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Posted: 17 years ago
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Everyone at the academy were now swamped with some type of work or other; mostly by studies. The staff were offering extra help on their own subjects as well as others. Most cadets, who had left their revisions till the last moment were now rushing to the extra classes. The First Year Cadets were at the infirmary, having their last normal class on a more detailed medical aspect of the Army than they had studied before. The bell rang and they exited, but Dr. Shalini called Koel back.

"Cadet Koel, why don't you stay back for an extra lesson to catch up?" she asked kindly. Koel did need extra lessons. Even with all the trainings from all the other cadets, including the seniors she was behind in many things.

She looked at Yudi, Ali, Pooja and Naina in despair. During the few days of her stay, she had really started loving hanging out with them as a group and as individuals. It brought... excitement... to her life, and the good type. She really didn't want to spend time studying extra hard after all her days full of it at every corner.

"Don't worry Koel! It's just a simple small session of the basic first-aid knowledge." Dr. Shalini explained seeing her look. "And I guess you need to relax somewhat... I know it's fun being with yoru friends, but you really do need some time for yourself. You look completely tired out!" And it was true, she did look exhausted with bags under her eyes. She nodded and waved bye to the others, who promised to save her some of the better part of lunch.

Unlike the other classes, Dr. Shalini took it really slowly, allowing them both to relax. By the time Koel came out she was feeling a lot more refreshed and in a better mood, especially with the knowledge of how to treat her wounds professionally (she was quite clumsy at times).

~*~*~

"Shekhawat! I need to-" Major Samar was saying as he knocked once and opened the door without waiting for response. To his surprise (yes, his SURPRISE!) he found Naina sitting comfortably in his ex-cadet's arms as Rajveer explained a code. They both stood up immediately, looking sheepish and feeling awkward.

Major Samar looked scrutinizingly at them both. They shifted nervously under his gaze trying to think of excuses or explanations. "No wonder you've been so ansent-minded lately. I never expected anything like this from you Shekhawat... or from Ahluwalia's junior. Definitely not both of you together!" he said sternly, dragging his look to and fro which made the two even more nervous.

"Sir..."

"Don't even try Shekhawat. I won't rat out, because that's not what we do in the Army. But you have to keep things under control till at least the exams are over, and I don't care if Ahluwalia Jr. here has prepared her studies as well as her brother used to!"

Rajveer and Naina exchanged a short glance before nodding. She waved a vague bye before saluting Major Samar and leaving. Rajveer realized that his ex-teacher was actually quite serious about this, which brought worries back into his mind. He pushed them away and pulled himself nto the present.

"You said you needed something Sir?"

"Ah yes. I need to discuss Shekhawat Jr.'s arrangements. I believe that it would be best for her if she took her exams a week or two after the others. I just need to know her progress on your area... when I get that, I'll appeal it to Briagdier Chandokh."

Rajveer nodded and brought Koel's file. They discussed it for some time when a knock on the door interrupted them.

~*~*~

"I'm so tired." Koel sighed. She was curled up on Naina's bed (who was studying) after the hectic day. She rubbed her eyes and tried to suppress a large yawn.

"Koel you really need to recharge." Pooja said worriedly. Naina nodded in agreement.

"You could stay over if you want. Don't worry about Lolita Ma'am won't mind... most things are totally out of place when exams are coming up." She told Koel, who nodded while lolling off to sleep already. Naina and Pooja smiled. This feeling of taking care of someone like a younger sister was new to them; they liked it.

Soon, they heard her murmuring in her sleep and tossing and turning. At first it was quite violent, but after some soothing words and caresses from the two girls she calmed down. After that, it was surprisingly about... Huda... Naina wondered if he had actually managed to work his 'Huda-giri' on this girl who was from a completely different world. It cleared soon though; she was pouting and putting on annoyed faces, even though she was asleep. It took all of the two girls' energy to stop themselves from bursting out in hysterical laughter.

Precap - "That's cheating Yudiye!" Huda says angrily. Yudi stands up, as if not understanding what his friend is saying.

"Our exams start in two days!" Pooja moans sadly, while Naina repeats it with eagerness.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72
RJ production's 2 back 2 back episodes r just mindblowing...do update soon..n I'll not mind if u forget 2 update before going to bed..since the result would be again nice like this..keep up d good work..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sorry guys, my dad & sis were extremely mad at me for using the laptop so much so I couldn't air an episode... a lucky winner at orkut had gotten the chance to air the 25th episode too, so I'll post it later on! Now I gotta go to school...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey too good

both the update are fantastic

pl continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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U'll have 2 compensate for this inconvenience
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Posted: 17 years ago
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This is the 25th episode by Anamika at LRL Threads in orkut.

