FF Kumkum- Ek Pyari Si Prem Kahaani #1 - Page 4

wowwwwwwwwww heena....i luvedddddd it

brought a bigggg smile on my face 😃 😃

i luv fanfics 😳 😳 😳

and u ppl r doing gr8 😛 😛

wow!! this is what a fanfic is like is it?? itz really awesome!! your expression is excellent! luved it!

okkkkkkkk guys ab "Main hoon naa".......gr8888888888888888888888888888888888 storyyyyyyyyyyy lovelyyyyyyyyyyy 👏
okk
its morning now.su and kk sleeping keeping their hand on each others. kk wakes up and looks at su.......and then suddenly realizes something.
kk (thinking) :yeh mujhe kya ho gaya hai? main su ke itne kareeb ........kya yeh sahi hai? par su bura insaan nahi hai.........magar mujhe ghar bhi to jaana hoga.
she is thinking when su wakes up.
su:ohh to tum jag gayi pata hai raat mein tum aise hi so gayi thi..aur
kk (interfering) : su hum mumbai wapas kab jaayenge?
su (shocked) : kk achanak yeh sawaal?
kk:su tumahar yahaan ka kaam poora ho gaya hai to ab hum wapas chal sakte hain naa.......(she gets up and moves towards the car)
su has tears in his eyes and is really sad (thinks) : iska matlab woh mujhse pyaar nahi karti....aur maine pata nahi kya -kya soch liya tha.....

they are going to hotel .
they reach the hotel and kk runs to her room.
she locks it from inside sits on the bed and cries : sorry sumit main tumhe hurt nahi karna chahti par main apne ghar walon ke marzi ke bina kuch nahi kar sakti aur hume mile to sirf do din huye hain........sorry ........par yeh such ahi su that ........................that
I LOVE U..........I love u very muchhhhhhhhh

are yaar su ka to dil tor diya verni!!! 😡

pehle se hi himmat nahin uta pa raha ta

...itne handsome logon key saath asie nahin karna chahiye... 😆

i'm jus kiddin!!! 😛

good twist Verni!!!!

n thanks for ur short and sweet post 👏 great work!

Originally posted by: ankuhujulover

wowwwwwwwwww heena....i luvedddddd it

brought a bigggg smile on my face 😃 😃

i luv fanfics 😳 😳 😳

and u ppl r doing gr8 😛 😛

thanks Anku di per aage dehknein this smile will surely turn into a giggle...then to a laugh and then finally u can laugh hysterically like su.

dono mil kar haas na 😆 😆 😆

no its very very very nice to hear that ur njoyin thank u!

Originally posted by: raji05

wow!! this is what a fanfic is like is it?? itz really awesome!! your expression is excellent! luved it!

hey thanks alot Raji....😉

(so sweet) 😳

why dont u have a go at writting i'm sure u'll be jus as good as ne1 here?

Originally posted by: dude068

thanks Anku di per aage dehknein this smile will surely turn into a giggle...then to a laugh and then finally u can laugh hysterically like su.

dono mil kar haas na 😆 😆 😆

no its very very very nice to hear that ur njoyin thank u!

yup surely fir su aur main hasenge

soooooooo sweet😳

kk really crying in her room n su too sad.he was standing on the door waiting to open...but it didn't...he was helpless
su went to his room n convince himself that he'll surely make kk luv him..kk packing his bags n is thinking of all those magical moments she spend with su...su planning how he can win kk's heart 😊
kk got out of her room..su tooo..both eneter the lift...kk doesn't know what to say...she is really sad about their separation...su thinks the other way..he thinks as if kk doesn't like him anymore
they reach the car..su keeps her luggage on the backseat..returns n opens the door 4 her
but she closes it...su surprised
out of sum reason...kk gives su a big hug
kk - i'll miss u..pata nahin main tumhein bhool paayungi ya nahin lekin tumse aakhri baar yeh kehna chahti thi ki main hamesha tumhari dost rahoongi ( still hugging)
su - lekin...
kk - shut up...don't say anything...let me speak now..u never let me open my mouth
su lil happy thinking what she'll say
kk - tum duniya k best stranger ho...tumne mere saath jaisa behave kiya..mujhe laga hi nahin k main kisi ajnabi k saath hoon..
su - mujhe bhi tum apni si lagi
and finally there hug ended
su - agar kismat ne chaha to hum dobara zaroor milenge
kk smiles n wishes that to happen
they sat in the car..n time passed quickly..kk tells su where his home was..su takes her there..it was a beautiful house
su thinks itni khoobsoorat ladki ka ghar bhi khoobsoorat
he was removing kk's luggage from the car..n he removed..kk asks him to cum inside..but he refuses
just then rahul came (kk's bro) n says kk
kk sees him n hugs him n cries coz su was going back
rahul - kya hua?
kk - kuch nahin..kabhi itne din aapse door nahin rahi na isliye..oh bhaiya..he is sumit...pune mein main inke saath thi
su - hi..
ra - oh..thnx a lot..aapne meri aamaanat ka khayaal rakha
su was about to cry there
su - wo to mera farz tha
ra - plz cum inside
su - nahin phir kabhi..
kk - wo 'phir kabhi' shayad kabhi na aaye..u said u can't deny what i say..so plz cum inside
su - ok
he went with them..meets her mother..bhabhi..n nephew
they all treat him very well..su is overwhelmed with this love n affection he got
they all sat n have chat..tea n all
su doesn't wanted but asks their permission to leave
kk not happy..she is sad as the world has ended 4 her
they went outside..su took her mother's blessings n shakes hand with rahul
says bye to kk...sits in his car n watches her..he could feel that even she isn't happy
kk went to her room saying that she is tiered
su too drove away the car
both crying n the song plays -

