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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

Naina ne university join kar lia..aur drama group bhi....

ek din Naina laut rahi thi ghar..aaj woh car se nahi aai thi..uska man kia yuh hi ghumte ghumte ghar jane ka...

Naina road cross kar rahi thi..achanak Raj ko dekha..

Naina ulte raaste par jane lagi...

Raj ne chillaya..."Nainaaaaaaaa"

Naina aur tez chalne lagi..

par Raj ne usko pakad hi lia..

Raj--yaar tumko tez chalne ki bimari hai kyaa?aur mujhe dekh kar bhaag kyon gai?

Naina--meri marzi..

Raj--aaj paidal?car nahi sath me?

Naina--mera man kia yuh hi auto ya taxi se ghar jane ka isi lia car nahi lai.

Raj--hmm..yaar tum utni khadus ho nahi jitna maine socha tha.

Naina--fir se chalu ho gaye aap?

Raj--are suno to..main soch raha tha..k ..infact main kai dino se soch raha tha k tumne mujhe reject kiaa kyon?I mean main itna handsome dashing......

Naina--gun hai aapke paas?hai to mujhe shoot kar dijiye..par apna gungaan kar k mera sar mat chabaiye.

Raj--main soch raha tha k agar tum ek adh baar mujhse mil lo..to ho sakta hai mere bare me tumhari rai badal jaye..aur shadi karne k lia tum haa bol do..

Naina--aap bade besharam hai....itni beizzati se bhi aapka jee nahi bhara?

Raj--nahi bhara..isi lia ..to mujhe har roz tumhari bak bak sunni hai..aur is lia ek sath rahena zaroori hai..aur eksaath rahene k lia shadi karna zaroori hai.. waise us din tumhari beeje ne jo kaha..maine socha uske bare me..baat me dum hai..tum seriously mujhe bahut pasand ho..bahut zada...waise kaun si chakki ka atta khati ho?

Naina--abhi mera man kar raha hai k main zaher khaa loo.

Raj--oo..solid food k sath mix kar k ?

Naina--matlab?

Raj--tumhi ne kaha zaher khana hai..to solid food ko hi khaya jata hai..agar liquid form me ho to..peena padta hai...

Naina--subha shayad uthkar maine Roma aunty ki shakal dekhi thi?

Raj--woh kaun hai?

Naina-- meri panauti padosan..jis din uski shakal dekh loon mera pura din kharab guzarta hai.

Raj--Kailash auditorium me kal natak honewala hai,'Laila- Majnoo'...dekhne chalogi?

Naina--nahi mujhe bahut kaam hai....bye bye....

Naina bhaag gai.

Laila-Majnu Naina k hi drama group k log pesh karne wale hai

Laila k baap ka role Naina ko mila hai..kyonki woh role karne wale ko food poison ho gaya hai..

Naina ne Laila k baap k role k lia hi practise ki hai..

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natak ki shaam....

darshako k bich Raj bhi hai...front seat pe..apne ek dost k saath aya hai..

aur ek aur fasad khada hua..

Laila ka role jo karnewali thi woh Majnoo k role wale ladke k sath bhaag gai....uske lia yehi mauka tha..

ek aur ladka taiyar hua Majnoo k role ko karne k lia..par Laila kaha se ayegi..

Director ne Naina ki taraf dekha..

Naina--nahi..sir Laila k baap k lia hi thik hoon main..Laila nahi...aur fir Laila k baap ka role kaun karega?

Director--dono role tu hi kar le...jab Laila ki dialougue hai tab tu Laila ban jana..jab baap ka role hoga tab tu baap ban jana..aur kisi ladki ko ghunghat dal k Laila ki jagah khadi rahne k lia kah denge..

Naina--sir..marvaoge..darshak chappalo se maregi hum ko..

Director--woh to waise bhi nahi chhodega koi..Laila Majnoo dono farar..tu kuchh kar ...

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Scene shuru hua...

Majnoo--Laila tumse bepnaah mohabbat hai mujhko..

