'A strange feeling '.THE END!(Note-Pg 84) - Page 55

awesome too giood very nice waiting for next asap.

thnx rituka and sweta...but only 2 repliess :(:(

Hey Hello,
the update is really owsome.finally Raj n Naina are get Married. 😛 i am so happy! i wishthem a very happy married life 😊
but i really miss the RN scences as previous one whr Raj is flirting with Naina, romancing with Naina 😳 those part writtenby you are really fabulous yaar .plzzzzzzzzzzzzz ab unki ek zalak to dikhado, waiting for next update plzzzz update soon

Hi!Tina!!😊
The update was excellent👏👏👏
Sorry for replying late dear.😭😭
I was a bit busy so just read it now.
Very nice.Oh God now I am at a loss of words👏👏👏
So finally Raj and Naina are married👏
I am so sad that I am replying late.😭😭
But your expression and choice of words are simply great.
God bless u.
take care😊
continue soon😛

Too good!!!Awesome!!!Mindblowing!!!

Naina's nervousness was very well portrayed!!! 😊 Shaadi mein dukh bhi hota hai!!!! 😭

Raj toh usse dekh kar uska muh khula ka khula reh gaya phir se!!! 😳 Muh toh bandh karo uncle!!! 😆

Akash ne sahi kaha jaldi hi Raj ka bhi baccha aayega!!! 😊 😊 😊

Poor Raj!!!He was missing his childhood!!! 😭

Naina was looking beautiful!!! 😊

Raj , Naina , Navin and Rashmi ka part and their understanding was very sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊

I loved the wedding!!! 👏

Wishing Raj and Naina a happy married life!!!! 😊

Looking forward to the wedding night and loads of romance!!! 😳

awesum n 2gud dear, 👏

fnally they got married tatz realy nice n sounds the best 2 hear,

the way u hav expressed each n every scene is realy realistic,

especialy naina's part crin etc is in every normal girl wen they get married thz scene is realy 2 gud sweety, 😊 😭 n leave their parants houz,but 2 gud,


n the groom waitn 4 the bride witout patience is also realistic n the way u hav written realy seems tat v r attendin the marriage in reality a spelended work sweety, 👏



the marriage kanya dhan etc etc realy super n realy hav a feelin like hav attended their marriage in reality, 😊


it is realy a cuple made 4 each other, 😊



the way u hav written it seems tat i'm in reality,n 2 gud dear,



RN marriage rockz, 😊



All the best N 4 Raj-Naina u'r nayi zindghi ki shuruath, 😊



all the best tina sweety,




Aarthi

@vvdn
thnx a lot!!will try to bring in r-n scenes!.


@riya
thnx a lot!...nd no porbs fer late reply!!...

@shaina
thnx!

@aarthi
thnx a lot!!

PART-49

All ceremonies were over..

Navin came forward and made an announcement!!..

Navin-Okk Aaj raat ke liye i have booked a honeymoon suite for the couple in a 5 -star hotel about 14 km from here..kal subah you guys will be leaving for your honeymoon in goa!...hope thats fine..be back after 5 daays.....prepare for kolkatta....we would do most of the work though...(Navin laughed) you guys have fun!!...

RAj and Naina smiled..

Pandit-Vidai ka waqt ho gaya hain....kanya yahan se agle 20 minute mein rawana ho jayye toh accha hoga...shubh moorat hain!!

Navin gave a fake smile....

The newly wed took the blessings of the elders.....beejee ...badi ma and uncle...(i forgot to mention even Uncle had come there....Raj had invited him)

They hugged their friends...Navin was no where to be seen...Rosy saw him slipping into a nearby room...

RAj and Naina dint think even for a second.....they moved towards that room..

Navin was actually crying!!..

Naina's throat dried up...she couldnt see her brother like this....

Naina-B..bhai..

Navin wiped his tears...

He turned around..

Navin-Ahh woh bas thoda pani peena tha...

Naina looked at him straight into his eyes...

Naina-I will miss you... 😭

That moment she broke and hugged Navin...Navin huggeed her back......it hurt both of them to leave !...but they dint have a choice!!.. 😭

Navin-I'l miss you b....bacha!!...

Naina cried some more!!.. 😭

Navin-Shhh!...warna jijaji mujhe gussa karengey.. 😉

It brought a smile to her face!!..

Raj had tears in his eyes..

Raj-Mujhe maaf kar de dost!!...I am sorry...Naina ko yun

Navin-Shh!...bas bahut ho gaya hero ki acting!...khush raho tum duno!...mere liye kaffi hain...aur waise bhi rosy ke saath kuch waqt milega!!.. 😉 ...aur tum is musibaat ko jhelna!. 😆

They all smiled!!.

Raj Naina and Navin proceed towards the exit!..

All get senti!!..

Navin is still senti..

Raj and Naina sitting in the car!.

Navin comes at the window!

Navin-Have fun.....5 din bad milte hain....tum logogn ka saman kal hotel mein pahunch jayega!!...njoy!!... 😊

Raj-Thnxx !

Naina dint say anything...she just loked in another direction!!.

Navin and Raj noticed it..

Navin-Naina...bye!!

A tear rolled down her cheek.. 😭

Navin-Khyal rakhna Raj!!.. 😕

RAj nodded..

Raj-Naina gaddi shuru ho rahi hain...navin ko bye bol do!!..

Naina was crying!!..

Naina-Byee!!... 😭

She said without looking at him!!..

It hurt him...but this is how it meant to be!..

He stopped there....the car moved ahead!!..

