Mini FF's ...Come show-off ur creativity

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Posted: 18 years ago
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KrAzY KuMkUm CrEaTiVeS

This thread is dedicated to fan fiction....

For those of u that always wanted to write and show off ur talent...

Here is the place to post....

😉 😉 😉

Many of u probably are not bothered to start an entire ff....

😆 😆 😆

...Others may only want to write ocassionally...

😊 😊 😊

And some may have been to shy to give it a go...

😳 😳 😳

Whatever ur reason heres ur chance to shine....

😃 😃 😃

Rules:

  • U may post any random scene
  • Ensure what u are posting is entirely ur own work
  • Please make sure what u are posting is related to Kk only
  • Scenes must not contain any language that violates I-F rules
  • Please Do not spam
  • No personal Conversations
  • Note there are members below 18 so kindly use appropriate lauguage
  • Lastly have a great time thinking of amazing plots

Enjoy ppl... 😉

~ Henna ~

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Posted: 18 years ago
#2

Acha toh lets get started...

This scene is for my Dushman Shabu... enjoy yaar

Su comes home tired from the office and goes straight to his room…. Kk brings him coffee…su is sitting on the sofa…looking completing drained out…

Kk: sits beside him…

Su: holds his head in his hands and sighs….

Kk: puts her hand through his hair softly…..Sumit…

Su: looks up at her slowly….

Kk: can see that he is really tired…

Su: hmmm?

Kk: (softly) coffee peelo…

Su: erm..abhi mann nahi kar raha… yahaan rak do plz…

Kk puts the coffee on the table in front of them…

Kk: su tum araam karlo…

She gets up to leave….su holds her hand….

Su: baito tum kahan jaa rahi ho?

Kk: wo tum thake hue ho na….

Su: (sweetly) mutt jao

Kk smiles sweetly and sits back down again…. She loosens su's tie…

Su: watches her…

Kk: coffee??

Su picks up the cup… he looks at kk and puts his arm up on the sofa…kk understands and rests her head on his shoulder and su puts his arm around her…

Kk: su?

Su: (drinking his coffee) hmm…

Kk: aaj office mein kya kya kiya?

Su: kya nahi kiya….yeh poocho….dehd saari meetings thi… haazar files ko dekhna pada…

Kk: (looks up at him) aur kya kiya?

Su: itna kuch to kiya…. Aur kya karna tha?

Kk: sits up properly and crosses her arms…

Su: kya hua?

Kk: tumne mujhe aaj bilkul nahi miss kiya…

Su: (grins) oh to yeh baat hai….

Kk: (nods) hmm

Su: (puts down the cup of coffee) miss kiya actually…

Kk: (smiling slightly) acha…. Kitna?

Su: (turns towards her and moves closer)… bataon kya??

Kk: ….haan

Su: gives her a long warm hug….

Kk: (happily) bus itna hi?...

Su: nahi isse bhi zyaada…. Per tumhe batane k liye yeh jugah kam hai…(grins naughtily)

Kk: (pushing him away) haan haan sub jaanti hoon… waise ab thake hue nahi ho?

Su: haan hoon…

He lies down in kk's lap… kk unable to say nething just admires him…

Su: (closes his eyes)..per Sumit Wadhwa pyar ko lehkar khabi nahi thakta….samji?

Kk: acha…chup karo ab…

Su: (smiles)

Kk massages his head… su feels more at ease…

After a while

Kk: sumit?

Su: (almost asleep)….hmm

Kk: bed peh araam karlo….

Unwillingly he gets up… he lies down and kk puts the blanket over him… Su holds her hand firmly and puts it beneath his cheek….kk stands there looking at him not amused… su shuts his eyes to get away from her glare….

Kk: su…yeh kya? Ab main kya kadhi rahoon yahan?

Su: hmm

Kk: kya?

Su: leht jao… maine khab mana kiya hai?

Kk: su jaane do…

Su: kk plz… thak gaya hoon..mujhe kuch mutt kaho

Kk kneels down beside the bed and puts her other hand on his face…

Kk: jaanti hoon issliye to keh rahi hoon… pehle tum araam karlo…

Su: looks at her…. Then lets go of her hand

Kk: gets up and is about to leave

Su: shuts his eyes… kya tumara jaane ko dil kar raha hai?

Kk: stop… as she too doesn't want to leave…

Su: kya main itna tang karta hoon k tum mere paas nahi reh sakti?

