~~Rishtey~~(fan fic...RN) - Page 18

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Posted: 17 years ago
great part
naina actually confessed her love
great
update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey ur ff is juz awesum.....luvd d way u put up romance angle betwn raj nd naina....plzzzzzzzz continueee soon....plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey plzzzzzz update soon....waitng for it yaar..plzzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey...

Wonderfully written... waiting for the next part!!!

Plz continue.... you are doing a great job!!!

Keep goin...

Cheers!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
naina cudnt think of anything now..wat had she done..she cud still feel many eyes looking at her behind her back..and she was sure that all her friends were also among them and no one had the courage to say a word…
no one except …

"naina…"
she turned to face the person….
"I dint want to hurt you…{but you have thought naina..}..not even for a moment…but phir ..is pal ka mazaa hi kya…"
naina dint believe wat she heard..mazaa???
she looked at him questioningly…and in his answer ..he pointed to the sky…naina looked up at the dark night sky…the stars were shone bright and then …
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a BANG! …and the light made her face glow…as bright as the smile on her face…she looked at him ..

and then in one swift movement she ran into his arms… he took her into his embrace..
she buried her head into his shoulders..and he held her close…she was precious….she moved up to kiss the nape of his neck..
he cupped her face looking into those eyes..

up high above the exploded firecracker rocket sent up still glowed bright..the words "I love you.." dazzling….[i dunno if crackers like this exist but...imagination!!!!]

This moment was special…and for a special moment was a special song..
Rajveer gestured at the DJ admist the thundering claps that they were receiving…

"may I??"
"of course.."

If I have to live my life without you near me…
the days would all be empty.. the nights would seem so long
with you I see forever oh! So clearly
I might have been in love before but it never felt this strong..


he took her hand and brought her close…this close she had never been before..because today she knew not only they but their hearts were drawing close…
each move was magical and each word of the song..celebrated this new beginning…

Our dreams are young and we both know
They'll take us where we want to go..
Hold me now
Touch me now
I don't want to live without you..

"sir.."
"huh???ab bhi mujhe SIR hi bulaogi…"
"haha…{she paused…and then..}raj.."
it sounded beautiful..different..close..
rajveer took her hand..and she twirled ..once ..twice ..thrice..and then suddenly he pulled her in his arms again…
"I love you naina.."
"I love u too.."

[COLOR=MAGENTA]Nothing's gonna change my love for you
You ought to know by now how much I love you
One thing you can be sure I'll never ask for more than your love..
Nothing's gonna change my love for you
You ought to know by now how much I love you
The world may change my whole life through but
Nothing's gonna change my love for you…
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Posted: 17 years ago
The music seemed to flow in rhythm with their heartbeats ..naina slowly slid her hands across his waist to his soulders..her fingers feeling the strength of the strong muscels…she laid her head on his shoulder..she was safe…

He welcomed her into his embrace and his face rested on her head…
Both seemed to live a dream ..and for each other they were perfect..eyes closed they swayed to the motion…they knew that…


If the road ahead is not so easy..
Our love will lead the way for us...
Like a guiding star..
I'll be there for you if you should need me..
You don't have to change a thing
I love you just the way you are..
So come with me and share the view..
I help you see forever too..


she moved up to kiss the nape of his neck..
he stroked her soft cheeks with his finger..
the other hand moving up her shoulders to her neck.. the rush of emotions was powerful…
he moved closer and then waited ..for her response..

Hold me now
Touch me now
I don't want to live without you..

Naina welcomed his move.. her eyes closed.. the passion kindled as they moved closer..and rajveer accepted the request of her parting lips..
he softly bit her lip before taking her into the sweet nothingness of this moment..
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Nothing's gonna change my love for you
You ought to know by now how much I love you
One thing you can be sure I'll never ask for more than your love..
Nothing's gonna change my love for you
You ought to know by now how much I love you
The world may change my whole life through but
Nothing's gonna change my love for you…



To them it had been several sunlit days after which they broke apart..
They danced …it was celebration of a new discovery..a new relation..one which wud change everything..
They danced until they were the only ones left on the dance floor..the music had stopped long before stopped but the melody of the rushing waves accompanied them..
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Posted: 17 years ago
Naina went back to her room feet wet with water and sand..chappals in hand..

She moved in silently..thinking that both neelu and pooja were asleep..changing into a comfortable nightgown..naina came and sat on her bed in front of the window..the moon shone bright..the clouds made patterns around it..

"ab kuch bataegi bhi.."
"huh??"
"cmon naina..kya hua??.."

she shud have known…

"kya hua??"
"hmm…bolna naina.."

