FF Kumkum- Ek Pyari Si Prem Kahaani #1 - Page 3

Ok…so both su kk are in the car listenin to da song…Su is really into it after all it is his fav….

Kk: for the first time is gazing at su. She wonders y she trusts him so much…

Su can feel that she is lookin at him…but decides to ignore it and let her stare for a bit. Tryin to b all cool he looks the other way as tho he is lookin out the window.

Su (thinking) who to ab bhi mere taraf dekh hi rahi hoge…akir huhi itna hansome…

kk- sumit…

su- …haan…(.answer like he's not interested)

kk-…woh…erm…woh

su (thinking) yes she's interested

su-..haan…woh

kk-..woh mein…

su-..woh tum kya?...turns towards her

Kk- su woh mein…

Su- kk..tum kya?...moving slowly towards her (their face to face)

Kk- sumit who mein kehna charahi thi…

Su- tum kya kehna chathi ho…(with a enormous smile)

Kk see that he is coming closer so she speaks real quick

Kk- sumit mein kehna charahi thi key tumhare gal per kuch lage hua hai

On hearing this sumits enormous smile fads into despair and he slowly shrinks bac into his seat. 😕

Su (tryin to talk as normal) acha…kahaan?

Kk points…su removes a cloth from his pocket to clean it…but he keeps missin the spot…without thinking kk takes the cloth from his hand and wipes it for him.

Kk- (realizing) sorry who tumse nahin ho raha tha na

Su (naughty smile reappears on his face) its ok

kk- yeh lo (handin back the cloth)

Su- purposely holds her hand…looks at her: sorry woh mein rumaal lehna chara tha..sorry

kk- blushes 😳

They arrive at the party…and sumit is greeted with a grand entrance…kumkum is impressed

Sumits collegue: are Sumit…aao aao aaj itne dar lagadee aaney mein?

Sumit looks at kumkum and smiles

Sumit- bus aaj dar hogaye

Collegue (looking at kk) aaye Mrs.Wadwa…njoy the party

Before kk can say nething the collegue walks off.

Su and kk at stood lookin at each other a little embarrassed

Su-(to himself) aab itna bhi mutt sharmao yeh title bhi main tumhai…aur sirf tumhai bohut jald dadoonga

Su is unable to resist the temptation kk…will u dance with me? Dehko akela to mein dance nahi kar sakta bohut ajeeb lagoonga na!

Kk smiles and nods…su leads her onto the dance floor…

…..take it away guys their all yourz!!!!

Originally posted by: tashi

nice ideaa

Thanks 4 readin! 😉

Hey JJ

Loved this line in ur post:

"mujhe to bas dil aur kundli milne ka intezar hai. 😆 "

simply too good had me laffin 4 quite a bit 😆...good work keep it up

....and eventually SUKK will fall in love 😳

fabulous every 1 keep it up gr8 work👏

Originally posted by: raji05

just one word....AWESOME!

😉 cheerz mate

glad u liked it...

hoping to see many of u guyz become regulars in this thread!!! 😃

Originally posted by: juhi_hussain

fabulous every 1 keep it up gr8 work👏

THANK YOU!!!

And thats on behalf of all the writers in this thread...they all deserve equal credit...👏

Originally posted by: rachandeep

hey just read it...fabulous!!!!!

thanks RACH!!!! 😉

but i assure u this post is not complete until ur expertise are added....

so here i'm again with the story

su takes kk's hand n they both get to the dance floor.the song was 'where's the party tonite'.initially both of them njoyed to the fullest.kk was dancing n su was just standing beside her n watching her
kk - tum ruk kyun gaye..
su - bas tumhein dekh raha tha..
music was very loud
kk - kya kaha??
su went close to her n said in her ear that she really dances well
kk - thnx 4 the compliment...
just then sum1 passes by them n pushes kk..su holds her tightly n just then song changes to-

