TERI CHAAHAT ME...R-N LOVE STORY..THE END - Page 5

awsome
superb
great going 👏
waiting for u'r next update

intresting
to aakhir pyar ho hi gia
too good
update asap
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee

hahahahah......i really like his update especially the last part whn the grl thought she was hitting on her and the guy was like he did th same to me.....update the next part soon 😛

hahahahha dear tum kitna hasati ho yar ff par ab plzzzz jaldii se update karo na heheheh ye dono agar aise hi ladte to kitna acha hota nahin hahahahhahahah 😆 this is for u tum bahat hi acha likhti ho 👏

its really really awsome
mindblowing
aapki ff ki to mein diwani ho gayi
seriously
loved it tooo mkuch
lov
dolly

M.A. ka first year ka exam ho gaya..achha hi hua..

Naina ne ghar pe bata dia k Ramachandran Krishnamurthy naam ka koi insaan uski zindagi me nahi hai..bas Raj ko bhagaane k lia yeh drama kia tha usne.

uske parents ne kaha,"fine..M.A. complete kar lo..tumhari shadi k bare me uske baad sochenge."

har taraf se Naina befikar ho gai.

beejee ko yeh sab thik nahi laga..Naina kisi aur ladke me interest dikhati hi nahi..yeh mamla kyaa hai?...

Raj k ghar me bhi sab pareshan..Raj thik nahi hai..ladkion ki photo dekh kar kahta hai..jaisa aap thik samjhe..

par aise to kuchh bhi thik nahi hoga..

Kailaash Auditorium me natak hai..."Mahamaya"

Naina title role me hai...

Raj aya tha dekhne..

ek admi Naina ki acting dekh kar uska diwana ho gaya..admi ka character thik nahi tha..

raat k 11 baj chuke the..

Naina ki car start nahi ho rahi thi...us admi ki car ake rooki..

"hello..want lift?"

Naina--no thank you..I will manage..

"itni raat ho gai hai.."

Naina--I said I will manage..please go..

"aise kaise..Mahamaya..hum to kayal ho chuke hai apke....

admi Naina k paas ake khada hua..

"aap jaisi khubsurat ladki ko itni raat ko akele chhod dena ko..

uski baat puri nahi hui..uske muh pe ek punch pada..punch Raj ka tha..

"kyon bhai..tujhe badi mirchi lagi..tau lagta hai iska??"

Raj--tau hoga tu..abhi ja..pareshan mat kar...

admi chala gaya...

Naina Raj ke samne gai...

Naina--thanks..kaise ho..

Raj--abhi natak mat karo..apne ghar jaao..

woh admi akela nahi tha..uske sath uske aur 4 5 dost the...

Naina--meri car start nahi ho rahi hai..

Raj--car se dunia bhar k car ko thokti firogi..to aisa hi hoga..

Naina--Raj..woh admi aur 5 ko lekar idhar e aa raha hai..

Raj ne dekha..

Raj--are mere car me baitho..tumko invite karna padega kya?jaldi ghuso car me..

woh gang aya..aur Raj Naina ko lekar bhaagaa..

Naina--uuff...pata nahi aisa mere sath hi kyon hota hai?

Raj--saj dhaj k drama me aise nakhre karogi..to aisa hi hoga..

Naina--to kya drama group chhod doon?

Raj--maine aisa nahi kaha..bas itni raat ko akele..aise ghuma mat karo... gharwalo k sath aya karo..

Naina--ghar me kisi ko interest hi nahi hai natak k bare me..

Raj--oohh..

Naina--so..how is life??

Raj--great..bahut interesting life hai..office jata hoon..ghar ata hoon..

Naina-interesting indeed.mera bhi kuchh aisa hi hai...university..fir natak..aur fir ghar..

Raj--Nitin aur Heena kaise hai?

Naina--thik hai..

Raj--Nitin ko mere paas bhej sakti ho?

Naina--kyon?

Raj--mujhe ek manager ki zaroorat hai..aur Nitin ko achhi naukri ki zaroorat hai..

Naina--thik hai .main baat kar k dekhti hoon..waise tum Nitin ka contact number le lo..khud hi baat kar lo..

Naina ne Nitin ka address aur number dia..

Naina ka ghar aa gaya tha..

Raj--tumhara ghar aa gaya..

Naina--ooh..thanks..andar nahi aaoge?

Raj--andar ane ki koi wajah nahi rahi..andar jaao tum..bye..

Raj chala gaya..

Naina(man hi man)--maine usko andar kyon bulaya??par aaj woh nahi hota.. too...

Raj(man hi man)--tera kuchh nahi ho sakta Raj..itne pyaar se andar bula rahi thi..bhaao khana zaroori tha?

Beejee ne darwaza khola..."tu aa gai?"

Naina--to aur kaun aai hai?

Beejee--khana lagaoon?

Naina--haa..aaj Raj ne bacha lia..

Beejee--kyaaaaaaaaaa?

Naina-haaa..ek admi to pichhe hi pad gaya tha..auditorium k bahar meri car khadi hai..kal mechanic ko bulana hoga..

awesome too good loved it immensely waiting for next asap.

Too good!!!Awesome!!!

Raj ne Naina ko baccha lia aur Naina ne usse ghar bulaya....great!!!Kuch toh progress hua!!! 😳 😳

Aur Raj aur kisi ldki mein interest nahi dikhata... cool!!!!

Raj Naina ka drama dekhne bhi jata hai..... so sweet!!!!

And Beeji is really smelling a rat 😆 😆 !!!!!

superb
darun fatafati update
great going 👏
waiting for u'r next update