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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
thanks..

Originally posted by: rlrl

muhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhha
great darling
tumhare dimag ko man na padega dear
kitna acha likhti ho tum
kash me bhi likh pati hahahah
u r the greattttttt 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wonderful indeed.kamaal kar diya...... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Naina gai university...

shaam ko waha se nikal rahi thi..apne car k paas gai..dekha Raj ki car pas khadi hai...aur Raj baitha car me.

Raj aya Naina k paas.

Raj--Naina..sach sach batao..Ramachandran se tum pyaar karti ho ya mujhe raaste se hatane k lia..

Naina--ek bat barbar bata nahi sakti...jo kuchh hai tumhari ankho k samne hai.

Raj--kuchh aur bhi hai jo main dekh nahi pa raha hoon...

Naina--woh tumhari problem hai.

Raj--dekho Naina..

Naina--kyaa dekhu?

Raj--well..dil to chahta hai k din rat tum mujhe hi dekhti raho..par baat kuchh aur hi hai..

Naina--kyaa baat hai?

Raj--us namune Krishnamurthy se to main better hoon..

Naina--mere lia wahi sab se achha hai.

Raj--zid karna achhi baat nahi..

Naina--Ab Atal Bihari Vajpeyee ki tarha mat bolna,"yeh achhi baat nahi."

Raj--main Ataljee jaisa nahi banna chahta..unhone to shadi hi nahi ki..main shadi karunga ..

Naina--to karo na..roka kisne hai?

Raj--tumne..tum maanti hi nahi..

Naina--fir se wahi baat...

Raj--mujhe bas ek mauka de do khud ko saabit karne k lia..

Naina--mujhe koi saboot nahi chahie..

Raj--par mujhe saabit karna hai.

Naina--Raj tum apna aur mera waqt barbad kar rahe ho.


Raj--ok..jo kuchh hua uske lia I am sorry..very sorry...ab khush?

Naina--tumhe sorry kahne ki zaroorat nahi..


Raj--hain..zaroorat hai..maine tumhe pareshaan kia..kaha na sorry..

Naina--Raj please..

Raj--main tumse pyar karta hoon Naina..yeh soch lo na..k thode din pahle humari mulakat hui hai...aur hum dono ki mulakat kuchh interesting modh par hai.

Naina--nahi..main soch nahi sakti aise..

Raj--please..soch k dekho na..

Naina--ok socha ..ab?

Raj--ab hum log dost se kuchh zada hi hai...


Naina--fir...

Raj--hum dono me pyaar hua hai..

Naina--tum 'No Entry ' me ghus rahe ho...


Raj--agar tumhare parents ne yeh rishte ki baat nahi ki hoti to tum maan jaati?

Naina--aisa jab nahi hai..tab is bare me soch ne ka koi faida to hai nahi..

Raj--har baat pe faide nuksaan kyon?

Naina--zaroori hai.


Raj--tum nahi manogi?

Naina--nahi..

Raj--to fir apni saheli Heena ka pata do..main usse shadi karunga..


Naina k sar par asmaan toot pada...yeh to Heena pe fida hai...


Raj --kyaa hua?Heena ka pata to malum hona chahie tumko.

Naina--Heena kisi aur se pyar karti hai..

Raj--woh bhi booked hai..dhatt..

Naina--haa..ladke ka naam Nitin Varma hai..ab khush?



Raj--yaar yeh achhi ladkian itni jaldi engaged kyon ho jati hai?

Naina--kyonki achhe ladke mil jate hai unko.

Raj--main bhi to achha ladka hoon..


Naina--I am sure..tumhe bhi koi achhi si ladki jaldi mil jayegi

Raj--ok...main tumhare pichhe ghum raha hoon..aur tum bhao kha rahi ho..


Naina--khane k lia bahut si achhi cheese milti hai..mujhe bhao khane ki zaroorat nahi..

Raj--ab tak main tumhare pichhe aa raha tha..par ab tum mere pichhe aaogi..


Naina--raat abhi hui nahi..neend me tum ho nahi..abhi se sapna dekhna shuru kar dia?

Raj--nahi..aisa hoga...tum dekh lena..ab tum mere lia tadpogi..mere pichhe bhaagogi..aisa hoga..main haalaat aise banaunga..

Naina--yeh dhamki hai?

Raj--aisa hi kuchh.

Naina--kaise?...


Raj ne Naina k haath uski car ki chaabi chheen li..aur paas k mall me ghus gaya...


Naina vakei me Raj k pichhe bhaagi...


Naina--Raj chaabi de do..Raj ..yeh thik nahi..Raj...


