him on her but it was worthless.
just thinking of killing him gave her pleasure.
understanding her situation.

that parallel realty phase, u wrote it really well. too realistic.👏
she thought, she killed him and was crying on this or merely acting.

those transitions between reality and his beliefs,were really impressive
him broke of bangals, and her thinking that those women were breaking them.
"laal sarri, laal khoon, laal kayenaat", this one was really nice.
him wiping off her lipstick, and imagining women taking away her one of the singaar.
and wiping off that mark on her forehead, and thinking of taking her symbol of suhaag.
and that mangalsutra one!!
this was my fav piece of writing in this chapter.

she finally pursued her planning of murdering her and those line "i was a lover before a monster"
and he said "he love her" this was least expected.

i actually thought she poisoned him. but now realized it was her dream.

she woke up after 2 days!! she really imagined a lot. she had started hallucinating.

"we have to paint" this man is too weird, or i should say creep. i don't know!





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