Naina ne dekha Raj seat me baitha hai ..front seat me..uska dimag ghoom gaya..sab golmal ho gaya...usne ghalti se Laila k baap wala dialougue bol dia...

Laila--ek latth se marna hai tainu..sara ishque da bukhar utar daangaa toadda...

Yeh sun k Majnoo bhi nervous ho gaya....

Majnoo--Laila,darling..... kya bolti tu..?

Director k sar par haath ...

audience pet pakad k hansne lagi...kuchh to chillane lage...are kyaa tamasha laga rakha hai..100 rupai lia hai ticket k..yeh kachra dikhane k lia?

Raj to Laila bani Naina ko dekh kar chauk gaya..aur aise deadly dialougue sunkar bhi..hasi rok nahi paya..

Naina ne jab dekha gadbad ho gai hai...usne ghabra kar gana gana shuru kar dia..

man hi man director ko gaali dena shuru kar dia...aur bhaage hue Laila Majnoo ko bhi..

Naina urf Laila gaa rahi hai.."pyar kia to darna kyaa..jab pyaar kia to darna kyaa..pyaar kia koi chori nahi ki...."

Public ko gussa aa gaya....

Director ne parda fek dia...

Raj soch raha hai..k isi lia Naina ne ane se inkaar kar dia..khud hi Laila bannewali thi..par kaisi ghatia version hai Laila ki..

Scene 2....

Laila ka baap Majnoo ko khari khoti suna raha hai...

Raj soch raha hai k Laila kab ayegi..

aise me Laila k baap ki muchhe khul kar geer gai..aur Laila ka bap Laila ban gaya....

Raj hans hans k lot pot ho raha hai....

Laila stage k samne aai....

mike pakad k usne bolna shuru kia,

"Darshako,actually main Laila ka baap hi banne wali thi is natak me..par Laila aur Majnoo dono bhaag gaye hai ahen waqt par..isi lia mujhe kabhi Laila to kabhi Laila ka baap banna pad raha hai..please co-operate with us.. and please co-operate with me..5 minute ka waqt dijiye..main apni muchhe laga loon..fir continue karenge na...please.."

Darshak pet pakad k hans rahe hai...

ek serious romance-tragedy itni badhia comedy ban jayegi kisi ne nahi socha tha...sab ka paisa wasool...show superhit.

Director ne Naina ko 100 rupai die,"beti,tere lia..tune jaise samhala..varna sade hue ande aur tamatar khane se koi nahi rok sakta tha."

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Naina auditorium k bahar aai..taxi pakad ne k lia...

Raj ki car ake ruki...

Raj--zamana kharab hai...waise bhi Naina..Laila aur Laila ka baap..koi itna achha combination to chhodega nahi..aao gadi k andar ake baithi..tumko ghar chhod deta hoon.

Naina--I can look after myself.

Raj--kahne ki baatein hai..is desh me koi strong mard bhi apni security ki guranty nahi de sakta ..aur aap to abla naari hai..

Naina--main nahi aap abla hai..shayad apko hi ghar akele jane se dar lagta hai...kyon?

Raj--thik hai..main hi abla hoon..ab chale?

Naina car k andar baith gai aur chal padi apne ghar ki taraf.

Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

awesome updt .......

loved it...... 👏 👏

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litika

@litika

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#13

omg....it was hilarious...keep it up 😆

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vvdn

@vvdn

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#14

Hey Hi,
i just catch up with your fic and also read all the update they are simply gr8.i must say your fic is really diffrent & nice. i just cant stop my laughter while reading drama scene of Laila-Majanu. 😆
Raj is sho sweet & Naina is sho cute n naughty luv them.
so, update soon we are waiting for it!!!

keep smilling 😃 keep writting 👏
namita

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saivarsha

@*Rajeevian*

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#15

its 2 good 👏 .plz cont soon...

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friend forever

@friend forever

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#16

amazing

the drama oh my god...so funny..
update soon

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#17

Car chal rahi hai..sath me Raj ki zuban bhi..