Raj mall me yeha waha bhaag raha tha..Naina bhi uske pichhe daur rahi thi..

mall k log dekh rahe the..ladke k pichhe ladki bhaag rahi hai...


Naina ki kismat kharab....


Raj jake takraya Heena se..Heena waha par shopping karne aai thi..


Raj--are Heena tum?

Heena--haa kuchh kharidna tha....


aise me Ramachandran/Nitin aya..

Nitin--Heena I think yeh nighty tum par bahut achhi lagegi..


Naina k sar pe haath..

Nitin bhi khada raha..Heena sar jhuka k khadi rahi..


Raj--are Mr. Krishnamurthy..aap to shudh hindi bol rahe hai..aapka southern accent ka kyaa hua?

Nitin khamosh..Heena bhi..aur Naina ulte pao bhaag rahi thi..


Raj ne Naina ka haath pakad lia...


Raj--are tumhara Ramachandran to shadi se pahle hi extra marital pe utar aya..Heena k lia nighty kharid raha hai..wow...


Naina(man hi man)--in dono ko shopping karne k lia yehi mall mila tha kya? Nitin ghanchakkar ka ghanchakkar hi raha..

Nitin--Naina..hum chalte hai...

Nitin aur Heena bhaag gaye waha se..


Naina ki bolti bandh..

actually Raj jab university aya..tabhi usne Nitin ko dekh lia tha..socha yeh Ramachandran yeha kyaa kar raha hai?

Heena ki shakal dekh nahi paya..socha yeh ladki Naina to nahi.

Ramachandran k sath yeh dusri ladki kaun hai?

Raj jaan bujh k mall k andar daura tha..sab ko chauka dene k lia..



Naina ne Raj k haath se chaabi chheen li..aur chal padi..

Raj pichhe pichhe ane laga..

Raj--yeh natak ka idea chhod hi do tum..natak k mamle me tumhara badluck bahut hi kharab hai..dekha nahi Laila-Majnoo k din kyaa hua tha?aur mujhe shuru se hi indono pe shak tha..

Naina chup.

Raj--main jab natak dekhne gaya tha..tab hall k bahar rakhe hording par Laila-Majnoo ka chehra dekh lia tha maine..inki shakal kuchh jani pehchaani si lag rahi thi...yeh wahi hai na..jo bhaag gaye the..Laila-Majnoo??


Naina chup..


Raj--kyaa hua?bolti bandh?itna bol bachchan de rahi thi tum us din ghar pe.. main soch raha tha k kaun pagal hai mere siva jo tum jaisi sarfiri se pyaar karega.....


Naina mall se bahar aai...

car k paas gai..


Raj--tumhare car k chaaro tyre puncture hai...paas k dukan k ladke ko kuchh paise die the..yeh kaha tha jab hum dono mall k andar jaye to woh tyre puncture kar de..main apne office k driver ko bhi saath laya hoon..dekho door khada chai pee raha hai..



Raj ne bulaya,"Shankar..idhar aao.."

Driver aya..

Raj ne Naina k haath se chaabi li.."Shankar...Memsaab k ghar par yeh car repair kar k pahucha dena..pata hai,"'P-12,A Block, Sector 15'..aur bol dena Memsaab mere saath raat ko ghar ayengi..main pahucha dunga..jaao..aur yeh 200 rupai lo..mithai kha lena.."

Shankar khush hoke gaya..mechanic ko dhundhne..


Naina jane lagi..Raj ne haath pakad lia.."are..mujhe jhoota saabit karogi kya? maine kaha na..raat ko ghar jaogi..main tumhe pahucha dunga.. chalo.. ab sharafat se mere sath chalo."


sadak par kaafi log the..Naina ko inkaar karne ka mauka nahi mila..

Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
it was fabulous..........maza aa gaya......kya soch hai raj ki....ab toh naina phasi samjo...kahan jayegi......
ek plan naina ka toh raj ne bana liya doora plan......superb......

it was amazing.... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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haiiii.......Raj kitna cute hai....aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesum update Di....dialogues were mindblowing with full of comedy.. 👏 thanku soo much for this marvelous update
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
yeha tak LRL forum me likha hai..ab se age..new episodes likhe jayenge.

Originally posted by: quietrajpri1623

haiiii.......Raj kitna cute hai....aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesum update Di....dialogues were mindblowing with full of comedy.. 👏 thanku soo much for this marvelous update

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: yakkudimag

<FONT face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color=#990000>yeha tak LRL forum me likha hai..ab se age..new episodes likhe jayenge.

yeeees...i know...i m soooo happy for that....waiting eagerly....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38

Raj Naina ko lekar chala..manzeel ka pata nahi..

