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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Henna042

WOW Amrit awesome part!!!!

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

(round of applause every1)

kya likha hai....wah!....mazza agaya!!!

honestly i could just imagine it as well!!!!


Totally Agree!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
everyone is simply awesome.........
my chance........

dance is over.......kk tries talking to sumit and goes near him but he purposely walks away....he is standing alone.........when kk comes near him....

kk:su kyun kar rahe ho aisa?
su:kk i think main tumhe pehle hi sab kuch bata chuka hoon.......i m already married...
kk:lekin su.....
su's mobile rings and he says : xcuse me meri wife tina ka phone hai.....
and goes away and kk is left heart broken.......

it was actually tina's phone....
su:hi tina.
ti:su kal tumhe check-up karwana hai yaad hai naa....
su:of course i'll be coming tom........

he leaves.....

whole night both were very disturbed.......
next day...............

su-ti sitting in a coffee shop....

ti:su tumne yahaan kyun bulaya?
su:ti yeh checkup...operation karwane ka kya faayada?
ti:tum aisa kyun soch rahe ho........tum theek ho sakte ho.......
su:ho sakta hoon........its not a surity.....aur main sirf is doubt par kk ki zindagi barbaad nahi kar sakta.....and has tears.....

ti tries to freshen him up.......
ti:okk leave all this........kk ke baare mein batao......tumne to mujhe usse kabhi milwaya hi nahi........
su:kk bohut........sweet bohut pyaari si hai........aur mujhse bohut pyaar karti hai.......
ti:koi incident to batao........

su...........tells an incident........
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Posted: 18 years ago

hey verni...do u want us to continue with the alibagh storyline or a completely different scenario...for the flashback now?...

Edited by Henna042 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
.......
****flashback.........

su waiting for kk.....she comes after a while.......

su:kahaan thi .........itni der se kyun aayi?
kk:sorry sorry sorry.....woh bhaiya ka ek kaam karne lagi thi....isiliye..
su:achcha to ab tum mujhe shaadi ke baad bhi aise hi wait karwaogi.........aur....
kk:hello shaadi...?????
su:kyun tumhe shaadi nahi karni..
kk:karni hai.......par kisse...
su is annoyed........:ADOLF HITLER se........stupid mujhse nahi to phir kisse.......
kk:par tumne to mujhe propose hi nahi kiya.......
su:to.....kya ??
kk:bina proposal ke main shaadi nahi karoongi.
su (thinks.....:achcha mujhe tabg karogi)..:okk mat karo.
kk:kya kya????
su:haan mujhe tumjaisi bohut ladkiyan mil jaayengi.......
kk:su tum aisa kaise keh sakte ho?
su turns his back towards her and says:i don't need u....main mini se shaadi kar loonga.....
kk:su main tumse kabhi baat nahi karoongi....
su (without looking at her) :mat karo.....
kk abt to cry.....:su.....
he does not look........then feels she is crying.......
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Posted: 18 years ago
.........

su turns and sees her crying....

su:arey kk, plz ro mat main to mazaak kar raha tha.......i m sorry.
kk:nahin jao apni mini ke paas leave me.......

kk starts going away.......

su singa a song...
tu jaan hai , armaan hai........mere pyaar ki pehchaan hai.par thodi thodi si naadaan hai..............tu jo kahegi main waisa karoonga..........teri har zid ko poora karoonga..........chalo baba maaf karo hans bhi do........maine dil saaf kiya keh bhi do.......roothna manana hai pyaar ki ada........kaise jiyoonga main tumse hoke juda..........

kk stops..........

su:ab to maaf kar do.......i m sorry..........
kk:waada karo ab sapne mein bhi mujhse door jaane ki baat nahi karoge........
su:waada.......

*****flashback ends........
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Posted: 18 years ago
su has tears....tina keeps her hand on su's hand........

ti:dont worry agar tumhara pyaar sachcha hai to tumhe kk zarur milegi........

kk sees this from a distance.....

bachcha log now cont........i m tired..........hope u all liked it. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

ur tired?...i can imagine 😆

neways excellent write up...u did a good job! 👍🏼

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Posted: 18 years ago

Kk sees Su and Tina holding hands from a distance…she walks towards them…then she stops herself...she is a short distance away from them…Su has his back facing towards her…

Tina: mein kumkum ko dehk na chahoongi!...

Su: really...😊….erm…abhi key liye to mere paas bus yeh photo hai...

He removes the photo from his pocket….kumkum standing behind him sees it.

Tina: arre wow…she's really pretty! 😉

Su: (cheered up) haan hai naa! 😃

Tina is about to give the photo back to su when she stops…

Su: kya hua? 😲

Tina: kya wohi tumhari kumkum hai naa? (pointing behind him) 😆

Su slowly turns…and is surprised to see kk…and he hasn't even told tina that he has been lying that she is his wife. Tina is happy 😛 to meet her and goes running over to her. Su turns around again and holds his head. 😕

Su: yeh plan to gaya paani mein ab mein kya kahoonga kk se…kya bahana paatonga usse mein….

