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Posted: 18 years ago
#61

~congratulationz!!!~

to all our writers...

Amrit, Verni & JJ Thomson

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Posted: 18 years ago
#62
i'm back with a bang

so su-kk go inside the house..no1 is there.su has decided that he'll made kk say i luv u to him
kk - to sumit tum yahan baitho..main khaane ke liye kuch layi
su - ok....he thinks how could kk say those 3 words to him
kk came and sat with him..she brought sum snacks n colddrinks
su - main yeh nahin khaoonga
kk - kyun
su - tum apne haathon se khilayo
kk fed him but she thought this might me sumit's plan so she pour the whole glass of cold drink on him n runs
su chases her...and both of them ran alot
just then su had another plan..he intentionally falls down n pretends as if he is hurt 😉
su - aahhh....
kk - summmmiiitttt....
she came to him n picks him in her arms...both r sitting on the floor
kk - sumit ..tum theek to ho na...dekh kar nahin bhaag sakte kya...bhagwaan ne ankhein to di hi nahin...
she starts crying..
su sits n says - kk..kk plz don't cry..main bilkul theek hun..dekho...i'm fine..wo to sirf ek mazaak tha...( he realizes he wasn't supposed to say so)
kk - kya...mazaak...sumit tum kab serious hoge..hamesha meri feelings k saath khelte ho..tumhein meri bilkul bhi parwah nahin hai...(she is serious now) har baat mein mazaak..agar tumhein sach mein kuch ho jata to main to mar hi jaati..pat nahin tum kab samjhoge k main tumse kitna.....
su immensely happy - main tumse kya...
just then she hugs him tightly and says i luv u
su in turn hugs him double tightly 😆 n says i luv u too
both r hugging...
kk - tumne mujhse apne dil ki baat kyun nahin kahi
su - kyunki mujhe doubt tha ki kya tum bhi mujhse pyaar karti ho ya nahin...
kk - ab to yakeen aa gaya naa
su - haan...aaj main bahut khush hoon..mujhe sab kuch mil gaya..i'm so happy...
he tries to kiss kk but she refuses 👏
kk - nahin sumit yeh theek nahin hoga
su - lekin..
just then she hears rahul's voice
ra - kk...
kk got up..su too..he cleared kk's face off tears...
kk - are bhaiya..aap aa gaye..baaki sab kahan hain
ra - bas aa rahe hain...
kk - main paani laati hoon
ra to su - accha huya sumit tum yahin ho...
su surprisingly - kyun..koi kam tha..
ra - nahin kaam to nahin..bas tumhein invite karna tha...kal diwali hai..tum apne parivaar k saath hamare ghar zaroor aana..
su - oh sure..main zaroor aayoong
ra - aur baki sab ko bhi lekar aana....

enough 4 now...so guys..kk-su have confessed their luv to each other...thnx to me 😆 😆
so now more n more romantic scenes r waiting 4 us..
sum1 continue now
Edited by amrit23 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
ohhh wowwwwwwww gr8 tht they confossed heir luv....ab aage kya hoga 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
...mere aur verni ki su-kk ka pyar izhar karne ki jung mein Amrit baazi lehgaye.... 😕 ( <-- dats me n Verni)

yeh tumne teek nahi kiya Amrit...hai na verni? 😈

Gr8 goin Amrit...ab diwali ka sey mazza aiga!!! 😆

(hey can sum1 PM on wat goes on during ur diwali celebrations...i have no idea and i dont want to be irrespective to the event when i write...like is there any special rasums etc...hope u understand guyz...plz don't get me wrong ) 😳
Edited by dude068 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
hey hina i pmed u abt wht happens in diwali...hope tht helped 😳 😳

ab sum1 continue the story na....am sooo xcited 2 read it 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
hey hina i pmed u abt wht happens in diwali...hope tht helped 😳 😳

ab sum1 continue the story na....am sooo xcited 2 read it 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#67

Sorry lehkin no diwali today guys I need some more time to think up a good plot 😈…meanwhile do enjoy this scene

Rahul has invited su & his family to come celebrate diwali with them…

Su: acha ab mein chalta hoon

He shakes rahuls hand and is about to leave…he goes to the door and stops…he winks at kumkum to come outside with him when no1 is looking and then leaves.

