TERI CHAAHAT ME...R-N LOVE STORY..THE END - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
Raj is doing the right think .....now..... soon Naina will come on right line soooooooooooon

thanks 4 the update....... very nice 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh 😍
goooooooooooooooooodddddddddd
aise ud agar har roz milenge to hum to gaye😒
hahahhahahahahahahahhaahhahahahaha
kuch jyada ho gaya nahin😉
hehehehehhehehehehehehe😛
acha ab baat ud ki😊
yar kya mast likhti ho tum😃
aur han ye raj kyun itna bhao kha raha tha😆
aur naina ko bachane k liye usne pitai ki heheheheh😆
tooooooooo goodddddddd
awesummmmmmm update dear😛😛😛
plzzzzzzzzzz ud soon😛😛😛
m waitng eagerly😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
yeh part bahut hi badiya tha.......loved it....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
wooooow....sweet part indeed 😛 .....dialogues as usual supeeeeeeeeeeeeeerb....too good di... 👏 👏 👏 thanku soo much for this great part....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
thanks to you👏👏

Originally posted by: quietrajpri1623

wooooow....sweet part indeed 😛 .....dialogues as usual supeeeeeeeeeeeeeerb....too good di... 👏 👏 👏 thanku soo much for this great part....

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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
THIS PART WAS JUST AWESOME 👏 ...BUS HAR ROOZ AISA HI UD MILTA RAHE.. SO UD SOON 😃



RANU
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
update plzzzzzzzzzzzz asaop now only with long part asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
yeh season mere exams ka season hai..is lia..roz update karna mushkil hai..so agar ek din update nahi hua..to keep patience.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59

"kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayal ata hai..k jaise tujhko banaya gaya hai mere lia..tu ab se pahle sitaro me bas rahi thi kahi..tujhe zameen par bulaya gaya hai mere lia.."

Nilima jee ne suna k Raj gaanaa ga raha hai..

Nilima--kyaa baat hai Raj..bahut khush hai?

Raj--aaplog mere lia ladki mat dhundhna..mera setting bahut jald honewala hai..

Nilima--are waah..kiske saath..mila usko..?

Raj--aap bhi mil chuki hain..

Nilima--kaun?

Raj--aur kaun..Naina..apni Naina..

Nilima--tu daroo pee kar aya hai kya?

Raj--nahi..Naina ko uske ghar chhod kar a raha hoon..usne andar bulaya..

Nilima--usne tujhko andar bulaya?tujhko?

Raj--haa..mom..Mera Jadooooooooooooooooooooo chal gayaaaaaaaa aaaa aaaaaaa..

Nilima--tu paagal hain pura..andar bulane se itna khush ho gaya?

Raj--i am in the air mom...I am so happy..

Nilima--ok..isme khush hai to thik hai.....achha sun..parsu hum sab ko Hoshiarpur jana hai..tujhe Balbindar yaad hai na??uski shadi hai..

Raj--ok..chalenge..

Balbindar rishte me Raj ka cousin lagta hai...

Hoshiarpur me bahut raees kisaan hai woh log..50 Ecre zameen k malik.. badi si haweli..aur 10 gai hain unke paas.


Omveer,Nilima..aur Rajveer gaya Hoshiarpur..


waha par jakar yeh dekhta hai..k Naina..Girish,Gita..aur Beejee..pahle se hai waha par..

Balbindar ki daadimaa..Beejee ki purani saheli hai..

isi rishte se unko invitaion mila..

Naina ko bhi Punjab ka gaaon dekhne ka bahut shaukh tha..woh to chali aai..

Omveer--pairipauna Beejee..Sat Sree Akal Girish..

Naina ki jaan uske hontho par atak gai..Raj bhi aya hai yeha..mar gaye..

Naina waha se bhaag gai..

sabhi gappe marne me masroof ho gaye..

Raj to Naina ko dhundh raha hai..

shadi k 2 din baad ka din hai..

nai bahu ko sab dekhne aa rahe hai..

sab k lia lassi ka intezaam karna hai..


Omveer--Raj..beta tujhe bola tha dahi lane ko..laya?

Raj--matka dijiye..main tabele se lata hoon..

Balbindar ki daadi--tabele me kaha se ayegi dahi?

Raj--maine kal shaam ko sare gaio ko Imli khilaya tha..

Omveer--to..

Raj--are maine dekha na..dadima to doodh me imli daal kar dahi banati hai..to direct dahi milega..


Daadima--Om..tera beta itna bada gadha kaise bana?

ab iske pichhe ek history hai..


pichhle din Naina gaon dekhne gai thi..Raj ne uska pichha kia..


tabhi Omveer ne usko 4 hazaar Rupai die the..dahi ka order dene k lia..sab ko lassi pilani hai..isi lia bahut dahi ki zaroorat hai..

par Naina ko dekh kar sab bhul gaya..

Naina k paas gaya..

Raj--maine expect hi nahi kia tha k tum mujhe isi gaaon me milogi...

Naina--to main kyaa karoon?

Raj--ghumne chalte hai..

Naina--maine bhut zada ghoom lia hai..pair dukh rahe hai..

Raj--woh dekho haanthi..


Naina--to..

Raj--ruko main abhi ata hoon..


Raj--Haanthiwale..4 ghante k lia Haanthi chahie..

Haanthiwala--saab..main to Haanthi dikhakar paisa kamata hoon..4 ghante k lia meri kamai bhi to honi chahie..

Raj--yeh lo..pure 4 hazaar hai..4 ghante k lia..ab thik hai..

