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Posted: 17 years ago
the next meeting wasn't as formal..they had an enjoyable time in the lawns of raj's apartment and then it was time for

"ANTAKSHARI.."

"nahi yaar..antakshari..nahi..aisa karte hai. Ki gaano se sawaal puchenge aur gaano se jawaab denge..ok??"
"han not bad..done!!"

"sir aap start kijiye.."
"mein..??"
"sir pllzzz"

it was true they had never heard him sing before...
it was an old melody that he hummed..and naina's guitar(wich had accompanied her today) gave company..

"hmm...
tumko dekha to yeh khayal aaya.."


"wow.."

these were the words that eascaped all lips..
raj dint have a well trained voice..but it truly was a brilliant one..it captured their hearts..

"tum ko dekha ..
to yeh khayaal ayaa..
zindagi dhoop..
tum ghanaa saya.."


huda took over...his qstn went to raj

"kaun hai jo sapno mein aya..
kaun hai jo dil mein samyaa
lo jhuk gayaa asmann bhi...
hmmm.."


raj answered..

"woh chand jaisi ladki is dil pe chaa rahi hai..
aankhon ke rasste se is dil mein aa rahi hai€
woh chand..who chand.."

ali changed the topic..

"aye chand teri chandni ki kasam..
mere paas bhi ek chand hai..
tujh me to phir bhi daag hai..
mera chand to bedaag hai...
aye chand teri chandni ki kasam...."


"oye hoye!!!ali.."


Then pooja pointed to naina who had been sitting quiet all this while..but pooja knew too well wat was going on in her mind(read heart) as she looked over at raj..

"oye naina??.."
hmm??"
"ab tu jawaab de.."

"kuch to kaho..chup naa raho..
dil ko zaraa kehne to do..
mit jaengi khamoshiya
.dil ki sadaa sunne to do.."

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Posted: 17 years ago
naina was herself unaware of why her heart seemed to beat faster each time rajveer even looked at her..

"behta hai mann kahin€kahan jante nahin..
koi rok le yahi..
bahge re menn kahin..age re mann chala ..
jane kidhar janu na.."

she got up...


"hmmm..
chale thandi hawa..
hann...
sang mann bhi gaya..
dhoondu mein kahan usko€
batlaye koi mujhko..
ke han..han ..han re
bage re mann kahi .age re mann chala ..
jane kidhar janu na.."

as if the grey clouds gathering over head had heard her..
it started raining..everyone ran inside..except naina..and raj...
she was enjoying the rain still singing..and raj..he cudnt take his eyes off from her..
or his heart away from the sight of a wet naina enjoying the rain..

"haaann..
hay aisa samaa.
Hmmm..
Phir hoga kahan..
Jee lu mein ise khulke..
Saawan mein zaraa ghulke..
Are sun..sun ..sun.
Bhaage re mann akhin..age re mann chala€
Jane kidhar janu na..

Behta hai mann khin..
Kahan jan.."


She turned to see raj still standing there..
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Posted: 17 years ago
the group had met three times over the last four days..and now it was getting boring..

though not for naina..especially if rajveer sir came..
naina took out one dress after the other as the radio sung in glory in her apartment..

"then next song..is from the album by Indian idol 1 finalist AMIT SAANAAA.."

pehle nasha.. pehla khumar.
Nayaa pyaar hai naya intezaar
kar lun mein kya apna haal
aye dil-e-bekaraar.. mere dil-e bekaraar
tu hi bataa..




naina dint know wat made her smile..suddenly she held her long skirt with one hand and did wat she loved to do..
she started dancing..

naina moved swiftly across the room on her toes..like a ballerina..
and wen she turned..

"aap??"

he stood there smiling..a twinkle in his eyes..
she stopped abruptly..

he walked up to her held out his hand..

"huh??aap ..kya hua??"

without saying a word..just in actions he asked her for a dance..
(remember SRK in mohabbatein wen he asks Helen to dance or in k2h2 wen he asks kajol for a dance..)

"kya??haha..umm..ok.."

she gives her hand..and they glide across the room as if in a trance..

udta hi phirun in hawaon mein kahin..
ya mein jhul jau in ghatao mein kahin..
ek kar dun aasmaan aur zameen ..kaho yaaron kya karun ..kya nahi ..


rajveer was driving down the hilly roads of ambala
the winds made his hair fly back as he drove the jeep and then..asking for a lift was..

