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..Adeeba.. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gulaal, i thought of holi first, its tomorrow, actually no its today, technically it's 27th now, so happy holi!!!

lo bhol gayi about chapter, again coming to it.

the anxiety, the fear, her trembling figure, i can feel all of it. just thinking what will happen next?? what he will do with her, this feeling of helplessness. i don't want it.

her words how she was assuring him that RK doesn't matters to her, and she is his.
but that physical assault, he was gripping her neck, this is really much.!!!

she was clinging his leg and was begging him!!! this will surely make her to make a DECISION!!

holi, yahaan bhi, he is really crazy and again behaving as if she is just an object.

what was that he was behaving like lovey dovey hubby and that gulaal.
oh RK was outside, so now the devil is coming!!!
thinking how madhu will be feeling, just a moment of happiness.


now my feminism attitude is coming back and i don't know when i will burst out.
this kind of manhandling, verbal, physical as well as mental torture.
i really want to hit him now.
he is bruising her again and slap!!, i can't take it more nor madhu.

now i m perfectly sure he is a obsessed creepy man, who just think about his paintings, his muse and money.

money, yes she needs it, it is necessary, it spite of taking help from anyone, her own money is better.

she is finally out, but i am still afraid, what if he come back.
i know u won't ans it.

chalo now pat me on my back, i completed all the chap, with separate comments *phew* now i m tired😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
one chap is still left, i will be dead🤢,
next one kal!!
holi holiday, altough for one day😆
Edited by adeeba21 - 12 years ago
..Adeeba.. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iiDona

Just when I thought, can this day get any better? You proved it can!
Thank you. The sun is brighter, the spring flowers are yellower, the world is a colourful place today. Thank you God for the rainbows and smiles. p.s. I am not high on drugs, I am high on life.

Love & kindness always :)


😆😆, high on life, be always!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: adeeba21

Gulaal, i thought of holi first, its tomorrow, actually no its today, technically it's 27th now, so happy holi!!!

Happy holi!! It is still 26th daylight & I am loving the weather. We have people playing with the melting snow & gulaal mix here. Desis do it best😆 There is a holi dinner after Easter, ain't that cool?
lo bhol gayi about chapter, again coming to it.
the anxiety, the fear, her trembling figure, i can feel all of it. just thinking what will happen next?? what he will do with her, this feeling of helplessness. i don't want it.
awww, I love how you emote
her words how she was assuring him that RK doesn't matters to her, and she is his.
but that physical assault, he was gripping her neck, this is really much.!!!
she was clinging his leg and was begging him!!! this will surely make her to make a DECISION!!
holi, yahaan bhi, he is really crazy and again behaving as if she is just an object.
good catches.
what was that he was behaving like lovey dovey hubby and that gulaal.
oh RK was outside, so now the devil is coming!!!
thinking how madhu will be feeling, just a moment of happiness.
Learned helplessness, I repeat it to anyone who asks.
now my feminism attitude is coming back and i don't know when i will burst out.
this kind of manhandling, verbal, physical as well as mental torture.
i really want to hit him now.
he is bruising her again and slap!!, i can't take it more nor madhu.
now i m perfectly sure he is a obsessed creepy man, who just think about his paintings, his muse and money.
I love to see you raging. he deserves every bit of hatred.
money, yes she needs it, it is necessary, it spite of taking help from anyone, her own money is better.
self sufficient woman in pakistan now employs her abusive husband and twenty other workers in a local business all thanks to microfinancing (an anticedote that stuck with me, I believe from Kiva not sure though)
she is finally out, but i am still afraid, what if he come back.
i know u won't ans it.
still you ask😉
chalo now pat me on my back, i completed all the chap, with separate comments *phew* now i m tired😆
there is one more chapter love😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: adeeba21

one chap is still left, i will be dead🤢,

main abhi aai.

