FF Kumkum- Ek Pyari Si Prem Kahaani #1 - Page 19

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su(talking to himself): bas yahi chahta tha main....ki tum kk ko apna lo.......i m very happy for u kk...........tum hamesha khush raho aur mujhe kya chahiye.......

and cries.....then he remembers the day he came to know abt his brain tumour.......

**** flashback.......

su doing some work in the office........his phone rings....he sees its kk's he smiles and picks up the phone.....

su:hi jaan
kk:hello sumit tum ho naa?
su:nahi JAMES BOND bol raha hoon....... 😆
kk:su gussa kyun kar rahe ho?
su:kk tum sawaal hi aise karti ho........tum meri jaan ho to main hi bolunga naa.
kk:achcha woh sab chodo ..........aaj tum office se jaldi ghar aa jaana.
su:achcha kya irada hai..... 😳 😳
kk:koi irade nahi hai...woh pandit ji aa rahe hain.....
su:aaj hamari shaadi hai........mujhe pata nahi tha...
kk:su ..shaadi aaj nahi hai aur kab honi hai yehi batane ke liye pandit ji aa rahe hain.......kundli se taarikh nikalenge.....
su:kk yeh pandit ko chodo chalo naa aaj hi shaadi kar len.......
kk:su be serious ..........achcha jaldi aana..........main phone rakhti hoon.......bye.
su:arey kk phone rakhne se pehle.......ek baar i luv u kaho naa..... 😳
kk:nahi ab shaadi ke baad....bye

she cuts the phone.......then again his phone rings......

su:lagta hai i luv u kehna hai....

su:haan bolo.

it's dr.vikram
dr.:su main Dr. vikram bol raha hoon.
su:ohh sorry .haan boliye........
dr:woh tumhari reprts aa gayi hain...
su:theek hai main aata hoon........

bachcha log i m tired.....plzzzzz cont.........

hope u all liked it. 😊

😆 😆 😆 😆.....JAMES BOND....hahahahaha...😆 😆 😆 😆

...ok ok....i'll stop laffin (well i'll try to newayz)

kewl write up verni....excellent work....as always! 😉

Originally posted by: ankuhujulover

CONGRATSSSSSS 👏

25 pages 😃

Thanks! 😉

Originally posted by: raji05

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great going!!

Thanks Raji 👍🏼

Do keep reading!!!! 😉

henna.......... cmon cont.........i hv thot something very gud when kk will know the reality.......but i cant pm u ...as my private messenger is not working............. 😡 i want to make friends with u.........but........

well thank u for liking my work.... 😊

bachcha cant answer through pm.........so
kundli milana is not very important.but still in rich families and the kind of families we are showing ...this has to be done. so i did it just and xcuse to show how su first time rejected kk to marry.........as that has to shown still..........

and this can happen...........in anyone's house........but probably ita the boy's house where this happens.... 😊

hey verni i thought we were already friends?...koi baat nahi...yes of course i'll be ur friend...

and yeh im working on the next bit now...

...wats wrong wid ur messenger?...get admin to have a look at it for u! 😉

was so heart broken when I read the line about sumit stopping the car and crying... 😭 😭 😭
I just hope ki operation teek hoga...
anyways...the flashback was a nice break...and yeah.. James Bond?? 😆
great work people!! keep writing!
And congrats on exceeding 25 pages!!

This is only the first part to my write up...thought might aswell post it before the internet feels like doing something funny...😆 (yeh its got a mind of its own) 😉

Su arrives at the hospital…

Dr: Hi su 😊…plz come through to my cabin…

In the cabin

Su: kya baat hai?..😊.…nothing serious I hope 😉…(smiling)

Dr: (frowns)…erm su…🤔...its not good news unfortunately…

Vikram tells him about his brain tumour and how they might be able to treat the condition (im not gonna bore u wiv the same conversation as they had in the real episode…but im sure u guys know whats said)

Su: (eyes watering) 😲 😲 😲

Dr: (puts his hand on su's shoulder) dehko hum na umeed nahi hai…😊(gives him his reports) 😳

Su: gets up to leave

Dr: …sumit suno…(calls out to him)😕

Su walks off in a hurry…he gets into his car and throws the reports on the back seat 😡…he's completely shattered..😭 😭

Su: yeh nahi ho sakta...😲…joot hai yeh 😡…. (he is shocked and in denial)

Su: meri shaadi hone wali hai…aur mein khushi khushi zindagi jeeonga……..sub joot hai……main nahi manta……nahi…..maanta …..(he drives off hurriedly)

Meanwhilst at wadwa house

….kk's family arrive..all dressed up looking fab!

In the car

Su on the otherhand is driving crazily…

Su: (thinks) aap ko brain tumor hai!....thinking of Vikrams words repeatedly 😒

Suddenly he losses control over the car and just swerves to miss an oncoming car…his car comes to a screeching halt…😡 😡 😡

Su: leans his head back onto his seat…he cries helplessly 😭 😭 😭

At wadwa House

Kk: (pacing up and down)….yeh sumit inte dare kyun laga raha hai 😕…ab isse shaadi nahi karni kya 😳…pehle to kitna uchal raha tah 😆 …(looks at the clock and continues pacing)

In the car

Su: manages to control himself…😳 .slowly he turns and reaches on the backseat to get his reports….he looks at them over and over again 😭…trying to find a mistake 😕…but its no use…

Su: (accepting the situation)…😵 ghar pey kya kahoonga….sub mera intazaar karahein hai…aur kk…who yeh khabi bardasht nahi kar payige….kaise kahoon sub ko?...sub meri wajah se duhki ho jaienge….mein sub ki khusiyan nahi cheen sakta…beshuk taqdeer ney meri sari khusiyan cheenli hain…😭

He puts his head on the steering and buries himself in his arms…he thinks to himself

At wadwa house…

Everybody is happily chatting away…but kk is sitting alone waiting for su…the other girls see her and insist she joins in the fun with them…they take her with them…

Back to su:

Su: main yeh baat kisse ko bhi nahi baatonga….khabhi nahi….mujhe aapni sari khushiyan bhoolni hongi 😭…kk koh bhi 💔…usse khabhi dukhi nahi dekh naa chahonga..aur who bhi meri wajah se….yeh shaadi nahi hoge…😭

Su wipes his tears and drives home….on arriving home…he looks once more at his reports 😒 and decides to leave them in the car for now….he goes in and his eyes look for only 1 person…(his heart melts ❤️ as always on seeing her…but he tells himself to be strong) 😳

He sees kk enjoying herself and laughing with the other…kk also sees su amd smiles 😃…but su returns an angry look…😡

next part will be coming up shortly....😉

good going henna 👏 👏 👏 keep it up
n verni do keep writing regularly 😊 👏 😃
i'm not in a good mood right now so will join u all later..don't worry..it won't b too long