Darmiyaan:OS part 3 on pg 33 (22/11)

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bindu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: sree89
wow such a lovely os...pls continue😊

thank you
will update soon😊

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winniepooh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Superb..U have tracked their feelings so well...please do continue.

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Monami Tasnim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Lovely OS.Plz continue nd update next part soon

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sanu3108

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

awesooommmeee bindu

but I want a part 2 for this .. this is incomplete without RK breaking her fast

love

Sana

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manesha76

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Awesome OS ,

But i want 2nd part of this OS too .

Please right next part soon 😛

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MsCeylon

@MsCeylon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

This is too goo to stop like that

so pls pls give us a second part and complete it all happy happy na...

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Neha

@Asyalover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Amazing plz updt soon and pm me if possible

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bindu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: apolloartemis
😉It will be a major crime if you don't finish this- therefore, unless you want to be in lockup continue writing!

thank you
ohhh! you mean chakki peesing and peesing... 😉

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apolloartemis

@apolloartemis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: bangalores

thank you
ohhh! you mean chakki peesing and peesing... 😉

And you'll be locked in with Ballu😆

So write! write!

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bindu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: ninand
aww.. Bindu.. this was indeed touching.. melancholic yet beautiful.. i so wish they show KC sequence with this kind of sensitivity.. it really did feel like the woman had changed right there in front of her own self, and the fact that it happened with tenderness left her devastated..

song was aptly chosen.. beautiful.

thanks Ninand 😃
Madhu must be shattered... Maalik to her was the epitome of goodness and integrity... the man she must have compared other's with and found wanting..
to find out that he was behind the attacks must have been such a blow and to realize that she was the reason behind it will make her all the more helpless.
i was fascinated by the son ever since jodibreakers was released... so beautifully lyrical

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