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preethi thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
zaab say i became impatient so need to become self dependent 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
thtt reallyy cool parts plzz contuied mini ff plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
Suddenly, they hear Dadi maa's scream..."SUMIT...!!!"

All of them rush to the staircase and find Kumkum lying unconscious beneath the stairs...

Sumit is in total shock..He immediately runs to her and takes her in arms...Dhruv is crying..

Dhhruv:MUMMAA...?..

Sumit:Beta..kuch nahin hoga aapki mamma ko..wo theek ho jayengi...Papa..please dr. ko call kijiye jaldi se.. 😭

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Dr.:There's nothing to worry about...kamzori se chakkar aa gaye they...abhi aadhe ghante mein hosh aa jayega...

Su:Dr.?..Kk theek hai na?..

Dr.:Thodi weak hain..par davaiyaan lengi toh she'll be completely fit and fine...

Su:Thankyou doctor..

Kul escorts the dr...

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Kumkum gains consciousness after 20 minutes and asks for Sumit...

kk:Su..?..

Su:sshh..leti raho..main yahin hun.. 😳

Kk:aur..

Su:aur dhruv maa ke saath hai..so gaya hai..theek hai?.. 😳

Sumit kisses her forehead..

Su:Apna khayaal rakha karo..iss tarah se kamzor ho jaogi toh bacche par bhi asar hoga na?..

Kk puts her arms around him.. 😳

Kk:par tum apna promise poora karoge na..

Su:kaun sa promise..??

Kk:Ice-cream khaane waala..

Su:iss haalat mein jaogi ice-cream khaane...?..abhi abhi hosh aaya hai aur uthte hi..

Kk:(childishly)...main tumse kabhie baat nahin karungi..

Su:Accha baba..main le aata hun ice-cream..

Kk:nahin..mujhe bhi chalna hai..

Su:(angrily)..chalo phir..hameshaa apni mannmaani karti ho...doosre ki toh sunana hi nahin manzoor hota hai na..chalo...

He gets up angrily and makes her stand up..
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Sumit is driving angrily...

Now pls sumone cont...😳

Edited by sumitwadhwa - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Preeti di..aapki baari..lambaaaaaaaaaaa likhna... 😆 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
ok let me cont

it 9 pm at night and all has gone to sleep and sukk gets and
su:ask kk to get ready
kk:says she is ready
both leave for a long drive 😳 u takes hand of kk and is driving the car with one hand 😳
kk:su haath nikalo na drive properly 😳
su:i cannt 😆
su stop car at icecream parlour and goes inside t get ice cream 😛
suddenly kk eyes falls on shop on opposite side of road 😳 and she just stares at them 😆
kk gets down from the car and thinks of going there bt su comes there with icecreams 😛 two choclate sundays 😳 😳 😳
kk ways just looking at the shop only
su:just calls kk kha kho gayi thu 😛
kk snapes out of thought and just says nothing
su givesher his ice cream and she is not in mood to eat it now
su just observe it and dosnt say anything 😳
after finishing the icecream
su:ask kk to sit inside and says he will come now
su goes to another side and see wht is there in that shop 😆
it is MANGO shop 😆(kacha) su realise it and gets mangs cutted with salt over it
kk lost in his thought looks fr su 😕
su:kya mujha dhoond rahi hii
kk:su kha chala gaya tha mujha chod kar
su:to get wht u want now 😳 and shows mangos 😳
kk face ligts up 😛 :ask su thumha kisa patha tha 😛
su:kha na i fitted camera in ur heart 😳 😳
kk:baas karo naa give me the mangoes
su gives him and she start eating and makes sweet dute face like child 😳
su was just looking that 😳 and they drive back home 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Preeti di...bahutttt sweet..now m cont .. 😳
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Sumit and Kumkum are on their way back when Sumit notices that Kumkum is fast alseep, holding the mango in her hand ...Her face is all messes up with mango extract.. 😳 She's looking like a cute 6-year old kid..

Sumit smiles seeing her like that.. 😳 He takes the mango from her clutch and slows down the car a bit and wipes her face while she's asleep.. 😳

Su:(to himself)...beta sumit..ab ek saath teen bacche sambhaalega tu..Dhruv, Kk aur aane waali gudiya 😳 ..

He lovingly kisses her forehead and again starts driving for home... 😳

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Its 3:23 Am..

Kk:Sumit...?..Sumit utho na..ek minute.. 😆

She shook her violently.. 😆

Sumit wakes up with a shock..

Su:Kya hua kk?..tum..tum theek ho na?..itni raat ko iss tarah tabiyat kharab toh nahin hai?..kk?..

Kk:Nahin...

Su:Toh kya?..

Kk:Mera aam bach gaya tha na?..

Su:Tum ne ye poochne ke liye uthaaya mujhe Kk?..

She has a glint in her eyes..

Su:Tumhe bilkul taras nahin aata mujhpar kk?..main subah se itna thaka hua hun...phir tumhe ghumaane ke liye bhi le gaya...aur ab..

She starts crying all of a sudden..He feels guilty and hugs her warmly.. 😳

su:shorry mera baccha...accha ro mat bolo..

Kk:Phir se khatta khaane ka mann kar raha tha..maine socha..main aam kha lungi..isiliye poocha..

He kisses her nose..

Su:accha baba...roya mat karo zara zara baat par..main laata hun tumhaara aam..gaadi mein hai..

Kk:nahin...tum thak gaye ho ...main laaoongi..

Su:arrey nahin baba..main laa raha hun na..chalo..baitho yahaan...

As he brings the remaining mango piece..Kumkum leaps with joy and hugs him tightly..

Kk:Yeeeeeeeeeeeeee.....Sumit thankQ..

Sumit kisses her and lies down...

Su:Khaa ke chup chaap let jaana ...theek hai?..

Kk nods her head happily.... 😃

As she licks and sucks the tiny piece, he enjoys peeping from the blanket ...looking at her cute face... 😆
Edited by sumitwadhwa - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ab mere aur preeti di ke alaawa bhi koi likho na..Verni di?..Seema di?..ahem ahem.. 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey ok sonu!!!i continue with 😉

Next morning kk is sleeping peacefully and su is happy to see her resting. Suddenly dhruv comes and starts shouting for kk.

Su asks dhruv not to shout as she is sleeping. Dhruv says : mein mumma to uthana chahta hoon taki woh mere ssath khel sake.

Su: lekin mumma sih rahi hai.

Dhruv: lekin mere saath khelnewala aur joi nahin hai.

Su: beta bas ab kuch aur dini ka intezaar aur tumahare saath khelne wali gudia bhi aajayegi.

dhruv: lekin tab tak mein kya karun?

Su: kyun main hoon na...

Su and shruv start playing and kk gets up and feels happy seeing them play.

SU notices this and goes near kk and askk her how she is?
kk says she is fine and looks at su.
su: aise kya dekh rahi ho?
kk:dekh rahi hoon tum kaie papa ho?
su: main samjha nahin?
kk:arrey !!main yeh dekh rahi thi ki tum apne bachoon su kitna pyaar karte ho.
Su: to kya kehti ho?
Kk: main yeh kehti hoon ki tum duniya ke sabse aache papa ho and hugs su..... 😳



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Posted: 17 years ago
seema it was sweet one and cont next part

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