New FF: Ek Ajnabee Part22.Pg78 (28.03)

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Ek Ajnabee

Character Sketch;

Dutta Sreeram Patil
Nakusha Sharma
BaajiRao Patil
Sana Saxena
Karan Malhotra
Rocky Varma
Tanya Mehra
Kritika Patil
Part 1
20 years old Dutta sitting on his laptop chatting away with his friends like always, this is his daily routine after college. His ID is stranger20 and his usual buddy MsCutie19 always talk. They grew fond of each other in no time. He knows everything about MsCutie19 but he doesn't know her real name. As soon as Dutta gets home, he takes his shower and then eats his snack while chatting to his friends. MsCutie19 is a girl with ambitions and dreams. She wants to be a doctor and she's also great at painting.

During school time, Dutta is on his blackberry chatting away with this girl. He doesn't know what it was that always made him chat to her. And the same goes for her. She couldn't keep herself away from him.

Dutta is an A* student in all his subjects, he is cool and popular. He had his own boy gang and he was the captain of the football team in university. Everyone wants to be like him and every girl wants to be with him.

"Nakusha" shouted Sana while banging on the door. Nakusha was a pretty girl who studies in the same university as dutta. She is very quiet but can be rude to people who gets rude to her. She lives in the university campus and studies Chemistry and Biology. Nakusha isn't popular; she's a normal girl who likes her books. Even though she studies a lot, she also finds time to chat online. She has only 2 chat buddies; Sana and Stranger20 none other than Dutta.

But she doesn't know that Dutta was the person she chats to online. She knows him because he's popular but they don't talk. She tells Stranger20 everything even thought she never met him but she felt a strong bond that ties them together.

"Wait Yaar, I'm opening" Nakusha said opening the door for Sana. Sana rushed in and put her books on her bed. She shares the room with Nakusha in the campus.

Sana: Nakku, what are you doing? Let's go yaar.

Nakku: Nahin, you go. I will join you later

Sana: why? You're talking to that boy again?

Nakku: what to do yaar? I love talking to him

Sana: Don't tell me you're in love?

Nakku: no ofcourse not... I have never seen him but he's so sweet.

Sana: enough of Mr Stranger lets go. It's Sunday and you're sitting here. How boring

Nakku: fine, let's go.

Nakku and Sana walking near the football pitch when the ball hits Sana hard on the shoulder. Sana gets annoyed and holds the ball. Karan comes there running.

Karan: Give me the ball

Sana: NO. First say sorry

Karan: Hey Just give the ball ok

Sana: You either say sorry and get the ball over wise i throw it in the bin

Karan: You don't have the guts to do that

Sana: Oh really... Watch ME!

Nakku: Sana, just give it to him

Karan: Exactly. By the way what's your name?

Nakku: Nakusha

Karan: Hi, I'm karan

Nakku: Hi

Karan: Sana Just give me my ball okay

Sana: Don't say my beautiful name with your stupid mouth understood?

Karan grabs the ball from her hands and walks away with a smirk. Sana gets angry and goes behind him but Nakku stops her.

Nakku: Let it be...Let's go

Sana: Don't you find him irritating? He thinks he's all that just because he is Dutta's friend.

Nakku: He's dutta's friend?

Sana: Yes, Best friend.. More like Gay friend

Nakku laughs and they both go to the cafe. Nakku sits down at a table while Sana gets the drinks. Sana sits opposite Nakku and puts Nakku's drink infront of her.

Nakku: thank you

Sana: OMG how many times do i have to say? No sorry and No Thank you in friendship

Nakku: ok sorry

Sana: sorry?

Nakku: ok baba i won't do it again..

Nakku is chatting to MrStranger20 on her phone while Sana is talking away not realising the Nakku was lost in her phone.

Sana: ok?

Nakku: huh?

Sana: you didn't hear what i just said?

Nakku: ehh not really

Sana: Nakku... nowadays you're always talking to that boy. Just tell him to meet you.

Nakku: NO!

Sana: why not? He knows everything about you, you know everything about him but you don't know each other's name. That's plain stupid

Nakku: I know. But..

Sana: but what?

Nakku: I don't know.

Sana: ask him which university he goes to!

Nakku: great idea. Wait let me ask him

Chat convo

MsCutie19 - Hey stranger, I want to ask you something

Stranger20 - Go ahead

MsCutie19 - Which university do you go to?

Stranger20 - University of Mumbai, you?

MsCutie19 - Mumbai? Same!

Stranger20 - What? Wait, you stand in campus?

MsCutie19 - Yeah, you?

