Mini FF's ...Come show-off ur creativity - Page 21

ok i'll try..but i m not good at writing.please bear me for time being.

Its kumkum and sumit's marriage anniversary and they are out in Goa alone.Kumkum is asleep and its 7 am..Sumit decorates the entire hotel room with red roses.

he goes to her and moves a rose on her face.Kumkum gets irritated..

kumkum-sumit..sone do naa..

sumit-(irritated)-utho naa ab..

kumkum(opens her eyes)-raat ko bhi nahin sone diyaa tha aur..

she is surprised to see the room..

kumkum-sos...sumit?..its beautiful..

sumit-nahin nahin...tum to so hi jao bas..

kumkum-chup..

She goes near him and kisses his cheek..

sumit is on seventh sky..he too goes near her and softly kisses her neck.

she feels shy and runs out of the bed..

sumit-kumkum?...ruko na..arey sunoo toh...

but she directly goest to the bathroom..

after sometime, she comes out , wearing a beautiful red saari.

sumit is mesmerised.He stares at her...kumkum smiles...

sumit-gorgeous!!...

she moves her hair and some drops of water move from her hair to his face..

sumit is no more in control.he goes near her.She shies away and moves backwards..

but soon, she faces a deadd-end and bumps into the wall.

Sumit is getting closer to her.kumkum closes her eyes.Her breath is faster now.sumit starts kissing her ears..

kumkum feels his touch.He expresses his love to her.Kumkum faces the other side.

kumkum-sumit ye din mein/??...

sumit(switches off the lights)-din mein raat kar doon?...jab mann aaye..

kumkum gets off him naughtily.

sumit closes the door..

kk-sumit...bas karo naa...kya?..

sumit-shshh...aaj mat roko..

he draws the curtains and moves towards kumkum..

kumkum falls on the bed...

he gets exremely close to her.She too easens herself now..

sumit licks her neck...and she gets shy...

she gets hold of his shirt and kisses his ears softly..
he stops and looks at her...she smiles shyly..he too smiles and they kiss each other...kumkum loses control over her desire and holds him tighter..
sumit unbuttons his shirt and throws away kumkum's saaree but kumkum moves it over them both...

both are lost in each other.

ab toh koi likho naa

it is very superb 😳 😳 😳
now cont it 😛

as jj is not among us, i'll complete the story..i've asked her friend mykrishna..

Originally posted by: jj thomson

its a small part from me...

kumkum is in her cabin when sumit cumes to her..

Su-madam may i cum in??...

KK-sumit?...aaoo na..

Su-haan bolo bhai..aaj kahaan ghoomne chalenge???

KK-sumit...pehle batao 21 into 44??

Su-kyun????..ye sab kya hai....aur ye tum??

KK-sumit dhruv ke liye homework poora kar rahi hoon....

Su-office mein??..

KK-kya karoon???...abhi uske teachers se mil ke aayi to yahin shuru kar diya...

Su-uski tabiyat ke baare mein poocha ghar par?..

KK-haan...aaj bukhaar kam hai..

Su-thank god...ruko...i'll complete it..calculator use karo na kk..

KK-sumit...accha nahin lag raha hai aaj mujhe...

She sits back...

Su-hey?...tabiyat to thik hai na?..

KK-hmm baba..zyaada pareshaan mat ho tum ab..

Su-accha...chalo phir hum aaj icecream khaane chalenge...ok??

KK(smiles)-ok...

Su-hmm...ek dhruv aur uski mummy...dono na..

KK-dono kya sumit?..hmm?...bolo??

Su-wo..dono bahut cute hain...

KK(laughs)-bahut badmaash ho tum....

Su-sacchi??

KK-mucchi...

they laugh n complete dhruv's hw...


THEN____________________________


sumit asks kk to sit with her head down on the table while he finishes the work but kk feels very restless...after half an hr...

su-madam chalein...??

kk-hmm...

he had noticed her uneasiness so he goes to her n hugs her warmly....

su-kya ho gaya baba...y r u so restless??>..tabiyat thik nahin lag rahi??...feverish to nahin ho??

kk-nahin...pata nahin sumit...ye aaj nahin...last week se ho raha hai....aaj thoda yaada ho raha hai...bas

su-aur mujhe nahin bataya??

kk-dhruv ko bhi bukhaar tha to...

su-kk...neend nahin poori hoti na...khair ab dhruv thik hai...ab to sooggi na raat ko?...

kk-hmm...

su-chalo...toh abhi hum ice cream khayenge phir ghar chalenge...right...

kk-(smiles)..thik hai...

su-chalo...