"kya kahun pooja…ek sapna jee kar aa rahi hun.."

saying this she pulled on her blanket and laying her head on the pillow closed her eyes to a beautiful dreamy sleep…


behind her through the window was visible the changing patterns of the clouds..they moved by the winds..

and the winds..

they are known to change directions every season...
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Posted: 17 years ago
raj and naina weren't the only ones awake that night…

huda went into the room…
"hey ..where have been bro??.."
"bas kuch nahi…"

huda had seen them dancing..lost in each other's arms..
he wandered along the beach..imagining every move that naina took..every touch of rajveer's…why was it difficult..he hadn't thought before..
he had been there wen the plans for their date was being made..in fact he had requested those songs to the DJ that night!!.he had done all this for naina..then why..

why was it difficult to now see her with someone else now..

"tu ab bhi guitar par…kya baat hai.."
"bas kuch nahi.."
this wasn't true either..

yudi had also seen wat his frnds had this evening..he saw new love blossom..

love..something that had nearly never come his way..

dr.shalini was someone..he wudnt deny he had liked…but time changed that too…
all around him there was the awakening of this new feeling..

ali and pooja were on their honeymoon...

even his sister…{who was now comfortably cuddled in the arms of one of his best frnds..}

"oye yudie??..kya hua??.."
"huh??kuch nahi yaar!!!…bas yuhi.."
"oye kuch suna de na.."
"what??tumhe??tum ..mujhse gana sunna chahte ho.."
"han..aaj dil ne kaha hai…"
yudi's expression softened…
huda went to his bed and laid his head on the back rest of the bed…

yudi struck a note..

hmmm…
teri yaadein ..mulakatein…who raatein aur baatein..
teri saansein..who baahein…ab mujhko yaad aaye..
tere bina mera jiya ..sataaye kyun piya..
yaadon ne tere mujhpe yeh jaadu kiya re..


a smile spread on huda's face..he remembered all the KMA times..and times after dat..too

the ragging of the first years..
the couple drill in the jungle…their fights…
the one time he stood up for captain rajveer and against her..

teri saansein..who bahein ab mujhko yaad aye..
who adaaon ki ghataye ..mere dil ko choo jaaye..


the fresher's ball..
she looked splendid that day..their dance..
the times wen she sought his shoulder to cry..
the togetherness


pyaari yeh duniya saari …meine hai tujhpe wari.
phir bhi mere dil ne tujhse yaari ki baazi haari re..



....and then came..
her dance with rajveer on the day of the rajveer – ritu engagement..
their first date…and
tonight...

waapas aa jaao …
mere paas ..tum sadaa..
waapas aa jao..


was that wat he wanted now..to have her close..

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the next day dawned bright for all…

naina took time to dress extra-carefully today and so did rajveer..

well it was of little surprise that the trips got a little divided now...

pooja and ali(as led by pooja..and as unwilling by ali..)were off shopping..

so the morning was spent in a lot of water sports..

"raj..are u sure u want to do this???…"
"dar gayi…?"
"jee nahi.!!!.lekin mein kabhi pehle try nahi kiya hai.."
"to ab kar lo…mein hoon na!!.."

she smiled…
and off they were racing..

one side was neelu and aalekh..one was huda and one was

"hey how do u do this stuff…well..ok…lets gooooooooooooo…."

The water splashing over the scooters..they were dripping wet..but thoroughly enjoying themselves..

"AHHH..RAAAJJ!!!!OH GOD!!WOW..HAHA..AHHH.."

"HOLD ON TO ME NAINA!!!!"


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huda looked over to see an over excited naina and an equally happy rajveer…and then..
"abe eh..tu apni chala….chal dekhte hai…"
"oye kaidi tujhe to mein…ruk…"

"cmon aalekh..jaldi…cmon..cmon…"

rajver and naina and aalekh and neelu were the final ones left..as yudi cudnt manage to turn his scooter fast enough and..

"WOOOAAAHHH!!!…HEEEEELLLLPPPPPPP…HEEYYYY!!"
and then...
"OOOYEE YUDIEE…..NAHII..OHHHH…"
and yudi's overexcited tumble had resulted in huda's tumbling into the water too..

"ABEH SAALE…TUJHE TO MEIN..CHALAANI NAHI AATI TO PHIR BAITHTA KYUN HAI!!!…"

and then came time for action..aalekh and neelu against raj and naina..

"cmon aalekh…"
and supporting them was..
"CMON CHIEF..U CAN DO IT!!!…"

"raj…I 'm not scared anymore..lets go for it.."
"tum saath ho…bas..we'll do it.."

huda heard all this..and suddenly something seemed to stir in him..
he saw naina look back to him for his support…and then he cudnt help but smile..

"GO FOR IT…!!!"

the water splashinG onto their face…t
op speed they rushed into it..fighting it..t
hey were neck to neck..close…very close..
who wud make it ????
….they were nearing the end…one …two …three…

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