OS: Naku - 'I do!' Pt 3 - Pg 15 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

yawwwwwwwwnnnnnnn.....Just woke up Megha and the way my first movie is becoming a hit, I guess, I should forget my brunch et al and get on with Part III! 😆😆

Pakka, today...I guess in another 3 hrs.....I have already started penning it down! 😛

Originally posted by: misssmily

Awwwwwwww superbly written !!!!! LOVED IT !!! ye talent kyu chupaya rakha ab tak ? anyway great job mwaaa 🤗 🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: meghaparti

3 hours...holyyyy mein sone jaa rahe hoon kal padhoo gaye phir😆 waise bhi kal sab kuch jaldhi jaldhi karna hai kyunki kal LTL 9:30 baje nahi nbalki 8:30 PM air hoga.....my world is going to be upside down tomorrow bcause of the change in timings😆

Originally posted by: newbe

I read both part ......kya baat hain chupi -rustam

very nice waiting for the third part

Originally posted by: spandana11

DD OMG this is fabulous very well written you made me speechless with nakuu dialogs 👏 👏 👏 will be waiting for next part eagerly hope nakuu says at least some of these lines on Monday after returning to PN

Originally posted by: saimeen93

omg! well written.........👏.Awesome dear...

Originally posted by: Naina_Mishal

oh my god.....dear itna pyara OS i loved it.....bohat mazah aya hai parne ka...i enjyed every sentence dear.....keep it up...:D

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

Eva, I am sorry...I knew it would be difficult for you to get the Hindi part.....but u see, I culdnt write this in English and still give the same effect......but for u, as soon as I finish the Part III, I will subtitle them in English, if you havent yet got the Hindi one!!

I am sorry HUM.....Missing u...u are not in the scene anymore....and cold??? why? u had icecream without your TUM? 😲

Ah, sweetu, you don't need to worry about the hindi parts. I can follow, though I might need some time and ... google😆

I got my new laptop friday, and the cold too on the same day😆 No icecream, my son had it first and as usual I didn't get spared😕 I hope to be back these days regularly again 😊

Originally posted by: Made4eachother

"Jab 'Aayi Bolti' baatoan mein woh hanste the, rote the, tab se unse pyaar kiya,

Jab mere haath kaa khaake unkaa peth bhartaa tha, tab se unse pyaar kiya,

Jab chup chup ke aadhi raatoan mein, unhe dekhaa karti thi, tab se unse pyaar kiya,

Jab mere kehne pe woh daaroo nahi choote the, tab se unse pyaar kiyaa,

Ab toh khud bhi bhool chuki hoon, kab se unse pyaar kiya,

Bus itnaa hi keh sakti hoon, sirf unse hi pyaar kiya" ❤️

Lovely yaar.....just lovely.... you left me speechless over here...!!!

The use of these pictures were just out-of-the worls amazing....!!!!

"Jab woh mujhe dekte hain....mujhe lagta hai Kaala rang sab se sundar rang hai...(pauses again) 'Jalan hoti hai kaale rang se...,

Jab woh meraa haath pakdte hain, mujhe lagtaa hai ki ab mein akeli nahi hai',

Jab woh meraa naam lete hain, Naku'(pause)'. toh kabhie Nakusha, mujhe lagtaa hai mein zindaa ho gayi hai'

Jab woh mere liye ladte hain, mujhe lagta hai mein shehzaadi hai...Shehzaada aaya aur mujhe palkoan mein beethaa ke le gaya,

Jab woh mujhe bolte hain ki woh mujhse shaadi karna chahte hain, mujhe lagtaa hai ki mein ab adhoori nahi rahi..."

Naku looks at him lovingly, crying -

"Mein aapse bahut pyaar karti hai...Yeh jhooth nahi hai...Pehle bhi karti thi, aaj bhi karti hai, aur aage bhi karti rahegi.....❤️

Iss pyaar ki wajah se hi Darti hai, darti hai, ki aapko paane ke baad kho na doon..." ❤️❤️❤️

"Aapko paane ka dar hai, kyun ki aage khone ka dar hai....

aapke paas aane kaa dar hai, kyun ki kal door jaane ka dar hai......

aapko zindagi dikhaane ka dar hai, kyunki aapki zindagi ko thookraane ka dar hai....

Aapko pyaar karne ka dar hai, kyunki aapse woh pyaar waapis lene ka dar hai...

Aapse aapki mohabbat paane ka dar hai, kyun ki kal woh mohabbat mujhse cheen jaane ka dar hai...

Aapka dookh jeeti hai har pal, ab nahi dekh sakti....." ❤️

i just LOVED the pic selections in this part....and the dialogues....u really deserve a standing ovation...!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Dancingdoll....wat can i say...????? this OS completely has left me in an awe...!!...

please update soon...!!!!!

Originally posted by: -Eva-

Ah, sweetu, you don't need to worry about the hindi parts. I can follow, though I might need some time and ... google😆

I got my new laptop friday, and the cold too on the same day😆 No icecream, my son had it first and as usual I didn't get spared😕 I hope to be back these days regularly again 😊