Darmiyaan:OS part 3 on pg 33 (22/11)

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: applenpeaches
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Hey.. I am not asking for a lip lock.. Something like a forehead kiss... Emotional kind- like the hug wala scene... If I say please will you think seriously about it?

now that i can do ... wish granted😆

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NATASHA

@natasha_n

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Best

Waiting for part 2
When will you be updating?

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sree07

@sree07

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Loved it. Waiting for part 2. Late aakkaruthu please. :)

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aashshhs

@aashshhs

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Lovely os...continue soon :) :) :)

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devsum

@devsum

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

cliffhanger... hope u continue this.

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shamon

@TheDragonLady

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

wow diii... u r an awesum writerr👏👏👏👏

u hav potrayed madhus feelings beautifully😳

dis OS has devloped a serene feelings...

d insecurity of madhu for loneliness and her unrequited love is expressed beautifully dii..👍🏼

Dii its a request plz do continue dis OS.. n let us have a happy ending😳

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

you need to continue this that was awesome well written you could feel her pain of not being his wife in full the missing of the sindoor and her bangles beautifully

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bindu

@bangalores

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan
how do u do it🤓

write so well i mean😳😳😳

i could feel madhus pain...

and i loved ur bittuji😆

Kayamath rushess😉 are we seeing a transformation here😃

thank you Aashu🤗
you know me i read seni stuff and cry along with it.. must have rubbed off on me😳

hoping your OS will inspire me in part 2😉 especially for RK's attitude... but my Hinglish is pathetic 😆😆
this Bittuji seems really a teddy bear kind, na? you will love him more in part 2
transformation😕.. EMmm may be but whose???...Kayanath has purpose to serve...😃

Edited by bangalores - 12 years ago

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ApurvaLovesARVI

@ApurvaLovesARVI

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: leverne
I want a part two on this one...

I dont see it complete till i see RK break her fast..:P

Her pain is so well brought out...😃

awesome OS...

PS: I can hear the song...

i really agree on this...OS isn't complete...till RK doesn't breaks her fast