OS: Naku - 'I do!' Pt 3 - Pg 15 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Made4eachother

Hi scorpio...
never seen you befor here...!!! welcome to the forum..😊....
Thankyou for the information dear..bt it is already discussed in another thread...http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1478335

Hi

I am new here . I help joining this forum ... I love LTL , damn good stuff and equally good actors . A pleasant break from the usual stuff . This is the first time I am seeing them in my dreams and thinking what happening next.

very well written DD.

Kash aisa hi ho. khaas kar ke 2nd part.

👏

DD

Very very beautifully written!!!👏

read both the parts........just awesome......loved every bit of it..........CP's dialogues are hilarious........n TaSha as usual rocking..........update soon........

kya baat hein sahi hein boss

For Part-I:

DD................out of the world...........kya dialoguez hai yaar.............mind blowing loved it............... 🤗 a big hug from me...........

Originally posted by: scorpio10

Hi

I am new here . I help joining this forum ... I love LTL , damn good stuff and equally good actors . A pleasant break from the usual stuff . This is the first time I am seeing them in my dreams and thinking what happening next.

i hope you have even more fun in the forum...!!!!😊

Thanks for the Pming me DD. My feedback is my reaction to each part as I read it:

Part I:
DD the dialogues are so well written. 👏
The comic touch to CP is very convincing, I'm expecting this type of dialect from him too. I can completely envision their meeting being like you have written.

The advice he gave was poignant and direct. He made sense of Naku's dilemma by simply telling her to not be afraid of telling the truth to him. As whatever his reaction will be, it'll not erase her feelings for him. Her love for him will flourish forever and with no expectations she need not fear rejection.

I hope with all my heart that the CVs have something this magnificent in store for us.

Thank you for showing us your insight into the concept of 'love'. I thoroughly enjoyed it.👍🏼

Part 2:
Arre Dutta is hurting himself physically by breaking the glass. He wants the pain of his exterior wounds to numb the pain inside. That is really heart-wrenching.

His hatred for all things love is back which is in-character as his inferiority complex is connected to the torment he has faced because of 'love'.

'Mein kissi ki mohabbat ke laayak nahi kya Baaji?' – you captured Dutta's self-deprecation aptly with this line.

Wow. Naku's confession of love left me in awe.
Just beautiful!!!
It honestly moved me it was that eloquent and heartfelt. Even I wanted to hug her for being so in love with him! *sigh*

I especially liked the DTPH inspired part of listing his traits and explaining why she loves him so much.

This line: 'Ab toh khud bhi bhool chuki hoon, kab se unse pyaar kiya, Bus itnaa hi keh sakti hoon, sirf unse hi pyaar kiya'
Deserves a standing ovation!

The end line by Baaji bought a smile back after feeling the intensity of their reunion. 'Naku's Bappa' indeed.

Part 3:

I am waiting desperately for the 'revealtion'. I have full faith that you'll pen it with as much brilliance, sensitivity and zeal as the last two.

NB: DD (Nikita right) can I just say why had you not written an OS ages ago. You are a natural at this. I actually find creating dialogues in my imagination harder than the direction of the scenes but you've written some literary gems. Anil Deskmukh may even be inspired after reading your OS.😉