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Posted: 18 years ago
#81
great going.
all of you have return superbally 😃 😃 .
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Posted: 18 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: preethi

great going.
all of you have return superbally 😃 😃 .

Hey thanks for reading & commenting!

Really appreciated! 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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~ Thaaaaaaank U!!!! 😆 ~

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi heena its really very goooooood story
i like it very muccch
Keeep it up 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sundas

hi heena its really very goooooood story
i like it very muccch
Keeep it up 👏

Thank you! Sundas...😉

... i can't take full credit 4 it...Amrit & Verni r

just as much apart of the story too..😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
arre wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww henna n amrit...u guys r mastttttttttt

awesummmmmmmmmmmmm
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow!! 😛 That was another great scene too!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Everybody has gone home finally…yes even sumit has gone! 😆 Kk is in her room at her dressing table when her bhabi comes in.

Pr: kk…

Kk: gee bhabi?

Pr: kya tu mujhe kuch batana chahati hai?

Kk: (looks at her a lil surprised by her question) aap ko kuch batana chahati hoon? 😲 Kya mutlub bhabi…mein kuch sumje nahi

Pr: dekh agar main tujhe se kuch poochoonge to tu mujhe such baategee? 😳

Kk: of course batoonge..kyun bhabi aap ko yakeen nahi hai?

Pr: hai yakeen....tuj pey to mujhe pura barosa hai 😊

Kk: acha bataye kya baat hai?

Pr: ….er…um…woh tere bhaiya hai na kk who poochna chahrey tey…(she hesitates) 😳

Kk: (thinks she knows wats coming) bhaiya ney kya poochna hai? 😲

Pr: (looks into kk's eyes) tumhare aur sumit key beech kya chal raha hai?

Kk: (goes red…she has no idea wat to say…) 😳 😳 😳 😳

Pr: aaj tum aur sumit kahaan gaye tey diwali key doraan? 😳

Kk: (turns and faces her bhabi…looking her back in the eye she tells her the whole truth that su-kk love each other…but she jus tells priya that he wanted to give her a gift that's why he took her away from every1..for a while)

Pr: (smiles) mujhe pata tah key tu joot nahi bolege…acha ab tere bhaiya ko bhi bata dehte hoon…pata nahi ab tak kya soch raha hoga 😃

Kk: (holds her hand to stop her) nahi bhabi, sumit ne kaha hai key who bhaiya se khud baat karna chahata hai 😳

Pr: acha to teek hai…lehkin abhi to jakey sambaloon nah rahul ko tum dono key liya…(smiles at kk and leaves) 😆

Kk: (is extremely happy) she lies on her bed and all she can think bout is the kiss…❤️ Soon she falls fast asleep.

Su's room:

Su is pacing up and down thinking

Su: mere wajah se aaj pata nahi kk ko konse lecture sune pareinge…aur upper se maine bhi usse akela chor diya…ab to humara milna julna to bund ho hi gaya hoga..aur who bhi uss akshat ki wajah se! uurrgghhh! Akri baar uss bachche pur barosa karoonga 😆 😆 😆

….his still thinking about kk…getting annoyed at himself 😡

su: haan main usse phone karke pooche ta hoon key kya kua? Bechare ko zyaada dant to nahi pari…

….picks up his mobile and calls kk

the phone rings….and rings….and rings….

Su: phone kyun nahi utare…phir se karta hoon! (determined)

Again it jus rings and rings…(kk in deep sleep dreaming about su) 😆

Su:…uurrgghh!...laga tah hai kk mujhse abhi bohut naraaz hai…isliye phone nahin utaree. 😒

He chucks the phone on his pillow…😭 he lies down but can't get too sleep. His restless because he doesn't know what state kk is in. 😆

Ok newayz carry on from a new day…anything can happen? Think of some new plot?

Edited by Henna042 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
awesum part henna 😊
culdn't think of anything rite now 😆 😆 will cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90
ideas cum suddenly...i've got 1 😆 😆

su culdn't sleep the whole night.
a new day begins..kk awakes..sees all his surroundings
kk - hmm...aaj din bahut accha jayega
she steps up from the bed and goes 4 a bath.in the meantime..su tries kk's mobile but as she is in bathroom, she didn't picked
su very sad 😭 - lagta hai baat zyada hi badh gayi...kuch karna hoga

kk cums out n sees there is a missed call from sumit..she calls him back.su picks up the fone

kk - sumit tumne fone kiya tha
su - haan...
kk - kya hua???
su - kal raat kuch hua to nahi na
kk - matlab??
su - tum mujhse abhi mil sakti ho..
kk - sumit..abhi kaise..main ghar se bahar kaise aayoon
su - mujhe kuch nahin pata..tum bas jaldi se mujhse milne aao...that's it..
he cuts the fone
kk - hai k nahin gadha kahin ka 😆 😆 ab main itni subah kya kehkar ghar se bahar jayoon

just then priya passes by her room
pri - kisse baatein kar rahi ho kk
kk - kuch nahin bhabhi...
pri - kya hua
kk hugs her n asks her to handle rahul as she wants to meet sumit..
pri - lekin...
kk - plz...bhabhi..plz...main jaldi wapas aa jayoongi..promise
pri - accha..chal jaa

kk happily goes to get ready
pri - are..abhi dobara kyun change karne gayi
kk - are bhabhi..sumit se main in kapdon mein milne thode jaayoongi..
pri - tum bhi na...

she goes n meanwhile..kk goes to sumit
priya handles rahul..he didn't said anything..but he had a plan
ra - packing karo..
pri - kyun
ra - hum kal alibagh ja rahe hain
pri - tumhein lagta hai kk chalegi..sumit ko chodkar
ra - zaruur chalegi..sumit hamare saath jo hoga 😉
pri - oh really..kk sunkar khush ho jayegi..
ra - main chahta hoon ki agar sumit kk se pyaar karta hai to alibagh mein sab k saamne kabool kar le
pri - tumhein lagta hai aesa hoga..
ra - lets hope 4 the best
he calls sumit's parents n told them everything about their plan to make sumit confess his love in front of everybody

there at sum cafe..su is waiting 4 kk
kk arrives n sits..
su - kal raat...
kk - oh..ho..subah se yehi kahi ja rahe ho..kya kal raat..she asks with a little innocency
su - rahul ko pata chal gaya hoga hamare baare mein
kk - nahin..unhein kuch nahin pata
su - kaise..
kk tells him that she told priya and she'll handle him
su - pata hai..main saari raat soya nahin...
kk - oh..my sweet baby 😳
su - mujhe abhi tumhari god mein sona hai
kk - what
su grabs her hand n takes her to a garden where he puts his head in kk's lap
so sweet scene 😃
kk n su talked about many thing n everythings...then suddenly she realizes she is late 4 home
kk - sumit..bahut der ho gayi..ab mujhe ghar jaana chahiye...
su - no...
kk - i'll have to

kk hugs sumit and leaves...no umit didn't dropped her coz she ws in her own car

on reaching home both of them came to know about their visit to alibagh
kk - bhaiya..hum sachi jaa rahe hain
ra - haan
kk - sumit bhi saath hoga..
ra - haan
kk - oh..i luv u bhaiya..thnk u so much

she went to her room happily
sumit too on cloud nine after knowing this

so the next day..the big day..su-kk going alibagh with their families n sumit will confess his love there

sum1 continue now...the sweet moments spend there..the whole family n our luv birds kk-su



Edited by amrit23 - 18 years ago

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