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Posted: 17 years ago
"HEELO???KMA KE NAUJAWAN???DHEERE..."
"sorry ma'am.."
"so lt.singh..how r u feling today???"

"lot beteer in fact mein ab chal bhi sakti hun"
"han..chal sakti ho..lekin one week bad hi DANCE kar sakti ho..ok??"
..shalini looked sideways at pooja and ali...she knew that with a wedding coming up there was bound to be some strain on naina's part..

"shalini ma'am.."
"yes??"

"kya mein rajveer sir se mil sakti hun.."

"ye lo..in fact mein abhi wahi kehne wali thi..woh bhi apse milna chahte hai.."

naina had a sudden feeling of butterflys in her stomach..

"in fact u can go now itself..it just the next room..i get a wheelchair.."
"no ma'am..i cn manage.."
"lekin.."
"its ok ma'am.."

the others did not follow naina..somehow each one{even huda} knew dat she neede to see him alone..
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naina pushed open the dorr and slowly{withou straining her leg} walked inside...

on entering the room she seemed to be acting on her reflexes..as she moved up to the bed and softly sat on it..just beside raj...

naina's hand slowly reached out towards his peaceful face...she wanted to touch him..feel him that once..

CLICK!
a nurse enterd the room and naina seemed to be jerked awake..

she got up to sit on the chair beside ..
"naina?"

the coming of the 'intruder' had awakened rajveer also
he was holding her wrist and naina 's hearbeat increased suddenly...

she sat back where she was..close to him
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Posted: 17 years ago
OKH!!THAT WAS A LOOONG UPDATE..AND I HOPE IT WILL KEEP ALL MY READERS HAPPY FOR SOMETIME...


as i have to be off..for a while bcoz of my exams....but i promise to be back wid another looong update!!


awaiting ur responses!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
sirf ek reply??????????? 😭 😭 😭

well this will be my last update tilll 4th nov...i m taking a break for my exams...


but plzzz evryone...keep this topic alive!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
"sir aap ..ab kaise hain.."
"i m fine naina..and yes..all thanks to you.."
"sir meine.."

"yes tumhi ne..u did it naina..meri abhi se baat hui..yeh tumhara wishwaas tha na??"

"wishwaas tha lekin woh wishwaas bhi aap hi ka dilaya hua tha.."

"matlab??"
"aapki diary sir.."
"meri diary.."

rajveer grip on her wrist tightened unknowingly..and naina's heart seemed to grow weaker..

"apki hi likhi hui YAADEIN.. mujhe yahan le aayi.."
"OH!!...smart girl.."

"aapki best cadet thi after all.."

naina now cudnt stop the tears dat seemed to gather in the depths of her heart..

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the next few days saw both rajveer and naina recover fast and though weak naina even managed to dance a little at the wedding..

the next wek saw a changed naina...a naina they hadnt seen ever in KMA..

she was so much full of life..her words her million volt smile..her cute pranks..everythng..

it seemed to evryone that a new lease of life had been put into her..and it was all the result of the presence of one happy face among them..


he saw her laugh and joke wid pooja sitting at the mandap as the lady aaplied mehendi on their hands..

she was so beautiful....he knew he had loved har at one time..but then wasnt that past..he had forgotten all dat..
she ..had been close to him but..love...
then y did a smile spread on his face everytime he saw her..
everytime their eyes met..y did he feel her blush...
did she also ...
or was it just a notion of his heart....

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"major rajveer singh sekhawat reporting sir!!.."
"rajveer..oh I am so glad!welcome back my son.."
"thank you sir.."

"waise aap se milne koi aur bhi hai yahan..jinhe shayad aap se thodi shikayat bhi hai.."
"shikayat sir??.."
"yes major..well he is in the adjoining room..you may meet him.."
"right sir.."

rajveer walked towards the room and opened the door to fin naina huda aalekh and yudi sitting wid..

"aap??"
"ji han!to barkhurdaar!fursat mili aapko humse milne ki??"
"mein..nahi sir..mein to aapse milne hi.."
"bas betaits ok..aur ab mere gale nahi lagoge??.."

rajveer hugged him..he had been rajveer's all time support.. someone who was more than a father to rajveer..

