FF Kumkum- Ek Pyari Si Prem Kahaani #1 - Page 2

Originally posted by: verni

hi bachcha logggg fan-fic mere bina kaise poora ho sakta hai...........sorry for replying so late.........tthe beginning was.......suoerb gr8 👏
but tell me if i could also write so we'll begin it...........tell me ki kumkum ka flash back dikhaana hai ya phir continue at the same stage.......
i m always with u 😊

Thank you Verni...😳 👏👏

such mein jo bhi chahein likein...

i'm waiting for ur post now....jaldi likna plz!!!!

ok i'll write..it's going to b long so sit quitely n read...

sum1 calling kk's name.she thinks it is sumit but it is just her illusion ..no1 is there.she is missing su
it's the flashback...kk n su have met very romantically n accidentally on a road where kk was asking 4 lift..su stop the car
su - kya baat hai..aap yahan akeli kyun khadi hain
kk - i'm from mumbai n i've lost so wanted a lift
su - hey even i'm from mumbai...i can give u the lift...but here is a problem...
kk - what?????
su - actually i'm going pune right now for n urgent meeting n will b retutning mumbai after 3 days...so u'll need to stay with me...
( it was luv at first sight 4 su..he wanted to spend sum time with kk 😉 )
kk - but..how can i..
su - ok then i'm leaving..
kk - no..plz don't leave.i know no1 here..ok i'll cum with u
su happy from inside...says then lets go..
they both driving in a car...reaches hotel su books a room 4 her
kk was really very hesitant but su ensures her that he isn't a bad man at all..
kk 4 sum reason trusted him coz they were destined to meet...
kk asks su if she can use his mobile coz she wanted to inform her family about this...su agrees
( kk has a brother her bhabhi n her mother as her family)
rahul ( her brother) has no problem of kk staying with sum stranger...he trusts her completely but is just a little bit worried 4 her health
there at hotel...in the morning..both of them wake up..certain incidents happen which bring them closer...

what r those sweet moments..sum1 continue..n right now we shuld write the story as a flashback...with sum romantic scenes spent at the hotel in pune whaich brings them closer...then we'll write what happened b/w them that kk was missing su desperately as written by dude068

hope u all like this idea..write sumthing romantic n i''l continue about what happend to su that hez ignoring kk

write sumthiung romantic....how they xpressed their feeling to each other...the rest i''l handle 😊

wow amrit...u put a wicked spin on the story...i really loved it

(by da way my name is Henna guyz ...) 😳

I'm kewl with it

now for some romantic scenes...but rememba guys they've only jus met so dont get too carried away jus yet plz 😉

😕ok guys lets rewind a little- (hope you dont mind amrit)

Sorry if this part is too long…bare with me plz!!!

Sumit has jus booked them into the hotel and kumkum finishes her convo on the phone.All this time Sumit has been staring at her lost in his own thoughts….

…koi itna khoobsurat kaise lag sukta hai…kash yeh merey taraf bhi unhi nazron se dehke jaise ke mein ushey mehsoos kar rahan ho…

Kumkum turns after finishing her convo on the phone…Sumit quickly looks away…she approaches him.

Kumkum: um…excuse me…aap ka mobile…(she puts her hand out to give it to him)

Sumit: (he is still gazing at her…slowly he manages to say) chaleye mein aap ko apke kamre tak chor dehta hoon

Both make their way to the lifts…

Sumit- (to himself) ab kamra 12've floor par hai…kafi time hai is se baat karne key liye

He smiles to himself 😃 !!! Feeling quite confident...😛

The lift comes down and is empty…thank god! (he thinks). They both get in and the door are about to shut when somebody quickly gets their foot in between the doors. The lift doors open again and a guy steps in. 😛

Guy: Sorry mujhe jaldi thi is liye lift ko rok diya…hope u don't mind!

Kumkum: (smiles faintly) no its ok

Sumit: (quietly thru gritted teeth) are yaar mujhe bhi to jaldi thi…mera to kyal kar lehte 😆 😆 😆

Kumkum looks over to Sumit and thinks that he has said something

Kumkum: aap ne kuch kaha?

Sumit (looking v annoyed): nay nay kuch bhi naahi 😳

Kumkum: are u alrite? …(sensing that there something wrong)

Sumit: (to himself…teek to mein tub honga jab yeh hume akela chor de) 😆 😆 😆 😆 (bachara Sumit)

Sumit: Yeh I'm ok….just a little tired

Sumit watches the floor go by…only three more floors and this guy still has gotten off 😡 😡. On the 10^th floor the door open and the guy leaves...FINALLY!!!!

Sumit: Thank god! (a bit too loud tho)

Kumkum: gee??

A little embarrassed Sumit jus smiles 😳 (very cutely tho)…the doors close again.

Sumit: kuch kar sumit…jaldi nahi to yeh moka bhi hath se nikal jay hai ga. Bus do floor bache hain…haan main is se koi baat karta hoon….par kya??? Kya kahoon?

Bad luck Sumit! The doors open and they have reached the 12^th floor…bohut dar karde 😕

Both get out of the lift and walk towards their rooms….😃 😆

Ab kya hoga? Carry on guys….ur turn!!!!

Hope u enjoyed this scene...

