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Posted: 17 years ago
@sweta
thnx!..

@vvdn
no probs...i did notice dat u hvnt replied for long...even rani hasnt (quietrajpri)..........thnx once again........haan haan acche se tayyar ho ke aana....lol!...

@mahak
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@watch rajeev
thnx a lot!!........ur appreciation means a lot!........

@rituka
thnx!..

@daisy
thnx a llooottt!!......

@aarthi
Thnxx a lot!...ur at loss of wrds........thnku so much!.......please dunt be sadddd!!..evrythn doesnt end wid dis fic na.....i still noe u nd u still noe me... :)

@lipi
thnx!.

@yyy
thnx a lot...

@riya
thnxx a lot riya!!......i relllli lykd dose bro-sis scenes too!.
yaya please decide wat you will wear!...hehe!!....

@shaina
thnxx!!...
defiantely sarre businees waley boring nahi hote...humara raj boring hain kya?...nah!!....sab kuch pakka theekh ho jayega!!.....

@mahak
thnxx a lot!!......dunt wry sab kuch theekh ho jayega!......rote rotein bhi flirt kartey hain!...hehe....i added dat to keep de balance...warna bahut senti senti ho jata!.... :)

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Posted: 17 years ago

woe!...more dan normal number of replies...lol!...thnx a lot for all de appreciation...i am really motivated to ryt the last few parts better!...

I humbly thank all of you!!..........

Update will be tommorow like i said!

Edited by cool~~gal - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
PART-46

Suddenly theres a spotlight on raj!...Thats when naina sees him....he looked smashing....in a red sherwani....ohh man....any girl would fall for him. 😛 ...another spotlight on naina...

And raj saw the most beautiful sight!....naina there in a beautiful red ghaghra choli and loads of work all over!....both were adoring each other....when a voice intrupted!..

Ahem ahemmm -- it was navin....with the mike in his hand!..

Navin-App sab ka swagat hain is same same but different kind of sangget par!....ahh i am sure your gonna have loads of fun today.....hum sab ne mil kar...raj aur naina ke liye ek chota sa ehh gift he samajh lo.....this one is for you guys!.....

RAj moves towards naina....and then the lights go off!.....bit of lights on the stage!..

And it began!..

Its a kinda a musical drama.....lets see!!

(in the background some soft music is played)

One guy and girl came and they were fighting.....they were little kids ....they were hitting each other....and then they exit the girl was shona and the guy was some kid.............the same guy and girl are shown grown up...in each others arms....

Well in the same clothes came nisha and a guy!....The guy was touching nisha's cheeks...and suddenly there was one scene wherein nisha turns him around and they potray as if they were kissing.. 😆

Raj gets a shock!.

Naina-Chill...they are not actually kissing!.. 😆

Raj-HOw on earth do you knoe?...who is dat guy?

Naina laughed!.. 😆

Then Nisha wraps a red duppatta on her head....and the guy wears a turban(like they do in weddins)....Navin comes disguised as the pandit.... 😆

Aalekh neelu rosy and Aakash all relativess

The guy is about to put some sindor on nisha's head....jus then a voice comes..

Yeh shaddi nahi ho sakti......mein isss aadmi ke bachhe ki maa banne wali hoon.....It was aky....her tummy wasnt enough out...so they stuffed some pillows...... 😆

Nish pretends as if shes crying...

Nisha-Kyun kiya kyun kiya aisa mere saath?.....she drops her duppatta and goes offf!!......


And the lights go offf!!...

Raj looked at naina!..

Raj-Was that the gift??... 🤢

Naina-Ehh looks like that....i mean we spoke bout that scene...wen i was askn whose nisha........maybe they were eavesdropping!.. 😆

RAj-Nah!....i am confused!!....

Again they heard a voice...it was nish!!..

Nisha-Havent you seen so many stupid dumb stories like the one we showed you.......friends.....here we are to tell you the story of Rajvver and naina....wel this was not the story of rajveer and naina...this is jus any drama concept....today we bring you reality....

Pause..........


Lights off and on again!..

Nisha-Rajvver and Naina....a couple brought together by destiny.....Raj and Naina were made for each other form the very beggining!!....A couple made by the gods themselves!...Today we bring before you the story of Raj and Naina...And i cant tell you how proud i feel to play Naina in this drama!...Its defiantely my pleasure......to play naina...somewhere deep down....i really feel that if evry Raj finds his naina...life will be beautiful....but life is not always beautiful....I can say from my expierence!....


Life has perhaps always been good to me because i had with me my Big B...Rajveer....he sttodd by me always come what may....he always protected me...from evrything...all evils!....i cant thank him enough.....i dont remember much with mom and dad....but my life has been made only by by brother 😭 ....hes been evrything to me......bhai i cant i mean....thanku is jus not the word.....he always was there by me...his love....(she coudlnt continue)

Nish wiped a tear....Raj was already in tears...

Nish continued-- Life has been good to me....but it hasnt been good to my brother....he has faced so many hardships....and now today life has been good to him....with naina bhabhi by his side....i am sure its the biggest gift of his life....bhai you deseve this...i mean much more than this.... 😊

All i want to say is whatever you have seen in life for me because of me...evrything...i sware if you ever need me you just need to tell me...i was a kid i couldnt do much for you....but now i am with you!....though you have naina with you...i am there too.....