"kaise ho beta??.."
"thik hun.."
"waise ek baat hai..agar yeh pyaari si bahadur officer hume yahan bulati nahi..to humari mulakaat bhi hoti nahi.."

rajveer looked across to naina..as if to say..
"tumne??"
he cud only smile in return to the happiness she had given him..

"sir..plz excuse us..aap rajveer sir se batein kijiye ..hum aate hain abhi.."

they went to collect a few files and then went back to general bakshi after about 20 mins..

"may we come in sir..?"
"yes come in officers.."

they stepped in and handed over the documents

"yeh humari report"s hai sir.."
"well I must say officer's aap sub ne jo bahaduri aur determination dikhayi hai who kabil-e-tareef hai..well done..!
and epecially aap lt.singh..aap ne jis atoot wishwaas ke saath is kaam ko apne hathon me liya.. I m proud of all of you..
and of course major abhimanyu rai chauhan.. "

"yes sir..agar abhimanyu sir na hote to..he has been a gr8 support.."

"well officer's aap sab ne jo kiya hai..aap to inaam ke haqdaar hai.."

mr.gehlot and rajveer had just entered the room

"aur agar aap ek kaam aur kar sake to accha hoga.."
"aap bas kahiye sir.."

"good mein chahta hun..ki in che officers aur rajveer ko aap kum se kum 15 din se ek mahine ki chutti de.. "
"sir ek mahina..who..15 din to thik hai par.."

"sorry for the interruption sir..lekin mein kuch kehna chahunga.."
"of course major.."

"sir yeh chutti kitne hi dino ki kyun na ho..humari jab bhi zaroorat hogi..hum foren aa jaenge sir..any emergency situation.."

"well general..wat say??"
"I will try to arrange for it sir.."

they all left the office and outside rajveer bid farewell to his mentor..
who wished his best to naina in return..

"well tum log ab se 21 days ki hliday par ho€"

"par sir abhi tak to kuch decide nahi hua hai"
"huda..decide nahi hua hai to ho jaega..tu fikar mat kar.."

though unknown to the others..naina was very much aware of mr.gehlots power..

"yes officer's ho jaega.."
"no ways sir..ur kidding me"
"no yudi ..i m not kidding you"

a smile lit up all facesit was a well deserved break.
the boys rushed out of the corridor and naina had just turned to leave wen..

she felt the same whooping sensation in her stomach as he held her hand.. and rajveer somehow had a sudden urge to hug her..but all that he cud say was..

"thank you naina..u made my day.."
"meine to bas wahi kiya..jo mujhe laga was needed..mujhe pata tha..aap mr.gehlot se ekbaar to milna chahenge hi..isliye.."

"thnx.."
naina just smiled in return.. her hand still in his €
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Posted: 17 years ago
:{in a few days time}
the group had all planned for an evening out and ali and pooja who were also given holidays came to ambala to join the group..

naina huda aalekh yudi pooja and ali all met at the movie theatre at 3 pm..

naina arrived last..and the first thing she said was..

"rajveer sir kahan hai??.."

"rajveer sir??..oye naina..who yahan kyu honge..unhe bhi to apni chutti apne tareeke se enjoy karni hai€"

"ek minute huda..kya tum logon ne sir ko nahi bulaya??.."

"areh naina..unka bhi to koi apna tareka hoga.."

""yes naina..even he wud like to meet frnds or distant family..'
"nahi yudi..he will not.."

"eh naina..tera matlab kya hai..yeh baat apun ke bheje me ayi nahi..tu kehna chahti hai ke sir jaise insaan ka koi dost nahi hai??.."
"na dost hai..na hi family"


"KYA??"
"han guys..rajveer sir ke paas apna kehne ke liye sirf abhimanyu sir aur mr.gehlot hi hai"
"nahi naina.."

"huh??..aalekh..yeh sach ha..."
"ab hum bhi hain!!"

she smiled..

"lekin show??"
"ek kaam karo..tum log film dekho I will invite him..ok??"
"thik hai to hum sab tujhse.. 'the lounge ' mein milte hai.."
"done!!"