to be cont. 😳

they go to have ice-cream...

in the parlour...

kumkum is again feeling uneasy..

sumit gets her an ice-cream..and hugs her in the car..

sumit-kumkum?..abhi doctor ke paas chalein kya?..

kumkum-nahin sumit..mere khyaal se tum theek keh rahe they..neend poori ho jayegi ek baar to theek ho jaooongi i think

sumit-lo..tumhari ice-cream..

kumkum-vanilla?..yumm..

they enjoy their ice-creams..

sumit-kumkum..apni taste karao..

but she doesnt let him..

kumkum-nahin..tum apni khao..

sumit teases her but finally gets a small nanometre of her ice-cream..

they reach home..

sumit goes straight to dhruv's room....and finds her sleeping..

he kisses his forehead..

kumkum too follows and strokes his hair...

sumit-chalo ab bukhaar naahin hai..

kumkum-hmm...

sumit-kumkum...main kuch soch raha tha..

kumkum-kya?..

he gestures her to come closer..

he speaks into her ears.."..isko ek choti behen dene ka waqt aa gaya hai na?.."

kumkum blushes and softly, hits him..."tum bhi na su.."..

she leaves and sumit keeps smiling, looking at dhruv..

Originally posted by: sumitwadhwa

as jj is not among us, i'll complete the story..i've asked her friend mykrishna..

they go to have ice-cream...

in the parlour...

kumkum is again feeling uneasy..

sumit gets her an ice-cream..and hugs her in the car..

sumit-kumkum?..abhi doctor ke paas chalein kya?..

kumkum-nahin sumit..mere khyaal se tum theek keh rahe they..neend poori ho jayegi ek baar to theek ho jaooongi i think

sumit-lo..tumhari ice-cream..

kumkum-vanilla?..yumm..

they enjoy their ice-creams..

sumit-kumkum..apni taste karao..

but she doesnt let him..

kumkum-nahin..tum apni khao..

sumit teases her but finally gets a small nanometre of her ice-cream..

they reach home..

sumit goes straight to dhruv's room....and finds her sleeping..

he kisses his forehead..

kumkum too follows and strokes his hair...

sumit-chalo ab bukhaar naahin hai..

kumkum-hmm...

sumit-kumkum...main kuch soch raha tha..

kumkum-kya?..

he gestures her to come closer..

he speaks into her ears.."..isko ek choti behen dene ka waqt aa gaya hai na?.."

kumkum blushes and softly, hits him..."tum bhi na su.."..

she leaves and sumit keeps smiling, looking at dhruv..

Sumit comes back from office and finds Kumkum sleepig peacefully..He softly kisses her forehead and tip-toes to the bathroom to change, after which, he joins Veena and others at the dining table..

Veena-Sumit?...beta?...aaj tu late aaya..

Sumit-haan maa...wo office mein ek zaruri kaam aa gaya tha..Dhruv ka fever kaisa hai?..

Veena-Perfectly fine...par aapki kumkum thodi pareshaan hain abhi..

Sumit-haan maa...main poochne hi wala tha..wo iss waqt so rahi hai..khaana ...?

Veena-Sumit...beta wo jab ghar aayi toh kafi thaki hui thi...tu toh jaanta hai use bhaag-daud karne ki aadat hai..kitchen mein kaam karne ke liye aa gayi aur...phir chakkar aa gaye aur behosh ho gayi..

Sumit-Maa...?..aap itne aaram se keh rahe ho ki chakkar aa gaye..Main abhi doctor ko..

Veena-tu humein paagal samajhta hai kya?..humne dr ko bula liya tha..

Sumit-kya kaha unhone?..wo theek toh hai na?...use kaafi dinon se tabiyat theek nahin lag rahi thi..

Veena-daadi maa?..bata diya jaye ab?..

Dadi ma-chalo..pehle hum hi bata dete hain...Sumit beta..

Both-Tum papa banane waale ho!!!

Sumit is sort of, mad with joy...He jumps out of his chair..

Sumit-sach?...main..matlab ki..kumkum?..

Preeti-theek hai..aap unhi se poochna..jab wo hosh mein aa jayein..

Sumit takes Dhruv in his arms and kisses his cheeks..

Sumit-beta...mummy aapke liye behen laane waali hai..isn't is great?..

Dhruv-Gdate..😆..par mummy toh so rahi hain...wo bazaar kab jaayengi?..

Preeti- bazaar?..

Kul-beta bazaar kyun jaana hai?..

Dhruv-Behen laane ke liye..aap log toh ekdum buddhu ho...

Sumit laughs and kisses him again..

