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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
Hey frnds I am back with the next chapter
I hope you will enjoy this as much as the earlier parts
It might seem a little dragging but it is essentially important
and besides it is adopted from a novel😳
Sowwweeeeee for being dragging
Chapter 2
The screeching sound of a car brought Naku back to her senses. She flipped her head and saw the familiar silver coloured SUV right outside the main gate. She quickly and hastily picked up her books and her bag and made a run for it. She thought that she heard a low rumbling of thunder, very close to her ears, while picking up her belongings.

Did the man just say sorry to her .... she wondered, but her chain of thoughts were cut short by the honking of the horn. She ran down the flight of stairs, crossed the car from the front and opened the door to the front passenger seat ' her favourite place in a car. All this while the stranger, stood at the top of the stairs watching, rather monitoring Naku, till she disappeared inside the SUV.

The afternoon was rather bustling for Naku. After the fateful encounter with the strange man, that Naku restrained herself from thinking about, she had a wonderful lunch. The three girls gathered around at Baji's old Alipore apartment, which Naku frequented during her high school days.

Earlier the apartment used to be crowded with occupants, like Baji's father, Mr. Ashish Patil, a well known criminal lawyer by profession, but an equally jovial person, whose laughter could even seer the sky; Baji's mother Mrs. Sahana Patil, a school teacher by profession, a very well kept lady, who mostly kept busy reading with her spects on her nose; Rhye ' Baji's little sister, who is six years younger to him and was mostly spotted at the balcony, giggling over the cordless phone and Baji in his most unkempt room strumming his guitar; or sometimes working hard on turning poor Rhye's life into a pure living hell.

Then again, things change rapidly, and so it did even for the Patil household. During Baji's final year in law college , his mother got transferred to a convent in Darjeeling. As per her job's demand she had to move base and took Rhye along with her. Mr. Patil of course could not afford to shift, his law firm and practice required him so he remained in the city. Baji too had to remain back, because he had his college to attend.

It was the summer three years back, when Baji paid a surprise visit to his parents on their 30th marriage anniversary. Mr. Patil was already on a vacation to Darjeeling, they
had no idea that Baji would drop in. Before Baji could board the train to Darjeeling, Naku had handed him over with a pair of woollen slippers for Rhye, the recipe of her special brownie fudge, enclosed in an envelope for Mrs. Patil, and a bottle of Mr. Patil's favourite scotch. Those were her gifts. She could still remember Baji's gobsmacked face , when he was asked to hand over the gifts to them. He had asked "What's in for me?" and Naku had promptly replied handing over a two rupees coin to him "Two rupees as delivery charge."
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Edited by princessmithai - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
Loved it...Its building up the pace and essence of the plot..You have won some award for this ,right? you deserved it girl. Khub bhalo lagje, chaliye jao..🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Keep writing Mithai......Poor Baaji actually having a family seems so strange, but kind of heart-warming, too.

Now I'm just waiting for Tasha's heart-to-heart-meeting as Anna would say...😆...I'm sure you'll make it a good one.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey mithai thanx for the update and PM 🤗...Awww i really loved that baaji has a family in ur FF ...that is really sweet...now i really wanna see tasha meeting ...hopefully soon ...i know u will make there first meeting really special 😍...now eagerly waiting for the nxt part ..pls update soon ...take care and see ya around👍🏼👏🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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a lovely update, a wonderful story. keep writing thanks for pm. two rs as delivery charge very nice. 👏plz update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66

wookkkay everyone here comes the next chapter they are kinda small

i dint wanto to drag too much with the building up of the past
past is required so i have kinda incoporated a chapter or two in between
i hope you enjoy this
TaSha heart to heart will be a lil late but face to face will be soon
Enjoy😉
Chapter 3
Just a month after the celebration of his parents' anniversary, his father passed away. He had had a heart failure. His mother went back to Darjeeling after the funeral and remained there. She hardly even tried for a transfer back to Kolkata. It was probably because she felt too lonely in the same old apartment. Riya moved to Delhi for her higher studies and Baji was in New Orleansfor a year pursuing his masters.

As long as Baji was in the US, their Alipore apartment was locked up and the keys were given to Naku's parents. Naku sometimes, once in a blue moon visited the lonely well furnished apartment, when she used to feel like it. Most of the time it remained shut, till a couple of years ago when Baji got back. So many little memories spun in the air of that Alipore apartment for both Naku and Baji. So when Baji made that eagerly awaited big hike in his profession, that he was looking forward to, there was no better place to celebrate than the old apartment, that bore the witness to two generations.

A marine lawyer by profession, Baji finally managed to get the tender of a leading shipping and petrochemical firm. His law firm has won over the contract of the company's overseas legal advisor, the sole owner to which was some big business tycoon from Mumbai. Naku had no interest in business making big bucks, and the bigger the business, the lesser was her interest; a major reason that justified her present live in condition.
She never liked too much of big bucks, something that she used to encounter while living with her parents. A descendant of a family of bullion merchants, Naku's mind never grew out of herself dependant attitude. Then again her parents, although possessive and extra protective of her, were the people who encouraged her to be self dependant. Naku's father Mr. Shashikant Chauhan was a bullion merchant dealing in diamonds. Her mother Mrs. Meenakshi Chauhan, though was a housewife initially, grew a business of curio and art collection. She was also an excellent writer, and would have been a huge success if she pursued it.

Naku had had her share of watching the high and mighty, had the experience of moving around amongst the rich and the famous; ever since her earliest childhood. Things and pleasure that people worked hard to achieve, Naku inherited them. Not that she was ungrateful, but she was wise; and she knew well enough, that her parents and their views and teachings made her what she is. She learned very young in her life the essence of being humble and the details of power which is tagged with responsibilities. On one hand Naku was not consumed and blinded by the riches she inherited, and on the other, she took great pride in carrying the lineage of the family she belonged to. At times people misunderstood her maturity for pride, but the ones near her knew her too well that she was eligible of any other Abstract Noun but Pride.

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Edited by princessmithai - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
hey intro for baji na ,it's nice dear n nakku kidding baji ,,,,,,,,,,,,,hmm........good friends na ..........
all those things r nice........


but where is Our Hero "dutta", i'm waiting for his intro............


i want say one thing yaar........in ur FF , all the character's r well educted n good in nature not like PN people (kala,AS,leela ,suds)😆, i'm soo happy abt it...........

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Again nice part dear, just now i finished baji's intro then u mean while post nakku's intro,...........hmm.......... soooooooo sweat intro for nakku ,it's really very smooth i'm really impressed abt it,...........😉


wat abt my dear dutta,,,,,,,,,,sorry.........sorry.......😆.our dutta..................

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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
very nice, very smooth story i love it every bit, update soon, so when is datta is going to come in nakku life. 😉. update fast i am waiting for it. keep writing very well written.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow princes awsome dear............Bas abb jaldi se heart t heart meetng karaa dow tash kii😆...........OMG........... love tsha...........kaash ltl cvs showed them together soon............😊

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