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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it alot update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

sophie........awesome part......very emotional.......so Baaji realised his love for sana........n TaSha are coming closer........but feeling very bad for karan...........update soon.......

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey sophie..sz hun i read ur update n pressed like bt cudnt stop by 2 post a comment...it was my m8s birthday party n i was gtin l8 so didnt post a comment anyway i mus say i loved the way baji realised his love..thanks 2 karan..hehe..gr8 2 c tht naku n dutta realise tht he likes her...feel bad for karan tho..bt his love was always one sided m sure he'll find sum1 else...
tasha seem 2 b gtin pretty close too...n m very happy they r..lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ Yuvi - Hey thats alryt... Even i came home late 2day lool but i was on IF on my fone ...couldnt keeo myself away lool..
Yeah FINALLY baaaji realised his love.... Happy moments for JiNa coming up...
Lool TaSha.. Hmm you have to wait and watch what i do!
Thanks for the comment!
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks for the pm
lovely part.liked it a lot
looking forward to next one.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hahaha..nice update....!!!!!there's a lot of confusion btw Baji and Karan..>!!!😆😆....good that Karan sacrificed his love..otherwise i would hate him to my lifetime....😕....Baji's alter ego was cool...itne din kahan tha...??!! anyways..loved the way he felt for Sana...now i'm waiting how will Baji tell his Dil ki baat to consious Sana...??!!!! and Tasha scenes..uff...Masha allah..!!! hame is bareme kehne keliye shabd nahi hai..>>!!!!!!!😲...hey...bt i have to mention this..the last part...it is the first time i guess where Baji is being the reason for Tasha to meet....else most of he time he'l b Kabab mein Haddi..!!!!! 😆😆
Edited by Made4eachother - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
finally baaji realised his feelings for sana. feeling bad for karan tho. Tasha romance can see it progressing but plz make them realise they are chatting online and would love some more chatting scene when they finally realise who each other are. keep up the great work! thanks 4 the pm😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 6

Happy Diwali!

Sana is sleeping and Baaji is admiring her lovingly while sitting next to her bed on a chair holding her hand. Nakku and Dutta are sitting outside the room in the hospital corridor. Nakku is sleeping on Dutta shoulder and dutta is sleeping leaning his head against the wall.

Around 3 o'clock Sana wakes up and sees Baaji gazing at her lovingly. She is shocked to see baaji holding her hand. She thinks she's dreaming. She closes her eyes again and re-opens it and is still shocked.

Baaji: Sana... kya hua?

Sana: Baaji? *looks around confused*

Baaji: haan Sana.. Main hi hoon..

Sana: kya hua mujhe?

Baaji: woh accident.

Sana then has a flashback of the accident and squeezes his hand. Baaji knew that she was scared. He sat on the bed next to her and caressed her face lovingly.

Baaji: sab theek hain Sana... Don't worry. I'm with you. *Sana opens her eyes slowly*

Sana *innocently*: Always and forever?

Baaji: And ever!

Sana was still confused; she didn't understand what got into baaji all of a sudden. He is behaving as if she's his girlfriend. She felt nice but couldn't help but question herself.

Baaji: Sana?

Sana *comes back to her senses*: Huh

Baaji: main abhi aata hoon.. I'm going to call the doctor.

Sana: Nahin.. Please don't leave me alone.

Baaji: i won't. Main abhi gaya aur abhi aaya.

Sana: theek hain.

Baaji smiles at her and leaves the room. He comes out to see TaSha sleeping. He smiles seeing Nakku's head on Dutta's shoulder and goes to call the doctor.

......

After a little while doctor comes out after checking Sana. Baaji stands up and looks at him.

Doctor: Woh ab bilkul theek hain..

TaSha wakes up hearing the doctor speaking. Dutta looks down at Nakku on his shoulder. Nakku tries to get up but her earring is stuck in his shirt and it pulls her back on his shoulder. Nakku gets embarrassed and tries to remove it but her hand is shaking. Dutta touches her hand lightly and Nakku looks up. He nods at her trying to tell her he will do it. Nakku understood his signal and removes her hand. Dutta removes the earring from his shirt and they both stand up looking up and down.

Doctor: You can take her home today itself.

Baaji: oh thank you doctor

Doctor: Please come with me, i will prescribe some medicines.

Doctor and baaji leaves. TaSha looks at each other and Nakku goes to see Sana in the room. Dutta follows her. Nakku sits down next to Sana on the bed. Dutta stands behind Nakku.

Nakku: Sana... tum theek to ho na?

Sana: Haan.. main bilkul theek hoon...Baaji? Baaji kahan hain?