Naina muh banake baithi hai...

Raj--bandariya lag rahi ho..shakal thik karo apni...

Naina--right...

Raj--are..tumko shayad shahed nahi dia gaya tha paida hone par..neem ka ras dia gaya tha tumhari zuban par.

Naina--aapko to rasgulle k ras me dubaya gaya tha paida hote hi...nahi?


Raj--yes.

Naina--abhi hum kaha ja rahe hai..


Raj--manzeel ka pata nahi...mera to humsafar hi manzeel hai..


Naina--kaun si kitab ya film se yeh line li hai apne?

Raj--apne dil se kah raha hoon..

Naina--oohhh..stop this bullshit..

Raj--I think you should stop it now..


Naina--maine kyaa kiaa hai...?

Raj-yehi to mushkil hai jaanu k tum kuchh karti hi nahi..

Naina--main tumko pasand nahi karti..itni si baat tumko samajh me nahi aati

Raj--kyon nahi karti yehi to janna hai..

Naina--are yaar meri marzi..ab yeh to compulsory nahi k jo mujhko pasand kare main bhi usko pasand karoo..ajeeb zabardasti hai..


Raj--to ek kaam karte hai..pahle shadi karte hai..fir pyaar to tumko ho hi jayega..

Naina--are teri zuban hai k Neta ka bhashan..ghadi ghadi badalta rehta hai..kabhi bolta hai k socho aaj hi mulakat hui hai..kabhi bolta hai pahle shadi karo..fir pyaar karo...

Raj--kuchh aisa hi karo..jisse hum saath reh sake..

Naina--mujhe nahi rehna tumhare sath...

Raj ne break mara....


Raj--ok fine....ab main serious hoon..ab main tumhare pichhe nahi aaunga.. ab agar tumhara dil kare to tum mere lia ana..

Naina--aisa hoga nahi...

Raj--dekhte hai...

Naina--shaam k 6 baj chuke hai..

Raj--aur ek baat..us nautanki ka naam kyaa hai?jo Ramachandran bana hai?


Naina--Nitin Verma...Heena uski biwi hai..maine Nitin ko 3 lakhs die hai..is kaam k lia..baki 2 lakhs aur dene hai..

Raj--baki k 2 lakh main de dunga usko..meri wajah se tumne usko hire kia tha na?meri wajah se tumne aisa kia..tumhara paisa is tarha barbad nahi hona chahie....


Naina--aise kaise?

Raj--nahi..maine bahut zada pareshaan kia hai tumko..I am sorry for that...

Raj ne car town ki taraf mod lia..ek dhabe k paas car roka usne....

Naina car me hi baithi hai...thodi der baad Raj ne khana lake dia usko..wahi mutton curry aur naan..


Raj--us din tumhara khana barbad kar dia maine..yeh khaa lo...


mamla bahut serious ho gaya ....Naina soch rahi thi kaise ghar jaa sake woh..


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udhar Beejee ne jab dekha Naina ki car Raj k driver k sath

unke sar par haath pad gaya....

Beejee ko darr lagne laga..k Naina k saath Raj ne kyaa kia..us ladke ka koi bharosa nahi..


raat k 8 baje..


Naina k ghar pe sab pareshaan...


Gita--maine tabhi kaha tha..k us pagal se samhal k rehna hai..

Girish--are..mujhe kyaa malum..


aise me car k horn ki awaz...


Naina andar aai...


Raj pichhe pichhe aya...


Girish--paap kia meri beti ne jo tumko reject kia..par aisa hota hai..zaroori nahi k har koi har kisi ko pasand kare..lekin usko is tarha harras karna.. kahaki sharafat hai??


Naina--its ok dad..Raj ne promise kia hai k aaj k baad woh mujhe pareshaan nahi karega..the matter is over now..

Raj--main yeha sirf Naina ko chhodne aya tha..chalta hoon..


Raj chala gaya...


Beejee--abhi Naina ko aram karne do..Naina tu jaa beti apne kamre me..

Naina chali gai...


apne kamre me jake..kapde badle..aur fir bistar pe let gai..

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asal me itne se waqt me itna kuchh ho gaya..kuchh malum hi nahi pada..

Naina ka waqt kaise beet gaya Naina samajh hi nahi paai..

Raj ne usko pareshaan kia..sataya..par kabhi koi aisi harkat ki nahi..jisse..

Naina ki zindagi jaise thaher gai thi..aisa ab usko lag raha hai..