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Posted: 17 years ago
oh!..no responses at all??


guys plz tell me whether i shud stop!!!

i m updating a small part next...

but plzz let me know!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
"aap kaun.."
"mein lt.naina singh ahluwalia hun..mujhe major rajveer se milna hai.."
"ji aap baithiye.."

naina was waiting..she was told rajveer was taking a bath..

"HEY!!!NEECHE KOI HAI???"
"rajveer sir??..chilla kyu rahe hain.."

naina got up and walked up to the room..she opened the door to find..

"OH GOD!!..YEH BANSI KOI KAAM KA NAHI HAI..BANSI..BATHROOM MEIN PAANI KO KYA HUA..??"

naina stood staring at rajveer all covered up in soap.. eyes closed and wrapped around the waist in a blue towel..
suddenly a home guard enterd..

"kya hua sir.."
"IDIOT!!..KYA HUA??.DIKHAYI NAHI DE RAHA..??"
"mein pani lata hun.."
"ABHI TAK LAYE NAHI..MERI AANKHEN JAL RAHI HAI..BE QUICK..KAB SE CHILLA RAHA HUN.."
"yes sir.."

it was true rajveer had been shouting for some time now..
and even the guard hadn't turned up with water..naina knew rajveer eyes must be stinging..

she saw the water jug in the room and picking it up poured the water on his head..

"OH THANK GOD..AB MILI FURSAT..TUM BHI NA€"

he opened his eyes after a while and by then his eyes also felt better..

"naina??.. tum yahan?! wat a pleasant surprise

for a moment on seeing naina, rajveer completely forgot the state he was in..

but now it was becoming difficult for naina to control both her laughter and the feeling that she actually found rajveer in this state pretty intresting..

lekin tum yahan kaise..??"

"sir..mein..sir...who.."
"y r u fumbling..??"

"SIR PANI!!!" the guard rushed in..

"pani??kis liye..meine to...OH SHIT!!!..mein..NAINA ABOUT TURN.."
"RAJVEER SIR??!!"

rajveer had rushed back into the bathroom...

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Posted: 17 years ago
the movie was a romanticone but a thriller
{and half time mein hi ali aur pooja gayab ho gaye the}..

that left huda aalekh neelu and yudi to watch the movie..they planned to meet both ali and pooja along wid naina and rajveer at a destined location..

"as usual..inhe to late hona hi tha..inko message bhejne ka bhi koi fayda nahi..missed call hi aega.."

"message bhejne ki zaroorat hi kya hai.."

"kya kaha ali???..ruk mein zaraa age dekhti hun.."
"areh pehle sun ke to jaiye humne kaha kya.."
"ah!!"

ali had pulled her parandi.
".ali yeh.."

ali gave a jerk and pulled her close..

"aap ko ek baat batai hai humne..??"
"kya??"
"yehi ki..shaadi ke baad..is parandi ke sath..aap kuch zyaada ji khubsoorat lagne lagi hai.."

the shy drop of pooja's eyelids at these words reminded ali of their wedding night..

"oye aisi baat hai mere raanjhe??"..she softly whispered

"bilkul€meri heer..aur phir aise mein aapko akela kaise chode."
...he pulled her still close..the street being pretty deserted..they were given perfect solitude..

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"oye kaidi hum pehle hi late hain..kahin woh log pahuch to nahi gaye..chal na restauant hi chale jate hain€"
"eh shane..tu drive kar raha hai..kar na..zyaada bol mat.."

"chief is right dude..who log humara wait zaroor karenge,,,"
"abbeh chief ke bacche hum aa gaye€kahan hai woh€??"

they got down from the jeep and looked around..

suddenly..

"hey chief ..huda..woh dekho..wats dat.?."

a smile spread across aalekh and huda's face..a mischievious sort of smile..

"woh??" they said in unison as they moved forward.

"WOH HAI LATEST HONEYMOON COUPLE€"

and out came a little embarrassed a little shy ali and pooja

"oye punjaban tune to apne usool ke usool badal dale€"
"huda bhai aisa kuch nahi hai.."
"han..han..ped ke peeche tu pooja ko..oh sorry apni BIWI pooja ko usoole ki bhashan de raha tha na??hai na.."
"nahi who hum.."

a timely phone call from naina saved them from further leg pulling..

they went to the lounge and had already waited for abt 15 mins wen...