Nakku: woh doctor ke saath hain... abhi aajaye ga.

Sana: Hi dutta

Dutta: Hi... kaise ho?

Sana: ab theek hoon..

Dutta: jaldi theek hojao... Kal party hain.

Sana: i know.. Don't worry. I will be fit and fine for tomorrow.

Nakku: Oh really?

Sana: Yes. Everyone knows that Sana doesn't miss a single party.

They all laugh and Baaji comes back with the doctor.

Doctor: So are you ready to go miss Sana?

Sana: yes doctor. Im fine.

Doctor: yes you are but please take care.

Baaji: Don't worry doctor, i take her responsibility.

Doctor: good good.

Sana looks at baaji confused yet again while TaSha smiles. Dutta, Baaji and doctor leaves the room while Nakku helps Sana change. After a little while, DuJi comes back and Baaji helps Sana in his car and drives her to campus while TaSha follows in Dutta's car.

Arriving to the campus,*JiNa's theme song* Baaji picks Sana up and takes her to her room. Sana is surprised and looks at him stunned. Baaji looks at her with a smile. They have an eyelock till he puts her on the bed.

.....

Karan is in the gym boxing to let out his pain. He throws a few punches and then holds onto the punching bag. He closes his eyes and has a flashback of Sana and Baaji. He starts his boxing again and breaks down. "Why??? Why do i love her? Why didn't i confess before? Why did i hide it from everyone? She doesn't love me.. She would never love me!... How can i love the same girl baaji loves?... NO no i can't do this!! Baaji is like my brother, how can i snatch his love? No i can't do this" karan said to himself.

He gets up, removes his boxing gloves and wipes his tears. His phone rings and it's Dutta. Karan picks it up.

Karan: hello?

Dutta: Karan? Where are you?

Karan: Uhh woh mein gym main hoon

Dutta: Oh okay..Wait im coming.

Karan: no.. i mean im was just about to leave.

Dutta: oh ok. Well there's no practice today.

Karan: okay

Dutta: come back to campus

Karan: yeah i will be there in 10 minutes

Dutta: kool bye.

Karan cuts the phone and then leaves the gym putting on a fake smile hiding his tears and pain.

.....

Baaji is feeding Sana soup on the bed and Sana is just admiring him while she's eating. Nakku feels happy seeing them like this. She sits on her bed and remembers Stranger20. She quickly opens her laptop to check if he's online and as usual he was. She smiles and starts chatting with him.

Chat convo

MsCutie19- Hey

Stranger20- Hi cutie

MsCutie19- Excited for the party?

Stranger20- Na im not a party guy

MsCutie19- Oh but you are going right?

Stranger20- Yeah

MsCutie19- Great. It will be fun

Stranger20- You do know it's a theme party

MsCutie19- What? Noo

Stranger20- Yeah.. Boys black and girls red.

MsCutie19- Oh noo

Stranger20- Oh yes. Damn that means i won't see you.

MsCutie19- Well you never know.

Stranger20- How am i going to guess who you are?

MsCutie19- You just have to guess.. I cant help you with this

Stranger20- Not fair

MsCutie19- Everything is fair.

Stranger20-If i guess you, how will i know it's you?

MsCutie19- I don't know. I will leave everything to destiny

Stranger20- Oh no.. Then there's no chance of us meeting tonight

MsCutie19- I guess so... If all the girls are wearing red and boys; black then i don't think we will be able to guess each other.

Stranger20- Fine.. But you are coming for sure yeah?

MsCutie19- Yes!

Stranger20-Well see you there even though i don't see you

MsCutie19- lol okay. Bye

Stranger20- Bye.

.....

Dutta closes his laptop and smiles. He opens his wardrobe and takes out 2 black suits; one for him and one for baaji. Karan comes there and puts his bag on his bed. Dutta looks at him.

Dutta: what happened to you in the hospital? Why did you leave all of a sudden?

Karan: Oh i ehh forgot my wallet in the canteen

Dutta: oh did you get it back?

Karan: yeah

Dutta: okay..

Karan: what are these suits for?

Dutta: Tomorrow's party

Karan: What party?

Dutta: new year party

Karan: Oh crap... i forgot

Dutta: well take out your suit, so i can get them ironed from the nearby shop.

Karan: No im not going to the party.

Dutta: WHAT? Karan Malhotra does NOT want to go to a party? Which is full of girls?

Karan: stop it yaar. I don't feel like going

Dutta: don't chat rubbish.. Common take out your suit over wise i will choose one.

Karan: i don't want to go.

Dutta: what's wrong? Are you ok?

