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Posted: 14 years ago
πŸ˜†OMG DD u are awsum yaar kya story hay dhinchak πŸ˜† lovely update njoyd readng all three parts β­οΈπŸ‘β­οΈ
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Posted: 14 years ago
DD You clean-bowled all of us!!! This is the BEST FR I have read so far!! So true! So in-character!! The reactions of Dutta, Naku are so true to life!! I truly wish CVs borrows this FR (with your permission of course!) and show it EXACTLY like this!!! Lovely write-up!! Keep up the good-work!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dusk

πŸ˜†OMG DD u are awsum yaar kya story hay dhinchak πŸ˜† lovely update njoyd readng all three parts β­οΈπŸ‘β­οΈ

wow Nimmo.....I was surprised to see an update on this OS....πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†......Thanks a lot ....was my first attempt...and I am so glad u loved it,....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mozart66

DD You clean-bowled all of us!!! This is the BEST FR I have read so far!! So true! So in-character!! The reactions of Dutta, Naku are so true to life!! I truly wish CVs borrows this FR (with your permission of course!) and show it EXACTLY like this!!! Lovely write-up!! Keep up the good-work!!

Oh Thanks Mozart!!! I am seriously flattered bcoz this was my first attempt.....I am glad u loved it, even after its expiry!! πŸ˜†πŸ˜†....
Well, Its kinda expired now, bcoz, I dnt think they can take this FR now....Naku has moved too deep in the guilt zone, tht I dnt think they wuld show her so upright....but if they still do, I would be more than happy!! πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey DD...i read it before u start ur 2nd OS....but for comment i didnt found link........so thnkx 4 link
now abt ur dis OS...i'm just full fida on it.....each n evry dialouge was awesome n mindblowing sweety....n dat madhuri n srk style was simply superbbbbb😳😳😳,,,,, really best scene choiceπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘.....
yaar ye os maine miss kaise kiya😭
wen naaku cum back n dat dialouge....u made me cryyyyyyy sweetheart............
aapki pyar bari battonse mera dil bhar aaya aur fir aankhen bhar aayi😭😭😭......
n i had read dat its ur first FF n i thought...hw awesome writer ur first ball me hi sabko cleaned bowled kar diya.......πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Edited by sonee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sonee

Hey DD...i read it before u start ur 2nd OS....but for comment i didnt found link........so thnkx 4 link

now abt ur dis OS...i'm just full fida on it.....each n evry dialouge was awesome n mindblowing sweety....n dat madhuri n srk style was simply superbbbbb😳😳😳,,,,, really best scene choiceπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘.....
yaar ye os maine miss kaise kiya😭
wen naaku cum back n dat dialouge....u made me cryyyyyyy sweetheart............
aapki pyar bari battonse mera dil bhar aaya aur fir aankhen bhar aayi😭😭😭......
n i had read dat its ur first FF n i thought...hw awesome writer ur first ball me hi sabko cleaned bowled kar diya.......πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Hey soneee..... I am so glad u loved this OS...I somehow feel, I couldnt beat this OS, with my 2nd OS....This kinda set up high expectations tht I feel I didnt meet in my 2nd OS....
I hope my next parts match this......
I just loved writing each and every dialogue of this OS....thanks a lot Sonee!!!.....I am glad, this OS is still read!! 😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey dear,
I just read your OS _"-I do" and ..........I am AWED.It touched me to the core.Somethings are sooo beautiful that words fall short if I try to use them to praise it or describe it.I dont have words to praise it.Its simply too beautiful.
You know I am a very passionate person esp when it comes to creativity ( art,music,books ,movies,every form of creativity) and thats why I passionately looooove anything that moves me.And i believe that the beauty and greatness of a piece of art lies in its ability to move you in a way and intensity the writer intended it to.With utmost honesty and sincerity I want to tell you ....I LOVED EACH AND EVERY LINE OF IT.You are really talented.And best part of it was that you retained the essence of Dutta and Nakku.I could visualize those tears in their eyes,the pain,the slight smile ........each line you wrote was in flow and did justice to the essence of LTL .I sooooo wish that this was how things turned out in LTL.This OS is now close to my heart.You might be thinking I am going overboard with praise but honestly this is the intensity with which it affected me.
Please keep me informed about ANYTHING that you write in future.
SIMPLY LOVED IT.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sikkaisha

Hey dear,
I just read your OS _"-I do" and ..........I am AWED.It touched me to the core.Somethings are sooo beautiful that words fall short if I try to use them to praise it or describe it.I dont have words to praise it.Its simply too beautiful.
You know I am a very passionate person esp when it comes to creativity ( art,music,books ,movies,every form of creativity) and thats why I passionately looooove anything that moves me.And i believe that the beauty and greatness of a piece of art lies in its ability to move you in a way and intensity the writer intended it to.With utmost honesty and sincerity I want to tell you ....I LOVED EACH AND EVERY LINE OF IT.You are really talented.And best part of it was that you retained the essence of Dutta and Nakku.I could visualize those tears in their eyes,the pain,the slight smile ........each line you wrote was in flow and did justice to the essence of LTL .I sooooo wish that this was how things turned out in LTL.This OS is now close to my heart.You might be thinking I am going overboard with praise but honestly this is the intensity with which it affected me.
Please keep me informed about ANYTHING that you write in future.
SIMPLY LOVED IT.

Thanks Ishaaaaaaaaa!!
awwwwwwwwww.......u pasted the same thing.....so sweet...
but thanks a lot...Now,I will remember addign u in my listt.....kya karoon, bhoolakad hoon!! πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

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