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Posted: 18 years ago
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Su locks the door and kk finally manages to snap out of seeing su afta such a long time. Su takes a few steps towards her and smiles…

…getting cautious kk starts movin back 😳

su: kya hua?...kahan ja rahe ho?

Kk's eyes fixed on su and his on hers…kk shaking her head with great innocence

K: kahin to nahin (not even realizing that shes movin away)

Su: (naughtily) to phir yahaan aao

Kk: (gubra rahi hai) kya abhi? 😕

Kk is still moving back and su towards her

Su: hmm abhi (holds his hand out)

Just then kk bumps into the cupboard (only gently) and stops (oops deadend). Before she has time to move away su is already there right in front of her standing very very close.

Kk looks right and left but theres no where to run to…su puts his arm up on the cupboard leaning even closer towards her…eyes fixed completely on each other.

Su: to?

Kk: (can feel his warmth and is a little scared) to….kya?...🤔

Su: to do naa! 😃

Su moves his face closer

Kk: sumit!!! 😲(puts her hands on his shoulders and tries to move him away)

Su: ek hug hi to maang raha hoon…itne din baad jo milein hain…(smiling cheekily) 😉…aur tumhi ney to kaha tah key yeh 'phir kaabhi' aye ya na aye…to do naa

Kk: relieved…but all shy now looks down and shakes her head…nahi

And she pushes him and runs….Su falls on the bed (hasn't got time to feel anything he needs to get kk fast 😆 😆 😆 )

Before kk can unlock the door Su grabs her from behind 🤗 and holds her tight…😃

Kk: (blushin) choro mujhe... 😳

He turns her around still holding her tight in his arms…her hair fall in front of her face

Su: (removing her hair from her face, she likes the feel of su's touch) chordoon? 😛

Kk smiles unable to resist the temptation leans forwards and put her head on su's shoulder. They hug….kk holdin su real tight now

Su: (messing around now) nay nay ab to main tumhai chor hi dehta hoon

Kk: (unable to see his expression thinks that he is upset now)…acha?! 😔

Su: (still holding her) chalo choro mujhe

Kk: (thinks he's serious) unwillingly she loosens her grip and moves away

Su pretending to be serious 😳…kk see his expression and gets upset 😭 she's about to leave…su takes 1 look at kk's expression and cant help it…he bursts out laughing…😳 😊 😃 😆

Kk realizes he woz messing about & slaps his arm

Kk: jao…bohut bure ho tum…nahin baat kartee tumse

Su: (to himself) uh oh! Yeh to gussa 😡 kar gayee!

Kk leaves the room

Su standing there still thinks…ab isse kaise manaoon

He runs out into the corridor and see her she hasn't quite reached everybody else…he calls out to her

Su: kumkum….(quickly walking towards her) kum kum kum kum kum…(he sighs and stops in front of her)

He holds his ears and pulls a sad face 😒….(so swwweeeeeeet 😳 jus try n imagine it gals)

Su: acha baba….very sorry!

She smiles and he knows his apology is accepted

Su: chaho to ab puker sukti ho….extends his arms in a mocking way 😃

Kk: kuch to sharum karo…sub log yahaan hai (pushing his arms down) 😳

He hold her hand and pulls her in the opp direction to the party…

Kk: kahaan leke ja rahe ho

Su: (laughing) ghar dikhane…tum shaid nahin jaante yeh ghar bohut bara hai is mein bohut kuch hai dikhane kay liye! 😆

He leads her onto the terrace…it's a beautiful night…all stars are shining really bright

Kk: wow…sub kuch kitna acha lag raha hai na…(she is totally amazed by her surroundings)

She lets go of su's hand and goes and sits on the swing….

Kk: mann karta hai key main hamesha key liya bus yehi reh jaoon!!!

Su: smiling 😃 to see her so happy. (thinks…mera bhi mann karta hai key tum hamesha mere hi pass raho)

Kk: are aao naa…motions him to come sit

Su: sits down

Kk put her head on his shoulder

Su: madam ab soney 🥱 ka koi plan to nahin hai naa…

Both look at each other and laugh

Kk:…nahi

All of a sudden Su is saddened…he remembas the time in pune when they woke the next morning…

Su: (thinks) nahi…who to mein phir nahin hooney doonga is bar mein keh doonga takey kumkum mujse phir kabhi door na jai

Su: kk…

Kk: hmm..