Kk: (looks at him) su… tum emotional blackmail band karo….

Su: to tum aa jao…(looks at her)

Kk: turns and walks towards the door…

Su's smile fades and he turns his side pulling the blanket over his head angrily…kk rubs her hands pleased….she goes to the door and shuts it then turns back to su….

She goes up to him and pulls his blanket

Su: kya ab nahi jaana kya?

Kk: jaana tha…. Darwaza band karne…(smiles innocently)

Su: smiles and pulls kk so that she falls on him….

Kk: laughs hitting him playfully….

Su: hugs her….

Kk: moves of him and lies beside him…

Su: rests his arm on her

They soon fall asleep

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Posted: 18 years ago
#3

Gr8 topice henna i am sure many memeber will take part in this.Friends if we get many posts then we can even send it to BAG Films aur kiya pata they use our scenes so come on start thinking and get into ur dreamland 😆 😆 😆 😆

Here is my entire

Sumit sleeping very sweetly and kumkum getup its sharp 12:00 midnight
Kumkum looking at sumit who is sleeping like a baby😃 and gives him a sweet kiss on his cheek and get up and plays the birthday song for him
Sumit opens his eyes and to his surprise finds the whole room covered with roses and kumkum standing in a center of the room with a rose in her hand.
Sumit<happy but with little surprised> ask kumkum

Sumit:Kumkum yeh sab kiya hai ?
Kumkum:<Giving the rose to sumit>Singing happy birthday the song
Sumit:This is such a sweet gift kumkum
Kumkum:Anything for my life
<sumit wadhwa>

Both smile and give each other a tight hug 🤗🤗

Kumkum:Sumit chalo mere saath
Sumit:Kaha?
Kumkum:Tum bas chalo

Kumkum takes sumit by his hand out side.Just as they step out side their room door sumit is surprised,the whole coridoor is filled with roses again.Sumit looks at kumkum with a <watz going on look> and kumkum gives him a big smile

Sumit:Kumkum tum mujhe kaha leay jaa rahi ho?
Kumkum:Tum chalo na aur saval mat poocho
Sumit:Lakin kumkum
Kumkum:<puts her fingure on sumits lips> Shhhhh tum chao

As they r about to climb the stairs kumkum takes a red cloth and covers sumits eyes.

Kumkum:Sumit hold me hand
Sumit:I am already holding your hand
Kumkum:Now do as i say
Sumit:Yeh toh mein shaadi se pehle bhi karta tha
Both laugh
Kumkum:Sumit chalo ab take one step and climb the stairs slowly

Finally the reach the door and kumkum removes the cloth from sumit eyes
Kumkum:Sumit now open the door😃

Sumit opens the door and is surprised again the whole Terraces is filled with roses,balloons and candles...

Sumit:Kumkum yeh sab
Kumkum:Tumhey pasad aaya
Sumit:its beautiful
Kumkum:Thank u

Kumkum takes sumit to the center where there is a small table with a small heart shape cake written happy birthday my love

Sumit looks at kumkum and tells her thank u soooo much and kisses her forehead.Then he takes her hand and both cut the cake together and give each other a bit..

Later Sumit ask kumkum for a dance.. Both danceing but lost totally into eachother no idea wat is going around... They keep dancing and danceing the whole night

Suddenly kumkum realises dawn


Kumkum:Sumit its morning aleady
Sumit:wat really wow kumkum tumhare saath time flys
Kumkum:Sumit dadaji aur dadima abhi jaag jayege
Sumit:toh kiys hua.. they should also see wat u did wat surprise u gave me
Kumkum:,Feeling very shy puts her face down>
Sumit aacha baba chalo

Just as they r about to go kumkum stops sumit and as ruko
Sumit:Wat happen
Kumkum:Close ur eyes
Sumit:Lagta hai ek aur special surprise aaraha hai
Kumkum:Get your hands in front

Sumit gets his hand in front and kumkum makes him wear a braclet written I LUV U..and kisses his hand. sumit opens his eyes and see the gift

Sumit:I love u too
and kisses her and both again hug tightly
Sumit:Kumkum this is the most special moment in my life.. Thank u for making my special day so special and thank u for bringing lots of happiness in my life

sumits again kisses kumkum on the cheek and lifts her up and swings her round the terraces with joy and shouting out I LOVE U KUMKUM and kumkum saying I LOVE U SUMIT....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsum story henna and shabu 👏....
i dont get enuff time to update my ff, but here, since it's the beginning, i'll also join in 😃 😃 😃.....


