Darmiyaan:OS part 3 on pg 33 (22/11)

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bindu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: TheDarkKnight
Bindu darling!! Such a beautiful OS...but it feels incomplete...I would love a part 2 on this :P

P.S. the song goes wonderfully with the OS

thanks Shikhs 🤗
will complete it soon...
the lyrics are so wonderful

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: applenpeaches
Wonderfully written.. Bindu, I expected RK to come runnign at the end.. He didnt.. I didnt like that...
You wrote Madhu's emotions v well..

thanks Sonu...
YOu will get RK running in soon 😉

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: colorsluv
luvly OS bt its not complete yet i guess & the song was perfect

thanks dear
the next update will make it complete😊

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: --Neelam--
awesome one...loved it...

thanks Neelam😊

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Sonu

@applenpeaches

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: bangalores

thanks Sonu...
YOu will get RK running in soon 😉

Since there wont be a kiss in the show, can we expect one in your story?

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: applenpeaches

Since there wont be a kiss in the show, can we expect one in your story?

kiss😲... too early for a kiss, don't you think?
will give you one in another OS at some other time😉

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bindu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: pookie2
hey i'm mostly a silent reader but this was lovely! u captured all of madhu's emotions and thought processes really well. please do continue. very enjoyable.

thank you for breaking your silence for me 😊
will update soon