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Posted: 18 years ago
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ohh..what a part..splendid... 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome,wonderfulll,brilliant 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yaar ooooo much of cheating these days where is sundays part ????????
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Extremely sorry guys! My sister was a bit grumpy last night, so I had to wrap up real quick... here's last night's episode:

Rajveer now stood at the panel. Koel was being comforted by Nandini and Abhimanyu.

"I - had... I knew that..." he took a deep breath. "I had come back from school, to find them beating her, so I tried to stop them when... HE came in and stopped them." Flashes of a beautiful but broken woman is shown, nearly unconscious, as a younger Gehlot comes in and indicates for the men around her to leave.

Rajveer grit his teeth, trying to control his anger. "He had a great influence on me, so I believed him when he told me that he would make sure that those men went to trial for this." We see Gehlot comforting and convincing a young boy around 11 years old, and the boy nodding and running inside.

"I went inside to find Koel crying and... she ran away from him whenever he tried to console her. She kept repeating that it was his fault... " An innocent angelic tear-stained face is shown sobbing uncontrollably, and as Gehlot tries to pick her up she runs away, screeching at him that he had done it.

"Mo - her mother didn't speak a word after that, and about a week later she..." he left off, squeezing his eyes shut.

A flash shows us the morgue examiner placing the sheet so that it blocks the bloodshot face of the once beautiful woman from the young boy and little girl's views. Both children are shocked, not able to comprehend the situation. Gehlot places a hand on the boy's shoulder comfortingly.

The scene changes from the morgue to the doctor's office. "She suffered from food-poisoning... it was triggered by an allergic reaction." the doctor tells him. The young Rajveer listens, hidden behind the door with a hicupping young Koel clutching his hand tightly. We know that Gehlot is aware of their presence when he looks to see if they are listening out of the corner of his eyes.

At present, Rajveer throws a disgusted glare at Gehlot. Major Samar nods at him and he gets back to his seat, murmuring comforting words to Koel.

"Sir, this is just from his point of view. It's the misconception of a hurt son!" Major Bhargav objected. "Anyone who was close to my client would say without hesitation that he is and has been a very honest and true person, who dedicates his life to his country."

"That man isn't even worthy of being a husband or a father... how will he ever be anywhere near being a service to his country?!" exclaimed Koel angrily. Rajveer and Nandini pulled her back, and she reluctantly sat down.

After a lot more arguements, Major Samar managed to clear his points so well that even Major Bhargav wasn't able to twist them. Every single point, both from today and yesterday's arguements were presented to the judge and the jury one by one. It is clear that the defendants' and the convicts' faces dropped after each point. As Major Samar closed his arguements with a very full conclusion, it was evident that the truth would win in the end, no matter what it seemed like in between.

The jury discussed the matters amongst themselves, and finally the decision was handed to the judge.

"The jury has unanimously agreed upon the decision that it cannot be denied what the convicted have committed are facts. Therefore, (the full name of Gehlot... sorry I don't know it!) is to be executed in a month after interrogation on the charges of third degree murders (the number unknown), illegal transactions of ammunitions and other terrorist activities which violates the human rights laws. Also, the claim of abuse will be decided after further investigation."

"(Major Nair's full name... sorry again, I really don't want to make it up... and I don't know it...) is sentenced to twenty one years of jail along with 720 hours of community service, after interrogation as well. This case is closed till further investigation."

The entire court broke into a standing ovasion as they heard it, which was actually breaking a rule, but no one seemed to care. Finally, the cult which had been running under the radar for decades or maybe even more was caught red-handed! The entire nation was affected by this decision of the jury.

Rajveer and Koel shared a hug that said so much more than any words could ever describe.

"The bond that was broken slightly when Raj left young Koel in the care of Gehlot thinking that was the safest place for her was now stronger than ever. They both realized their mistakes, and though not every wound or differences were solved, they were ready to give it an honest try." Naveen's voiceover tells us.

~*~*~

The five arrived at KMA at around 7 PM and the four staff members went to their own quarters, each needing some private moments to digest everything. Before that though, they made sure Koel was safely (both physically and mentally) in the care of the six cadets at the canteen.

Koel sat quietly at the corner of the table, pushing around her food but not attempting to eat it. The six exchanged worried glances. Huda was about to come forward but Naina shook her head. Yudi looked at Ali and her, silently asking for permission. After some thoughts, they both nodded.

"Koel... are you OK?" he asked softly, concerned. Koel looked up at him in surprise. She was about to nod but changed her mind and shook her head, tears poruing down as she hid her face in his chest, sobbing silently. Yudi at first didn't know what to do, but then rubbed comforting circles on her back as he remembered his mother and sister do whenever he was ill or depressed.

Ali, Naina, Pooja and Aalekh gathered around her as well, though giving her some air to breathe, murmuring words of comfort and understanding, saying that it was all going to be OK. Huda though, glared at Yudi, thinking it was just the competition. Yudi ignored it; he wasn't out to prove his man-power right now. There were other things much more important than that.

**I'll edit this post later to add the precap.**
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great.. 👏 👏 ..edit the post soon..wanna see the precap 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great going

pl continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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where is 2 day's update???????????????????
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Posted: 18 years ago
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RJ what happened???where is d update..??
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sorry guys... I really have no excuse except for I fell asleep yesterday before updating (and I missed having my seheri... had to fast with a glass of water!)

News Flash: Due to the extremely clumsy inconvenience, the RJ Production Company will air two episodes of Alternate Left Right Left by RJ tonight, so stay tuned for all the masti-filled happenings with our favourite characters, and not to mention, our favourite jodi!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Rajveer was sitting on the couch, head laid back and eyes closed. The doors opened and Naina peeked in.

