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Posted: 17 years ago
they walked back to the jeep but as they reached it rajveer noticed a dissapointment on naina's face..

"anything wrong???"
"huh??..who..nahi nothing.."
"cmon.."
"who..i was thinking..umm..can we walk??"

"gimme two mins??"
"huh?..ya"

rajveer made a phone call and called upon his driver to come to the restaurant and take his jeep back home..

naina and rajveer's apartments were about an hours and a halfs walk..

and judging by the evening..this time was sure to go by in the wink of an eye..

they walked side by side..and occasionally wen rajveer's hand brushed against her she felt goosebumps arise all over..

the dark clouds announced their arrival by a thunder..maybe it was going to rain again..
they were walking past the park wen suddenly..

"hey raj.."

she caught hold of rajveer's hand..had she realized that she had just called out his name??
..rajveer stared at her in surprise..

Naina dragged him to the boundary of the park and then taking the support of his shoulder climbed on to the litlle boundary of lined bricks..

She reached out for rajveer's support and he held her hand..

Magical...was the first word in her mind..
she looked up only to find him with the same expression that she had seen him wid twice before..

"kuch kehna chahte hain aap??kya baat hai??"
"nahi ..kuch nahi.."
"cmon.." she mocked him..
he smiled..

"who..who tumhare baal.."
"huh???.."
"who actually khule huye ya phir jo who sir ke upar choti bandhti ho na...zyaada ache lagte hain.."

the clouds roared again..and naina tumbled right into rajveer's arms..
her back rested on his strong arms
one hand on each shoulder and her feet on the ground..but her heart..

it wasn't wid her now..
it started raining... again...
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Posted: 17 years ago
pyaar ko...ho jane do..
pyaar mein ...kho jaane do..
aitbaar kiska hai...
intezaar kiska hai..
abhi na hua to phir
kabhi nahi ..kabhi nahi...


the rain fell on her faces....
she was so innocent..so pretty..
yes she is beautiful..rajveer thought..

they stood like dat for about two mins more..lost in each other..

"naina.."


HONK!HONK!

"woah!!ah.."
"hey naina!!don't worry girne nahi dunga.."

the untimely visitor was rajveer's driver with the jeep..he had been following the same road...
naina's apartments were now ten steps away..

"naina.."

she stopped in her tracks..bracing herself..the warm rain flooding in her a beautiful thought..

she was waiting..waiting to hear something..but..wat wud he say ..

"naina..i..I ..think...."


rajveer shook his head..

"huh!!!!naina..thanks..for a wonderful evening.."

she opened her eyes..why was there a disappointment??
She turned..and smiled..

"thnks..to u too for a really special (rajveer smiled) evening.."

naina closed the apatment door and leaned with her back against it..
a beautiful feeling was sinking in..

"hummm.hmmm..ah..han zaraa.zaraa..hai roshni se..jaise bhara..."

rajveer hadn't boarede his jeep outside€he walked back drenched..
drenched in this beautiful rain..

"hmmm..timk..zaraa.zara..hmm..hmm..jaise bharaa "


naina went to the room...her was dripping wet..but she stood in front of the mirror looking into it..

the colour rising in her cheeks...

she titled back and fell flat on the bed...
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Posted: 17 years ago
i m so sorry for a late upate...but here goes...

ding dong!

"huh?..."

naina peeped out from under her blamket...yesterday night she had slept off just the same way...

slowly she went up to the door to find..

"hey!..wazzup?"

"yudi?...aalekh..nnelu?..tum sab..."

"well hum kal nahi the..so thought will check up wid evryone..so how was the party yesterday..did u enjoy.."

the dreamy look in naina's eyes gave the others a picture of wat the night was like and then...

"oye kaidi?.."

"huh?..huda?..ali?..pooja..?

ek minute..mujhe koi bataega,,itni subah subah..tum sab ek saaath....yaha....kya kar rahe ho?"

"areh naina..tu tension kyun le rahi hai..hum to bas khabar lene aye the..perty ki.."

"maening??..cont tell me even u werent there yesterday?"

"nahi!"

"oh wow!..iska matlab..only naina..and sir?"

naina ws turning a shade od red...

"come in.."

they all sat at the table and naina had just freshened up..she came outside intending to ask evryone wat they wud liek for breakfast wen her phone rang..and across it flashed..

"rajveer sir.."

"uh!.emin abhi ayi..."

it was a ten minute wait for the other after which naina emerged..fully dressed in casuals..

"naina?tu kahin ja rahi hai?"

"hum jaa rahe hain.."

"kya?"

"rajveer sir ka phone tha...woh..ambala chodkar jaa rahe hain.."

"KYA??????????"
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Posted: 17 years ago
panic filled evry mometn that they raced to the park to reach rajveer...

naina was silent all this while..

finally on reaching she rushe dto him...

"sir aap kahan ja rahe hain?"