Raj k ane se usko kuchh interesting karne ko mila tha..din raat sochti raheti k Raj se kaise bachna hai..Raj ko kaise ullu banana hai..

par Raj ne jab surrender kar dia aaj..Naina ko itni khushi hui nahi..

Naina sochne lagi.."fir se boring classes..aur woh ghatia director aur uski drama company"

phoolon se bhara baag..har taraf laal pile phool...Naina..jaise pari ban gai hai...achanak dekha...ek insaan aya...ghode pe chadh k...kohre se uska chehra dhaka hai..achanak kohra hat gaya..aur suraj ki roshni ne baag ko aur roshan kar dia..aur us insaan ki shakal dekh li Naina ne..woh Raj ka chehra tha..Raj ne kaha,"I love you Naina.."

Raj fir ghode ko daura kar chala gaya..Naina pichhe pichhe bhaagi....Raj nahi rook raha hai..aur Naina daur rahi hai..achanak samne ek khai hai..Raj ka ghoda usko khai k us paar le gaya..Naina par kar ne gai..aur geer gai khai me....

aur Naina k kamar me bahut dard hua..kyonki woh bistar se niche geer gai..


Naina(man hi man)are main sapna dekh rahi thi??aur sapne me main us Raj k pichhe bhaag rahi thi??...


Naina bathroom se nahake nikli..aur aaine k samne jake taiyar hone lagi..

achanak aaine k andar jo Naina thi..woh batein karne lagi..

Naina(Mirror)--hello..kyaa baat hai??tum to aisi nahi thi..fir aaj kyaa hua?

Naina--mujhe kyaa hua hai?

Naina(mirror)--kuchh zada nahi hua hai..bas pyaar hua hai ..

Naina--main..aur pyaar..woh bhi us Raj se??

Naina(mirror)--maine Raj ka naam kab lia?ooo..Raj k bare me soch rahi thi??

Naina--tera sar..chal bhaag...


"are Naina..kisse baatein kar rahi hai beta?"Beejee.. andar aai..

Naina--nahi to Beejee..kisi se bhi nahi..oo..nashta le aai aap..dijiye..

Beejee gaur se dekh rahi hai Naina ko..

kal k baad Naina k upar Raj ka kuchh asar to hona chahie tha...par yeh to maze se khaa pee rahi hai..


Naina--ok.beejee..mujhe natak k practise k lia jana hai...aur aapko kuchh chahie?

Beejee--nahi tu jaa..good bye..


Naina chali gai..


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Raj office aya..achanak office k gate k upar Naina baithi hai..

Raj--are..utar jao..geer gai to chot lag jayegi...


darwan ne dekha..."Saab..Billi se baatein kar rahe hai aap?"


Raj..."haa..actually mujhe billi behad pasand hai.."


Raj k andar se kisi ne bola,"Raj tu pagla gaya hai.."

office k andar ghusa...achanak dekha..Naina baithi hai reception pe..

Raj ..bahut gehri nigaho se..dekh raha hai Naina ko..

Raj ne andar bulaya Naina ko..


Raj jake baitha apne chair par..aur receptionist Kalpana andar aai..

Raj--any problem??

Kalpana--aaphi ne to bualaya...

Raj--oo..I am sorry..koi baat nahi..aap baithie apni jaga par..

Kalpana office k staff Sunil se baat kar rahi hai..

Kalpana--tumko pata hai..Boss mujh pe line maar rahe hai..

Sunil---kaise?

Kalpana ne bataya k Raj uski taraf kaise dekh raha tha..

Sunil--aaj subha mujhko bhi isi nazro k teer se ghayal kar rahe the..

Kalpana--whatttttttttttttttttt?iska matlab..Raj Sir...ooh my god...

Raj(man hi man) yeh hua kyaa hai??main pagal ho raha hoon....

udhar Naina bhi raaste se guzarte hue yehi soch rahi hai..k ..zaroor mera screw dhila ho raha hai..varna Raj ko sapne me kaise dekha maine?

Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
awesome too good very nice waiting for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome!!!!

Raj was so sweet ......usne Naina ko pareshan karna bandh kar diya 😳 !!!

But that mirror and office incidents were too funny 😆 😆 !!!

Aur sapna bhi dekha Raj ka...aw so sweet 😳 !!!

Pyaar mein aisa hi hota hai!!!

Lekin yeh Kalpana aur Sunil kya samaj raha hai ...Raj ko.....O my God 😛 😆 !!!!!

Naina man bhi jao tumhe bhi pyaar hai 😳 !!!!

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