Karan: yeah, I just don't feel lie going to a party

Dutta: Fine, look i will take out a black suit for you. Get it ironed and put it on the bed. If you feel like coming, then you come, ok?

Karan: Okay.

Dutta takes out a suit for Karan as well and leaves the room with 3 suits to get them ironed.

....

Sana is lying down on her bed while Nakku is standing infront of the wardrobe thinking what to wear for the party. Baaji is sitting on Nakku's bed looking at Sana. Nakku takes out a few red dresses for Sana to show her. Sana is confused of what to wear and Baaji choose a red dress with diamond dress for her. Sana is happy. Nakku is also happy for Sana.

Baaji then leaves after winking at Sana which leaves her shock. Baaji returns to his room where Karan is lying on his bed looking up at the ceiling lost in his thought. Baaji looks at him and sits next to him.

Baaji: Bhai? (he calls him bhai as he's older and they are like brothers)

Karan: hmm

Baaji: BHAI

Karan: Haan *sits up*

Baaji: hospital mein..

Karan: kya?

Baaji: Sana? You?

Karan *being brave*: Aree Nahin yaar.. woh aise hi.. i always fight with her so i though i would apologize just in case something happens to her

Baaji: BHAI.. don't say that.. She's fine now. She returned to campus.

Karan: Really? That's great.

Baaji: Where's bhao?

Karan: he went to get our suits ironed.

Baaji: okay. You are coming party right?

Karan: no you go

Baaji: *laughs* Don't chat rubbish. YOU? You Karan Malhotra doesn't want to go party?

Karan: Im not joking. I don't feel like it.

Baaji: dekh jaana parega... tujhe hamari dosti ki kasam

Karan: nahiin.. don't do this..

Baaji: ab chalna parega..

Karan: Fine!

Baaji: thats more like it.

Karan lies back down and close his eyes. Baaji sits on his bed with a big smile thinking about something. Dutta comes back but by then both Baaji and Karan are sleeping. He hangs the suits on the wardrobe and makes his way to his bed.

....

Nakku chose a beautiful long silky red sleeveless dress for herself. She smiles thinking about her chat buddy and how she would recognize him in the party. Sana looks at Nakku who is lost in her thoughts. Sana smiles.

Sana: Nakku.. Who are you thinking about?

Nakku: No one.. Im thinking about the party

Sana: Don't lie. You are thinking about Dutta.

Nakku *shocked*:What?

Sana: yes you are. Did you see how he was with you all the time in hospital? Even in the library he carried you out! I think he fell for you. Oh no i don't think. I know he fell for you. You can tell. I mean common, why would a guy do this much for a stranger?

Nakku starts thinking about Sana's word while Sana goes on and on and on but Nakku doesn't listen to her and has flashbacks of Dutta and her. Nakku goes by the window and looks at the stars.

Sana: Nakku.. close your eyes and put your hand on your heart. You will know who you love.

Nakku: this is childish

Sana: just try it

Nakku: no

Sana: please

Nakku: okay fine.

The Vision in Nakku's heart!

Nakku close her eyes and puts her right hand on her heart, she breaths in the fresh air and starts having visions of Sana, Baaji, her parents, her brother and then someone.. She couldn't see his face but it was a guy walking. She runs after him in a garden and suddenly her dupatta flies and falls on the guy. Nakku runs to him and pulls her dupatta off slowly and is shocked to see Dutta with his eyes close feeling the dupatta on his face. He opens his eyes and looks at her lovingly. Nakku smiles at him and turns to run away when he grabs her wrist. Nakku turns and her hair hits his face but he doesn't move and enjoyed the fragrance in her hair. Dutta pulls her closer placing both of his hands on her waist making her shiver. Nakku felt weak on her knees and Dutta holds her tighter and leans in to kiss her...

Nakku opens her eyes shocked at what she just saw. Sana knew she saw dutta and smiles proudly.

Sana: Nakku?

Nakku still in a shock state : huh

Sana: NAKKUUU

Nakku: haaan *turns to sana*

Sana: who did you see?

Nakku: ermm.. actually

Sana: Dutta? Right?

Nakku: hmm

Sana: see i told you. You love him and I'm sure he loves you as well

Nakku: Maybe this is just a stupid crush

Sana: You are IMPOSSIBLE, Im going to bed goodnight.

Sana turns her light off and goes to bed. Nakku thinks about Sana's words and goes to sleep as well with thousands thoughts on her mind.

.....

New Years Party

A hall in the university is fully decorated with red and white balloons. There are white curtains flying all around and dim light. Dutta, Baaji and Karan was sitting at the bar drinking cocktail and were quite bored as the music was slow and boring. And there were no girls around yet.

