FF Kumkum- Ek Pyari Si Prem Kahaani #1

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Amrit, Verni & Henna

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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww a gr8 idea dear...we hd a fanfic...will c if its opened too...i feel if u like fan fics..u must read tht...it ws toooo gud...

huju ka pyaar-fanfic

and ths s gr8...naam...

kya yehi pyaar hai 😳

i loved reading huju ka pyaar-fanfic dats lyk the best eva fanfic i've read.

kasam se when i found out bout it I sat there reading it all nite...from begining to end 😆...but i specially wanna write about Kumkum & Sumit

and rach's 1 was good to esp the special SuKK scenes..but that ended

hey rach here using bruvz ID.....loved the intro 2 ur fanfic dude!!!! sounds interesting!!! continue sooon

ok so here goes I'm gonna start if off...let me know wat u guyz fink...

Part 1-

It is a cold dark day...the sea is hittin the shore with great strength. From the distance you can see a small shadowed figure standing on the rocky beach. The figure is staring out deep into the sea lost in her own thoughts…

A voice shouts her name from behind…...(cuming closer) are tum yahaan ho, aur sab wahaan tumare intazaar kar rahein hain.

The figure is still showing no response to the voice.

Voice: kya hua…(sighs) …phir unhi kayalon mein ko gaye? (puts a hand on her shoulder)

Slowly the figure turns…the wind blowing her hair into her face. She raises her gentle warm hands and slowly removes her hair from her face…there u see standing a divine angel…perfect in every manner….

😳 😳 😳 😳

…but then u look into her eyes n see so much pain and tears!!!

…she looks her friend in the eye as speaks with the soothingest voice ever heard:Kya hua?

Her friend- KUMKUM tum achey tarah se jaantey ho key hum sub dost log yahan kyun aye hain..aur phir bhi tum unhi kayalon mein ghom ho. Chalo ab mood teek karo aur humare saath aa kar khoob masti karo!

Kumkum looks away towards the sea again and thinks to herself : such kaha tumne phir unhi hi kayalon mein kogaye tee…par kya karoon in kayalon key siva merey pass tumhara kuch nahin bacha

Her friend tugs at her and motions her to come with her
Friend- chalo naa…plz

Reluctantly Kumkum gives her a faint smile and goes with her.

All friend are on the beach playing volleyball n really njoyin themselves. Kumkum and a friend are at a distance sittin and watching them play.

(Radika, Nisha & Pooja are just the names of Kumkums friends😉)

Radika: Acha Kumkum, yeh bato hum shaam ko kya karein???...tum kya karna chatee ho?
Kumkum: (still quite sad gazes at her friend) pata nahi…joh tum log kaho…
Radika: kya baat hai Kumkum…jab se hum yahaan aay hain tum istara ukre ukre se kyun ho…(there is a long silence)
Kumkum:(gently) jab sub kuch jaantee ho to kyun pooche rahi ho???…(par hum to nahi jaante naa!!!😛)

She looks at her friends and sees every1 is very happy…she starts to feel a little guilty about her behaviour but also helpless at the same time. She thinks to herself…yeh sub mere khushiyon ke liye mujhe us jaga se itna door lehkar aay hain aur main abhi tak us hi gum mein koi hui hoon.

She decides to forget all her worries for a bit and try and be happy (even if it is fake) just for her friends sake. She turns back to her friend…

Kumkum: erm Radika…kyun na hum aaj raat ko disco mein chalein???
Radika: hey great idea yaar! To tai raha aaj raat ko hum disco Retro main jaeinge (Radika has a big smile on her face thinkin...yes i've got thru to Kumkum)
Kumkum: (to herself) shahad wahaan mein bheed mein ko sakoon

She gets up to go join the others playing volleyball when it starts to rain heavily…all friends start to run n find shelter…but Kumkum stands in the rain, she closes her eyes and smiles 😳…she whispers tumhai baaris bohut pasand hai naa…mujhe aaj bhi woh din yaad hai jab…

KUMKUM....KUMKUM....

She stops abruptly when she hears someone call her name 😲…..shes breathing deeply now...she recognises the voice...she turns quickly and looks fast scanning the whole beach…

Whose Kumkum talking about?...who called her?...who is her eyes searching 4???

Come on guys now i really need sum feedback before i post the next part...to make sure this is all worthwhile 👍🏼

so plz plz plz reply...ne1!!!!

ok I'm off to finish of my Uni work...plz get bac 2 me soon

very good 👏 👏 superb...
i shall continue the story but them plz don't stop on a secret..how do i know what's in ur mind 😆 😆
u finish it on a note n then all of us will continue it...this was how we wrote our initial fanfic...i hope u don't mind
just give us a clear picture of what kk-su r going thru n every1 will surely participate in writing this story n in this way it will never end 😊

Originally posted by: amrit23

very good 👏 👏 superb...
i shall continue the story but them plz don't stop on a secret..how do i know what's in ur mind 😆 😆
u finish it on a note n then all of us will continue it...this was how we wrote our initial fanfic...i hope u don't mind
just give us a clear picture of what kk-su r going thru n every1 will surely participate in writing this story n in this way it will never end 😊

YEY!!!! Finally somebody replies THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! 👏 👍🏼

well i dont really have much going on in my mind about what happens next...thats the beauty of it being carried on by every1...the story can go on watever way u want...

...this way we get every1 finkin n hopefully we'll have some really unique plots in this fanfic

hope thats ok!!! Let me know if you have ne other suggestions 😉

hi bachcha logggg fan-fic mere bina kaise poora ho sakta hai...........sorry for replying so late.........tthe beginning was.......suoerb gr8 👏
but tell me if i could also write so we'll begin it...........tell me ki kumkum ka flash back dikhaana hai ya phir continue at the same stage.......
i m always with u 😊