Mini FF's ...Come show-off ur creativity - Page 22

let me cont

sukk speak fr sometime and finally both sleep
su in morg gets up early in morg and arrang the room with kids posters and kk ki bachpna ka photos ka saath and again sleep back 😉
when kk gets up is suprise to see the whole room filled with posters and looks at su who is sleeping peacfully(or acting)
kk:utho na su zaldhi
su:kya kk sona bhi nahi dhathi ajj sunday hii na so no office
kk:su ek baar utho na 😛
su:abb mujha zo chaya milaga kya? 😉
kk:kya chaya ?
su:phela promise me ki u will do what i saw 😉
kk:su pls uthona thang math ka ro 😳 acha theek hi promise
su is very happy bt dosnt show and gets up with sleepy eyes
su:kya kk abb bolo kuy uthya mujha
kk:su dhakna kithna posters hii saab kithna sunder hii 😳
su:acha hii bhooth sunder kisi ki thasvir ii ya saab 😉
kk:gets bit angry and ask kya thumha nahi patha kis ka hii 😡
su:nahi 😳
kk gets up fr there bt su pulls her down ans says abb naraz hogayi ithni choti si baath ka liya 😆
su try to kiss kk bt kk pushes him away so su gets hit to bed gets hurt
su:says ouch 😭
kk:runs to hear and sees su and lagha kya i am sorry and starts crying 😭
su:kk its ok dont cry
kk:nahi su thumha mana dhaka diya 😭 😭 and kiss on the hurt 😳
su:now it is fine thumari hoot na chuliya abb it is ok 😳
su points towards cheeks and kk just smile and kiss on cheeks now towards lips kk just hit and gets up fr thr 😳
su says today i will not leave u promised me ki u will do what i say and we will go on long drive and there nobedy can save u 😉 😈

wowowow tht cooll part plzz contuied mini ff i loved it

Sumit returns from office, and finds Kumkum lying on the bed, facing the other side..Veena too, enters with a coffee mug and a bottle of medicine..

Su-Maa?..ye kya hai?..

Veena-Sumit..kuch nahin..bas uke thodi der pehle vomiting hui thi..toh usi ki davai hai...thodi si de dena..main chalti hun..

She leaves and Sumit goes near Kumkum...Sitting besides her, he affectionately kisses her forehead.. 😳 Kumkum wakes up from the touch and sits down.. 😳

Kumkum-Arrey..tum aa gaye Sumit?..Ruko main abhi coffee laa..

Sumit-sshhh...baith jao chup chaap..aur munh kholo davai pilaaoonga main.. 😳

Kumkum-Su..nahin..wo..

sumit-kk..abhi tumne vomit kiya hai na?..toh..chalo..baitho uneasy toh nahin lag raha hai na?.

Kumkum-arrey baba..I am perfectly fine.. 😳

Sumit-bas davai pi lo..without any arguments.. 😳

Kumkum reluctantly drinks the medicine...and makes a funny face.."GANDI THI.."

sumit bursts into laughter... 😆

Sumit-Circus ke joker jaisa munh bana rahi ho.. 😆 accha theek hai baba...iske badle hum raat ko ice-cream khaane chalenge..khush?.. 😳

Kk-Promise?..

Sumit-Pakka promise..

And he kisses her cheeks.. 😳

Ab aapka chance preeti di.. 😳 😆

ha ok i will cont 😆
su gets up and freshen up here kk just lies down fr some time
it is night time and all family memebers are at dinning table bt sukk didnt turn up
dadaji:veena abb kk ki tabyet kisi hii 😛
veena:i will go and see
she gets up here su just comes out haa maa 😛
vee:su kk kha hii
su:kya ya par nahi hii
veena:nahi bhata ya par nahi
dadima bathroom check kiya kya
su:ha dadima 😭
su gets tensed up now kul ja kar terrace pur dhaka a
dadaji:dhruv kha hii
veena:who so ra hii
su goes to terrace bt dosnt find kk there to now he is really tensed up 😭
su:kk kha gayi thu 😕
here now everyone start searching pura ghar bt kk is not there 😕
su really tensed and he going up and down 😕 😭 😭


haa now bit suspence 😆

kya bat hai nitz!!!tu bhi writer ban gayi!!!good keep it up and sonu to writer hai hi so u too keep it up. 😉

wow great to see u ppl still carrying on this thread..

was just browsing the forum n noticed this thread.. 😳

Originally posted by: Henna042

wow great to see u ppl still carrying on this thread..

was just browsing the forum n noticed this thread.. 😳

same here 😉...

and good to see nitz writing for a change instead of asking for an update 😆 😆...

Originally posted by: nature

same here 😉...

and good to see nitz writing for a change instead of asking for an update 😆 😆...

kiya kara saab lo taking so long so i decide to write myself😆😆

Originally posted by: preethi

kiya kara saab lo taking so long so i decide to write myself😆😆

haan toh achha hai naa.. u'll become self-dependent 😉 😆....