Lolita Mam was getting furious at some girl cadets for making unnecessary issue of a very trivial thing...
As Rajveer entered the room...
the secene was .....
"Come again Cadet.....!! for such a small injury u want the entire library here...how silly.....i wont allow this...here we train you to become

soldiers...so i want u out of this room with these heap of books back in the library...the other cadets also need them..."

Rajveer gave a smile at this..... Lolita Ma'm turned around to find Rajveer standing there...

"Capt Rajveer" what r u doing here........!?

well Ma'm I had come here to check on Koel but heard this commotion and came here...!

Oh...!! She replied ....thats fine ....anyways I have got a meeting with Major Samar...so see u later...

Meanwhile koel and pooja already headed to the library...since koel had some doubts and pooja accompanied her so that she could help out....they din't bother disturbing Naina, Since she studied till late that night and as koel slept on naina's bed...she was sleeping with a book in her hand near the window taking the support of the wall...........

As Rajveer entered he saw Naina sleeping with the book in her hand...she was looking so innocent the he couldnt help but smile.... he closed the door and went closer and sat in front of her .....he just couldnt wake her up...
He just couldnt take his eyes off her....

after sometime Naina opened her eyes and smiled....but again closed the so that she could drift back to sleep..this time trying to lie on the floor.......Raj was a bit amused & surprised at this........! he called out Naina softly...She again looked at him lovingly...and then again turned sides and tried to go back to sleep murmuring something with smile..........

He could help stop smiling this behaviour of of hers....and then he moved himself closer to her and softly wispered in her ear Naina...... ur not

dreaming.....its me.......wake up...

Naina's eyes shot open at this ....she got up startled..... and then...." Raj........veer Sir its just that....."

"hmmmm........So.. Dreaming about Me.........."

She got up with the book and trying not to look at him she started to walk towards the table and said No trying to sound normal....and kept the book on the table...

he smiled at this.....and went near to her and removed the hair clip that held her hair....she tried to move away but ........ he held her wrist and

pulled her close to him....placing his other hand on her waist....."to tum kya keh rehi thi cadet Naina AH Singh..."
"Woh..Ra...i mean Sir.... "She was feeling very shy and couldnt stop blushing........she still wasnt lookin at him...
"Woh kya Naina......", he said smiling mischievously....but when Naina looked up ....a sudden desire crept within him.......

they kept on gazing at each other........slowly rajveer pulled Naina closer to her....each could feel the others breath....He was slowly losing control

over himself....his grip tightened around her waist......the other hand that was holding her wrist slowly started moving upwards with feather light touches on her hand..as his hand reached her shoulder blade she gasped....he then reached her neck touching her collarbone.....She shut her eyes at his touch....the eyecontact was broken and her lips quivered...... he slowly shifted his hand behind her ear....and.........and sealed the distance between them.....he placed his lips over hers.. softly...gently.....and ........whispered.. "Naina....." The kiss was very gentle and innocent.......
His lips bagan to caress her shoulder.......and He loosened his grip over her . His hands ran over her body caressing her gently....

After parting....................

"Naina...woh .....main........main .....woh....." he tried to put his feelings in words but failed miserably......his eyes became moist as he added..."Main bus................." but she cut him in between,"shhh..........."placing her finger on his lips......and then she returned the soft...sensual....and gentle kiss....

She then parted and snuggled in his arms and hid her face in his chest.....he held her tight in her arms .......


Most readers will probably prefer this episode better than mine, because it has a lot more intense RN. But I hope you understand why I couldn't use such romance.
Edited by RJOpal - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Special Episode 25 - Alternate Left Right Left by RJ


"Hey Yudi where's Ali? He said he'd give me his detailed history notes." Koel said while entering the canteen. Huda and Aalekh were present there too. The former stood up eagerly, blocking Yudi's path to her.

"Arre why would you want his boring notes? I can explain it in a much, much more interesting way!" he said, stepping closer while Koel stumbled back. She looked at Yudi for help.

"Dude step away from her. Some flirting is OK, but harrassing her is just way out of bounds!" he told Huda angrily, pushing him away. Huda was surprised at how easliy Yud did it; it seemed he had gotten stronger over the weeks. "Koel, Ali's not going to be around the canteen much since Pooja keeps him away... he's fasting. Why don't you have your lunch and then I'll go with you to look for him, OK?" Koel nodded and they took their seats. Huda stopped Yudi though.

"That's cheating Yudiye!" he said angrily. Yudi stood up. His expression said that he didn't understand what his friend was saying, and that he didn't care either.

"Dude what are you talking about?" he asked in an annoyed tone. Huda was fuming now.

"Making yourself look like the hero and me the villain? That's cheating!" Yudi now understood what he was talking about. The realisation hit him like a wave of fury.