"lo aa gaye..oye itni der kahan lag gayi tujhe..kya karkhane se jeep kharidkar..usme sir ko leke aayi hai.."

"huda.."
but naina cudnt stop smirking at the thought of wat or rather who made her arrive so late..
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:{SOMETIME BACK..}

"hahahaah..heheeheh..hahahaha€"

naina cudnt control her laughter as she sat on the sofa in the hall..but then she heard the click of the bathroom door and stopped ..

she dint want to embarrass raj any more..
on the other hand raj was red as a tomato..wen he came out..

"oh shit!!..major rajveer kya ho gaya tha tumhe..whats wrong wid u man..shit!!
..god..!!ab bahar kaise jaau..aur milne bhi ja raha hun uske doston se..lekin who to baad mein..filhaal kaise bahar jau.."

naina saw a grim and serious rajveer step out of the room and this made it evn more difficult to control her already uncontrollable laughter..

"oh poor thing.." she thought..
"sir??"
"han..yes..huh??"
naina's eyebrows raised..

"who..umm..sab wait kar rahe honge....chale"
"han..of course ..chalo.."

"sir???aap pedal chalenge??"
"huh???kyun???"
"gadi ki chabi??..mein taxi mein aayi thi.."
"oh of course..ek minute.."

he returned wid the keys and they were about to leave wen..

"nai..umm..cadet sin..sorry I mean lieutenant..yes lieutenant singh{naina's eyebrows shot up yet again}

woh..jo kuch hua ..woh..hum..mera matlab hai mera towel..no..i mean.."

"sir..mein kisi ko nahi kahungi..{if I can control it dat is..she thought}"

"very good naina{that's far better than lieutenant..was naina's personal opinion.}..chalo.."
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a smirking naina sat on the table..
and each time their eyes met at the restaurant nains cudnt help grinning as she rememberd his..tempting form..(tempting.??.no wat was she thinking..wats wrong wid her..no..)"

"eh naina..tu kya chupa rahi hai..??"
"huh??kya aalekh??"
"apun dekh raha hai jab se aayi hai teri close up smile bandh ich nahi hoti hai..kya hua??"
"kya hua??..kuch..kuch bhi nahi bas soch rahi thi.."

"wahich to apun bhi keh raha hai..KYA soch rahi hai??"

"bas..soch rahi hun ki..
{rajveer took a huge gulp of water.}
army officers ko..i mean ladko ko..apni physique kitni maitain karni padti ahi..
i mean unki body bhi acchi hoti hai..
{rajveer's hand reached to the glass again..}"

"han to???is mein sochne wali baat??"

"nahi bas..yehi ki woh..army wale..as models.. commercials mein kafi acchi lagenge..especially towels ke ad mein.."

"cough!!..cough..uh..huh..ah!!splatter.!!cough.."

rajveer jhad ust choked as he drank water and half of the water came splattering out..

"SIR???sir kya hua..?"
"I .. I m fine..its ok..tum log baitho.. I m ok.."

he said cleaning himself up with his handkerchief..
he looked over at naina and her smirk widened even more..but she cudnt help it
{and she herself dint know why..}

"oye kaidi..ye naina aur major ke beech ye toliye ki kya baat hai..towel ke naam par dono ki yeh halat??? Rajveer sir ko toliye se allergy hai kya??"
huda whispered..

"is dharti par kis INSAAN ko TOLIYE se allergy ho sakti hai yede??"
"nahi..mera matlab hai..ye sab..woh.."
"hoga wahich.."
"kya??"

"areh major ne toliye aur naina ke saath kuch khichdi pakaai hogi..who gayi thi na lene unhe..tab hi€hoga kuch.."

"haaaannnn................KYAAAA??

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Posted: 17 years ago
good update.. was missing your ff... update soon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
was busy due to exams..they r going on..but to nd soon...

nextupdate probably day after...!!

i will be waiting for responses!!

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