'kismat de maare..asi ki kariye
kisamt de maare ...oh asi k kariye
kisamt te kis da jor hai
mahi ve....mahi...ve...mahi ve... '

kk's mother says to rahul n his wife that she liked su..rahul says what she means
maa - are..mujhe su accha laga..hamari kk ko khush rakhega
ra - aap kya keh rahi ho maa
maa - tum to kk ko leke itne possesive ho k abhi bhi use bacchi hi samajhte ho..kya kabhi uski shaadi nahin karni
ra - aap bhi na...do pal nahin huye humein usse mile aur aap shaadi tak pahunch gayi...yeh to pata nahin k uska khaandaan kaisa hai...acche ghar ka hai ya nahin..etc..etc..
n he leaves saying this
his wife priya smiles n says to maa - yeh kabhi nahin accept karenge k kk bhi shaadi k layak ho gayi hai
maa - haan tum sahi ho...

a day later at kk's house
it's breakfast time..kk cums n is really sad
his nephew akshat - kya hua 'bua'
kk - don't call me 'bua' ..ok..call me didi
every1 smiles...they have break fast n ra asks her what happend in pune
she told everything....clearly..didn't hide even a single thing..but she didn't tell that she luvd su
ra - i'm proud u told me evrything..is anything u r hiding
kk - no bhaiya...
priya sees all this n assumes as she is missing su..she decides to ask her this later

there at su's house..his mother is shouting
veena - su breakfast karlo..
su - aa raha hoon..kitna chiltati ho
veena - tum pyaar se sumte hi kaahan ho
every 1 had breakfast..his dad leaves..his bro leaves 4 college
he n veena alone there..su tells her all what happend in pune..about kk but he didn't tell the he luvs her
both of them did the same thing and is suffering the same

2 days later..
rahul got an invitation to sum party...he asks evry1 to get ready as they r going 4 the party
priya - lekin party hai kiske yahan...
ra - wadhwa's k yahan..main jab chota tha to mujhe veena aunty apne bete ki tarah pyaar karti thi..wo log bahut acche hain...unse dobara milna bahut accha hoge

hope u guys likd this twist

rahul tells his mother that she'll have to cum as ther eis a party at the wadhwas
she says - wadhwas..u mean to say..
ra - yes maa..kul n veena wadhwa..
maa - but i can't go as i'm not feeling well..tell them to cum n do wish them also take kk with u
ra - haan sure maa..

he reaches kk's room..sees she is lost in his own thoughts
ra - kk aaj hum 1 party mein ja rahe hain..so get ready
kk - nahin bhaiya..i don't want to go
ra - kk..chalo na..tumhein acchaa lagega
kk unwillingly said ok

at 7 in the evening..every1 got ready..kk wore a beautiful lehenga choli in pink colour..she was looking just awesum..

om reaching the party..rahul saw veena
ra - namaste aunty..pehchana..
veena happily - rahul...beta tum itne saalon baad..
he calls kul
rahul take thier blessings n introduced every1 to them
rahul - aumty yeh dekhiya aapki kk ..
veena - are..tum itni badi ho gayi..
she hugs her
veena - kya hua tumne humein pehchana nahin
kk - nahin
rahul xplains the whole story to her
kk too seek their blessing
veena calls su...kk surprised
when su came...she was about to faint 😆 😆
both of them kept looking at each other
veena - yah sumit hai..
ra - hum pehle mil chuke hain..
veena - kahan
rahul tells everything
veena - oh..to tumhari kk yeh hai
kk still can't beleive that su is in front of her
su is really very happy..meets every1
veena - go sumit..take kk with u n show her our house
ra - ya sure..go on
su took kk's hand n takes her away..kk just didn't said anything..she culdn't beleive that su was with her
priya to rahul - kya ab bhi tumhein kuch aur enquiry karni hai su k baare main
rahul with a smile on his face - no..
su takes kk into his roon n locks it...

bas...enough..i want to write more..but i'm leaving here as i'm not good at romantic scenes..sum1 plz continue..
and do comment soon 😊

omggggg amrit ...the story is so wowwwwww 😃 😃 😃

hey amrit at first i woz thinkin yeh kya kiya tumne...pune ka trip inta chota bandiya only 1 day 😕

...but after reading the whole fing i woz like wow... 😉

awesome work!!!! 👏 👏 👏 kahaani kis mor par choree hai... 😆 😃

lehkin guys...no shaadi waadi jus yet plz....

...v need alot more getting together/ cute scenes...and many twists after all there gonna remain married happily eva afta in da end anyway innit????

...so plz dont rush the story