New FF - Just Another Love Story(Updt Chpt 9 pg22) - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: sonee

ohhh hooo artist..... very well written..... loved it....

not going through details sowee .... aaammmm just enjoyed it alot.......

lovely mithai⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏





Thanks Sonee okay will do fopr the tym being but kabhi kabhi detailed reviews bhi dena please😳
updates pretty soon
dil thamke byetho
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: swati2008

awesome update.......so JiSha are schoolmates......cool.......n who's that man.......must be my Dutta.....tall strong handsome.......just like Mills n Boons hero........aur kaun ho sakta hai.......kahan milega mujhe koi aisa........😳........update soon.......

Thank you sssooooooo much Swati😳
yes JiSha are schoolmates
they are like best a pals
haan that man is indeed Dutta
not your s though😳😆😛
he is only Naku's 😆
well Mills & Boons hein ki nahi nahi pata coz i have hardly induldged in M&B ever in mylife till date
I have never been too much of a romance reader ever 😳
pata nahi kaha se yeh Romance Novel creative writing mein participate karne ka dil huya tha😆
update will be pretty soon
n will surely pm u
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: prettywoman

Great beginning.. and wow, what an introduction scene for Dutta!!! Amazing.. could just picture it in my head.. looks like unlike in the show, here nakku-baaji are childhood friends!

aaawwwww Thank you so much for liking the introduction of Dutta😳😃
yeah in my original story the girl had a best frnd who was a boy
n in this case for Naku who cud be a better partner in crime for her than Baji😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: darkchoco

nice mithai...👍🏼

must say that you were q genius even in school...👏great

geeesssss thanks Bella
u really think so????😳
aaawwwww
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
is this Dutta you were describing , if so then finally they have met and there meeting will also have some dialogue. keep up the great work, fantastic writing. 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
Hey mithai thanx for the update and PM 🤗wow so naku and baaji childhood friends that really sweet...bechari naku she is really nervous and uppar se baaji pulling her leg😆...OMG dutta"s intro is rocking.. ur really awesome yaar.can"t wait for the nxt part ...pls jaldi update karna....take care and see ya around 👍🏼👏🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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FINALLYyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.......................
Finally I read your FF........................
Firstly,
Prologue : SUPERBBBBBBBBBBBBBBbb.........................You have described so well that I felt like reading the Novel..........Thx a ton dear... ...............You have a very good ENGLISH unlike me........I know I am too bad in sentence making.....Yet do it............... ..So,Nakku-Leela-Roops are room mates & NAkku Tomboy?????????????????????? ..................... ........................
Part 1 : Okay.............Baaji............"Band bajaoying"....................wah wah..................... .................
Nakku bumped to Dutta???????????PLzzzzzzzzzz...........say its Dutta???????????????
OH god..........I cant wait to see Dutta..........I wanna know how you describe my Dutta.................
Well,I am not that lover of English Novels...........I was waiting it to be in Hindi..............Thats ok dear.........Will catch it up.............. ..........................
Thx a lot for this update & PM............Waiting for the next.................



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Posted: 14 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: meriyaar

is this Dutta you were describing ,

Yes darling it is indeed Dutta who else😳
if so then finally they have met
they have to meet varna story aagey keise jayega???😉
and there meeting will also have some dialogue.
eeerrrrrmmmm😕 I am afraid not yet
meriy story line bhi kucch CVs jaise hein itniy jaldi kucch bhi nahi😳😛😆
zara sabr karo😳
keep up the great work, fantastic writing. 👏
geeeessss Thanks 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: suhana19

Hey mithai thanx for the update and PM 🤗

aaawwwww you are most welcomed🤗
wow so naku and baaji childhood friends that really sweet...bechari naku she is really nervous and uppar se baaji pulling her leg😆...
yes Naku was indeed nervous bfr the performance
mujhse poocch kitniy nervous tthiy
mujhse accha yeh tow koi nahi jaan sakta hein😉
this incidence happened in my life and so i incorporated it😆
oooohhhh dont think Baji is pulling her leg unnecessarily😕
he means all the goodness for his dear old frnd😳
OMG dutta"s intro is rocking.. ur really awesome yaar.
aaawwwww Thanks
of course this incidence dint happen in my life
it was just a figment of my imagination😳😆
can"t wait for the nxt part ...pls jaldi update karna
sabr karo next updatye is pretty soon
....take care and see ya around 👍🏼👏🤗
so do u darling mwah🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kateleode

FINALLYyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.......................

Finally I read your FF........................
Firstly,
Prologue : SUPERBBBBBBBBBBBBBBbb.........................You have described so well that I felt like reading the Novel..........Thx a ton dear... ...............You have a very good ENGLISH unlike me........I know I am too bad in sentence making.....Yet do it............... ..So,Nakku-Leela-Roops are room mates & NAkku Tomboy?????????????????????? ..................... ........................
Part 1 : Okay.............Baaji............"Band bajaoying"....................wah wah..................... .................
Nakku bumped to Dutta???????????PLzzzzzzzzzz...........say its Dutta???????????????
OH god..........I cant wait to see Dutta..........I wanna know how you describe my Dutta.................
Well,I am not that lover of English Novels...........I was waiting it to be in Hindi..............Thats ok dear.........Will catch it up.............. ..........................
Thx a lot for this update & PM............Waiting for the next.................



aaawwwww Saki dear love you sooooooo much for such a detailed reply
well yes it our own gadha the great😆
dont worry i will defo include hindi as well as some bong dialogues which i will defo translate dont worry but im sorry im more comfy with English
hey but your English is pretty good i read your FF n its one a the best😳

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