Kk walks towards the door

Ra: kumkum kahaan chalee

Kk: who mein…erm…who maine sumit ko kuch batana tah

Ra: kya batana tah

Kk: (really nervous thinks) 🤔 ab bhaiya aap bhi naa…aap ko kaise batoun key maine sumit ko I love u kehna tah 😳

Kk has gone all red in the face 😳

Kk bhabi: (to rahul) ab tumhe torina batana tah jo tum pooche rahey ho…ja kumkum jaldi ja nahi to su nikal jiega 😉

Kk hurries off.

Rahul and kk's bhabi look at each other and start laffin they hi5 each other (they no their game heehee) 😆 😆 😆

Bhabi: ab to yakeen karte ho key kk ki shaadi karne chahiye? 😃

Rahul: looks away..doesn't want to answer coz he knows shes rite 😕

Neways back to the lovebirds outside...

Su leaning on his car waiting for kk….

Su: ab arre ho?

Kk: who bhaiya ney rok liya tah…shukar hai key bhabhi wahaan ti nahin to tum puri raat yahaan khare ho kar intazaar kerte (points at him 😛 teasingly and laughs)

Su: (serious looking into her eyes) aur tum…kya tum so patee yeh jaante hui key mein baar khara hoon?

Kk: smiles and shakes her head (meaning no) 🤔

Su: pulls her towards him and hugs her 🤗 (bilkul aeise)

Kk: (still hugging) chalo ab jao

Su: (hugging her tighter) 😃

Kk: sumit…

Su: hmm (pretending not to hear her) 😉

Kk: sumit jao abhi…bhaiya key dehkne se pehle

Su: on hearin this leaves her…and makes a sad face 😕

Kk: kal mil rahe hai na? to phir aeisa chera kyun?

Kk hugs him again (only a short hug)… I love you ❤️

Su: (kisses her hand 😳 ) love u too ❤️

And he leaves...

Back at Wadwa House…su is lying on his bed….he can't help but smile…his feeling really happy dat kk does love him. 😃 😃 😛

Su: akir pata laga hi liya kk… 😛

Carrys on smiling to himself…then all of a sudden he stops smiling…😃 😊 😳 😕 ( 😆 )

Su: kal ka invitation to mil gaya…lehkin maine ghar mein to kisiko bhi nahin bataya (Oops) 😳

He gets up and goes running out of the room…he sees the house being decorated for diwali

Su: Ma….Papa…(calls out to them)

Ve: haan beta…kyun chilla rahe hai…kya baat hai

Su: who kal ko diwali hai na!

Kul: to kya tujhe abhi yaad aaya (😆 😆 😆 )

Su: nay papa…(looks at kul…then turns to veena)…ma kal hum sub diwali maneingey…(before he can finish)

Ve: haan to kyun nahin maneingey? 😕 (as always veena is confused)

Su: (getting annoyed) 😡 hum kal rahul key ghar per diwali maneingey…usse ney mujse khud kaha hai

Kul: aur tujhe Rahul kab mila?

Su: Papa jub mein Kum…(getting shy) 😳…papa bus aap se poochna tah kya yeh teek rehega?

Kul & Veena look at each other, they know exactly why Sumit is asking and finally both agree.

Overjoyed Su returns to his room and falls flat face first on his bed…

Su: kal ko tum dehke na kk…mein tumhe kaise statah hoon!!!....

…he lies there thinking of ways to get back at kk for wat she did…

Su: after a while picks up his head from the bed…with a very very very naughty smile…mil gaye solution!….😈 Diwali...bohut...bohut...mubaruk ho...kumkum!!! 😆

Feel free to continue....

If u guyz have ne ideas on how su can get his own back on kk...plz do write about it!!!! 😉

Edited by dude068 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww hina ths ws sooooooooo sweet.....continue jaldi na

cnt w8 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
hehehe...suspense at the end eh?? waiting to read more!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
u know guys the best part about r fanfic is that su-kk's parents r nt against their love 👏
i luv this 😊 they r being separated not coz of their families but coz su has bt...so romantic n realistic luv it is

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