Meanwhilst

Ti: hi tum kk ho right? 😊

Kk: haan 😳

Tina: hi mein tina hoon…sumit ki dost 😉

Kk: 😲 dost…(shocked)

Tina: haan dost (happily)…its very nice to finally meet u! 😃

Kk: (smiles faintly) 😕

Tina: acha I have to go now…pehle hi bohot dare ho chuke hai…Vikram mere liye wait kar raha hoga 😳…bye!....(shouts) bye Sumit!

Both Su-kk are left looking at each other….

sorry guys but no Tina is gonna come between Su-kk this time...this fanfic is only and only about Su-Kk 😳 so please use only fictious character....

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Posted: 18 years ago

so kk staring at sumit...
she finally manages to control herself n goes near sumit...
kk - tum ne jhooth kaha k tina tumhari patni hai..
she holds sumit's hands
kk - bolo na..tumne jhooth kaha...kyun...batayo mujhe tumhari kya majboori hai..kyun tum mujhse door jaana chahte ho..
su - tum sachyee sun nahin payogi...
kk - sun loongi..
su - to suno..tum ab tak is galat-fehmee mein thi ki main tumse pyaar karta hoon..maine sirf tumhare bholepan ka fayeda uthaya...tumhein kya lagta hai main tumse..tum jaisi ladki se pyaar karta hoon..forget it...tum jaisi hazaar ladkiyaan mujhpe marti hain...
kk not convinced- tum ab bhi jhooth bol rahe ho 😭
su - tumhein jo samajhna hai samjho..maine tumhein sach bata diya hai..
meanwhile rahul comes n gets angry to see kk pleading to sumit..
he hold kk tightly n shakes her - kis insaan par apna pyaar luta rahi ho..yeh tumse pyaar nahin karta..
kk - nahin bhaiya...aap jhooth bol rahe ho...sab jhooth bol rahe hain...sumit mujhse pyaar karta hai... 😭
sumit's back was facing them..he started walking towards his car
kk - bhaiya mujhe jaane do..sumit chala jayega.. 😭
ra - jaane do use..wo tumhare layak nahin hai..
he is holding kk's face now
kk with a soft voice - i luv him...
sumit hear this n stops 4 sumtime but starts moving again..
kk - plz bhaiya..plz...mujhe jaane do..main uske bina nahin reh sakti..plz...
she was going very restless n rahul was astonished to see her undying love 4 sumit..
he let her go...
kk ran 4 everything...n hugs su from behind - i luv sumit..i luv u..plz mujhe chod kar mat jao..
sumit sum how managed not to get carried away n pushes her..kk fell on his knees n pleaded not to leave her..
by this time sumit wanted to hug kk n make her feel comfortable..but he cannot... he was thinking why can't kk beleive what he said
kk - tum kyun mujhse door jaa rahe ho..i know u luv me..u luv me more than anything..main jaanti hoon..tumhari koi majboori hai..hai na..plz..mujhe itni badi saza mat do...i luv u 😭
rahul just can't beleive that her little sister has grown up so big that she loves sum1 immensely
sumit with a million tears in his eyes just rushd to his car n left leaving kk alone..this was the last thing he didn't wanted
kk shouts while sitting there - sumit...
rahul comes n sits down n tries to console her
ra - kk..kk..dekho woh jaa chuka hai..ab waapis nahin ayega..
kk hugs him
kk - bhaiya...
ra - bas ab tum aur nahin royogee..bahut ho gaya..bahut seh liya tumne..ab aur nahin..
kk sobbing - lekin...
ra - agar meri behan ho to sumit to bhool jayo..warna..
kk - main use nahin bhooloongee..kabhi nahin... 😭😭
she faces away from him
ra sighing - wo ja chuka hai...ab wapis nahin ayega
priya came there n hug kk n asks the reason why she was crying so much
kk - main sumit ko nahin bhool sakti...

she will never stop loving her n she knows that he is doing all this due to sum reason..this is what true love is😊👏
priya understands what might have happened n makes kk stand n gave her a soothing feeling..
she manages to take kk to the car n they drove away

vishal has seen all this n he thinks - kk sumit se itna pyaar karti hai..akhir kyun sumit ne use thukra diya...bewakoof kahin ka..wo nahin jaanta k wo kis khushi ko thokar maar raha hai😡

he too leaves heart-broken...

at kk's house
kk is still crying n priya makes her sleep..
she goes to rahul n asks him to give her a lil time to forget sumit..after all she loves him so deeply

rahul says that now he can't bear kk like this..he will change all this...
pr - lekin aap yeh karoge kaise..
ra - agar kk mere saath office aana shuru ho jae to shayad dheere dheere sumit ko..(he knows she will never forget him but says this to console himself)...sumit ko bhool jaye

Edited by amrit23 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
😃

👏

great going!!

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