Ok this is going too long..Navins gonna kill me..

Navin wiped a tear....nish tried to hide her tear....

Nish-I'll conclude by saying...bhai i really love you...and you rock big time....i am so really proud to have a brother like you!!.....i love you!!..and yeah hope after all this butter session you dont kill me for kissing that guy....

Raj wiped his tears....and smiled....Nish knew who to balance a situation!!

Naina also wiped a tear!..

Nish-Ohh yea that guy is your brother..and your brother means my brother...

THe hall erupted in a laughter!..

Raj was confused..

Nish-Ahh hes rohan....rosy's brother.....and rosy is your sister!!..

Raj laughed...and repeated rohan!..

Ra-Tha ahh so famous rohan!.. 😊

Nish-Ok continuing our item yaar!..

Nish continued-TOday we bring to you THe story of love...the folk of love....the folk of rajveer and naina!!......the perfect love story!!........

Where I play Naina and Rajveer is played by ROhan!!...

Nish gave Raj the biggest smile ever!..

Raj smiled!...It starteed....

Noww since they knew raj and nainas story...it went jus that way...with couple of additions along de way!..

THey showed a school scene two kids....and that scene was kinda short...

IT moved to the reunion party...

Nish and Rohan over the bar...

ROhan offering her a drink.....and nish told him who she was...

All others were played by aky..aakash aalekh neelu....so it actually looked like a party..........

THey showed Nish and ROhan dancing...jus like raj and naina did!!..

Rohan reallly close to Nish.......and his hands moving jus the way rajs hands did!!..

It brought back all the memories to raj and naina....

THe story continued at a fast pace.....they showed an injured rohan...and nish running to him...looking into each others eyes....nish broke contact and went off...

Rohan caught her waist...and started rubbing his cheeks against her shoulder...

Raj and naina were red.....it jus brought back evrythin....but raj was seeing his sister with another guy....uff why are brothers so protective...thought naina...

Naina-Raj its a drama....aur yeh humari kahani hain....njoy it!.. 😆

Raj-I knoe naina......bas dekh raha hoon......yeh saab paka nish ka idea hoga...she looks extra exicted.... 😆

Back to the stage!..

Nish getting seduced.....her expressions were superb!!..

Raj smiled .....actually laughed...his sister was no less of a tomboy!!....and seeing her this way....why were girls so strange...

Nish and Rohan lost in each other........

Nish gets rid and leaves him....She moved to another corneer on the stage.......her heart beating fast....

ROhan comes behind her

Rohan-I love you!!...

Nish smiled..

Nish-I love...you!!..

ANd they hug!!....

(lots of things cut short we already knoe the story)


Navin ke awwaz..

Yeh thi kahani Raj aur naina ki.......asli kahani hum nahi janteyy...aur jo kahani jantey hain usko bhi edit kiya gaya hain!...lekin yeh thi sirf ek chotti se gift....bada gift bakki hain....aur woh aaj nahi....uhh kisi aur din milega!!...


Nish and ROhan break!..

Nish smiled..

Lights back...all come out bow and go down..




Raj and naina went on the stage

Raj-WE jus have no words...we relived evry moment of our life....it was simply outstanding...thanx a lot guys!!...

Love you all..

The funcion dint stop there....there was loads of fun....singing dancing....teasing...and loads of romance.....silent romance!!

Aakash couldnt take his eyes off his pregnant wife!!...

Navin engrossed in rosy... ohh off late rashmi......the knee length girl was today dressed in a saree...she said its her brothers weddin....so she should be dressed that way....she looked stunningg....in a blue sarre with silver work.....her hair disturbing her all the time...navins heart ached to go and move that hair away..but he knew he couldnt..

Aalekhh was also fida over his live-in partner.....she looked sexyy too!!....in a green churidar...ahh sexy man...thought aalekh!!

THe ones left out were nish and rohan....jus sitting and getting bored....this boredom made them friends...

Nish-Eh most of the people we know here are committed.....and there are some oldies....whom we dont knoe...so where does that leave us?....alone...and bored......after all the dance and stuff....look at these guys flirting with their gals!..

Nish laugheed!.

Rohan-Healthy flirting is gud na 😆

Nish-Yea ryt...healthy...some one define that to these people!....but anyway they were all couples man...they can even unhealthily flirt!... 😉

Nish laughed again!...

ROhan smiled....

The function was over...

Raj got naina in one corner alone...it was the so great kitchen

Raj-Naina your looking stunning..

Naina blushed..

Naina-Thnx!!..

Raj-Sirf thnx?...wers my kiss!!..

Naina-Raj!!..

Raj-Naina...i want my kiss...thats all....

Naina-No way....pack up time!!

Raj-I need my kiss....

Naina-Raj some one.

Raj-You still owe me two favours!....Raj smiled..

Naina--Ahh..

Raj came closer....

His cheek rubbing hers...

Raj-I love you..