'samjho na...kuch to samjho na..
aalam betabeeyon ka kaise tumko bataayein
dil ki pechida raahein chahein tumko hi chahein
samjho na kuch to samjho na...'

su really didn't wanted to leave her
kk - sumit mujhe chodo sab dekh rahe hain
su - oh..sorry
kk - don't b sorry
su overjoyed
kk - su mujhe yahan kuch theek nahin lag raha...can we go now
su - lekin abhi to hum aaye hain aur humne abhi dinner bhi nahin kiya
kk - hum dinner kahin aur kar lenge
she holds su's hands tightly n says plz...
su - whenever u say plz..i can't deny u
kk - then can we..
su - ok..i just go n tell the clients.u wait here.don't move
su went n kk stood there alone
meanwhile a drunk man approaches her n asks her to dance with him.kk refuses.he forcibaly hold her hand
su sees all this from behind n cums n asks that man to leave her.when he didn't...they had a fight
kk left that place n goes outside
su follows her..she was sitting n was crying
he sits near her n puts his hand on her shoulder to console her but she says not to touch her
su - are...maine kya kiya
kk - it's all b'coz of u
su - but what is my mistake
kk - why u took me to such a bad place
su - i didn't knew it was so
tries to b close her
kk - don't touch me
su holds her face n says - kk look into my eyes
she doesn't
su - kk look into my eyes..do u think i'm that kind of boy
kk looks into his eyes..they were full of tears as well,she realizes her mistake n gives him a big...hug
clap guys it's their first hug 👏 👏 👏
su immensely happy 😉 he wasn't going to leave kk
su - aaj jitna rona hai rolo..i won't let u cry again 😊 kk smiles..he wipes off her tears
su - shall we go 4 a dinner
kk - yes
they went to another hotel..su asks kk what she'll have
kk - kuch bhi..bas jaldi kyunki mujhse bhook bardaash nahi hoti
su ordered the food..waiter came n told them that it will take sum time...n leaves
su to kk - shall we complete our work that we left
kk - which work
su - dance
kk agrees n they danced on a slow song..very intimate dance..all the steps that we could just imagine..kk just melted into his arms...so romantic

sum1 continue now about what happened afterwards n tell me do u like this or not..plz leave comments 😊

After the romantic dancing and fine winein/dining….both are still sat at the table

Su: (thinks)…ab to waapis jaana hoga…kaash yeh waqt itne jaaldi nahi guzarta

Kk: kya soch rahe ho?

Su: nay kuch nahi…

….theres abit of a silence

Kk-Su both speak at the same time

Su-who mein…

Kk- sumit…

Both look at each other and laugh..then both try to speak again at the same time

Both: pehle tum…

Kumkum cant help but laugh 😆…Sumit is jus admiring her beautiful smile 😳

Kk: this is helpless, acha pehle tum kaho?

He wants to ask her for a walk along the beach…(yeh u guessed it the one and only alibag..dats the nearest 1 to pune anyway! coincidence!)

Su: ok..kumkum…erm

Kk: waiting

Su: (unsure if he should ask) erm…khana kaisa ta?

Kk: (a lil disappointed) acha tah…very nice

Again silence

Su: (tries again this time I'll ask for sure) erm…so did u enjoy tonite?

Kk: (massive smile) haan BOHUT maza aaya…it woz amazing…(getting carried away)…jaantey ho this woz the best nite in my whole life kyunke tum…

She stops…Su a lil surprised but also very happy to hear this..(smiling away like a maniac 😃 😃)

Su: (to himself) ab to tu usse keh hi dey! (about the beach guyz nothing else 😆)

Su: (plucks up all his courage)…

To late Kumkum gets up from the table

Kk: ab chalein waapis sumit?