Sumit, still carrying Kumkum in his arms, moves out of the terrace towards the stairs. He climbs down the stairs, looking into Kumkum's eyes. Kumkum blushes and moves Sumit's face towards the other side, slapping him naughtily. The reach the ground floor, while their room was on the first floor. Kumkum suddenly realises this.

Kumkum : Sumit...
Sumit (still looking into her eyes) : hmmm.....
Kumkum : dekha toh zaraa.....tum mujhe kahan le aaye ho...
Sumit : pata nahi...
Kumkum : kya pata nahi.....zaraa chehra ghuma kar aas paas toh dekho...

Kumkum turns his face towards the room.

Sumit : ye hamare ghar ka ground floor hai...
Kumkum : vahi toh...
Sumit : kya vahi toh ??
Kumkum : arre buddhuu......ye ground floor hai...
Sumit : yahi toh main bhi keh raha tha...
Kumkum : arre....ye ground floor hai....GROUND.....
Sumit : tohhhhhhhh???
Kumkum : toh yeh Mr. Sumit Wadhwa....iss floor pe dadaji, dadimaa, daddyji aur mummyji ka room hai...
Sumit : toh uss se kya farak padhta hai...
Kumkum : uss se ye farak padhta hai ki agar voh bahar aa gaye aur unhone humein aise dekh liya toh...
Sumit : toh kya??
Kumkum : kya Sumit....tum bhi naa.....neeche utaaro mujhe...
Sumit : kyun??
Kumkum : itna badha reason toh de diya tumhe...
Sumit : iss floor pe sab ke rooms hain, iss se koi farak nahi padhta Mrs. Wadhwa......farak iss baat se padhta hai ki un rooms mein koi hai ya nahi....
Kumkum : matlab??
Sumit : matlab ye ki meri jaan ki iss wadde se ghar mein hum-tum ke alaawa koi nahi hai...
Kumkum : kyaa.....tumhe kaise pata???
Sumit : arre jab hum chhat pe dance kar rahe the toh papa ne aawaaz de ke bataya tha ki voh log kul guruji ke yahan jaa rahe hain...
Kumkum : kab kaha Papa ne ye sab??
Sumit : jab hum terrace pe dance kar rahe the....
Kumkum : aur tumne sun liya...
Sumit : haan....
Kumkum : maine apne pati ke b'day ke liye itna kuch kiya.....main uske saath dance karne mein itna khoyi rahi ki mujhe raat aur din ka bhi pata nahi chala.....aur mera pati....usse toh mujhse pyaar hi nahi hai....mere saath hone ke baavjood usse baaki sab ki baatein sunaayi de rahi thi.....neeche utaaro mujhe....abhi issi waqt...
Sumit : par Kumkum....main toh...
Kumkum : maain wain kuch nahi.....mujhe abhi issi waqt neeche utaaro...
Sumit : aur agar naa utaroon toh...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#5
Awesome write up ppl...

Jus a lil note tho...

u dont need to continue to the story kahin se bhi likh sakte hain!!! 😉

Jus ur own individual Scenes 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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to good.
great wrtters of kumkumians 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#7
Come on friends dont be shy yaar 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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good going guys...... great scences.... 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 going frnds...👏

sumit: agar nahin utaroon toh...

kumkum: acha...mat utaro...main bhi dekhti hoon kab tak aise hi khade rehte ho mujhe uthakar..

sumit: tumne mujhe itne saare surprizes diye...ab mujhe bhi toh return gift dena hoga na...

kumkum: return gift?...kya?

sumit: woh toh tumhe khud pata chal jayega...bas dekhti jao...

kumkum:(naughtyly) humesha wohi toh karti hoon...sirf tumhe dekhti rehti hoon

sumit: (now very romantically kisses her on head n carries her outside to the car n sits her inside and then he too sits on driving seat)

kumkum: sumit...tumne mujhe car mein kyun bithaya?

sumit: (naughtily coming closer to kk) romance karne

kumkum:(stopping him come closer)bas karo sumit!...tum kabhi nahin sudhroge

sumit: toh kya tum chahti ho ke main sudharjaun?