Raj--the drama was superb..bahut din baad aisi comedy dekhne ko mili.. waise Laila ka baap aur Laila ek hi...

Naina--kyaa karti?Director ne pakda..Laila Majnoo dono bhaag gaye the... actually Laila k gharwale Majnoo ko bardast nahi kar pate the..dono ka milna julna bandh kar dia..isi lia natak ka sahara lia dono ne...

Raj--haa..pyar me maa baap to Gabbar Singh ka role play karte hi hai..waise humare parents Gabbar nahi hai....toonde Thakur ka role kar rahe hai...

Naina--please..na hi main Laila hoon..na hi aap Majnoo..

Raj--maine jis din se tumko dekha hai..usi din se Majnoo ban chuka hoon.. bhagwan ka shukriya bhi ada kia ..k Girish Arya ki beti ne mujhe reject kar dia..par Naina Arya usi Girish Arya ki beti niklegi kis ko pata tha?

Naina--hmmm...

Raj--waise tum itni badi cartoon ho..mujhe pata nahi tha..par mujhe kyon reject kar dia?kisi aur se taankaa bheeda rakha hai kya?ladke ka naam kya hai?

Naina--mujhe ladke pasand nahi..

Raj--are baapre..ladke pasand nahi??matlab tum 'woh' ho??the L factor?

Naina--sale..car rok..mujhe yehi se taxi pakad na hai..

Raj--are itni raat ko kaha milegi taxi??aur itni gaali bakti ho??kaha se sikhi tumne??

Naina--raste k rikshaw walo se..

Raj--mar gaye.par gharwalo ne roka nahi..raat raat bhar bahar reh kar natak karna??

Naina--dad ne kaha shadi karo yaa M.A. padho..

Naina--maine kaha M.A. padhungi..par Natak bhi karungi..isilia...

Raj--tumhare dad ghar pe hain?

Naina--Bangalore gaye hai..

Raj--beejee?

Naina--buddhi sathia chuki hai..din raat TV dekh kar pak chuki hai..aur mujhe bhi pakati hai.

Raj--tumhari mummy?

Naina--Mom B'Lore gai hai treatment karvane..dad unko lene gaye hai...

Raj--kya hua unko?

Naina--are..thoda kamar ka dard tha..waha pe massage centre achha hai..isi lia...

Raj--waise tum L nahi ho..main kaise maan loon..shadi karo..tab certificate deta hoon..

Naina--sau kameene mare aur aap paida hue..chup karne ka kyaa lenge?

Raj--ok..tumhari pasand ki baatein ki jaye,"jo tumko ho pasand wahi baat karenge.."

Naina ne kaan bandh kar lia,...bolne lagi,"please chup ho jaiye...raste k kutte billian jaag jayenge..aur woh bhi gana shuru kar denge."

Raj--meri mummy kahti hai k main Kishore Kumar jaisa gata hoon..

Naina--to mummy k samne bhajan gaiyega..mera sar mat khaiyega..

Raj--waise tumne mujhe reject kyon kia?

Naina--apka record to wahi pe atka hai..ab main samjhi k apko reject kar k maine koi ghalti nahi ki..abhi car tez chalaiye..bail gadi hai kyaa??petrol nahi hai?yaa engine ghar pe chhod aye...

Raj--tum Formula 1 car racing me kyon nahi jati??

Naina--ab jana padega..aapse door..

Raj--nahi..Formula 1 ka idea cancel...

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thodi der baad...

Raj--M.A. me kaun sa subject hai?

Naina--English...

Raj--good...waise mera subject tha Commerce...

Naina--maine poochha tha kyaa??

Raj--nahi maine bata dia...

Naina--fizul ki baatein karna bahut pasand hai aapko?

Raj--nahi..waise us din meri Maa se mili kaisa laga unse mil k?

Naina--maine unse koi baat hi nahi ki...

Raj--kyon nahi ki?

Naina--apka screw dhila hai kyaa?