All raj saw was nainas cheek going another darker shade of red!!..

Raj brought his lips close to naina...he kissed her....it was soft....jus expressing his undying love for her...

Suddenly they heaard a noise...

F...i mean..fish...

RAj broke from naina......he knew it who it was...of all the people she had to catch him this way....he ruffled his hair and turned around to face her..

She was holding her hands over her eyes..

Raj-Ahh ooh uh 😕

Nish-Arrgh stop that ahh uh thingi.. 😉

Raj-I guess you can remover your hands from your eyes

Nish-I can? 😳

Raj-Huh?...obviously!! what do you think..

Nish-Uhh wen its raj and naina....anything can happen.. 😆

They both blushed...Naina actually turned arounddd and started pouring somethin into some jar..

Naina-Mein toh yahan...panni lenney ayyi thi..

Nish-Oh bhabs...its ok....waisey you should noe to differntiate between water and..and curry!...

Naina realized she was pouring curry ......aaiio!!

Raj was emabrrased....the last thing he wanted was his younger sister catching him kisssing his fiancee..

Raj looked embarrased..

Nish-Bhai its ok!!.....main kisi ko kuch nahi kahongi.....well kehna bhi nahi chahongi.....i dont knoe how to feel after catching your elder brother in this postion...

And she started laughing!..

Raj-I dunt noe how to feel after seeing my younger sister kiss her brother....or rather pretend to kiss!.

Nish-Pretend any day...please i dint really kiss him....rohan flew down this morning....i jus met him....and he made me feel so comfortable doing even the really intimate scenes...but jus think if you wouldnt have done all that then even i wouldnt have....so its all your fault!.. 😆

RAj-Yea right my fault!... 😕

Nish-Hmm....but Rohan is very sweet big b.. (she was teasing him)........we have reharsed so hard since morning...easily 20-30 times...... (stressing on 20-30 times) and rohan made me feel very comfortable! 😆

Nish was laughin uncontrolably...Raj was astonished.....how she made one of his most emabaarasing moments into a comic one!.....

Nish holding her stomach..

Nish-Haha...ok ok...i am leaving now...you continue your act....ill go take a re take....i really loved the drama....hahahah...and she went off..

Raj turned to naina..

Naina-Ok we are done....i dont think we want to get caught by bhai now....i am off..

Raj-Naina lets complete the kiss..

Naina-Shh....byee!...and naina runs even before he can realize something!!...........


HE ruffled his hair....and stood there smiling!..

ONe day to go....and naina and he would be tied in a forever relationship.....a beautiful relationship.....a relationship that would never die(in their case)....they would be bound in the heavenly thing called marriage!!



Edited by cool~~gal - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
ehh hoope i lived up the expectations!...i dunno....not fully happy with de update......felt smething was missing......but i relli dunno what thouhght qiet a bit bout it.......if you guys figure out smethings rong and den wats rong let me noe!!......
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Posted: 17 years ago
too good i love this part
update soon............
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it was a very nice part........
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 wow..such a lovely scene...Nish and rohan's acting was good...poor raj...he was caught by his own sister..that's embarrassing i know 😉 😉

i am waiting earely for their wedding..continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
excelent sweety hatz of 2 u, 👏

ofcourse u live 2 the expectationz,in fact u realy rock dear 👏 ,

super lived the whole epi 2day,complete gud,dialogues rocked, 😃



Rohan nisha scene gud n funny,


but the thng is u'r ff goin 2 end soon itz realy sad, 😭 but realy 2 gud ff dear,



All the very best,



Aarthi
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi! Tina
That was absolutely great👏
you have definitely lived up to the expectations dear.
A great piece of work👏👏👏
Poor Raj😆😆😆
All the scenes were simply rocking.
The scene between Nisha,Raj and Naina was simply beautiful👏
God bless u dear😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Raj and Naina were looking awesone!!! 😊 😊 😊 Dono toh ek dusre par fida ho gaye!!! 😳

Unlogo ne actually Naina ke khayal ko enact kar diya!!!! 😆 Aky was soooo funny!!!! 😆 As was Nish, Rohan ,Shona and the kid!!! 😆 😆 😆

Raj is the protective brother!!! 😛 Acting se bhi problem!!! 😆

Nish ka dialogue was very sweet!!! 😭 So touching!!!! 😭

And then she started teasing Raj!!! 😆 Really woh rulati bhi hai aur hasati bhi hai!!! 😊

Nish ne sahi kaha wakai mein this is the perfect love story!!! 😊

Nish aur Rohan enacting Raj and Naina were too good!!! 👏

Nish toh kamal ki thi!!! 😉 Pura sab kuch enact kiya!!! 😳 Wow!!! 👏

Raj and Naina lived every moment again!!! 😊 It was great!!! 👏

Ab sab couples aapas mein romance chalu unka!!! 😳

Rohan and Nish are keeping each other company!!! 😊 Great!!! 😊

Raj and Naina were so romantic!!!! 😳

Par galat time pe Nish aagayi!!!! 😆 Nish teasing Raj was too funny!!!! 😆

Ab Raj aur Naina ek ho jayenge hamesha ke liye!!! 😊

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