SS: Haq pg93 THE END - Page 52

Originally posted by: adeeba21

first of all congratz for "SS of the week"

Originally posted by: zoshad3119

read both part now...truly awesome updates dear...

Originally posted by: adeeba21

chapter-5~

what all that happened???

yes she had a dream of a blissful life after marriage but the reality is too different.

she is thinking of oranges, trying not to feel him on her but it was worthless.

just thinking of killing him gave her pleasure.

understanding her situation.

that parallel realty phase, u wrote it really well. too realistic.👏

she thought, she killed him and was crying on this or merely acting.

I love you for this <3 I have told you a million times but you need to hear it again. Your comments made me grin. I was sitting cell bio not really paying attention, my professor pointed me out. "Jasleen, what is up with you today?" I turned off my laptop like it was the Third Reich😛 That was hilarious. Best day ever! BTW, I was reading your comment. Next time, I am not sitting in the front😆

those transitions between reality and his beliefs,were really impressive

him broke of bangals, and her thinking that those women were breaking them.

"laal sarri, laal khoon, laal kayenaat", this one was really nice.

him wiping off her lipstick, and imagining women taking away her one of the singaar.

and wiping off that mark on her forehead, and thinking of taking her symbol of suhaag.

and that mangalsutra one!!

this was my fav piece of writing in this chapter.

she finally pursued her planning of murdering her and those line "i was a lover before a monster"

and he said "he love her" this was least expected.

i actually thought she poisoned him. but now realized it was her dream.

she woke up after 2 days!! she really imagined a lot. she had started hallucinating.

"we have to paint" this man is too weird, or i should say creep. i don't know!

Leaving you speechless is quite a task and I am glad I do it more often than not😉 I appreciate this feedback so very much <3

Originally posted by: adeeba21

chapter 6~

regret full eyes, yes this is my question too.

this character is too difficult to understand, most difficult i had ever read, i don't know what i feel about him. the first day i read this FF, i was angry on him, but now anger is gone and an unknown feeling is there, just thinking what he thinks, why he do so, a feeling which is telling me that i should go away from him or a disgusting feeling, i am not sure, i think u got me.

My intention is for you to get into the shoes of the girl. She feels hate, then nothing, then love and hate again. She does not know what to feel. All she knows is. she is trapped.

she purposely wore that dress. his anger and her reply.!! now he is behaving like a possessive one.

and she wants to go away, off course this was expected.

I wish she had a stronger reaction but, girl is in shock

RK another character!! whats happening.!!

Rishab RK, RK Rishab, tum mujhe pagal kardo gi.

🤣 I always laugh at your misery. Why do you even try anymore?😉

jasleen trying cliffhanger, karo karo, but i m already late, so now quickly going to next chapter.😆

taane maar janaab shaanti. aage badho aaram se😆

Originally posted by: adeeba21

vanity~ RK a new character, pata nahi kya ho raha. but he is behaving like a nice person. yes i doubt all ur character, even madhu also, i have a "BEWARE of jasleen's FF" board for me.

🤣 good call. much needed sign, tell the others. people asking me to refine plot. I say hell to the N.O.

he had seen those wounds and also asked for it, and she didn't said anything and keep the secrete of her marriage and her husband's image.i expected this, how can she say about her life to a person whom she met just now.

glad we have that clear. caution before confession.

painting, the word itself can make her shiver and bring back all those humiliations again and again.

RK is collecting her paintings, the last scene "sitting on her married bed with her half naked portrait"!!!, just thinking what madhu will be feeling.

hurt too many times to expect anything. that is what...poor thing

Originally posted by: adeeba21

the prejudiced bunch~

now i m framing an image of rishab like an obsessed person, who can be happy anytime and can be too bad next moment. really weird. but when he humiliates her, a feeling to hate him engross me, but next moment, i don't know what to do with. now u will be thinking where is my feminism attitude, but i m not able to apply it here.

I try not to judge, I am decisive yes but not judgmental, not consciously & in this situation all you can do is boil up your emotions. there is nothing ekse to do.

'muse and wife'!!, just thinking how these two words sound together.

polar opposite. two words that should not be used in one sentence.

i don't getting why basement and desert, u could have chosen anything, i can think of desert but basement, u r proving him as a mental patient, who is mad just to paint and his parents bought an object for his amusement which can make him engross. that's why they don't get affected how he behaves and behave as if everything is perfect.

I don't know, these stories come to me when I hit the bed & I scribble till something makes sense. I am half asleep when I write. I really don't know.

so RK and madhu's confrontation.

his words and concern which she got after so many days is making her to erupt her feelings and pain but she is still strong, understanding her, how can she believe RK when her own husband is like this, so there is no way to believe a stranger, but off-course his words of care and a hint that she can be free will make her think about it again and again.

precisely

RK new character, can't say much about him.

again trying cliffhanger.

that is what the majority thinks as well. everyone is cautious of me now.😆