Raj--tumse mil kar dhila ho gaya hai....

Naina--mera ghar aa gaya....car rokie..

Raj--are yeh ghar itni jaldi kyon aa gaya?

Naina--ta k aapse chhutkara mile...

Raj--mujhse is janam me to nahi milnewala..chhutkara..

Naina--ghalatfaimi me jeena achhi baat nahi..

Raj--yehi to main bol raha hoon.

Naina--kyon?

Raj--jaise tum soch rahi ho k hum dono ki shadi nahi hogi..par tum ghalat ho...

Naina--are mujhe nahi karni shadi..kisi se nahi..

Raj--mera shak yakeen me badal raha hai k tum sach me 'woh' ho...

Naina--shut up..

Raj--just joking..par agar koi nahi hai tumhari zindagi me to main koi bura option to nahi....

Naina--are ajeeb hai..maan na maan..main tera mehmaan...

Raj--mehmaan nahi..pati...

Naina ne watchman ki chhadi utha li...."abhi yeha se sharafat se jayenge yaa,,is chhadi ka istemaal karoon?"

Raj--are baap re maamla itna serious hoga..pata nahi tha..but you take your own time..koi jaldi nahi hai...

Naina--main dad se apki complane karungi..

Raj--unse to main khud baat karne aunga..humare rishte k lia...believe me Naina...humara bar bar yuh milna..tumhe koi wajah nazar nahi aati iske pichhe....tum zindagi k jis raaste par chalo..manzeel main hi hoon...tum bhi meri manzeel ho..varna tumhare is tarha reject karne k baad bhi humara bar bar amne samne hona..ittefaak to nahi hai..hum yuhi to nahi mile..

Naina--aap jate hai yaa main police ko phone karoon?

Raj--ja raha hoon..par next natak k lia mujhe invite karna zaroor..

Naina chillai.."MUMMYYYYY..bachao..."

Raj--B'Lore se woh udke to aa nahi sakti...

golmal sun k beejee bahar aai...

Beejee--are beta..bahar kyon khada hai?andar aa jaa...

Raj--sure beejee..

Raj andar gaya...

Beeje ne jam kar usko khana khilaya..

Naina to muh latka k baithi rahi...

Raj--beejee ...you are so nice..apni poti ko bhi kuchh sikhaiye...

Beejee--meri poti lakho me ek hai..usko sikhane ki zaroorat nahi hai...

raat k 12:30 baj gaye the...

Raj ko bahar tak chhodne aai Naina...

Raj--good night and take care..aur beejee se khatirdari karna sikho...khana achha tha...

Beejee--sara khana Naina ka hi banaya hai...mujhe koi kaam karne nahi deti..khana bana k hi natak karne gai thi...

Raj hans pada....

"good night beejee..Naina..good night."

Raj chala gaya...

Beejee--dekh..abhi bhi ladka single hai..

Naina--beejee...serial k repeat telecast ka waqt ho gaya hai...dekhna nahi hai??
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Raj k jane k baad..Naina ghar k andar gai...

Naina khana khane baithi..usko zor ki bhookh lagi thi..Raj k samne sharam k mare khaa nahi pa rahi thi...ab Raj chala gaya..to khana shuru kia usne..

Beejee--are tab khana kyon nahi khaya?

Naina--woh ullu mere khane par nazar dalta...aur khana mere badan me nahi lagta...main patli ho jaati..

Beejee--waise bhi tere badan ko aaj tak kuchh laga hai?

Naina--aapko kuchh khana hai?yaa fir peena hai??

Beejee--woh jo rajma hai..mujhe 2 roti k sath degi kya?

Naina--le lijiye na??main aapko khilane wali hoti kaun hoon...aise kyon bol rahi hain aap?

fir....jo hua..agar Raj dekh leta..to behosh ho jata..

