FF Kumkum- Ek Pyari Si Prem Kahaani #1 - Page 6

Kk really upset deep down (thanks 2 verni lol 😆 )…but she stops herself from crying 😭. She picks up her bag and is about to leave…when a thought comes to her…slowly she sits down again 😕

Kk: kahin yeh sumit phir se muzzak to nahi kar raha…

She remembas all his previous pranks…she looks over and sees that sumit is still engaged in the conversation 😡 😡 😡

Su: thanks a lot yaar mini…tu nahin hote to main kassie jaan pata key kk mere bare mein kya soch ti hai…abhi agar woh mujse naraz hui to iska mutlab hai ke woh bhi mujse pyar karte hai…❤️

Mini: mein nahi hoti phir bhi tumne kaise bhi pata kar lehna tah…all the best Su. Aur haan shaadi pey bhulana mutt bhool nah! 🤢 (tumhe to kk khabi bhi nahi aane deyge)

They hug and are still smiling…coz their plan has fallen into place perfectly.

Kk: still watching them gets very jealous 😡…thru tightly gritted teeth 😵…yeh mini ke bache ko to mein nahin choroonge agar yeh mujse sumit ko cheeney ki khosish kare

Mini leaves. Su turns and starts walking towards kk with a big grin on his face. 😉

Kk: kuch soch…kya karoon?

(she thinks and thinks)

kk: wasse agar su doosre ladkhiyon se baat kare to mujhe usse kya…who kare jo uske marzi…par nahi who assey kaise kar sakta hai….uuurrggghhh!!!! stupid dil…stupid emotions (standing there apne app ko kuas rahi hai…in a real dilemma)

She looks at su he is almost there….she decides to play her cards kewl…coz she knows her love can't be wrong and she has convinced herself its jus another one of his chaals. So kumkum dimaak se kaam lehte hai (as always)

Su: hi kk

Kk: hm…hi

Su: kaise ho? (purposely asking such questions)

Kk: (angry) jaise ek dost hote hai…bilkul waise 😡

Su: (thinks) jali hahahaha….kk to bikul jaali definitely

Kk: (thinks) kya key rahi hai shanti se kam ley nahi to su sumjega mein usse mini- shini jo bhi hai se jaalti hoon

Kk: mera mutlab hai key...haan teek hoon (smiles sweetly) 😊

Su: (looking at her amazed & shocked by her reaction) mutters: huh! 😲...tum teek ho?!!

Kk: su yeh tum khud se kya baat kar rahe ho?

Su: nahi nahi yeh to ache baat hai na key tum teek ho 😕

Kk: per…kya….TUM…teek ho? (asks in a mocking way) 😛

Kk has realized by Su's nervousness that it was all a plan to get her jealous

Su: yah fine…absolutely!!! (nods his head tryin to convince her but shes not convinced 👎🏼)

Su (thinks) abhi upset hogayege aur muhje mini key bare mein poochege…haan haan aeisa hi hoga…😉

Kk: to su tumne mujhe yahaan kyun bhuliya tah? Koi impt baat tee kya? (trying to stop herself from smiling) 😈

Su: quietly…jo baat tee who to tumne shuru hoone se pehle hi katum kardee (snapping out of it)

…erm who bus wasie hi tumse milna ta isliye

kk looks at su all gubrata hua and thinks to herself how cute he's looking. ❤️ ❤️

Su: chalo mein tumne ghar tak chordoon

(he's feelin really upset coz he remembas wat he said to mini……'"abhi agar woh mujse naraz hui to iska mutlab hai ke woh bhi mujse pyar karte hai…"')

kk: acha teek hai chalo

Both in the car….

Su: keeps looking at kumkum…keh do yeh such nahi…keh do key tum bhi mujse pyar karte ho…he really thinks that kk doesn't like him

On the other hand

Kk: taar jao sumit…abhi tumhare kabar lehne baaki hai (smiles to herself😈 )…tumhe bhi waase hi sataonge jaise tumne mujse sataney ki khosish ki

They reack Kk house…and kk quickly gets out of the car and goes towards her house.

Kk: (screams out) Bye!!! (without even looking back)

Su: (really frustrated)…kk ne to aaj mur kar bhi nahi dehka…hamesha to baar baar mur kar dehktee hai (aww...poor su!)

Smacks the stearing wheel 😡 …kumkum is watching him from her window and now she knows she woz right not to get upset.

Kk: pagal ho tum sumit…acha ab inta bhi nahi satatee 😆

She picks up the phone and calls him…watching him from the window

Back in the car….

hey this is not all of the scene i'll carry on the story in a bit but 1st i gotta go get something to eat...lol...😆 be bac soon! pukka! 😉 typed it in a hurry so sorry if it doesnt real too well and for any spellin mistakes lol 😆

Originally posted by: nature

hey hina..........awsum beginning.........read it completely just nw & i must say that its simply superb 👏

thanks....😆

but my writting is no way as good as yourz yet...😳

Originally posted by: dude068

hahahaha....😆 😆 😆

so sorry anku had no idea!!!! i only jus turned 19 myself lol...neways it wasn't on your profile so plz do forgive for assuming so....😳

arre henna why u saying sorry....

ths happened wid rachuu also...she also called me di while shes also 19😆😆

its a tradition n its okie yaar....chilllllllllll....u call me by any name😉

and must say am ur fannnnnnnn.....u write soooooooo well👏

luved it completetly😃

Originally posted by: ankuhujulover

arre henna why u saying sorry....

ths happened wid rachuu also...she also called me di while shes also 19😆😆

its a tradition n its okie yaar....chilllllllllll....u call me by any name😉

and must say am ur fannnnnnnn.....u write soooooooo well👏

luved it completetly😃

KEWL 😆!!!!