"tum???"

she made a gesture with her head tilting it to one side as if to say..
"chale.."

he drove at top speed and she stood waving her scarf in the air..

usne baat ki kuch aise dhang se..
sapne de gaya who hazaron rang ke..
reh jau jaise mein har ke€
aur choome who mujhe pyaar se..

naina was till dancing wid him..and then suddenly he stopped..

he held her waist tighter..and pulled her close..
naina's senses were going numb..
he softly bit her lower lip and gave her a swift soft kiss..



rajveer increased his speed and heard her laughter..and then..
"raj stop..!"

he screeched to a halt..
she sat down beside him..
her hand reached to his face..she pulled his face closer and planted a moist kiss on his soft cheek..


pehla nasha...pehla khumar..

naina opened her eyes in her room..the feel of his kiss still lingering..

she slowly raised her eyelids to find

"that was the song pehla nasha..sung by amit sana..we will be back after a short break..till then..bajaate raho.."

the empty room still had his scent..


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Posted: 17 years ago
somewhere on the roads of ambala..
rajveer opened his eyes in the jeep..

"eh!!din mein sapne dekh raha tha kya..army wala hai to kya jeep ko raaste ke beech me park karega???hata ise..traffic jam ho jaega.."

"huh?"

pehle nasha.. pehla khumar.
Nayaa pyaar hai naya intezaar
kar lun mein kya apna haal
aye dil-e-bekaraar.. mere dil-e bekaraar
tu hi bataa..


naina fell straight on the bed...staring at the cieling above
she was hallucinating????...she was hallucinating about rajveer...
was she....was she in LOVE????..

TRRRRRRRRRIIIIIIIINGGGGGG!!!

"hello..???"
"kitni der se phone baj raha hai..utha nahi sakti kya??"

"oh...soory...woh kuch ..kuch soch rahi thi..."
"soch rahi thi??..kyu naina..network kaha jam ho gaya hai tera???kahin....ra"

"tune phone kyu kiya???pooja bol na..."
"hmmm...dekh rahi hun..tera network kafi busy ho gaya hai!!!"

"tu bol na..."
"woh bol rahi thi..ki...ki shayd aaj tujhe major rajveer pick up karne ayenge.."

"KYA???...mera matlab hai..kyun???"
"nahi....woh actually huda ko meine aur ali ne kaha hai kuch shopping karne le jane ke liye.."

"HUDA TUM DONO KO SHOPPING LE JA RAHA HAI???????????????"
"han..woh..tu...woh..areh sawaal mat kar..bas aa jana..."


meanwhile a new entry found its way in rajveer's diary...



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Posted: 17 years ago
hey.......... wonderful.... m excited 2 read next in this and in waqt also ......... do update soon........... u seems 2 rock.........
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Posted: 17 years ago
[SIZE]ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye...
ek ajab si pyaas hai dil mein..ek chahat hai..
tujhe pane ki..tere har choti baat ko mehsoos karne ki
ek anjaan chahat hai...
tere kareeb jane ki koshish mein chipa tujhe kho dene ka darr
kya naam de is anjaan pyaas ko...
kya yehi hai pyaar ka pehla ehsaas...
kya hai mohabbat mujhe..
har....



ding dong!!!
"bansi..dekho..."
"sir aapse koi lt.huda milne aye hain..."
"han....yes huda..bolo.."
"sir woh..aaj jo milne ka plan tha.."
"han..woh..aaj shayad mein nahi..aa"
"sir aapse ek request hai.."
"han kaho lekin aaj shayad mein.."
sir aap naina ko pick up kar lenge??..."
"huh???naina ko??..ummm..woh....han(but he had thought he wudnt go today...well......)"

naina came down on hearing the honking of the jeep...
rajveer had been waiting for some time now...

she came out..and rajveer stood stunned...
he had mostly seen naina in jeans t-shirt or the like

but today she looked different...

in the knee length dress in floral prints..there was a new fresh look about her today...
it felt as if...as if..
they were on their...
first date...

the words of raj's poetry echoed in his mind...and
naina ke dil ka haal bhi kuch ek sa hi tha...
these words seemed to come from both hearts..

har lamha tera chehra nazar aaye..
teri nazron ka woh hum par aake ruk janaa..
teri ek jhalak se dil ki dhadkano ka tham janaa


as if by reflex...the moment naina came in front of him..rajveer held out his hand...

"hi!!"

naina gave in hers..

"hello..."

yaad hai tera woh halke se choo lena..
tere har sparsh se woh saanso ka bekaboo ho janaa
kya naam hai is anjaan ehsaas ka..
kya kehte hai mohabbat ise... [/RED>

they drove down the winding roads ..naina had tied her hair in a pony tali today..but a low one...

somehow rajveer felt a desperate urge to undo her hair..so that it flew with the winds...


unke zikr se hi kyu jhoom uthta hai dil...
man ke karwato me yaadein lati hai angdai..
kash...
kash sulajh jati uljhe sawaalo ki yeh dor...
kash hota pata kya kehte hai is anjaan ehsaas ko..
kahin..ye mohabbat to nahi...


they had been waiting a long time for the group to arrive..

the dj played on with his music...
the atmosphere was awesome...

then suddenly the dj's voice rang out..