"You think I'm competing with you? You think I'm stupid enough to make some foolish bet over a person?" he said in a dangerous voice, which threw back the others slightly. "Sure, maybe I used to fall for your sly jokes to get me mad, but not anymore. Live with your bets and let me live with my FRIENDS!"

Koel looked at Aalekh, as if to confirm what she was thinking. He shrugged. It was none of his business; it was better if he didn't poke his nose into all this.

"Bet? Over... me?" she asked the two uncertainly. "As much as I'm flattered, I'd rather not be an object to have money on. Umm Yudi, I finished my lunch off while you two were -" she tried to find a word to describe the interaction, but wasn't successful. "You know, fighting or whatever. Let's go find Ali!" she said with a smile and walked towards the door without any sort of tension in her mind. Yudi gave a last dirty look at Huda and followed.

Huda sat down confusedly, resting his head on his hands. Aalekh pushed a cup of coffee towards him, and when he looked up, Aalekh explained, "Khopri clear karne ke liye ekdam mast hain."

"Tu daru aur main coffee?" Huda asked, but the biting tone wasn't there. It was replaced with a tired one.

"Apun daaru peeta hain sab kuch bhool jaane ke liye. Tujhe to saala sab kuch achchhi tarah se soch ke theek karna hain!" Huda looked at him for a moment before pulling the mug and taking a small sip with clouded eyes.

~*~*~

"Our exams start in two days!" Pooja moaned sadly. She and Naina had headed back to their room straight from classes to study. They didn't go to the library as everyone else was there, making it very difficult to study with the noise.

"Our exams start in two days!" Naina said with a sigh as she glanced outside the window, resting her cheek on her palm. Pooja looked up at her.

"What's up with your connection?" she asked, jumping curiously to Naina's bed. Naina blushed. We follow her thoughts to the flashbacks: Rajveer's touch... his warmth on her... his eyes looking directly into hers...

Then the flashes change to Major Samar's entry... his stern comments...

She explained it briefly (leaving the details of the 'best wishes' out of course; somethings were better left unsaid) and nodded in agreement as she saw Pooja's wide eyes. It really was unbelievable, like a dream; all of it. Even Major Samar finding out!

"Uhm Pooja... I think I'll go and visit Ra - Rajveer Sir. And please don't tease me! I barely see him because of the pressure on both of us." Pooja nodded understandingly.

"When you didn't try to poke Ali and my connection, why should I do it to you? Ja Shahrukh ki pyaar!"

Naina reached his room and was about to enter but stopped on her tracks. We are shown the flashback of Rajveer telling her the trait she had supposedly inherited from her brother. She smiled to herself and knocked lightly.

"Come in!" his voice entered her ears and she seemed to melt right there. Taking a deep breath and smiling widely, she went inside and closed the doors behind her, not noticing a very wet (dressed, don't worry! =P) and very smoking Major Rajveer Singh Shekhawat, or simply Raj heading towards her.

He swiftly took her by the waist and leaned her against the wardrobe to her surprise. "Raj..."

"Mmm... you must be here for you best wishes..." he murmured, not wanting to break their eye contact.

"Remember what Major Samar said..." Naina's instinct rose. Her exams were coming up, she was still a cadet in a military academy, he was a member of-

He brushed his lips on hers. The effect it had on her was stronger than the lights suddenly going out or the chaos forming outside due to it joint together. The pale, faint and translucent moonlight and the soft breeze from his room's open window ignited the passion.

Major Samar saw the vague outline of the shadows of two figures entwining against the soft moonlight. He stood in front of the door, both to make sure no one noticed and that the couple didn't cross the limit. He would rather give them this small privacy though; he knew they deserved it. Who was he to separate two lovers?

Precap - "I'm scared." Koel says with a shaky voice.

The cadets are sitting at the class having their exam. Aalekh looks around nervously, and so does Huda.
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Both are just superb!!!! hats off to u both....

RJ u captured d whole KMA..as well as RN..n since u r running alternate LRL..whole KMA should be captured..n u did that beyond our expectation..so keep up d excellent work...

And Anamika's one is also excellent...loved d RN scene..can u pls tell me in which community her FF comes?

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hey both the updated at fabulous

pl continue soon
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Episode 26

"It was damn funny-" Yudi was describing to Koel, Pooja, Ali, Huda and Aalekh and anyone else who would listen when the power suddenly went out with a repressed sound. "What's going on?"

The buzz of confusion was rising by each moment, no matter how much the orderlies in charge tried to quieten everyone down. Unfortunately, there were no higher staff members present to control anything.

"Shouldn't we try to find out what's going on?" Yudi asked the others. Ali and Pooja nodded, while Aalekh was indifferent, Koel slightly confused and frightened and Huda completely fida over Koel. Yudi snapped his fingers in front of Huda's face, breaking his daydream.

