OS: Naku - 'I do!' Pt 3 - Pg 15

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Zubi

@misssmily

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Awwwwwwww superbly written !!!!! LOVED IT !!! ye talent kyu chupaya rakha ab tak ? anyway great job mwaaa 🤗 🤗 🤗

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Madhia

@-Madzy-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

I read both part ......kya baat hain chupi -rustam

very nice waiting for the third part

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spandana11

@spandana11

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

DD OMG this is fabulous very well written you made me speechless with nakuu dialogs 👏 👏 👏 will be waiting for next part eagerly hope nakuu says at least some of these lines on Monday after returning to PN

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saimeen

@saimeen93

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

omg! well written.........👏.Awesome dear...

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Megha

@meghaparti

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Thanks for sharing DD wow both parts very well written dear....👏

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Nikita

@Dancingdoll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: misssmily
me waitin 😊

Did you catch all the two parts?

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Nikita

@Dancingdoll

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Made4eachother
it felt like i just now watched the serial.....thankyou soo much Dancingdoll....it actually takes a great deal to write it when you have no idea how chulbul Pandey actually is[without watching the movie..just the promo]...
you were GREAT........

awww....Thanks a million....I just envisioned chulbulle pandey and gave him some takiyaa kalaams like - "i say" and "Lock up mein daal doonga" 😆😆😆

btw, read the Part II also

Edited by Dancingdoll - 15 years ago

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Naina :)

@NainaSengal

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

oh my god.....dear itna pyara OS i loved it.....bohat mazah aya hai parne ka...i enjyed every sentence dear.....keep it up...:D

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Nikita

@Dancingdoll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: kateleode
Totally cool ....................DD.....Typical Salmanishhhhhhhhhhh.......

Loved every bit of it .............Hope it happens similar way in LTL too.

Thx a ton for such a delited OS dear .Waiting for next............

Thanks gal....it did sound salmanish???....wow....I am so happy.....

dekhte hain, actually mein how close wuld be to this character!! 😆😆

Read Part II and let me know your comments!

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Nikita

@Dancingdoll

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Dew-drop
Wat a fab start DD....👏
It was so realistic ....... kahin tum Cvs ki team mein to nahi ho ...😆
i loved the comic touch in CP character ....it was hilarious ..I can imagine Salman as this ...

nw post the 2nd part soon ...
me w8ing 4 it ..😉

AWWWWWWWWWWW shabz...............CVs ki team? Kahaan re...but I think I shld totally be there....mein tum logoan ko roz TaShan romance doongi...atleast one scene, not like Madzy, but kuch toh! 😆😆😆

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