SuKk are sittin close and kk has her head on his shoulder and is hugging him

Su: maine tumse kuch kehna hai

Kk: (completely lost in being so close to su) sssshhhhh! Kuch mutt kaho

She holds his arm and puts it round herself….then hugs him tightly 🤗

Su: unable to say nething now…he returns the hug…su's eyes are watering now coz he is happy but also unsure if kumkum will eva be his forever!

Both sit and stare at the beautiful starry sky!

Kk: closes her eyes and snuggles up closer to Su...😳…she loves the feeling of his warmth and his scent…she feels extremely happy

Su: passes his hand thru her beautiful hair…and is still wondering 😕 how he can make her stay forever?…

Aage? Don't ask me its your turn!!!! 😛

Edited by dude068 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42

kk - sumit kya kar rahe ho
su - are..maine kya kiya..
just then veena calls su
su - aayaa maa
he isn't happy at all
kk - go..ur mom is calling u
su - tum bhi saath chalo
he grabs her hand n took her
veena - tum dono kahan reh gaye the..kk beta sumit ne tumhein ghar dikhaya ya nahin..
kk with a big smile on her face - g..bahut acchi tarah se

just then kk awakes from her dream...
i hope u all remember this is a flashback going on
her friend takes her to the room

kk to herself - akhir aesi kya galti ho gayi mujhse sumit jo tum mujhse yuun naraaz ho..kya tumhein mere pyaar par yakeen nahin tha..maine hamesha se tumhein pure dil-o-jaan se chaha aur tumne...tumne kyun mera dil toda..kyun mujhe chod kar chale gaye..mera kasoor to bata do...maine to kabhi tumhare bina jeena socha hi nahin...i luv u...i really luv u alot...plz cum back...plz..

on the other hand...

su to himself - kaash k main tumhein apni majboori bata paataa..kaash yeh zindagi mujhe is mod pe na laayi hoti..akhir main tumhein kaise bata doon ki...he stops..i still luv u kk..more than my life..even more than u can ever imagine...main apni khushiyon k liye tumhari zindagi barbaad nahin kar sakta...agar hamari shaadi ho jati to bhi hamara saath kuch pal ka hi tha..main saari umar tumhare saath nahin reh sakta..takdeer mujhe nahin rehne degi..ur sumit is going to die kk..i've brain tumour...main tumse shaadi karke tumhein ek vidhva k roop mein nahin dehk sakta..i'm sorry...lekin agar main tumse door hoon to isme tumhara bhala hi hai

and with tears in his eyes...he remembers kk...kk to remembers him..both crying...😭😭
su - main jaanta hoon tum aaj bhi mujhse bahut pyaar karti ho
kk - apni jaan se zyada tumhein chaha hai..aeise kaise bhool jayoon
su - tumhein bhoolna hoga...main tumhein majboor karoonga...thoda dard zaroor hoga lekin tumhein khush dekhne ka sapna kam se kam sach to hoga..
kk - agar tum yeh soch rahe ho ki main tumhein bhoola doongi to tum galat ho...main hamesha tumhara intzaar karti rahoongi...main tumse tumhare door jaane ki wajha bhi nahin poochoongi..main jaanti hoon tumhari zaroor koi majboori hogi..
su to god - akhir kyun hum ek nahin ho sakte...

and now he remembers how beautiful those days were when they used to meet n spend time together
he remembers how he convinced kk to dance with him in the same party where kk n su's families were present

su-kk did a wonderful dance..a little romantic but not much coz every1 was eyeing them

priya to rahul - dono ek saath kitne acche lagte hain naa...
ra - shayad..main nahin maanta ki kk abhi shaadi k layak hai
priya - tum kab manoge...
ra - jab kk khud mujhse aake kahegi...

after sum dance..rahul calls kk as they were supposed to go home..kk-su sad..none of them happy

but she said bye to sumit n left...

sum1 continue on what happened next...but let the story b in the flashback...there romance n all

n don't forget..su hasn't yet said i luv u to kk

i know it was a bit touchy but it was important to disclose why su was going away from kk

Edited by amrit23 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
sorry bachcha log shayad mera twist tum logon ko achcha nahi laga.........but i thot ki kk is from a gud family and any girl will always realize her limitations aur waise bhi jab wapas aayenge tabhi to baat aage badhegi.........

well done amrit BT yahaan bhi chalega..............and heena u r a master in romantic scenes..........both of u a gud job 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
okk i'll cont.......


su kk at their respective rooms obviously thinking abt one another.