Stranger20 - Same. That means we know each other

MsCutie19 - Don't know. But maybe we have seen each other.

Stranger20 - What's your name?

MsCutie19 - Nope, i won't tell you my name and i don't want to know yours. If we are destined to meet then we will.

Stranger20 - True. Okay then. We will see how and when we meet each other.

MsCutie19 - Right. I will chat to you later, bye

Stranger20 - Bye

Nakku: OMG OMG OMG

Sana: what's wrong?

Nakku: he goes to this uni itself.. i can't believe it

Sana: WHAT??

Nakku: yeah he said University of Mumbai

Sana: That's so cool. Your chat buddy in the same university and you never knew.

Nakku: even i can't believe it

Sana: then you should meet him

Nakku: no. If we are destined to meet then we will.

Sana: what kind of madness is it Nakku? Common yaar.

Nakku: forget it. We will meet someday, i know it.

Nakku stirs her drink and starts drinking and change the subject.

On the other side, Dutta is sitting on the bench in the football pitch looking at his phone. He can't believe the girl he's been talking to for months is in the same university as him. He smiles and puts his phone in his bag. Karan comes running to him.

Karan: what's wrong dude? Come let's have another match

Dutta: yeah lets go

Karan: are you okay?

Dutta: yes perfect... Common everyone let's play

Dutta and Karan with the other players start their game. Nakku and Sana walks past again and Karan sees Sana. He taps Dutta on his shoulder and points at Sana. Sana also sees Karan and starts fuming up. She changes her direction and was about to go to the football pitch but Nakku stopped her. Sana and Nakku looks at Dutta and Karan.

For the first time Dutta looks at Nakku, he has seen her around so many times but never really looked at her. Their eyes met for the first time. Dutta and Nakku share an eyelock while Karan and Sana looks at each other hatefully. Sana drags Nakku away by her arm cursing Karan but Nakku looks back at dutta who is still looking at her and ignoring Karan.

Precap - Dutta and Nakku bumps into each other.

Well i know i have 2 other FFs running but i had this in mind so i penned it down. Please Comment and press 'Like' if you like it.
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>Sophia<
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Edited by Sophia21 - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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INDEX

Part 1 - Page 1
Part 2 - Page 4
Part 3 - Page 7
Part 4 - Page 11
Part 5 - Page 13
Part 6 - Page 16
Part 7 - Page 19
Part 8 - Page 22
Part 9 - Page 25
Part 10 - Page 27
Part 11 - Page 30
Part 12 - Page 34
Part 13 - Page 38
Promo - Page 40
Part 14 - Page 42
Part 15 - Page 44
Part 16 - Page 49
Part 17 - Page 52
Part 18 - Page 55
Part 19 - Page 57
Promo - Page 59
Part 20 - Page 68
Part 21 - Page 70
Promo - Page 75
Part 22 - Page 78
Edited by Sophia21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great work dear....
Waiting for next part :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey sophie Congrats yaar for starting 3rd FF👍🏼 🤗....Awesome yaar ....College Romance something different ....loved it ....dutta and naku chatting buddies...wow....looking for forward fo this story ...u intorduce karan and sana as well....can i pretend baaji as karan 😆.or u have someone else in mind ....precap looks reallly interesting ..pls jaldi update karna....take care and see ya around.....thanx for the PM....👏👍🏼🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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no word to say such a wonderful way the story is begin👏. i love it every bit.keep writing waiting for the next update. thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats dear..................wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! amazing part1............i loved it ................ dutta n nakku are in same uni n they were online friends .................. i love the story............update soon.............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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reserved😊,,,,,,,
Awesome sophie...3rd FF👏👏👏great going...keep it up👍🏼...
wow...college romance...mumbai universty🥳...
thnk god...no no no ...thnk sophie...no FR...no...mrg yet...😆...joke's apart...
really....stranger20 n mscutie19...❤️❤️❤️..looking very interesting...looking forward to ur ff...
sana n karan...plz mention,,,,kise imagine kare😍...😆😆😆..hmm baaji😆
eyelock😍...n so amazing precap 😍
thnx 4 pm🤗
Edited by sonee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow sophie.....dutta and Nakku students...well this is somethng i am luking forward to....
Update fast...and pm me ..i know u will.lol. Gr8 job.keep up the gud work...👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg Sophia
hats off for u
ur writuing 3 FF
entirely different from each other .
wow girl
their is alot of talent in ur upper chamber
love this FF
very high skool :P
im loving it :P


Edited by kiran255 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow sophie..third story
great work hun..loved this part
love the precap..waiting for the next part

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