Beeje aur Naina ne mil kar..zada nahi 10 rotian..ek bowl rajma..ek bowl raita...matar paneer ek bowl..aur gajar ka halwa....bhakos gai.

khana khake..Naina boli..Beejee..main bahut thak gai hoon..kal university nahi jana hai..main jab tak khud na jagoo..mujhe jagaiyega nahi..main chali sone...

par sona Naina k kismat me likha nahi tha...

usko badhazmi ho hai.....

dakaar nikal nahi raha hai..pet bhaari lag raha hai..aur seene k jalan hai....

aise me Raj ne phone kia...Naina k land line par..

Naina--hello..

Raj--tum so gai thi??

Naina--nahi sone ki koshish kar rahi hoon....

Raj--mere sapne dekh rahi thi kyaa?

Naina--mujhe night mare dekhne ka koi shaukh nahi hai..

Raj--waise khana bahut badhia banati ho..man karta hai ab yehi khana main roz khaoon.

Naina--kyon..apki mummy khana achha nahi banati...

Raj--are unki umar ho chuki hai..kab tak mujhe khana banake khilaati rahegi.. ab to tumhare haath ka khana hi khana hai...

Naina--bore mat kariye..waise bhi main dakaar nahi maar pa rahi hoon... mujhe badhazmi ho gai hai....

Raj--to waise bhi neend nahi ayegi..achha hua..baat kar sakti ho mujhse..

Naina--waah..mujhe badhazmi ho gai hai..yeh baat apke lia khushkhabri hai!!!

Raj--tabiyat bahut zada kharab lag rahi hai?main aa jaoon??

Naina--naahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii......itni bhi buri haalat nahi hai meri...

Raj--tum kaun kaun se din jati ho university?

Naina--apko kyon jaanna hai?

Raj--nahi..aise hi..main tumko University se pick kar leta..ghar chhod deta..

Naina--dekhie..aap ka is tarha mujhse milne ana mujhe zara bhi pasand nahi hai..aap ainda aise zabardasti mujhse rishta jodne ki koshish mat kijiyega..

Raj--to kaise tumse rishta jodne ki koshish karoon??tum khud hi bata do.. kaise tum ko impress karoo?

Naina--kisi bade se building k chhat se kud padie..main impress ho jaungi... bye..

Naina ne phone rakh dia.....

Naina bath room ki aur dauri..usko loose motion ho gaya tha...

subha subha..Naina ki neend toot gai...Nilima jee ne phone kia tha..

Naina--hello..

Nilima--tumne mere bete ko reject kia..achhi baat hai..tumhari marzi..par usko unchi building se kudne ko kyon kaha??are woh gaya hai..city mall k upar se chhalaang lagane....

Naina--kyon subha subha mazaak kar rahi hai aap..agar aisa hai to aapko itna waqt mil gaya mujhe phone kar sake?

Nilima--are main sach bol rahi hoon..uske papa gaye hai...uske pichhe.....

ek to loose motion upar se yeh khabar...

Naina neeche aai..beeje puja kar chuki thi..

beejee ka haath pakad k gaadi me baithi..

Beejee--are hua kyaa...??

Naina--are woh pagal..building se chhalang marnewala hai.....

Beejee--kaun?

Naina--are apka laadla Rajveer Singh Siddhu..

Beejee--kyaaa??

Naina--main sach bol rahi hoon..abhi abhi uski maa ne phone kia tha....

city mall k waha jab gai tab..mamla garam tha..

Raj building k upar chadha tha...

Naina--Rajveer..yeh kyaa mazak hai....khud ko Sholey film ka Veeru kyon samajh rahe ho...neeche aa jaao..please...mujhse ghalti ho gai k maine aisa mazaak kia...neeche aa jaao...

Raj--are..meri Basanti to tum banogi nahi..Gabbar ban k baithi ho..main jee k kyaa karunga?main kudnewala hoon..

Beejee--beta neeche aa ja..aisa nahi karte

Omveer--are ...main isse achhi ladki tere lia dhundh launga..tu neeche aa jaa..

Omveer ne Naina ko kaha,"jab mere bete ko reject kia tha..tab usse meljol kyon badhaya?"