Naina lay her head on Raj;s chest!!...

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He went into the room..

He saw her sitting there just like any other girl would.....shy calm and hapy...he dint expect this but.....but somewhere he could see some slight fear or tension or jus nervousness....either of them....he smiled.....life had come a long way for both of them....from a tom boy to a girl this shy was definately a longg journey!!.......from a flirt to a one woman man was no less of a change!!..

She saw him standing there with a mischeivous smile....it dint make her blush but it scared her!!....she was already very nervous....

Raj moved in....he sat by her side on the bed...

She sat there on the bed hugging her knees....in the typical way....as soon as he kept his hand on top of hers....it was a different sensation for her....perhaps for the simple reason that she knew that this touch was gonna take her to another world....something she hadnnt seen before...

Well in rajs language below the belt!....haha!!.. 😆

Raj sighed.

RAj-Naina....your making this look so typical!!..

Naina laughed a bit!..

Raj-You are happy arent you? 😕

Naina-Ofcourse i am!. 😊

Raj-Excited?...or should i say nervous?

Naina-Nervous?... ahh why should i be?

Her face said she was lying!.

Raj-Cmon naina.....you cant lie for nuts....you are actually nervous!!...about this whole suhaag raat thingi!.. 😆 .trurst me take it like another day and night....jus relax...i am not gonna eat you up alright!.... 😆

Naina-Ahh....i am not nervous...but yea its kinda a strange feeling.. 😕

Raj-Ehh dou noe wat this strange feeling is??

Naina-I am afraid no i dont..

Raj-Its A STRANGE FEELING CALLED LOVE!!!

Naina smiled.. 😊

Naina-A STRANGE FEELING CALLED LOVE.. 😊

Raj-Hmm

Naina-Strange that i never felt it before!!..

RAj laughed.. 😆

Raj-Really?

Naina-Yup!!...

THey both laughed!!. 😆

Raj-Ok so now your fine?...shall we get to work?

Naina saw the mischeif clear in his eyes...she lowered her eyes..

Raj put his hand on her cheeks..

RAj-Naina i love you naina!...i love you a lot..

Naina-I love you too raj..

Raj moved his hands to her earings....he pulled out the left one..

Naina closed her eyes..

Raj pulled out the right one also...

Her chunni on the head..

HE got up a bit to remove the hair pin at the back of her hair....his body brushing agianst hers....it sent up a shiver in her body...she never felt this way before...an urge to feel him....an urge to explore him......an urge to jus be with him..

RAj removed her chunni...and sat on the bed with a smile..

Naina-Kya hua?

Raj-Ahh bahut neendh aa rahi hain!!

Naina-Acha....tumne toh kaha tha...aaj ki raat koi nahi soyega....phir yeh neendh kahan se aayi??

Raj-BAs aa gayi... 😆

In a flash raj puled naina...and kissed her on her lips.....naina was taken for a shock......it was a long kiss....a very passionate one..........the desire to jus be with one another......a strong desire!!..

Suddenly naina felt a huge weight being remove.....it was raj his hands were working along with his lips.....his hands removed the heavy necklace she was wearing...........they broke..

RAj took nainas hands in his..

Raj-Aaj ki raat meri zindagi ke sabse behtareen raat hain naina....aur mein samjhta hoon ki iss raat ko mein tumhari zindagi ka sabse accha pal bana sakta hoon....kya tum mujhe yeh mauka dogi naina?

He slowly removed the bangles one by one keeping her engrossed in his talks!!.........one by one he removed all the jewelery from her...jus the mang tikka was left......she looked simply stunning!!...even this way!!..

RAj was adoring her!!..

Her eys closed and her face bright red!!..

with a bit of force by his hands he made her lie down gently on the bed......he was on top of her...his hands playing around her navel....he kissed her stomach.....and went up slowly!!...he kissed evry part of her.....eyes ears nose neck stomach....evry part of her body was showered with kisses......naina was just feeling his touch....well he wanted to explore more...

He suddenly turned her around...........it was a shock for her....he was lying on top of her back....he kissed her back....he removed the buttons of her top aand the hook of her innerss.........he kissed her bare back all around.......

HE turned her back facing him.....her clothes still on...he slowly pulled out the top.... now he had some new fresh skin to shower his kisses with 😉 ...he kept kissing her and caressing her................She couldnt sit like a statue anymore...she removed the buttons of his shirt...he helped her get out!!....and she ran her fingers feeling his strong chest!!...........

There he removed the last piece of obstacle between her skin and him........and there was no single thing between their upper bodies....

A night of union of two lovers!...they would be one anothers forever!!.....who says life doesnt have an happy ending....who says that "they lived happily ever after " doesnt happen in real lives..They were happy jus to be wid one another...and the weddin had united them!!...

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Guys guys guys...before you think this is the end...theres more!...haha!...jus one more chap to go!!.....

Its been a faboulous journey so far!...and we have one more day of it...so lets all cherish it...and i will be back tommorow!! 😉

sorry again for the late reply.......
in the previous update........i loved all the details, the way u elaborately described the wedding, loved the light feeling that shona's entry brought........the way raj ws looking at naina open-mouthed..........then navin intodusing rosy as her bhabhi to teh pandit.......the whole vidayi ka rasam ws so emotionally portrayed, felt sooooooo sad for navin.....yes indeed marriage brings a hidden sadness along with it.........and the whole suhag raat ws pretty romantic!!

indeed love is a strange feeling...........it never ceases to surprise a lover. 😳

beautiful updates 👏