"Come in Naina." he said without changing his position.

"How did you know-" she started asking after closing the doors.

"That it was you? Naina, everyone I know and don't know knocks except for you... a habit you got from your brother I suppose." he teased with a small smile. Naina hit him playfully on the arm, and he caught her hand. She sat down beside him and rested her head on his chest. She was surprised at how normal it felt. It was as if life had planned for them to be near perfection together.

"I asked Suriji to send all of your dinners to your quarters. I thought you'd be a bit worn out after such a hectic day..." she told him. He smiled and kissed her forehead.

"As much as I hate to say this, you should go. You need to study."

"Already taken care of Sir! I'm not Huda... I've been revising in small bits for a few weeks, and of course having extra practices for the practicals with everyone else. There isn't much left to get except for your best wishes!" she had a slightly naughty look in her eyes. This surprised Rajveer.

"You'll get your best wishes before your exams start. It's too early; what if it runs out?" he asked, pulling her closer.

"Then you can keep giving me your best wishes..." she said innocently. Now Rajveer was really shocked. Seeing his look she broke out into a fit of giggles. "Sorry... but Koel... was right!" she managed to gasp out in between her laughter. Her eyes widened slightly though, when she felt the warmth of his hand on her waist, and his body quite a lot closer to hers. Though there was no skin contact, she felt tingles all over her body.

"Cadet Singh..." he brought his mouth near hers. "Aap mere saath mazaak kar rahe hain?" he asked almost in a whisper. Naina was torn between nodding or shaking her head and reacting to him. He grinned. "To main bhi mazaak kar raha hoon..." he said and suddenly she felt the more than comforting warmth disappear.

Rajveer sat back and turned the TV on, acting like nothing had happened. Naina was speechless from a moment, but when she was about to say something he sat up straight looking at the TV intently. They were showing the news; the case of the cult had apparently a great impact on the entire nation. All sorts of people were now on the streets celebrating. Many rumours related to it had broken out too, and many included Rajveer, Koel and even the rest of KMA.

Naina rested her hand on his proudly, distracting him from the news on something about Koel. "Ignore those. Now is the time for you to be happy and not worry about all these things... let the people you're defending do the rest. So... do you-" Naina was cut off by a knock on the door. It was an orderly who brought lunch for two. "Why are there two plates?" Naina asked.

"Suriji said you'll be having dinner here as well." the orderly replied and left. Rajveer smiled gratefully. It was about time he got to spend time with his Naina. He didn't want to be alone now anyway, like he had been after Naveen's trial.

~*~*~

"Yudi, how do you work this thing?" Koel asked, looking all around the small laptop-type gadget, trying to figure out what it was or how it worked. They were at his and Aalekh's room along with Ali and Pooja.

"Oh that multimedia setting? It really came in handy when my arm's connection was broken..." Pooja started saying, but Ali nudged her. Yudi gagged as he remembered getting in trouble with Lolita Ma'am. Seeing this, Koel got curious. At first she was cautious about asking, but remembered that they were her friends; quite different from people she was experienced with.

"Really? How? And why was your arm broken?" she asked at once. Pooja glanced at Ali, who tried to make up an answer. "Ali Bhaiya, what's the harm in telling me? I can't be worse than I already am..." Koel commented with a grin. She and Yudi exchanged fives as Ali simply shook his head.

"My arm broke during a practical exam in the mid-terms. That Muchhadd made sure I wouldn't be able to pass without having to lose my arm-" Ali nudged her again, telling her she was exaggerating a bit. "Well that completely unwanted missed call did make sure I didn't pass his exam, didn't he? And that my arm was dislocated?" Pooja fumed.

"Right, I get that part... so how does this-" Koel pointed at the gadget, "come into the picture?"

"Well..." Yudi looked at Ali and Pooja before continuing. "I had the idea of... well - stealing the exam papers." he said, scratching his head in a little embarrassment. "But what Naina used it for later on was so much more worthwhile!" Ali and Pooja grinned, sharing his enthusiasm.

"Will ANYONE clear ANYTHING for me?" Koel asked exasperatedly. If they went on walking down the memory lane leaving her behind, she might as well go back to being the old Koel.

"Chill yaar. It was just a good time for us... followed by a very bad time. Naina used the stolen exam papers to frame Major Nair, and for BC - that's Briagdier Chandokh or 'tau' - to find out through Pooja's cell which he had confiscated. It was priceless, truly priceless to see Major Nair - oh sorry, it's probably just Nair now - getting kicked out of the academy!" Yudi explained in a rush.

It took a few moments for Koel to understand, but when she did, she was even more curious about how it was done. As they described every step, she started realizing that the cadets here weren't just generally good people. They all had their own share of unique personalities but still worked amazingly well together.

"WOW! Do I get to get into those mini-missions too? This is so much cooler than I thought it would be!" she said exceitedly. When she was a child, she used to imagine going on adventurous missions, but the image changed when she started knowing Rajveer and Gehlot more. They both seemed very into their work and very serious about it, which nearly killed her dream of having fun.

"If you think that was cool, you should hear about how this Jatt changed the look of KMA in so many ways!" Huda told her as he and Aalekh entered the room. Koel smiled politely at them then looked away and rolled her eyes. Huda's smile dropped a bit, but he still came forward, starting to describe the Valentines' Day incident, although Koel didn't seem very interested.

The scene ends on Koel smiling politely.

Precap - "Cadet Koel, why don't you stay back for an extra lesson to catch up?" Dr. Shalini asks kindly. Koel looks at the others in despair, as if a plan being ruined.

Major Samar walks into Major Rajveer's room and finds Naina there too.

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