Naina--are main kaha..apka beta hi mere pichhe pada hai..aap mujhe suna rahe hai...

Raj ne chilla k kaha,"haa..karo..aur jhagda karo..jhagdaloo ladki..tumko kyaa parvah k main jeeoon yaa maroon..abhi bhi mere baap se jhagad rahi ho.. main kud raha hoon..."

Naina--nahi...suno..main jhagda nahi kar rahi hoon..tum niche aa jaao

Beejee--beta yeh kyaa pagalpan hai..neeche aa jaa..

Naina bahut der se bardast kar rahi thi..ab usse raha nahi gaya..police pahuch chuki thi..

Naina--Raj..mujhe loose motion hua hai..main zada der khadi nahi reh sakti.. please neeche aa jao...

public hasne lagi...

kisi kisi ne taunt karna shuru kia.."kyon madam..kal raat ko kisi dhaabe ki band bajai hai kya..sara khana khake?"

Naina ko gussa aa gaya..aur beejee ko bhi..

Beejee---Omveer..yeh kyaa hai..koi bhi kisiko reject kar sakta hai..par iska matlab yeh to nahi k aisi harkat karega Rajveer...Naina ki tabiyat thik nahi hai...

Omveer--Naina ne hi bola hai Ra ko k building se kud jaao...

Naina--are ..kal raat ko phone kar k pareshaan kar raha tha..isi lia..mera tamasha bana raha hai...uncle..yeh kyaa tarika hai?

Omveer chillane lage.."Raj..beta neeche aa jaa..dekh is tarha kisi ka tamasha nahi karte.."

Raj--nahi..pahle Naina kahe k woh mujhse shadi karegi..tab main neeche aunga....

Naina--Raj kyaa mazak hai..neeche aao..

Raj--pahle shadi k lia haa karo..

Naina--akhri baar bol rahi hoon..k neeche aao..

Raj--pahle haa bolo..

Naina--nahi aaoge neeche??

Raj--nahi..

Naina--to fir kud jaao....mujhe toilet jana hai...

Naina dauri raste k paas k Pay & Use toilet ki aur.....usko seriously loose motion hua tha...

Raj ne dekha Naina chali gai public toilet ki aur..unse socha..k ab rahne dete hai..waise bhi Naina ka bahut tamasha ban chuka hai..aise me police ne usko pakda..aur zabardasti usko neeche le gaya..

15 minute baad...Naina jab clear hoke bahar aai...police Rajveer ko le ja rahi thi..

uspar aarop hai..attempt of suicide...public ko harras karna..aur logo ko pareshaan karna..

Naina ki ankhe safed ho gai thi....kai bar ulti ki usne..haalat kharab hai...

Naina--beejee..mujhe doctor k paas le chaliye...mujhe food poison ho gaya hai...Beejee....

Naina raste k upar hi ulti karne lagi..

itne me Nilimajee bhi aa pahuchi..

unhone sara situation dekha.....

Naina kareeb kareeb behosh hone wali hai..

Raj--inspector..mujhe chhod dijiye..meri honewali biwi ko hospital leke jana hai..please..

Inspector--tamasha karne se pahle sochna tha na??abhi chalo ..sasooral.. sarkari sasooral...

Naina behosh hote hote bolne lagi.."Beejee..is pagal k saath aplog meri shadi karva rahe the??main kyaa itni bojh ban gaithi aplogo k upar...??

garmi k mare..Naina k naak se khoon bhi nikalne laga ....

bheed me ek doctor khade the..unka clinic paas me hi tha....woh Naina ko apne clinic me le gaye...

Rajveer ko Police le gai..aur pichhe pichhe Omveer aur Nilima daure...

Beejee akeli hi thi clinic me...mamla vakei serious ho gaya hai...