Oh and 1 thing more…v still haven't give this fanfic a title

Anku is the only 1 that has suggested 1!!! So v still need to decide that

ohhhhh wowwwwww yaar the story is going gr888888888 👏

luved ur part amrit n henna....chalo u guys continue...mera dimaag aajkal ghumne gaya hua hai 😆 😆 😆

it's nice...nice idea......and well I will also post a scene but not now as I'm busy...sorry for that but i will someday....one day...lolz........well you all rocked in writing the updates!! luved them...even though it's just the beginning!!! 😉

Thanks for the comments guys!!! 😆 😆

...lehkin ab aise kam nahi chalega...u guys have to atleast try and write something...nething...😉

right Amrit??? 😉

hi...here i'm again with the story...sit still now 😆

kk-su walk towards their rooms..su isn't happy.kk reaches her room, su was behind her.she was about to enter when she saw su following her
kk - are tum mere peeche kyun aa rahe ho
su thinks 4 a moment - haan..i wanted to tell u that this room is very special.u can see the whole city while standing here.see the balcony is so beautiful
kk - just this...
su - no also i wanted to tell u keep the watering the flowers or they'll dry
kk - su have u gone mad..how can i water them..i'm not a gardener ..
su - oh yes..how silly of me..
kk - anything else..
su - no
kk staring at him
su - ok i'm going but if u need anything call me w/o any hesitation
kk - ok..
su leaves unwillingly
he left 4 the office meeting n told kk that he'll b back in 5-6 hours
he returns n is happy coz there is a party where su has been invited...thinks of asking kk but is little reluctant
he went to kk's room..she was watching the t.v n was getting bored
su - kk..will u cum with me to a party tonite...it will b nice party n u'll feel comfortable there.i assure u that u'll not feel bad...
kk - why would i feel bad..i'm so happy that u asked me.i'll definately cum with u but..
su - but what?
kk - i don't have any suitable dress.can we go shaopping
su - yes why not
they went to a mall
kk took very long deciding which 1 to choose n asks su several times
su - he bhagwan...kk tumhein koi dress pasand kyun nahin aa rahi..why r u taking so much of time...
kk looks at him with innocence
su - don't give me such looks
kk - actually both these dresses r very good...i'm not able to choose b/w them
su to the counterman - u pack both the dresses
kk - but i just need 1
su - u've liked both..so how can i refuse ur choice.whatever u want u'll get it coz u r with me right now.i can't say no to ur choice
and he leaves
kk lil touched by his words
kk- su tum apne liye koi..
su - nahin...mere paas bahut dresses hain..i can wear any.i don't need to buy a new 1.we shuld hurry as we r getting late
kk - ok as u wish
they reach back to their hotel
su went to his room n kk to her room
she was in a delimma to wear which dress...1 was red n other was black..she decides to ask su
she went to his room..he was wearing his shirt
kk - woh main tumse poochne aayi thi k main kaunsi dress pehnu 😳
su - haye rabba...can't u decide on ur own
kk - no....
su - ok show me the dresses
after thinking alot..he prefers the red 1
kk - ok thank u..i'll just get ready n will cum in 5 minutes
1----2----3 she took 3 hours n didn't came out of her room
su was standing outside n was continously asking her how long will she take
su - kk aur kitni der
kk - bas 5 minute su
su - pichle 3 ghante se tumhare 5 minute khatam nahin hue
kk - just chill su
su - how can i..every 1 is looking at me coz i'm shouting
kk - then let them look na...
su - u shall cum or i'll enter inside
kk - no..
su - just 2 minutes more
kk - but it's too less time
su - forget it..i'm coming..
he enter n is astonished to see kk looking so beautiful..he kept on staring at her with his mouth wide ope 😆 😆

my fingers have started paining now...sum 1 else continue on what happened in the party n how they get closer 😊

let me start. 😳
s-awesome
k-what
s-you ... i mean ur dress. 😛
k-thanx.tumhi ne to li hai sumit.
s-meri choice hoti hi acchi hai.jaise ki ye dress,ye room aur tum... 😃
k-kya kuch kaha tumne?
s- nahi....nahi to tumhe kitni der se bula raha hoon jaldi chalo late ho laha hai.mere clients ke 5 phone aa gaye hain.
k-ok.
they goto the car.he gracefully opens the door for her.
in the car:
s:abhi party mein pahunchane mein 2 hours lagenge.if u dont mind may i switch on the music.
k-oh!sure.i luv muic.aapko kaise songs pasand hain?
s-romantic and sad songs too.
k-hey hamari choice kitni milti hai?
s-(to himself)mujhe to bas dil aur kundli milne ka intezar hai. 😆
k-hey what r u thinking about?
s:nothing lets hear my favorate song:
he plays mere haath mein tera haath ho saari jannatein mere saath hon.

k-feels a little uncomfortable.
s-notices this and asks what is the matter?
k-nothing
s-oh mera gana sunke accha nahi laga kya?
k-nahi bas wo..
s-dekho mujhe galat mat samjho.i u r not liking the song i'll change it...
k-no no rehne do gana to bahut soulful hai...well i m sorry jo maine itni madat ke baadbhi tumse...
s-ssshh....
and they listen to the song
"jitne paas paas dhadkan ke hain raaz
utne paas bahon ke sangam
jitne paas2 sagar ke lehar utne paas tu rehna humsafar
tumjo paas ho to kya ye jahan..........


now please continue friends and tell me ur comments.
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Thanks for contributin guys... 👍🏼

...goin great... 👏

...i'll try and post the next bit real soon 😉

...but every1 else feel free also to continue