kumkum: (shying☺️) nahin...main toh chahti hoon k tum kabi na sudhro... acha batao toh yahaan kyun laye ho?

sumit: tumhara return gift😊.... hum dono ek lambi drive par chalenge fir movie dekhenge fir koi park jayenge jahan sirf hum tum aur humara pyaar ho... aur last mein ek candle light dinner😛

kumkum: wow...toh aaj Mr. sumit wadhwa ne pura din apni kumkum ke naam kar diya...main toh impress ho gayi

sumit: Mrs.kumkum sumit wadhwa aap ek din ki baat kar rahi ho.. is sumit wadhwa ne toh apni puri zindagi aapke naam kar dii hai

kumkum(hitting him playfully) bas bas...baatein banana toh koi tumse seekhe

sumit: ab mera pyaar tumhe baatein lag rahi hai?..not fair(puts a sad face)

kumkum:(cheering him up) main toh mazak kar rahiti...tumhara pyaar aur saath hi toh meri zindagi hai😳

sumit :(smiles😃) aur meri zindagi tum😳..acha ab baatein hii karte rahenge ya chalenge bhi...humare pyaar ki baatein toh kabhi khatam hii nahin hoti😆

kumkum: haan chalo...par pehle hum mata ke mandir jaayenge aur pooja karvayenge...aaj tumhara janamdin hai na islliye😛

sumit:theek hai kumkum...jaise tum kaho

(they go to mandir and kumkum does puja for sumit and they both pray...su keeps staring on kk wondering wats she praying for so long tym)

kumkum:(after prayer) sumit?...mujhe iss tarah kya dekhrahe ho?

sumit: soch raha hoon tum itna kya baatein karti ho bhagwaan ke saath?

kumkum: main toh bus prarthna kar rahi thi...

sumit: kya pooch rahi thi?

kumkum: tumhe pata hai sumit ki main bhagwaan se kya poochti hoon humesha...yehi ki hum dono ka saath humesha rahe aur chahe kuch bhi hojaye hum kabhi juda na ho.

sumit: pata hai...aur maine ye maanga ki hum dono sirf 7janam nahin balki har janam mein ek doosre ke saath rahe humesha(holding her hands in his hands)

both smile and stare at each other😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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baapre tum logon ne kitna kuch likh diya...main kya likhoon... 😆

Main koi continue shontinue nahi karongi..woh tum log karna...main apni kahani likhoongi... 😆

Su is tired from the day's work and is a bit upset. KK has come to visit su in his office for some work. She comes to knw frm his sec tht he has been upset the whole day bec of some reasons...

Kk then changes every plan of hers and asks his sec tht now where is he?

She says he is in conference attending his meeting.

Kk: Then su is free naa...

Sec : yes...

Kk goes to his cabin and sits down there..

Su comes out of conf and looks very tired.

Sec: Sir, ur wife has come and she is in your cabin.

Su: kya..theek hai..

He enters the cabin and asks kk: tum yahann..

KK: haan..woh main tumhe kahin le jaane aayi hoon.

Su: nahin aaj nahin, main bahut thaka hoon..

Kk: theek hai fir ghar hee chalte hain...waise bhi main aaj tumhe date par le jaana chahti thi...

su: stares at her with a blink in hs eyes...

Kk: chalo su ghar chalte hain...

Su: tum mujhe date par le jaana chahti thi...

Kk: haan irada toh kuch aisa hi tha, hum abhi jayenge samundar kinare baithenge..fir candle light dinner karenge..tumhari pasand ke rest mein, fir tumhari pasand ka khana order karenge...aur bill ke paise main dene wali thi aur ek lambisi drive... 😳

lekin tum thak gaye ho toh ghar chalte hain..

Su: nahin main itna nahi thaka hoon..chalo chalte hain..

KK and su go the rest of his choice...they have a choice of his food for consumption and then su tries to give a bill...

KK: wait su, i have promisd so I will pay..

Su: its ok..i will pay..

KK: I never make promises which i cant keep.. 😳

Su smiles and kk pays the bill...

Sukk then go for a long drive...and return back home..

Su before entering house: kk thx

KK: why?

Su: to make my evening beautiful.. 😃

KK: if u want i can make your evening this big beautiful always...whenver u feel lost or tired just call me..I promise to make your evenings beautiful.. 😃

Sukk hug each other and enter the house together for a blissful night... 😛 😉

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