Beejee bhi Raj ko man hi man gaali dene lagi..
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Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago

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Usha Rani

@quietrajpri1623

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#18

hahahahaha 😆 again a great appalause for u 👏

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#19

Beejee jab Naina ko lekar ghar lauti..tab Naina k parents aa chuke the..shaam ho chuki thi.

Girish aur Geeta..

Girish--Maa..kaha se aa rahe hai aaplog?

Beejee--clinic se..

Geeta--kyon kyaa hua?

Naina--mujhe food poison hua tha..aur main ab chali nahane..

Naina chali apne kamre me..

Girish--baat kyaa hai maa?

Beejee ne sab kuchh bataya..shuru se..Rajveer kis tarha Naina k pichhe pada hai.

Girish--oohh god...aisa pagal hain woh..acha hai Naina se shadi nahi karai..varna Naina ko bhi pagal bana deta.

itne me Rajveer aya..

Geeta--tum yeha kyaa kar rahe ho?

Raj--Naina se milne aya hoon..ab kaisi hai woh?

Beejee--tumne to hospital bhejne ka intezaam kia tha..shukar hai..Naina thik hai.

Raj--aapki poti ne mujhe shamshaan bhejne ka bandobast kia tha..

Beejee--tumne majboor kia..

Raj--are aap to palti khaa rahi hai?aap to kal bahut khatirdari kar rahi thi meri..

Beejee--ghalti ki thi..

aise me Omveer aur Nilima aye..

Omveer--dekha..maine thik hi socha tha..yehi pe ayega yeh ladka..

Girish--aapko pata nahi tha k apka beta itna pagal hai?

Omveer--mujhe aaj subha hi pata chala...

aise me Naina nahake niche aai..

Raj ko dekha..

Naina--tum yeha kyaa kar rahe ho?

Raj--wow..'aap' se 'tum'..improvement..ab kaisi hai tabiyat..

Naina ne ignore kia..

Omveer--Naina..beti ab kaisi ho?

Naina--thik hai..

Raj--sach batao..kal raat mere jane k baad tumne kitna khana khaya?

Naina--bade besharam ho..

Raj--thank you..

Naina--mujhe chakkar aa raha hai.

Raj--maine to shadi nahi ki tumse..fir tumhe kaise chakkar aa raha hai..tum maa kaise ban sakti ho..mujhse shadi kie bina?

Naina--shadi karna zarroori nahi maa banne k lia..

Girish--both of you ..just shut up..please..are hum log khade hai..yaa sharm bech k khaa gaye ho tum dono?

Naina aur Raj chup ho gaye

Girish--Naina..yeh ladka tab tak tumhara pichha nahi chhodega..jab tak tum isse shadi nahi karti..ladka achha hai..dekho aj tak jo tumne kaha maine kia..ab please mera kaha maano..aur isse shadi karo..

Naina got a big shock..

Girish--Rajveer..agar Naina haa kahe..to jitni jaldi ho sake tum dono shadi kar lo..is umar me zada tension jhel nahi sakta main.

Raj--wow...Naina chalo shadi karte hain..

Naina--hello..maine haa nahi kaha..aur waise bhi main kisi aur se pyaar karti hoon..

Raj--tumhara premi?kab paida hua?

Naina--25 saal pahle.

Raj--bandal maar rahi ho

Naina--nahi uska naam hai Ramchandran Krishnamurthy..south k ladke ko gharwale accept karenge ya nahi isi darr se bola nahi..par ab batana padega..

Geeta--sach Naina..?

Naina--yes mom..

Raj--wow..ab Naina Daal Makhni k sath sambar mix kark khayegi..aur dosa k saath sarso ka saag..wah..

Naina--shut up.

Geeta--hum se mila to sahi..

Naina--zaroor..

Omveer--dekhne me kaisa hai?

Naina--jis din ayega us din aaplog bhi aa jana..mil lena usse

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Naina ne kah to dia k Ramachandran Krishnamurthy se woh pyaar karti hai..aur usise shadi karegi..jiski umar 25 saal ki hai..

par Ramachandran KrishnaMurthy agar Naina k gale pad gaya..to asli musibat ho jayegi...