This is my 100^th post…wow dat woz quick…lol

Newayz bac to da story…

She picks up the phone and calls him…watching him from the window

Back in the car….phone rings...

Su: (angry) ab kisko sumit ki zaroorat par gaye?!!!

He looks at his phone and his face lights up!!!! 😃

Su: ab saree gulatfami door kar dehta hoon…kumkum ko sub kuch such bata dehta hoon plan keh bare mein

Kk: (inside) are itne dare kyun laga raha hai…pata nahin wahaan bahta kya soch raha hai….(she puts her hand on her mouth to stop herself from laughin but can't help it 😆)

Finally su picks up…

Su: hello

Kk:…(tries her best to stop laughin but u can hear it in her voice) hey sumit…

Su: (judging her tone thinks shes really happy without me…he becomes even more sad 😭) bolo kaise phone kiya?

Kk: nahi pehle tum batao…phone utane mein itne dare kyun ki? (still smiling)

Su: who kya hai naa mein gharee chala raha tah to phone ko jeb sey nikal the hui tora waqt lag gaya 😕

Kk: (intimidatingly 😈 ) tum such keh rahe ho? (looking out the window at him)

Su: feeling really hot around the collar…he feels as though someone is watching him…lol 😆

Su: (quickly) haan

Kk: acha? 😛

Su: ab tum batao kya kehna tah?

Kk: maine…yeh kehna tah key tum waapis mere ghar aa jao mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat karni ti

Su: waapis???....(are bahir hi to hoon)….long silence

Kk: are itna sooch kyun rahe ho…abhi tum ghar key bahir hi to ho undar aa jao….she cuts the phone and laughs like crazy still watching su 😆 😆

In the car….😕

Su: su yeh tum kya kar rahe ho….(feeling helpless he puts his head on the steering wheel and buries himself with his arms) 😒

On seeing this kk becomes serious 😳

Kk: lagta hey key muzzak kuch zayada hi ho gaye…lehkin su ko bhi to aeisa nahi karna chahiye ta…kya zaroorat ti?

She goes out to him…n sits back in the passengers seat…Su doesn't even realize coz he's so upset n lost in his own thought.

Kk: puts her hand through his hair then rest it on his shoulder…Su doesn't react to her touch

Soothingly she says: Sumit…kya hua? Tum itne pareshaan kyun ho?

Su: (still not lifting his head) kk plz mujhe akela chor do…

Kk: par kyun? Mere kya galti hai?...acha dehko I'm very sorry agar maine tumhare dil dukhiya hai…seriously…

Su: (thinking) jan poch keh to nahi duhkiya na…agar tum mujse pyar nahin karte to is mein tumhare kya galti hai

Kk carries on talking whilst he is thinking

Kk:…seriously…lehkin su tumhai bhi wasse behave karne ki bhi koi zaroorat nahin thi. Tumne who mini ko wahaan kyun bhuliya yeh jaante hui ke mujhe bura lage ga? 😡

Su: (lifts his head surprised) to kya tumhe pata ta mere plan key bare mein? 😲

Kk: (smiles innocently) haan…itne baar to tum mujse muzzak kar chuke ho ache tarha se jaan geyee hoon tumhe 😃

Su: small smile beginning to appear on his face 😊

Kk: smiles too…she pulls his arm towards her and gives a short sweet hug 🤗

Su is bac to normal now….no longer feeling upset

Su: to...erm..kumkum….tumhe mini kaise lagee? 😉

Kk: looks at him and give him a well deserved slap on him arm…itne ache lage…

Both laugh together… 😆

Well ab mere bus…until I have more ideas

Hope u enjoyed the show guyz?!!!

so sweeeeeeeeeet bachcha .......really hina u were too gud......... 👏

okk my turn........
su (thinking) : oh kk main to tumahre dil ki baat jaanana chahta tha .......aur tumne saara plan fail kar diya.........ab kya karoon.

kk still resting on his shoulders.

su: kk ghar nahi jaana kya........tumhare bhaiya pareshaan ho rahenge honge.
kk:ghar par koi nahi hai.
su :kya
kk:haan
su:to phir hum ander chal kar bhi to baat kar sakte hain...
kk:ohh haan sure chalo...

they go inside.......and su decides ki aaj woh kk ke dil ki baat zubaan par laakar hi rahega...

Originally posted by: raji05

very fun scene!!

Thank you so much! 😳

Originally posted by: verni

so sweeeeeeeeeet bachcha .......really hina u were too gud......... 👏

okk my turn........
su (thinking) : oh kk main to tumahre dil ki baat jaanana chahta tha .......aur tumne saara plan fail kar diya.........ab kya karoon.

kk still resting on his shoulders.

su: kk ghar nahi jaana kya........tumhare bhaiya pareshaan ho rahenge honge.
kk:ghar par koi nahi hai.
su :kya
kk:haan
su:to phir hum ander chal kar bhi to baat kar sakte hain...
kk:ohh haan sure chalo...

they go inside.......and su decides ki aaj woh kk ke dil ki baat zubaan par laakar hi rahega...

R u sure key aeisa ho payega Verni? 😈....hahahaha

nahi muzzak kar rahi hoon! jo agey likeyga wohi baat payega!

wowwwwwwwwwwww yaar toooooooo gud....

and hina i luv the emoticons u use...ekdum perfect...keep it up

verni urs ws sweet 😳

congrats hina u completed 100 posts

u noe the fan fic post ws my 1st post in d forum 😳 😳 😳