"naina woh..."

"sir...kya baat hai sir?"

"woh..Hum sab ambala se ja rahe hain..."

"wat?.."

"aise koi humara onnection nahi kat sakta.."

"apun kyun jaega..."

"oye teri..sir..lekin.."

"hey thats not done.."

"officers....officers..OFFICERS!!"

they kept quiet..and finally naina spoke..

"sir hum sab saath jaa rahe hain?"
and now rajveer cudnt keep the secret any longer..

"hahaahahahha..han naina...hum sab saath goa ja rahe hain..."

wat followed was silence..this had to be a joke...

"Hello???...i m serious...we are going on vacation..to GOA!!!"

the next uproar was deafening...

and naina rushed to hug rajveer...who cud do nothng but respond...
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Posted: 17 years ago


the next wekk that followed..had a lot in store...

new experiences...new bonds and new feelings...

it was a time that wud recreate relations....
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Posted: 17 years ago
as the group got down from the bus..which had brought them from mumbai to goa..
they dint know wat to expect...where were they to stay...but judging by rajveer's looks and mr.gehlots power..it had to be something remarkable...and so it was...

after they had checked in at the reception and after freshening up decided t take a tour of the resort...their hearts stopped...it was mesmerising...
evrythng from their huge rooms...(naina a neelu shared one(a huuuge one)...
rajveer was alone{mr.gehlot apne bete ko kisi ke saathr oom share nahi karne denge}..
ali and pooja were together and so were yudi and huda..
which left one room for aalekh...

the rooms were no less than palatial rooms...and the beach with the serene bluish green sea looked so inviting...
along the beach were little cottages whr many couples spent their rosy nights..most were booked..
in fact one was booked for their gropu as well.. much to their amusement.......


"excuse me...major rajveer singh???"
"yes its me.."
"sir this is for you..."
"well ...."
"kya hai sir..."
"well yeh is baat ke kiye diya gaya hai...i mean hume yeh batane ke liye diya gaya hai ki is waqt is resot mein festival time hai...and evry night there is going to be a different party here!!!"
"PARTY???WOW!!!!!"
"YUHOO..."

the young officers...ummm..no...not officers...the sprightly yougnsters..were lost int the waves of the beach..the sang danced...played in the waves..and rajveer saw naina...
her childlike innocence..as she splashe water on her friends...jummping in joy....her wet heir clinging to her body just like her sarong..

"excuse me sir...are u rajveer.."
"yes.."
"this is for you sir..." rajveer opened the letter...

[COLOR-MAGENTA]rajveer....
kaise ho...kabhi yeh nahi socha tha..itne saalon baad..aise ..is jagah..ambala se itni door...phir mulakat hogi...
kya yaad karte ho mujhe....mujhe yaad hai...
tumhari...meri ...humari woh har baat....shayad yeh kismat hai...shayad ...phir se jagana hai hume un yaadon ko...
i am waiting...
"still" yours.....PRINCESS....


"princess????....yaddein???oh shit...ambala!!!!.."

he looked up...the man who had given him the letter was talking to a slender figure...
"princess.....yani..n..."
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Posted: 17 years ago
rocking. 👏 👏 👏 next update jaldi plz.
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Posted: 17 years ago
no responses???? 😭 😭
well..heres a next small part...for my two readers!!

...the sights of goa...its serene waters...the sandy beaches...and the winds that blew in after the touch of the majestic palms.. made the ambience perfect for these new found realtions to grow....

the group went out for sightseiing...and again in a ...
"BUS??....OH....MY GOD!!!....YEH BUS HAI?????????????????"
"NAHI RE...YEH BUS NAHI YEH TO rajsawari hai boss!!!!"...

THE SIGHT SEEING WAS FUNFILLED...AND PACKED WID ACTION...
but nothng compared wat the night had n store...

..the night was filled with the essence of romance..but maybe more than romance there was passion...

"WELCOOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!ITS AN AWESOME EVENING HERE....TONIGHT WE WELCOME YOU TO THE SALSA NIGHT!!"

rajveer eyes kept darting up to the staircase...why...well maybe now he knew a litttle!!..."oye kaidi yeh ladkiyan kab aengi yaar!!...hadh ho gayi yaar!!!..."
"abbeh tujhe kyun itni fikar ho rahi hai...waise bhi..tu bhi kuch kam waqt nahi leta tayyar hone ke liye!!..."
"oye..meine kab..."
"let it be bro...."
"waise hum bhi......"

his words trailed off..and rajveer's look froze at the top of the stair...she looked like...a ..
"she's a diva...."rajveer spoke under his breath..

naina seemed to glide down the staricase...in her black gown...
it was a halter neck...backless gown...her gown cut down in a slanting manner exposing her strong slender right leg and covering her left...

a beutiful stone sequence set atop her right knee and her hair done up in a topknot exposing her jewel less neck and shoulders...and the wrislet on her left hand ...

the heels of her shoes clicked on the floor and the tinkling of her anklet put in an aura of a greek goddess

"wow.....hey guys naina's looking awesome.."
"oye han beh nautunki.."
and then again all eyes darted to the top of the stiars from the mid(whr naina was now..)...all eyes except one...(do i need to mention whose...)