Naina k drama group ne..thode din pahle...ek Telegu natak ko hindi me present kia tha..

usika ek character ka naam hai Ramachandran Krishnamurthy.

infact jo ladka Majnoo ka role karne wala tha..jo Laila ko lekar bhaag gaya.. wahi Ramachandran bana tha natak me..

ab woh ladka to farar hai...

Naina sach me pareshaan ho gai....

Raj ko to yakeen hai..k woh bandal maar rahi hai...lekin agar aisa koi strong character Raj k samne Ramachandran ban k jaye..to aj nahi to kal Raj ko yakeen karna hi hoga..k Ramachandran is a real character..fir Raj kisi aur se shadi kar lega..aur Naina azad panchhi ki tarha idhar udhar ja sakti hai...

par sab se zada zaroori hai..Ramachandran ko dhundh na...

kisi South Indian ladke ko janti tak nahi.....

Naina ne decide kia k apne drama company k kisi ladke ko hire karegi...

achanak uske dil me yeh khayal aya..k jo ladka Majnoo bana tha..usiko hire kia ja sakta hai..

Laila k sath bhaag kar to chala gaya...par Laila k gharwalo ko abhi bhi uski talaash to hai...

Naina ne socha agar Laila ki security ki zimmedari woh leti hai..to Majnoo raazi ho sakta hai..Ramachandran banne k lia..

Naina ne apna mission shuru kar dia..Mission Ramachandran...

bahut dhundh ne k baad..Laila Majnoo..mile ..Gudhgaon me..

Majnoo waha par ek call centre me kaam karta hai..

Majnoo ka asli naam hai Nitin Varma..aur Laila ka naam hai Heena Singh.

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Heena ne jab darwaza khola..tab woh chauk gai...Naina Arya..

Heena--tum?

Naina--apne baap ko pehchaan lia...wah..andar ane do puri baat batati hoon.

Heena ne sab kuchh suna....

Heena--isme Nitin kyaa karega??

Naina--sara kia dhara tumhara hai..na hi tum log bhaagte..naa hi main Laila banti..na woh ladka mere pichhe padta..

Heena--par jo tumne bataya ..agar tum Laila na bhi banti..ladka tumhare pichhe to padhta hi...

Naina--mujhe nahi malum..Nitin ko bolo mere saath Ramachandran ban k mere ghar chale..

HEENA/LAILA

NITIN/MAJNOO

Heena--ek din me pakdi jaogi..

Naina--Nitin is a good actor..usko convince karo....

Heena--aisa nahi ho sakta..

Naina--ok..tumhare dad ko to pata chal sakta hai na..k tum yeha ho...main bata sakti hoon...

Heena--black mail?

Naina---nahi...ilteja...varna woh Raj mujhe khaa jayega..bas thode dino ki baat hai..please...

itne me Nitin aya..

proposal sun k bola.."nahi."

Naina--are mera boyfriend banne ka natak hai..pati banne ka nahi..ek kamre me rehne ka tension nahi.

Nitin--no..Naina..impossible..

Naina ne Ramchandran k lia RaamVaan chhoda..

Naina--ok..agar yeh kaam kar do..to 5 laakh cash milenge..aur papa k office me naukri..yaa to papa ki sifarish leke kisi aur achhi jagah naukri..call centre me sadne ki zaroorat nahi...naukri nahi chahie..agar business karna hai to.. initial back up and capital dena meri zimmedari...

Heena--done..Nitin banega Ramchandran.

Nitin--dal badloo..

Heena--are puri life set ho jayegi..ho sakta hai tumhari success se khush hoke..humare parents bhi humko accept kar le..

Nitin k sar pe Heena aur Naina tandav karne lage..

raazi hone k ilava Nitin k paas aur koi raasta nahi raha..

Naina ne Ramchandran Krishnamurthy ki detail de di Nitin ko.

RamChandran Krishnamurthy

Age--25 years.

Research Fellow in Delhi University.