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Posted: 17 years ago

Hat's off to u for such wonderful comic fic.

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Posted: 17 years ago

what a nuatanki, girl....what a nautanki!!!!

brilliantly hilarious......my god, this fic ws one of a kind...............so much fun and laughter....ekdum bindaas fic tha
loved it to the core...........
thanx a lotttttt yaar for this amazing fic.
awesome!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: daisy_luvs_ ff

what a nuatanki, girl....what a nautanki!!!!

brilliantly hilarious......my god, this fic ws one of a kind...............so much fun and laughter....ekdum bindaas fic tha
loved it to the core...........
thanx a lotttttt yaar for this amazing fic.
awesome!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!

Raj aur Naina ke ishq ne Omveer ki haalat kharab kardi!!!! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Omveer ish umeed mein tha ke Naina ko ab wapas layega par Omveer ko yeh pata chala ke Naina Erkakulam ghumne gayi hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Naina is too much!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰Aur Raj bhi kuch kam nahi hai!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Roz Om se jhamela hota hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Nilima ish beech mein parehsan ho rahi hai........ dono baap aur bete ke beech mein phas gayi hai!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Lo ab Om Inspector Chadda ko bol raha hai Raj ko sazza dene ke liye aur jab Inspector ne kaha aisi koi sazza nahi hai aur legally kuch nahi kar sakte toh Raj ko dhamkane ke liye kaha!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣

Omveer pagal ho gaya hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣🀣 🀣 🀣

Ab woh Raj se yeh kehta hai ke woh chahe toh Naina ko chhodke Monica se shaadi kar sakta hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Raj toh ghabra gaya ish baat se!!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Woh chahta tha ke hadbadahat mein Raj Monica se milega!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ Par Raj bhi samaj gaya aur teen din baad hi usse mila!!!!

Par phir bhi Om ne unhe follow kiya!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Aur saath mein police bhi legaya!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

Raj bhi chala gaya Nature's call attend karne!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Aur Naina ko police ne aake pakad liya!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Mar gaye!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Naina ka wig Lady Hawaldar ke haath mein aa gaya haathapai mein!!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Ab Chadda ne usse pehchan liya aur Omveer bhi waha aagaya!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Aur sab samaj gaya!!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

Raj motor cycle mein aakar Naina ko lekar bhaag gaya!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Aur Omveer gusse se keh raha hai keh chhodunga nahi!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Bakra toh woh ban gaya!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣🀣 🀣 🀣

Raj on duty inspecter ki bike lekar bhaag aaya!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Raj bhi naa!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Chadda Om se keh raha tha ki usko khush hona chahiye aur woh inspecter aa gaya!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Too good!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Police jeep mein Chadda unke peeche gaya aur Raj ki bike ka accident ho gaya!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲O no!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Shukar hai dono ke sar pe chhot nahi lagi hai!!!😊 😊

Baahar sab milke jhagad rahe hai!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Beejee ne Omveer ko ullu kaha!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 Sahi hai!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 🀣 🀣

Sab kuch sunkar Nilima,Gita aur Girish hasne lage!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Dono zakhmi pade hai aur sab unke samne hi aapas mein jhagad rahe hai!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Wakai mein pagalpan kis hadh tak jaa sakta hai in dono ko dekh kar pata chalta hai!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣Chadda ne sahi kaha!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Ab yeh dono Psychology ke case study ban gaye!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Haan namoone hai sab ke sab!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› Inke jaisa item shayad hi hoga!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Finally sab theek hai!!!😊 😊 😊 😊5 saal baad Nitin aur Heena e do bacche hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj aur Naina ke bhi do bacche hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats great!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Ab Omveer aur Nilima nautanki karte hai!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Raj aur Naina hasne lage!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Haan sahi hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

And the Nautanki goes on!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

The Nautanki must go on as in the Show must go on!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣
It was hillarious!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

What a great ending to a great story!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

gazal_sameer thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
great end
its realy funny
too good
maza a gaya
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: gazal_sameer

great end

its realy funny
too good
maza a gaya



thanks a lot....keep reading my other fics..πŸ˜‰


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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hat's off to u for such wonderful comic fic.



THANK YOU
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

aapki fics hamesha se alag hoti hai............aur yeh unmain se ek thi...............throughly njoyed ur dis fic..............absolutely hatke n different frm ur style...............πŸ‘

yes khoob bhalo n asadharon...(are yaar bengali nahin hoon par kuch words pata hai)πŸ˜‰
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I hope I will get equal comments for my other fics..
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!

