OS: Naku - 'I do!' Pt 3 - Pg 15 - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: spandana11

DD very well written great start hope same happens on Monday waiting for next part

Hey spandy...Thanks honey!!!...I too want something like this on Monday.....Part II is up...do read it! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ccolaco

Wowwww DD its amzing. me waiting for next part

Thanks Crystal....2nd part is up...Do let me know what u felt?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: MishalLeoSheeba

wow Yaar this was superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb.............awsome love it sooooooooooooooooooo much plzzzzzzzzz pm me whenever u write anything dear!..............Loved it a lotttttttttttttt..........................




oh thanku so much Sheeba!! I am not a pro like you in OS and FFs but tried it first time bcoz I wanted something like this on Monday!!
Part II is up...let me know your comments! 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mstvaddicted

Awesome OS did!!! Me too felt i was actualy seeing the show..n so agree tht there was a lot of Salmanish element true to it!!

n loved some of the dailogues:

Jab tune koi shart nahi rakhi ki woh bhi tujhse pyaar kare toh aaj jab woh tujhse pyaar kartaa hai, aaj jab tere sachchai batane ka time aa gaya hai, toh aaj kyun shart rakh rahi hai? Kyun dar rahi hai apne ussi pyaar se jis mein shart nahi thi? Jahaan shart hoti hai, wahaan dar hota hai. Woh chaahe kaise bhi react kare, teri Mohabat to tere saath hi rahegi na. Woh to koi cheen nahi saktaa na?

So so agree with it...Nakku ko ab nai darna chahiye..i hope aise hi kuch ho jaaye kal!!! kal kab aayega....i hv never waited fr a monday..like m doing this monday....

awwwwwwwwwww................phew! *sighs*
Finally someone comments on my dialogues....Thats the USP of my OS ad I wanted to now what u all felt about it...
u liked this one....awwwwwwwwwwww.......thanku....I think this is what Naku shld think....this is how her love has been....I too loved it......
tell me what u think of Part II....which one did u like the best or wuld u have wanted some thing of ur own?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Guys...Now, I need to sleep....Part III would be tomorrow....Pakka!! Love u all for liking it so much....Mwah! 🤗
will catch up tomorrow on ur commnts on part II!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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"Jab 'Aayi Bolti' baatoan mein woh hanste the, rote the, tab se unse pyaar kiya,

Jab mere haath kaa khaake unkaa peth bhartaa tha, tab se unse pyaar kiya,

Jab chup chup ke aadhi raatoan mein, unhe dekhaa karti thi, tab se unse pyaar kiya,

Jab mere kehne pe woh daaroo nahi choote the, tab se unse pyaar kiyaa,

Ab toh khud bhi bhool chuki hoon, kab se unse pyaar kiya,

Bus itnaa hi keh sakti hoon, sirf unse hi pyaar kiya" ❤️

Lovely yaar.....just lovely.... you left me speechless over here...!!!





For Dutta and Naku, others had ceased to exist. It was just the two in the room! Naku starts moving forward gradually towards him, love in her eyes, stride determined.
The use of these pictures were just out-of-the worls amazing....!!!!





"Jab woh mujhe dekte hain....mujhe lagta hai Kaala rang sab se sundar rang hai...(pauses again) 'Jalan hoti hai kaale rang se...,

Jab woh meraa haath pakdte hain, mujhe lagtaa hai ki ab mein akeli nahi hai',

Jab woh meraa naam lete hain, Naku'(pause)'. toh kabhie Nakusha, mujhe lagtaa hai mein zindaa ho gayi hai'

Jab woh mere liye ladte hain, mujhe lagta hai mein shehzaadi hai...Shehzaada aaya aur mujhe palkoan mein beethaa ke le gaya,

Jab woh mujhe bolte hain ki woh mujhse shaadi karna chahte hain, mujhe lagtaa hai ki mein ab adhoori nahi rahi..."

She stops behind Dutta and Dutta turns back, tears playing at the corner of his eyes. He looks at Naku in shock and awe. He lets out a very slight whisper, "Nakuuuuu".

Naku looks at him lovingly, crying -

"Mein aapse bahut pyaar karti hai...Yeh jhooth nahi hai...Pehle bhi karti thi, aaj bhi karti hai, aur aage bhi karti rahegi.....❤️

Iss pyaar ki wajah se hi Darti hai, darti hai, ki aapko paane ke baad kho na doon..." ❤️❤️❤️

Dutta closes his eyes. He absorbs every word of the confession.
"Aapko paane ka dar hai, kyun ki aage khone ka dar hai....

aapke paas aane kaa dar hai, kyun ki kal door jaane ka dar hai......

aapko zindagi dikhaane ka dar hai, kyunki aapki zindagi ko thookraane ka dar hai....

Aapko pyaar karne ka dar hai, kyunki aapse woh pyaar waapis lene ka dar hai...

Aapse aapki mohabbat paane ka dar hai, kyun ki kal woh mohabbat mujhse cheen jaane ka dar hai...

Aapka dookh jeeti hai har pal, ab nahi dekh sakti....." ❤️

i just LOVED the pic selections in this part....and the dialogues....u really deserve a standing ovation...!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏


Dancingdoll....wat can i say...????? this OS completely has left me in an awe...!!...

please update soon...!!!!!

Edited by Made4eachother - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Guys

just saw the precap of LTL for tommo[B]. They show Naku walking on the road , lost in her own thoughts and with tear in eyes . She walking in her own world , a vehicle is abt to dash her . Right then Sallu ( Mr Pandey's Police vehicle comes in time to stop the accident and then Sallu steps out .

This what Mr Pandey says to Naku : Happy Birthday , u wanted to commit suicide . Now celebrate ur birthday in jail for doing so . ( he means I think she got a new life or something )
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: scorpio10

Hi Guys

just saw the precap of LTL for tommo[B]. They show Naku walking on the road , lost in her own thoughts and with tear in eyes . She walking in her own world , a vehicle is abt to dash her . Right then Sallu ( Mr Pandey's Police vehicle comes in time to stop the accident and then Sallu steps out .

This what Mr Pandey says to Naku : Happy Birthday , u wanted to commit suicide . Now celebrate ur birthday in jail for doing so . ( he means I think she got a new life or something )





Hi scorpio...
never seen you befor here...!!! welcome to the forum..😊....
Thankyou for the information dear..bt it is already discussed in another thread...http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1478335
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

Did you catch all the two parts?



Ya was in a hurry that's why didnt comment much but now here it is:

Loved both part ! nakku's dialogues were so emotional,each word had its own feeling...really suited nakku's character ... great job 👏 didnt it take u lots of time to find such wonderfull dialogues ?!
Sallu's dialoque were gud as well...ek dum mast, I say 😆

Waitin for the next part ! 🤗
Edited by misssmily - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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This is truly amazing!
Wooow U gt talent! I really cant wait for the next partttt

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