Baaji: Cha.. kya boring party hain ye.. These girls i tell you... they take so much time to get ready, by the time they here, the party would be finished.

Dutta: nautanki band kar

Karan: this is all because of you baaji..im stuck here because of your stupid kasam.

Baaji: im the best

Dutta: I think we are early

Karan: you think? WE ARE EARLY!

Baaji: ey bhai.. ek minute ke liye aap chup Nahin reh sakte kya?

Karan: yeh kitna batameez hogaya hain.

Baaji: Bhao.. dekhiye na..

Baaji stops on his track and stares at something. Karan and dutta looks at him and follows his eyes and sees Sana and Nakku walking in looking like 2 beautiful angels in red. *TaSha theme song* Dutta looks at her silver high heels... Her silky dress perfectly showing her curves, her neck with a simple silver necklace, her light pink lips, her beautiful green eyes with a little bit of kaajal and her long curly hair covering her arms and back. Dutta was mesmerized by her beauty. He was lost into those eyes and couldn't take his eyes off her.

Same goes for Baaji who was drooling over Sana. Sana wore red heels, silky dress with diamonds and straight hair. Baaji looked at her as if he wanted to hide her from everyone else.

Karan was dumbstruck. He couldn't take his eyes off sana but he had to. He turned around looking the other way and wiped his tears silently before anyone could see him. But Dutta and Baaji didn't notice as they were both lost into another world.

Sana and Nakku walked straight upto baaji who was sitting next to dutta. TaSha exchanged glances and Nakku hugged baaji and then Sana hugged baaji. Nakku stood infront of Dutta looking at baaji and talking. *TaSha Theme Song* Dutta looks at from the corner of his eyes... He scans her from head to toe again because she's closer. His eyes falls on Nakku's cleavage and Dutta looks down embarrassed. Nakku looks at him from the corner of her eyes as well and looks down shyly figetting with her ring.

More and more people starts coming to the party and then the loud music start playing. Baaji, Sana, Nakku, Dutta and Karan goes over to a table and sits down. Baaji sits next to sana and TaSha sits opposite each other. Karan sits next to Dutta.

Sana: chalo dance karte hain

Baaji: eyy Sana.. pagal ho... you just came from hospital remember? Ya tub hi ghajini ki tara short term memory loss?

Sana: baaji pleaseeee

Baaji: theek hain chal... lekin over excited mat hona.

Sana pulls baaji to the dance floor and they start dancing to the fast music. Karan looks at them and clenches his fist under the table; he's not able to bear the pain. He gets up and goes to the bar. He starts drinking. Nakku and Dutta are the only ones left on the table and there's a candle in the middle disturbing Dutta's view. Nakku looks around and smiles at Baaji and Sana dancing. Dutta moves his chair a little bit to see Nakku properly. "She is beautiful" he thought.

The music stops out of a sudden. Everyone stops dancing and looks around. The DJ requests everyone to come on the dance floor with a partner as he will play a slow song.

TaSha looks at each other and then around. Baaji comes to them and pulls both of them to the dance floor.

Kuchh Khaas Hai Kuchh Paas Hai, Kuchh Ajanabi Ehsaas Hai

TaSha and JiNa stands infront of each other looking at each other

Kuchh Duriyaan Nazdikiyaan, Kuchh Hans Padi Tanhaayiyaan

Dutta puts his hand out infront of Nakku, She puts her hand in his looking in his eyes.

Kya Yeh Khumaar Hai, Kya Aitbaar Hai

Baaji pulls Sana by her waist and holds her hand

Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad

TaSha starts swaying to the music slowly, His one hand on her waist holding her close and the other holding her hand.

Kya Yeh Bahaar Hai, Kya Intjaar Hai

Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad

Sana puts both her hands around Baaji's neck and moves to the music slowly and baaji puts both his hands down on her waist.

Kuchh Saanz Hai.., Jaage Se Jo Kal Soye

Alfaaz Hai.., Chup Se Nashe Mein Khoye

TaSha eyelock

Nazar Hi Samjhaaye, Yeh Guftgu Saari..

Koyi Aarju Mein Hai, Angadaayi Pyaari..

Dutta twirls Nakku around and pulls her back

Kya Yeh Khumaar Hai, Kya Aitbaar Hai

Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad

Baaji/Sana eyelock and leans leans in and kisses her forehead leaving sana shocked again

Na Inkaar Hai, Na Ikraar Hai

Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad

Dutta turns Nakku and hugs her from the back and moves slowly with the flow of the music. Their fingers intertwined and his head on her shoulder resting.