su: kya main bhi kk se ab tak apne dil ki baat nahi kar paaya. magar mujhe yeh bhi to nahi pata ki kk mujhse pyaar karti hai bhi .................karti hai ...........still doubtful....hmm kyun na check kiya jaaye.........yesssssssssss kal main pata kar ke rahoonga ek plan hai...........

there kk.........

kk:pata nahi su mere dil ki baat samajh bhi paaya hai ya nahi aur main uske dil ki baat kaise pata lagaaon.
suddenly her mobile rings.........
kk picks up carelessly.......:hello
it's su.....
su:to ab tak jaag rahi ho?
kk:su.....
su:aur kaun?
kk:tum bhi to soye nahi.
su:haan kisi ke baare mein soch raha tha..........aur tum to mere baare mein soch rahi hogi ........right.
kk:kyun sirf tum hi bache ho jiske baare mein main sochoon..........
su:achcha to kisi aur ke baare mein.....
kk:haan.

both are giggling and trying to make other one jealous

kk:achcha phone kaise kiya?
su:haan woh kya tum kal mujhse mil sakti ho.
kk really happy:kal
su:koi prob?
kk:nahi kab aur kahaan
su:4:00 clock in the rstaurant "Just around the corner"
kk:okk
su:hmmm
kk:haan

both want to continue their talk but don't know what to say.
kk:........okk bye
su (sad) :bye.

and they sleep dreaming abt each other.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
next morning.......

su gets up and goes to the office..........and kk their goes to her college.....
both are eagerly waiting for 4:00 .........

kk reaches on time.....and is waiting for sumit........it was 4:30 and he didn't come.
kk (to herself):kahin bhool to nahi gaya.
by then he comes there and on the way coming towards kk he meets a girl.........(actually he planned it to make kk jealous)

su to the girl:hi mini tum yahaan.
mi:hi su how are u?
su:i m fine .....

there kk thinking :yeh su kis se baat kar raha hai.......woh bhi itna khush ho kar....she gets up and goes there.

su:ohh kk .........shez mini and mini yeh hai meri nayi dost kk.
kk (thinks) : sirf dost.
mi:hi kk
kk:hi
su :yaad hai mi hum clooge mein saath mein kitni masti karte the....aur .....
mi:haan aur sab hume love-birds samajhte the.........we were so close....honey...
kk:love-birds........
su:haan aise affair to college mein aksar hote hain.......kyun mi.
mi:haam aur wohi insaan college ke baad mil jaaye to samjho life set.......
su keeps flirting and keeps glancing kk's expressions .......finally kk runs away from there...........

bachcha log plz cont.............im tired.........
hope now u all won't be angry now........
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww tht ws soooooooo gudddd....hina amrit verni u all r soooooooo gud yaar 😃 😃

gr8 wrok yaar....ab koi aage likho na 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
wow what a time to have a brain tumour rite? 😆

wasse being a med student and all ek baat kahoon...brain tumour itna bhi common nahin hai... 😆 😆 😆

neways its original in our story coz none of the other characters have had it 😃 ...we'll show B.A.G v can think of a better plot for su's brain tumour track...hai naa?!

gr8 goin guyz... 👏 👏 👏

...n verni well dun yaar...now i got some ideas now on how to cont...their romance...kya idea hai ...jealousy..wah!!

aur amrit...keep up the past n present storyline...goin good!!!!

so i'll get bac to u guys a little later on!!!
Edited by dude068 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: ankuhujulover

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww tht ws soooooooo gudddd....hina amrit verni u all r soooooooo gud yaar 😃 😃

gr8 wrok yaar....ab koi aage likho na 😳 😳 😳

Thank you!!

and hats off to this fanfics true NO: 1 FAN

....da 1 n only ANKU !!!!!

👏 👏 👏

Edited by dude068 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: dude068

Thank you!!

and hats off to this fanfics true NO: 1 FAN

....da 1 n only ANKU DI!!!!!

👏 👏 👏

awww sooooooooo sweet hina.....thts a pleasure

bt the fan fic is sooooooo gud yaar😃

and u noe i thnk am younger hina....am just 18....so i shuld call u di😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankuhujulover

awww sooooooooo sweet hina.....thts a pleasure

bt the fan fic is sooooooo gud yaar😃

and u noe i thnk am younger hina....am just 18....so i shuld call u di😆

hahahaha....😆 😆 😆

so sorry anku had no idea!!!! i only jus turned 19 myself lol...neways it wasn't on your profile so plz do forgive for assuming so....😳

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