Su: unhappily agrees…yeh moka bhi haath se gaya

Both are in the car on the way back…when sumit glances out the window and sees a signpost pointing out the way to alibag…he has an idea

He turns towards the direction of the sign

Kk: are yeh to koi aur raasta hai…yahaan se to hum pehle nahi aaye

Su: gabro mutt…mujhe pata hai is raaste ka….yeh ek shortcut hai..bus tum dekhte jao (very happy with himself)

Kk: acha agar tum key rahe ho to say hi hoga

Kk: (thinks) nay nay raasta say hi hoga! Aur agar hum ko bhi jaaein to yeh sumit hai na mere paas (she is also very happy with this thought)

Both are quiet and listening to the music…(sum slow romantic number)…and are lost in their own dreamworlds (kk thinking…I'm growing really fond of sumit) (su thinking am I ever gonna be able to tell her?)

Sumit looks over to kk…he sees that she is almost about to go the sleep

Su-(mutters to himself) are agar yeh so gaye to sar plan karab ho jiyega 😡

Su- kk….kk

Kk: sleepily opening her eyes…kya hua?

Su: …kya tum beach per walk key liye jaana chate ho? (smiles very cutely) 😳

Kk: (very sleepy now 🥱 … doesn't know what shes sayin) sumit itne sare supne ek saath na dikao…pause…excuse me mujhe Mumbai jaana hai…

Sumit looks at her and laughs uncontrollably…pagal hai bilkul pagal…😆 but his getting the feelin that maybe she too feels the same way about him. Su is still laffin quite hysterically…this disturbs kk and she wakes (still a little sleepy tho)

Kk: yeh tum akele kis baat par haas rahe ho

Su: still laughin cant get a word out

Kk: pagal ho tum

Su: pagal mein….laffs….pagal aur mein

Kk giving him a look as tho he is crazy

Finally su manages to restrain himself

Su: to chalo baato haan hai ya na hai?

KK: kis baat key liya

Su: wohi jo maine tumhe abhi pooche ti

Kk: not really sure wat he's asking so trusts her intuition and says haan

Su: to chalo phir utro!

Kk: utroon?

Su: haan beach aa gaye hai! Abhi abhi to kaha tha na tumhe jaana hai

Su grinning coz he got his own way! 😃 👏 Kk looks away and blushes.😳 Su gets of and opens kk's door for her gracefully. He extends his arm and she puts her hand forward. 😛

Both walk along the shore…su picks up the courage and holds kk's hand. Kk shuts her eyes tightly…it's a feeling shes neva felt before ( ❤️ )

Su's eyes r fixed on kk….she moves away from him but he pulls her bac towards him. (Shes got her bac facing him)

Su really wants to hold her close but sees that she's not feeling comfortable.

Su: khulfi khane chalein?

Kk: she nods

Afta getting their kulfi both a sittin on the rocks looking out at the sea in the beautiful moonlight. Both are sitting real close. 😊

Su is talking about how beautiful everything looks…

KK puts her head on su's shoulder…but Su carries on talking

Su: kitne khooburat hai yeh raat na?....chand bhi kitna khoobsurat lag raha hai. Kk who actually main tumse ek zaroori baat karna charaha ta…jub se maine tumhe dehka hai mera maan karta hai keh bas tumhe hi dehkoon…

…he continues expressin his love for her and finally he manages to say…

Su: Kumkum I love you! ❤️ 😃

He turns and looks at her…dieing to see her expression…but he is disappointed…😃😊😕 the same feelin and lust is not returned 👎🏼 💔

😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

😭

Actually Kumkum has fallen asleep on su's shoulder and is tightly holding his arm.

Su: (shaking his hed) maine jo...aur tum ho key...kumkum tum bhi na 😊….(su sighs) ab kya kahoon….I luv u!!!

(ur all probly sighin with relief 😆 )

He puts his hand on hers ! 😳

Both are sittin in the moonlight very close together…n to an end comes that romantic evening 👏

And to an end comes a very long post...😆

Ok dats it for now…u guys are probly finkin finally!!! 😉

So whoeva writes next continue from the next morning (their back at the hotel)

and guys plz do comment (thats what makes it all worthwhile 😉)