Sumit-accha bhai..abho baat karunga aapki mumma se..happy?.

Dhruv-happy papa..

sonu good u brought this part back 👏 👏

Originally posted by: sumitwadhwa

Sumit comes back from office and finds Kumkum sleepig peacefully..He softly kisses her forehead and tip-toes to the bathroom to change, after which, he joins Veena and others at the dining table..

Veena-Sumit?...beta?...aaj tu late aaya..

Sumit-haan maa...wo office mein ek zaruri kaam aa gaya tha..Dhruv ka fever kaisa hai?..

Veena-Perfectly fine...par aapki kumkum thodi pareshaan hain abhi..

Sumit-haan maa...main poochne hi wala tha..wo iss waqt so rahi hai..khaana ...?

Veena-Sumit...beta wo jab ghar aayi toh kafi thaki hui thi...tu toh jaanta hai use bhaag-daud karne ki aadat hai..kitchen mein kaam karne ke liye aa gayi aur...phir chakkar aa gaye aur behosh ho gayi..

Sumit-Maa...?..aap itne aaram se keh rahe ho ki chakkar aa gaye..Main abhi doctor ko..

Veena-tu humein paagal samajhta hai kya?..humne dr ko bula liya tha..

Sumit-kya kaha unhone?..wo theek toh hai na?...use kaafi dinon se tabiyat theek nahin lag rahi thi..

Veena-daadi maa?..bata diya jaye ab?..

Dadi ma-chalo..pehle hum hi bata dete hain...Sumit beta..

Both-Tum papa banane waale ho!!!

Sumit is sort of, mad with joy...He jumps out of his chair..

Sumit-sach?...main..matlab ki..kumkum?..

Preeti-theek hai..aap unhi se poochna..jab wo hosh mein aa jayein..

Sumit takes Dhruv in his arms and kisses his cheeks..

Sumit-beta...mummy aapke liye behen laane waali hai..isn't is great?..

Dhruv-Gdate..😆..par mummy toh so rahi hain...wo bazaar kab jaayengi?..

Preeti- bazaar?..

Kul-beta bazaar kyun jaana hai?..

Dhruv-Behen laane ke liye..aap log toh ekdum buddhu ho...

Sumit laughs and kisses him again..

Sumit-accha bhai..abho baat karunga aapki mumma se..happy?.

Dhruv-happy papa..

Sumit goes to Kumkum and sits besides her, caressing her hair...😳The smile on his face is constant..😳He quietly moves away and calls someoene..

At 5, when Kumkum opens her eyes, she's amazed at the sight...😳

The entire room is filled with stuffed toys and baby posters...😳Sumit enters with a tray containing tea...😳

Her eyes become moist as she sees the radiance on his face..He sits besides her and hugs her tightly..

Su-congratulations!!!!!!

Kumkum blushingly, hides her face in his embrace...😳

Ab koi ar bhi likho..varna main yahin ek aur ff shuru kar dungi..😆

ha ok i cont it 😆
sukk hug each other this last for few moments 😉 and dhruv comes running to her mumma and see them and ask
dr:papa app muma ko kuy pakdha isa?
su:naahi beta actually thumari muma ko thandh lag rahi tho may pakd liya 😆 (bit embaraced 😳 )
dr:huto app app sa math kethi
su:why?
app mera liya mumma ka saath behen jo lana wala tha na abb thuk kuy nahi laya apna promise kiya tha na kathi app sa 😆
sukk both laugh at this kk takes dhruv in his lap and su time lagaga abb hii bahar nahi a saktha
dhr goes on asking quest and su anw them 😆 kk just looks at them and was smilling 😛 😳

wow...mujhe toh pata hee nahi tha yahan parr ye chal raha hai 😆 😆 😆
great parts evryone...continue soon 😃 😃

Finally Sumit and Kumkum steal some beautiful moments together...Kumkum is sitting with Sumit's head on her lap...Her fingers are stroking his hair... 😳

Su-Iss baar toh meri hi baat maanenge bhagwaan..

Kk-kyun?...

Su-beti hi hogi..dekhna.. 😳

Kk-Kaise pata?...

Su-Bas...pata chal gaya... 😳

Kk-aur agar beta hua toh?.. 😳

Su-toh kya ...there's always a next chance.. 😆

She playfully hits him...

Kk-Accha?... 😆

Su-maaro mat baba...abhi kam-se-kam 11 baccho ki cricket team toh banani hi hai mujhe..phir hum bhi IPL mein khelenge... 😆

Kk-Tum paagal ho Sumit.. 😆

All parts are soo cool really you guys are soo good at writting stories mini ffs contuied soon