"Do whatever you want and let us live in peace." Huda snapped angrily. Then he remebered his and Aalekh's conversation about how he needed to clear his mind and sort everything out. "I mean, why don't you go ahead, and we'll stay here to make sure everything here is fine." he said in a nicer tone. Yudi rolled his eyes. But before he could say anything, Suriji entered the canteen and cut him off.

"No one is going anywhere. All cadets are to stay here and in a few other rooms under the supervision of a staff member." he said seriously.

"But Suriji, hua kya hain?" a Senior Cadet, Jalil asked. Suriji looked grave as he answered.

"There is an intruder somewhere in KMA."

~*~*~

Major Samar listened quietly to the conversation between two orderlies at the end of the hallway, and knocked on Major Rajveer's room. He waited till the lovers were apart and left.

Even as they broke apart, Rajveer held her face and waist. She sighed in contentment, a newfound feeling in her eyes as she looked up at him with a partial blush. Suddenly, the darkness and chaos (which was moving away) occured to them.

"When did the lights go out?" Naina asked in confusion. Rajveer grinned.

"Should I show you?"

She pushed him back slightly with a full blush now and opened the door to leave. He wasn't in any mood to let her go. This was the first time in about two weeks they had been together... and the first time ever they had been together like this. If anything was wrong, surely someone would have come to notify him. Then it struck him; someone had knocked on the door.

He looked around and found a piece of white paper or tissue paper stuck in between the door frames. He grinned while shaking his head.

"Major Samar. He has his ways of letting us know it's him and not the enemy." he explained to Naina. She nodded and went out after giving him a wistful look. He looked on at her even after she was out of his sight, then smiled with a clear love-struck glaze in his eyes and leaned against the door.

Naina on the other hand was nearly skipping along the hallways with the unremovable smile plastered on her face. She pushed her hair back and traced her fingers down to her lips. She could still feel it. Was this how it was supposed to be?

We see a sudden movement behind the corridor she's walking by. It's a figure clad in a black outfit covering him from his head to toe, only leaving his steely grey ones in view. He watches an oblivious Naina making her way to the girls' hostel (which is deserted, unknown to Naina).

~*~*~

"I'm scared." Koel told Yudi, clutching his sleeve. She looked around in fear. Her face clearly showed that she was feeling too congested in the closed up area. Yudi noticed it, and so did the others, of all who moved back slightly, pushing against other cadets to give her some air to breathe. Pooja rubbed comforting circles in her back.

"Do not fear when Huda is here." Huda tried to lighten up the situation, not noticing the very vague yet spark in her eyes as she tightened her grip on Yudi's sleeve. Yudi felt it, but didn't quite understand that it wasn't just breathing she was having problems with. Ali did though, and placed a firm hand on her shoulder. She shook it off. "Plus, what is there to fear? The robber? Just let him try to get to you... I'll-"

He was held by the collar against the table very harshly by a very, very angry Koel. "Look, I'm trying my BEST to be NICE and not my old self, but YOU! You just HAVE to make everything difficult, don't you?" she shook him even more harshly before letting him go. He wasn't about to be treated like that though. He caught her wrist tightly, making her wince.

"Let go." she gritted, her eyes flashing dangerously even in the dark. Ali and Yudi stepped forward, trying to break it up but Pooja stopped Ali while Huda moved so that she was against the table and his back was facing everyone else.

"Attitude... I like that in my girls." he said with an air of arrogance. Koel now violently tried to free herself but he was much stronger than her with the months of training before and during Army. He took a step closer to her. She flinched; it was quite uncomfortable against the rough table.

"Think about things before you do them. You thought you were going to - hit on me, shall we say - without getting anything back? My mummyji has taught to always give something in return for a gift!"

He let go of her and went over to the counter. He leaned against it and ordered a cup of coffee for everyone. Koel was fuming with blind rage. It looked like all she wanted to do was go up to him and give him the beating he'd never forget. She shook off Yudi and Ali's comments and stomped off angrily to the other end of the canteen.

The two boys exchanged worried glances while Pooja grinned.

~*~*~

The man clad in black swiftly moved behind Naina. From her training, her instincts told her to move to a side but it was too late. His hand firmly covered her mouth and his other hand had made sure her hands wouldn't be able to be moved without his consent. She squirmed in his grasp but he was too strong. Finally after some time of useless protests, she calmed down.

"Good." his voice was smoothly rough in a strange way. If he wasn't an intruder, we might've thought it was even quite attractive, especially with his steely grey eyes. "Now I'll take you to where you were going. So you see, I'm not forcing you or kidnapping you anywhere. All I'm asking is stay put." he said in a calm voice, as if explaining to a child. She nodded. There was no choice at that moment.

Precap - "Where's Naina?!" Aalekh asks, looking around worriedly, as does everyone else.

"He's quite clever Major. Not the average robbers or thieves you get." says Abhimanyu.

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