Kehna Hi Kya.., Tera Dakhal Na Koyi

Dil Ko Dikha.., Dil Ki Shakal Ka Koyi

Nakku walks out to be pulled by Dutta; she twirls and ends up in his arm. He traces her face and twirls her again

Dil Se Bhi Meri, Ik Shart Yeh Aisi..

Laage Jeet Si Mujhako, Yeh Haar Hai Kaisi..

Baaji puts Sana's hair behind her ears and slowly traces down her arms and pulls her closer. Sana closes her eyes and enjoys the feeling

Kyun Yeh Pukaar Hai, Kyun Bekaraar Hai

Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad

Dutta/Nakku in each other's arm moving slowly while Nakku thinks of her vision of Dutta. She looks at him looking at her with passion. She looks down shyly.

Jaadu Sawaar Hai, Na Ikhtiyaar Hai

Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad

Baaji leaves Sana in the middle of the dance and she feels sad looking at him go.

Pyaar Hai Shaayad

Kuchh Khaas Hai Kuchh Paas Hai, Kuchh Ajanabi Ehsaas Hai..

TaSha hugs each other and moves slowly with their eyes closed and lost into the music. Sana sees them and smiles

Pyaar Hai Shaayad, Pyaar Hai Shaayad, Yahi

*Song finishes*

Loud music comes back on and TaSha comes back to their senses. They both feel embarrassed about hugging each other. Nakku quickly goes to sit down and Dutta goes to the bar where Karan is drinking. Dutta looks at Nakku and she's stealing glances too. Dutta smiles. Sana stands in a corner thinking baaji just left her on the dance floor and went when suddenly all the lights goes off. Everyone starts murmuring and then one headlight goes onto Baaji who is standing in the middle of the dance floor with a mike. Everyone looks at him.

Baaji : Im sorry everyone, but i have to do this. He walks up to sana with the headlight following his every move and grabs her hand. He slowly leads her to the dance floor and they both stand in the middle. Sana looks on confused. Baaji lets go of her hand.

Baaji *in the mike* : I never took anything seriously in life, everything was a joke and i thought what's the point being serious when life is short, but someone changed me. Someone who now means the whole world to me. I never looked at her that way. She was just a friend. But then i don't know what happened and i felt scared when i thought i was going to lose her. My life came crumbling down when she was fighting between life and death. *takes a deep breath* ..Sana.. I know i don't deserve you, I'm not worthy of you but i will try my best to keep you happy. I can't say i will always keep you happy but I will be there sharing the happiness and sadness with you. I will wipe your tears whenever you cry, I will feed you ice cream everyday *laughs softly while tears tracing its way down his cheeks* ... When you were in hospital, my heart felt empty, my life felt incomplete. I don't want to lose you Sana. I want to be with you, stand by you, protect you. Because I Love You. *Sana's tears couldn't stop itself* .. I really Love you. *Baaji goes on his knees and holds his hands out to Sana* Will you be mine? Will you let me fulfil all your dreams? Will you let me stand by you forever?"

Sana was shocked, happy and emotional. She couldn't understand what she was feeling. She slowly placed her hand into his, Baaji stood up and Sana hugged him. "I Love You too" She whispers in his ears.. Baaji smiled and hugged her tighter running his hand through her hair. Everyone claps for them. Karan leaves the place sadly without anyone noticing him. Nakku stands up happily and claps.. she's glad that FINALLY Sana got her love. She looks at dutta who is really happy for his brother. He looks at her and caught her looking at him but Dutta smiles.

Precap - Baaji and sana leaves the party and goes out. Dutta offers to drop Nakku to her room. It starts raining. TaSha takes shelter under a tree. There's a thunderstorm and lightning. Nakku hugs Dutta tightly. TaSha's eyelock and then ......

On the other side, Baaji and Sana are in a garden, in each other's arm enjoying the rain.

I know i know it's pretty long.. Loool i hope you didn't get bored... Now that my update is long. I want a long comment. Loool yes im greedy for comments. Please press the like button as well if you liked it.

Edited by Sophia21 - 14 years ago
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Very very good ...But Karan nd Vivian ...Baby in reality Vivian looks like a chick ....I actually walked past that guy when saw him ...till someone told me it was him

But Sana nd Baji ....wah wah ... I like it ....So sweet .

Dutta nd Naku ...Nio words to expalin ..like always ... muah ...Love the dance squence ....love the hug ..love the fact she was sleeping on his shoulders ..Infact i love everything ....now I want to see them in action .. 😉😳

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