"yeh chaar line ek dedication hai..

these lines are dedicated to NAINAAA...
FRRROOOMM RAAAJVEERR..."

both naina and rajveer was startled..

rajveer's mind was in a tight spot...meine kab dedication bheja..meine to nahi...wat the hell...

and naina was surprised..
rajveer sir to yaha se uthe hi nahi fir...

PYAAR KO......HO JAANE DO...
PYAAR MEIN...KHO JAANE DO..
AITBAAR KISKA HAI...
INTEZAAR KISKA HAI..
ABHI NA HUA TO PHIR..
KABHI NAHI... KABHI NAHI
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Posted: 17 years ago
...trrringgg.there went naina's phone agn..

"heelo pooja kahan ho tum log???we r waiting€"
"we??sab aa gay kya €"
"nahi who mein aur major rajveer hain..tum kahan ho??"

"wohi to€hum to nahi aa payenge yaar..mera matlab hai mein ali aur huda..phas gaye hai
yahan€hello??..naina???"

trriinnggg€this time it was rajveer's phone€

""hello???heelllooooooo"
"nainanetwork nahi hai..sunai nahi de raha ..hello???..hello.."
beep..beep

"oh god!!"
"kya baat hai naina???..any problem.."
"who ..aoh actually pooja ka phone tha€huda ali aur pooja nahi aa payenge€"

"gr8€aur yahan aalekh ne phone kiya tha..who he said neelu is a little unwell to wo teeno bhi.."

"oh€ummm..to.dat leaves"

"the two of us.." rajveer completed..

yes..the two of them..they were out sitting at the most romantic restaurant of the place just in the company of each other..
but little did they know dat they weren't alone after all..

a young man dressed in a pair of jeans and a t-shirt came in..

"hello???han..major yehi hai..in fact who dono hi hai yahan..ab bas is khel ko badhana hai.."


meanwhile at the table naina and rajveer were at a loss of words..
something that had never happened before wen they had been together..naina had been looking at her glass for a long time..

her eyes on her drink..her mind still on rajveer..wat was he thinking..

"here goes another dedication..and oh my..this time it's the gals turn€it goes from NAINAAA..TO RAJVEER..."
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Posted: 17 years ago
"WAT??"
"I dint€mein.."

"HEY!!!..LETS HAVE THE PRETTY COUPLE OVER HERE FOR THIS LOVELY LOVELY SONG€LETS SEE..NAINA AND RAJVEER ON THE DANCE FLOOR PLZ.."

the lights fell on their surprised faces€ they had to dance now..and in the shadows another figure disappeared from behind the DJ and went on to join the man in the jeans and t-shirt€

rajveer held out his hand to naina€

"may I??"
"yes of course€"
and her hand slipped in to his perfectly..

the nearly empty dance floor..

naina's hand went up to raj's shoulder and as his hand moved to her waist naina felt a weird sensation capturing her..

the toe end of her right foot slid up her left ankle..and rajveer pulled her a little closer..


Tinka tinka zaraa zaraa
Hai roshni se jaise bhara€
Har dil mein armaan hote to hain..
Bas koi samjhe zaraa..


Two wonderful dancers as they were €they glided across the dance floor in a soft and sometimes fast waltz..

Rajveer guided her brilliantly..his moves were sometimes so unpredictable..
close to magic..

They looked into each others eyes€
arms stretched ..a little apart and then naina turned ..

only to come to face him with her arms round his neck€
This time both his hands slid in to hold her slender waist..

Dil pe ek naya sa nasha cha gaya..
Kho raha tha jo khwab laut aa gaya


Naina's eyelids dropped and her bowed down a little..
A few strands of hair came over her face..

Rajveer's finger;s lovingly moved them aside..and naina's cheeks reddened at their feel€

Ye jo ehsaas hai jo karaar hai..
Kya isi ka hi naam pyaar hai..

Pooche dil thamke zaraa..



she looked into those dark eyes..


rajveer suddenly felt hot round his collar as his eyes tried to seek the secret of the ones looking at him
and his look made her blush..

the evening went by in a trance..the subtle magic of ..maybe love taking over each passing moment..
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Posted: 17 years ago
good one... update next part soon...
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Posted: 17 years ago
awww chowwww cute captain sahab to gayeeee 😉 plzzz update soon

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