Raj aur Naina ke ishq ne Omveer ki haalat kharab kardi!!!! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Omveer ish umeed mein tha ke Naina ko ab wapas layega par Omveer ko yeh pata chala ke Naina Erkakulam ghumne gayi hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Naina is too much!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰Aur Raj bhi kuch kam nahi hai!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Roz Om se jhamela hota hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Nilima ish beech mein parehsan ho rahi hai........ dono baap aur bete ke beech mein phas gayi hai!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Lo ab Om Inspector Chadda ko bol raha hai Raj ko sazza dene ke liye aur jab Inspector ne kaha aisi koi sazza nahi hai aur legally kuch nahi kar sakte toh Raj ko dhamkane ke liye kaha!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣

Omveer pagal ho gaya hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣🀣 🀣 🀣

Ab woh Raj se yeh kehta hai ke woh chahe toh Naina ko chhodke Monica se shaadi kar sakta hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Raj toh ghabra gaya ish baat se!!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Woh chahta tha ke hadbadahat mein Raj Monica se milega!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ Par Raj bhi samaj gaya aur teen din baad hi usse mila!!!!

Par phir bhi Om ne unhe follow kiya!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Aur saath mein police bhi legaya!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

Raj bhi chala gaya Nature's call attend karne!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Aur Naina ko police ne aake pakad liya!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Mar gaye!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Naina ka wig Lady Hawaldar ke haath mein aa gaya haathapai mein!!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Ab Chadda ne usse pehchan liya aur Omveer bhi waha aagaya!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Aur sab samaj gaya!!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

Raj motor cycle mein aakar Naina ko lekar bhaag gaya!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Aur Omveer gusse se keh raha hai keh chhodunga nahi!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Bakra toh woh ban gaya!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣🀣 🀣 🀣

Raj on duty inspecter ki bike lekar bhaag aaya!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Raj bhi naa!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Chadda Om se keh raha tha ki usko khush hona chahiye aur woh inspecter aa gaya!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Too good!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Police jeep mein Chadda unke peeche gaya aur Raj ki bike ka accident ho gaya!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲O no!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Shukar hai dono ke sar pe chhot nahi lagi hai!!!😊 😊

Baahar sab milke jhagad rahe hai!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Beejee ne Omveer ko ullu kaha!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 Sahi hai!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 🀣 🀣

Sab kuch sunkar Nilima,Gita aur Girish hasne lage!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Dono zakhmi pade hai aur sab unke samne hi aapas mein jhagad rahe hai!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Wakai mein pagalpan kis hadh tak jaa sakta hai in dono ko dekh kar pata chalta hai!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣Chadda ne sahi kaha!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Ab yeh dono Psychology ke case study ban gaye!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Haan namoone hai sab ke sab!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› Inke jaisa item shayad hi hoga!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Finally sab theek hai!!!😊 😊 😊 😊5 saal baad Nitin aur Heena e do bacche hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj aur Naina ke bhi do bacche hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats great!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Ab Omveer aur Nilima nautanki karte hai!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Raj aur Naina hasne lage!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Haan sahi hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

And the Nautanki goes on!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

The Nautanki must go on as in the Show must go on!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣
It was hillarious!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

What a great ending to a great story!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘



Thanks a lot..

I am happy,that could make you laugh a lot.This is the success of my fic.

Actually I got bored by writing serious fictions..I thought that I must write a comedy..so..the result is TERI CHAAHAT ME.

I wasn't so sure that I would be able to give a meaningful end of this comedy.

I know ,it is being ended a bit earlier..but every good thing has an end..so
TCM ends here.

I am glad that every one is glad after readingTERI CHAAHAT ME.

I enjoyed every word I have written.So the readers did..

I am really very happy.

From the beginning..I am laughing myself..while writing.



Nilima-Omveer,Raj-Naina,Heena-Nitin,Chaddha,The Baba and The Pandit, Girish-Gita,Balwant..and above all..Beejee..all are heights of madness..


They are really crazy.
πŸ˜†πŸ€ͺ

Infact ,I never thought before writing any fic so deeply.

I believe in spontaneous action..if any idea comes to my mind,I just write it as a starting of a new fic..and ..my story proceeds..in a normal flow.



all my fics..TALAASH,SHAF,MJS.. and TCM..and PAHK..all are the results of spontaneous action..


Thanks for loving my fic..hope you will give more love to my other fics.



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