OS: Naku - 'I do!' Pt 3 - Pg 15 - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Made4eachother


"Jab 'Aayi Bolti' baatoan mein woh hanste the, rote the, tab se unse pyaar kiya,

Jab mere haath kaa khaake unkaa peth bhartaa tha, tab se unse pyaar kiya,

Jab chup chup ke aadhi raatoan mein, unhe dekhaa karti thi, tab se unse pyaar kiya,

Jab mere kehne pe woh daaroo nahi choote the, tab se unse pyaar kiyaa,

Ab toh khud bhi bhool chuki hoon, kab se unse pyaar kiya,

Bus itnaa hi keh sakti hoon, sirf unse hi pyaar kiya" ❤️ (Awesome lines DD!!!) - 👏

Lovely yaar.....just lovely.... you left me speechless over here...!!!





For Dutta and Naku, others had ceased to exist. It was just the two in the room! Naku starts moving forward gradually towards him, love in her eyes, stride determined.
The use of these pictures were just out-of-the worls amazing....!!!!





"Jab woh mujhe dekte hain....mujhe lagta hai Kaala rang sab se sundar rang hai...(pauses again) 'Jalan hoti hai kaale rang se...,

Jab woh meraa haath pakdte hain, mujhe lagtaa hai ki ab mein akeli nahi hai',

Jab woh meraa naam lete hain, Naku'(pause)'. toh kabhie Nakusha, mujhe lagtaa hai mein zindaa ho gayi hai'

Jab woh mere liye ladte hain, mujhe lagta hai mein shehzaadi hai...Shehzaada aaya aur mujhe palkoan mein beethaa ke le gaya,

Jab woh mujhe bolte hain ki woh mujhse shaadi karna chahte hain, mujhe lagtaa hai ki mein ab adhoori nahi rahi..."

She stops behind Dutta and Dutta turns back, tears playing at the corner of his eyes. He looks at Naku in shock and awe. He lets out a very slight whisper, "Nakuuuuu".

Naku looks at him lovingly, crying -

"Mein aapse bahut pyaar karti hai...Yeh jhooth nahi hai...Pehle bhi karti thi, aaj bhi karti hai, aur aage bhi karti rahegi.....❤️

Iss pyaar ki wajah se hi Darti hai, darti hai, ki aapko paane ke baad kho na doon..." ❤️❤️❤️

Dutta closes his eyes. He absorbs every word of the confession.
"Aapko paane ka dar hai, kyun ki aage khone ka dar hai....

aapke paas aane kaa dar hai, kyun ki kal door jaane ka dar hai......

aapko zindagi dikhaane ka dar hai, kyunki aapki zindagi ko thookraane ka dar hai....

Aapko pyaar karne ka dar hai, kyunki aapse woh pyaar waapis lene ka dar hai...

Aapse aapki mohabbat paane ka dar hai, kyun ki kal woh mohabbat mujhse cheen jaane ka dar hai...

Aapka dookh jeeti hai har pal, ab nahi dekh sakti....." ❤️

i just LOVED the pic selections in this part....and the dialogues....u really deserve a standing ovation...!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏


Dancingdoll....wat can i say...????? this OS completely has left me in an awe...!!...

please update soon...!!!!!

Edited by Mstvaddicted - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
It was fabulous DD ...⭐️⭐️
Naku confession part bought tears to my eyes ....it was so beautifully written ...
Ur a genius ., a brilliant writer .....👏👏
hum to kuch bhi nahi tumhare saamne...😆
just as much as I enjoy reading ur eLS .... I loved reading ur OS...
nw w8ing 4 the 3rd part ...

& if possible start a FF too ...😉
Edited by Dew-drop - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
@ DD - I m speechless by your Part 2 OS!!! Its outstanding..LOVED it yaar!!🤗

The dialogues, the way u picturised everything n the perfect pics to show the emotions..uff..it took my heart away!!! ❤️

My most fav dialogues :


When Dutta says : "Kya mein itnaa buraa hoon Baaji? Mein kissi ki mohabbat ke laayak nahi kya Baaji? - oh man!!!..my heart went to Dutta..i could feel the pain, hurt n anguish of Dutta n was almost in tears!!!!😭

N Nakku's heart wrenching dialogues, u wont believe i felt choked with tears in my throat, ki koi kissi se itna pyar kaise kar sakta hai.....

"Jab 'Aayi Bolti' baatoan mein woh hanste the, rote the, tab se unse pyaar kiya,

Jab mere haath kaa khaake unkaa peth bhartaa tha, tab se unse pyaar kiya,

Jab chup chup ke aadhi raatoan mein, unhe dekhaa karti thi, tab se unse pyaar kiya,

Jab mere kehne pe woh daaroo nahi choote the, tab se unse pyaar kiyaa,

Ab toh khud bhi bhool chuki hoon, kab se unse pyaar kiya,

Bus itnaa hi keh sakti hoon, sirf unse hi pyaar kiya"
- loved everything abt this one.

.but the last 2 lines..were killer dialogues girl!!!!👏...n i so wish Naku says somehting likes this to Dutta 2mrw (she has always open abt her feelings..but I want Dutta to hear this n see the honesty n intensity of her love) - I bow to u for coming up with something like this one..


DD - I really hope we get to see something like the coming few episodes...it has to be a heart to heart talk as in ur OS...

* bows to DD* \m/ - n big hug for u!!!🤗





Edited by Mstvaddicted - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
All I have to say is that you made me cry. I could actually feel their emotions and see this happening...and was just...touched... You did a wonderful job writing this out and I can't wait to read the last part!! You captured each essence of each character so well that I felt like I was reading an update from an episode. Awesome, just AWESOME!👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
OMG! DD...that was beautiful.😍
Par yeh kya...I thought Dutta will go out looking for her.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46

DD .... superb OS 👏

i too thought i was reading an update......
each n every dialogue is so beautifully written especially nakku's ..... n ur selection of pics r just perfect .....
hats off to u gal....... u r awesome......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
Tum! Loving it! But I have to admit, I am still down with a nasty cold and can't comment "right" right now. And as you know, I need some more time for the hindi parts as other members😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Eva-

Tum! Loving it! But I have to admit, I am still down with a nasty cold and can't comment "right" right now. And as you know, I need some more time for the hindi parts as other members😆

Eva, I am sorry...I knew it would be difficult for you to get the Hindi part.....but u see, I culdnt write this in English and still give the same effect......but for u, as soon as I finish the Part III, I will subtitle them in English, if you havent yet got the Hindi one!!
I am sorry HUM.....Missing u...u are not in the scene anymore....and cold??? why? u had icecream without your TUM? 😲
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

Eva, I am sorry...I knew it would be difficult for you to get the Hindi part.....but u see, I culdnt write this in English and still give the same effect......but for u, as soon as I finish the Part III, I will subtitle them in English, if you havent yet got the Hindi one!!
I am sorry HUM.....Missing u...u are not in the scene anymore....and cold??? why? u had icecream without your TUM? 😲



hey DD post the 3rd part waiting for it anxiously dear!😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: meghaparti



hey DD post the 3rd part waiting for it anxiously dear!😆

yawwwwwwwwnnnnnnn.....Just woke up Megha and the way my first movie is becoming a hit, I guess, I should forget my brunch et al and get on with Part III! 😆😆
Pakka, today...I guess in another 3 hrs.....I have already started penning it down! 😛

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