Haanthiwale ne itna zada paisa dekha nahi tha..usne khush hokar haanthi Raj k hawale kia..

aur fir Naina ko Haanthi pe chadha kar pura gaaon ghumaya Raj ne..

Naina--kitna paisa lia?

Raj--4 hazar..

Naina--itna paisa lekar nikle the?

Raj--dad ne die the..dahi ka order dene k lia..

Naina--aur sara paisa Haanthiwale ko die?

Raj--are tumko ghumne se matlab hai k nahi?

Naina--tum jaisa gadha nahi dekha maine..


yeh tha Raj ka karnama..

jab ghar lauta tab Dahi ka khayal aya..aur tab Raj ne sare gai ko imli khila dia..direct dahi pane k lia..

Omveer --Raj..beta kis janam ka badla le raha hai?bahut beizzati hogi.. mehmano ko kyaa pilayenge?

Naina aai..

Naina--are Raj..tumne kal mujhe paise die halwai ko dahi ka order dene k lia.. aur delivery bhi mujhe hi leni padi?

Omveer--kyaaa?

Naina--aapka beta kal gaya tha halwai ki dukaan me..mai thi wahi par.. achanak inko haanthi dikhi..haanthi chadne k lia yeh gaye..4 hazar rupai mujhe die..k dahi ka order main de doon..maine baad me bola bhi k order dia hai..aaj delivery le ke aye..par nahi..mujhe hi jana pada..laao bhaiya..dahi laao..haa..rasoi us taraf hai..haa jaao..


Omveer--Raj..kuchh sikh is ladki se...


Raj bahut bade ghotale se bach gaya..Naina ne bacha lia usko..

Raj ne dekha..Naina uski taraf dekh rahi hai aur muskura rahi hai..

Raj bhi bewakufo ki tarha hansne laga..

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Beejee ko Naina ne bataya..k Raj ne usko haanthi me gaon ghumane k lia sara paisa kharach kar dia..tab Beejee ne hi Naina ko paise die..Dahi k lia..

shaam ko Naina chhat pe hawa khaa rahi thi..


Raj aya..pichhe se..

Naina--kyaa baat hai?

Raj--aaj k lia ..thank you..

Naina--its ok..us din us ghunde se mujhko bachaya..aaj..tumhare baap k gusse se maine tumko bachaya..account clear...

Raj--kal..nadia k kinare ghumne chalogi?

Naina--hindi film chal rahi hai?nadia k kinare..ab bolo ge chane k khet me.. kabhi ganne k khet me..


Raj--ganne k khet..yaa bahut zada privecy milti hai waha..chalona..


Naina--shut up...

Raj--are..Naina..suno to..achha.nadi k kinare hi thik hai..

Naina--bhaad me jaao..

Raj--kal tumhara intezaar karunga...nadi k kinare..

Naina--main nahi aaungi..

Raj--main fir bhi intezaar karunga..subha k 10 baje..


agle din Raj 9:30 baje pahuch gaya...

10 bajne me aur 5 minute baki hai..

Raj ki bechaini badh gai...Naina ayegi..yaa nahi ayegi..

ghadi ka kaante ne dikhaya..10 baj rahe hai..

achnak pichhe se kisi ki aahat..


dekha..Naina ulte paaon bhaag rahi hai..

Raj--Naina..suno to..Naina..

Raj ne Naina ko pakad lia..

Raj--to tum pahle se yeha par thi..mujhe dekh rahi thi...kitne baje aai..

Naina--9 baje..

Raj--kal to bol rahi thi..k nahi aaogi..

Naina--main ganna todne aai thi..

Raj--acha..kaha hai ganna?dikhao..

Naina--maine khaa lia..

Raj--achha chalo..

Naina--kaha..?

Raj--woh jo bada pedh hai..uske niche bahut thandi chhao hai..waha par jake baith te hai..

Naina--nahi mujhe haweli wapas jana hai..

Raj--nakhre dikhana zaroori hai?chalo..

dono jakar pedh k niche baith gaye..

Naina--bahut achhi jagah hai..

Raj Naina ko dekh raha hai...

Naina Raj k sath eye contact avoid kar rahi hai..

Raj ne Naina ka haath apne haatho me lia..unko chumne laga..

Naina--kyaa kar rahe ho?chhodo..

Naina ne haath chhuda lia..

Raj--tumko bura laga?

Naina--haa..

Raj--bolto aise rahi ho..k bahut achha laga..come on..

Naina--main ja rahi hoon...

Naina uth kar jane lagi..Raj ne uska dupatta khich lia..

Raj--jaao..bina dupatte k ghar jaao..sab sawal karenge

Naina--Raj ..mera dupatta do..

Raj--pahle mujhe ek pappi do..

Naina--kyaa?

Raj--haa..kum hai?achha 2 hi de do..main kisi ko nahi bataunga..

Naina Raj k haath se dupatta cheen k bhaag gai..


Raj chillane laga,"abhi 2 deti to main chhod deta..agli baar pakad me aai..to main 100 lunga..tumhari pappi.."

Naina--go to heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeelllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll.


Raj bhi Naina k pichhe haweli wapas gaya....

Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ARE WAAH KYA UD THA 😉 😉 ... IT WAS AWESOME 👏 NAINA RAJ KO USKE PAPA SE BACHATI HAI 😃 😃 ... THAT MEANS SHE HAS STARTED LOVING HIM 🤗 🤗 🤗 ... NAINA AB BAS KITNA BHAU KHAOGI PLS MAAN JAO KI U LOVE RAJ... ANYWAYAS WAITING FOR THE NAXT UD... 😃


RANU

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