"pooja?????" ali..was stunned..
pooja lokked magnificent in her red full length gown and her hair let down and her long chandelier earings sparkling....
"kaisi lag rahi hun ali??..."
"mere paas alfaaz nahi hai..."
he just smiled...


"sir??....aap??"
"huh??" it was as if he had come out of his daze...
"u look awesome..."
she lookde up and into his eyes...her eyes...the look in them were rather..rather...seductive...
"chale??..."
"after you!!..naina.."

"oye tum sab ki...mera matlab hai naina bhi aa gayi aur punjaban bhi...par.."
"meri sis ne kabhi itna waqt nahi liya..well time has changed..truly..."

then finally she came down the stairs...

she was dressed in dark purple today...it was perfect for her ...a noodle strap short knee length dress...maybe not as mesmerising or as pretty as naina or pooja but to aalekh..this was magical..
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Posted: 17 years ago
she winked at him....
"ok...chief...i'd better leave..."
aalekh dint reply...
"kya hua mere kaidi??...."
"bolti bandh ho gayi...."
"hahahaahah!!!..."
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rajveer held her hand...he was guiding her but still..not a word more was spoken...
till..
"major rajveer??...this is for you.."
"naina..i will just b bck.."
"hmm..."
he took the letter...

to major....
kafi maze kar rahe hain aap..lekin ek army officer ki zindagi mein sirf chuttiya hi nahi hoti!!...
best of luck..
aapka koi......apna...nahi


it wasnt the"princess " this time...the handwriting was different...
and that meant..
"mujhe ek nahi...do log dhoondh rahe hai..."
"kaun kise dhonndh raha hai..."
"huh??..kuch nahi naina..."
"to...aapko...intezaar karwane ka shouk hai??.."
rajveer was pleasantly surprised at this...and naina's blush...

"bilkul nahi..chaliye.." the letter lay crumpled on the floor...
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they sat at the table...and were waiting for the music to begin....and in no time the DJ APPEARED....

"HULLLO.....EVRYONE...WELLCCOOOMMMEEEEE......AUR AB EK INRESTING GAME...WELLL ITS INTRESTING BUT USUAL....DIFFERENT COUPLES YAHAAN PE APNE NAAM DENGE AND THERE WILL BE A DANCE COMPETETION...SO GET GOING PEOPLE!!!.."

in barely five minutes all the entrys were complete but as usual our king and queen dint give in their names.....lekin fir dost kis liye hote hain...
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Posted: 17 years ago
aur dost agar aise ho to fir kya baat hai..

"SO ALL U HAPPY PEOPLE…WE HAVE THE COUPLE'S NAMES ALREADY…AND THEY ARE….
ROSHNI AND VARUN..
NEHA AND RAHUL…

ALI AND POOJA…{"hum???..aur yeh dance..pooja hum…dekhiye KMA mein kabhi kabaar who ball dance kar lete the..le..lekin..yeh yeh kya..salsa..han..humse nahi hoga.."…"oye ali tujhe kisne kaha hai salsa kar…mere saath bas dance kar…samjha.."… "bilkul….chaliye.."…and in front of all raised eyebrows they walked to the dance floor..}

OK…AND WHOS THIS..
YES YADHUVANSH AND HUDA???{"kyaaaa????".. "huda..wat is this.." .. "oye yudie kya mazaak hai..".. "woooh…apun ne socha..tum dono ke paas koi hai nahi to…"
"kaidi!!marega..".. "chief????????????????"… "hahaha"}…

"THEN THERE IS REHAN AND ANANYA…"

"AALEKH AND NEELU..{"apun ka naam kis yede ne dala.."
"aalekh..meine dala tha..".. "eh neelu..pagal hai kya.."
.."han hun…ab chal.."}

TANYA AND AMAR…AND LASTLY..
RAJVEER AND NAINAAA!!!…"

"huh???..hum…"
they looked at each other..it was the same as..evrythng clicke dinto place
"hey ruko…huda..us din..jab hum dono akele restaurant pahuche the..woh….who..plan tha???..aur who song dedication.."
"naina..woh…. dekh hume bula rahe hai..chal.."
"huda?/…"
she looked at rajveer…
"well….salsa….kya karein…?"
"aap jaisa dancer..meine..KMA mein to nahi paya dekha tha...kya yahan koi hoga??hmm??.."

rajveer dint believe it…after all the awkward moments..these little surprises were…minboggling..
even naina cudnt believe herself..

they went up to the dance floor….well here we are..so wat new surprises was this salsa going to offer….

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