😆🤣 Naakre toh dekho
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iiDona


I love you for this <3 I have told you a million times but you need to hear it again. Your comments made me grin. I was sitting cell bio not really paying attention, my professor pointed me out. "Jasleen, what is up with you today?" I turned off my laptop like it was the Third Reich😛 That was hilarious. Best day ever! BTW, I was reading your comment. Next time, I am not sitting in the front😆

😳😳😳
yes i love when u say it❤️
ur prof will kill u if u will be keep sneaking like this😆
trying to be back bencher, it won't help, i m always on first bench, till now, as if it is reserved for me, no one dares to sit, so its me who always sit, weird people!! as if the teacher is cannibal and just waiting for them


Leaving you speechless is quite a task and I am glad I do it more often than not😉 I appreciate this feedback so very much <3
i feel like as if i m ur critic🤣, imagine u r getting these comments from a girl who got just 85 marks in eng in my board, the only subject which had 80s, with 99 in 3 sub😆😆😆, all the people were like, adeeba what was that, just 85, unke kaisu samjhao, my writings are so bad, whenever i have to write an article, me and my wandering thoughts, article kabhi pura hi nahi hota, i hated this sub the most, 😆
yes i m speechless this time😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iiDona


My intention is for you to get into the shoes of the girl. She feels hate, then nothing, then love and hate again. She does not know what to feel. All she knows is. she is trapped.
if i would do so, then i will be connected with the character so much, that i will be getting depressed.
she is confused what kind of man he is, like a mystery which can never be solved.
ya she is trapped.

🤣 I always laugh at your misery. Why do you even try anymore?😉
kyu, because its a challenge to understand the character,
soch lo if i will not do so then u will be getting only "nice update, update soon" from me.😆😆
so should i stop it?😉

taane maar janaab shaanti. aage badho aaram se😆
🤣 sounding like traffic police.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: adeeba21

😳😳😳

yes i love when u say it❤️
ur prof will kill u if u will be keep sneaking like this😆
trying to be back bencher, it won't help, i m always on first bench, till now, as if it is reserved for me, no one dares to sit, so its me who always sit, weird people!! as if the teacher is cannibal and just waiting for them

😆 I don't sit in the front on purpose. I run from work to school and the only door open is the front door, I never get any other seat. the prof sees me huffing and puffing & asks me to sit in the front. She is cool though. I don't mind being the scape goat once in a while. All my other friends in the back also play tetrus so, not really much of a difference😆

i feel like as if i m ur critic🤣, imagine u r getting these comments from a girl who got just 85 marks in eng in my board, the only subject which had 80s, with 99 in 3 sub😆😆😆, all the people were like, adeeba what was that, just 85, unke kaisu samjhao, my writings are so bad, whenever i have to write an article, me and my wandering thoughts, article kabhi pura hi nahi hota, i hated this sub the most, 😆
yes i m speechless this time😆
English: My teacher was a Hollywood screenplay writer and his wife was a ad movie director so, we had a blast. I loved that class to pieces. He was probably the only teacher who got me to write. I would fall ill nearing the exam otherwise. Good people! Now, I have to write everyday: for work, for school, it never ends. thank god for that class. yes, you are a critic I would rather have on my good side😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iiDona

🤣 good call. much needed sign, tell the others. people asking me to refine plot. I say hell to the N.O.
yes a sign for me.
refine plot!!, i know u will not it🤣

glad we have that clear. caution before confession.
yes we should, how can anyone tell about her life, her feelings to a stranger, caution is always necessary. trust is a really big thing.


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: adeeba21

if i would do so, then i will be connected with the character so much, that i will be getting depressed. she is confused what kind of man he is, like a mystery which can never be solved. ya she is trapped.

Well you are close enough, I can live with that.
kyu, because its a challenge to understand the character,
soch lo if i will not do so then u will be getting only "nice update, update soon" from me.😆😆
so should i stop it?😉
Nahi!!!!! Dhamki, I am terrified. I hate thank you notes. just no...I am saying it straight up I dont like thank you notes.
🤣 sounding like traffic police.
My dad's Urdu is fluent. I just tried some phrases. I don't know if it is correct.

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