Darmiyaan:OS part 3 on pg 33 (22/11)

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bindu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: apolloartemis
And you'll be locked in with Ballu😆
So write! write!

Ballu ... OH no!!!
but if it was RK i wud not have given you part 2😉

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bindu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: alekhika20
Fab & lovely os,cont

thank you
will update soon😊

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bindu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: arunsunita_gm
Ohhh so emotional and beautiful os dear
plsss plsss plsss plsss plsss continue this os i really want to see wht gift rk wil give to his biwi & how will he break her fast so plsss plsss cont it
gn tc ks hsd

thanks dear 😊
you will find out about the gift soon

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Kurup

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

This was a beautiful one...actuallly mesmerizing one...but i find this incomplete as of now...

just like aadha adhuri shaadi of rishibala u gave an aadha adhuri update of this beautiful work...

Can u write a second part of it and complete this beautiful fictional work of urs plz...

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bindu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: .Priya2000.
Its Beautiful Di 👏
you got to give the second part 😛 please
The song went with her situation , I loved it where you said she was looking at herself in the mirror as RK's Biwi the mark of a suhaagan - sindoor , mangalsutra , bangles ... that part was just superb 👏
Cont soon ❤️

thanks Priya...😊
will be giving part 2 soon...

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bindu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: ritzy09
OMG Bindu...u r back...welcome back honey...hope all is well with you and family now

first of all great beginning...loved her guilt and her emotions. Today there was a moment in serial, when, RK mocks her and goads her to fight

"tum dawaii ka peecha nahi chodogi...chemical biwi"

but she kept so silent and it was palpable...it was like he wanted to bring her back but she is lost in the pool of her self guilt...you captured it all so well...ab kis se kya expect kare...

Also, i know fair nahi hai but I like Madhubala but I love Maaneet...please ek update wahan bhi de do...have been missing u for so long...isiliye ek choti si request

can understand if u are busy...will be waiting...

thanks RItzu...😃
we are all fine thanks again...it is not being busy that is keeping me off Maaneet FFs but lack of maaneet inspiration...😳 you know that situation when you do know what you want to write but words fail you and you are unable to express what you wish to present... it is really making me miffed...
SR ,*sigh* i wonder if i will ever be able to write another story that wud even compare to the emotions it invoked in me... so i want to take time to give it the finale it deserves...
with RIshbala the inspiration i nonstop coz they visit you everyday...
my heart went out to Madhu today... she is greatful about RK's support yet the guilt of knowing her father was behind the atttack has broken her... the way she is trying to keep away from others, yet the courage she shows in going to the kitchen to fulfill RK's wish to prepare food for him...
it is great to see RK supporting her..

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bindu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: pranki
amazing😊

thank you 😃

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bindu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: BabyGee_1995
Please do contiue...btw that was fab

thanks dear 😊
will be updating soon

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bindu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: priyachand
Bindu!!!

how could you start something and leave us hanging!!!!

plsss complete it! you have brought out madhu's pain so beautifully. even i thought they shd show madhu trying to curl up in foetal position searching for that support which RK should come and give. you have caught it so well. so pls continue. when i saw OS by you, i had rush in and read late at night. pls remember us your fans for ur ffs. so pls continue. eager to read the rest.

pls get him to finish her fast. (i know you'll do, you are a romantic!)

thanks Priya 😃
You know me and muy love for cliff hangers..😆
Maallick was her hero... the epitome of goodness... to find that her idol had feet of clay must have wrecked her emotionally... it must be like everything she considered right and just was just a mirage...
i so wish they wud show such a scene where Madhu is curled up in feotal possition, with blankets covering, yet she is shivering... may be a nightmare.. and RK throwing away the wall of pillows to scoop her closer to his frame... comforting her.
you can be sure i will complete this ... and not just this😉
FFs ... still struggling😭