FF Kumkum- Ek Pyari Si Prem Kahaani #1 - Page 18

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dat just left my mouth hanging wide open...brilliant yaar....too good!!!!

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right...so heres the next bit...enjoy! 😉

Sumit is in his room…he is extremely angry 😡 with himself…he looks in the mirror…

Su: I hate you so much…yeh kaise kar saktey ho tum kumkum key saath…aapne kumkum key saath 😭….rulana nahi chahtey tey…usse dukhi nahi dehk naa chahtey tey…khabi usse pareshaan nahi dekhna chahtey tey….😡

Slams his fists on the dressing table…and sobs

Su:😡….dukh…dard…key alawa aur diya hi kya hai kumkum ko…aaj woh rohi hai to sirf tumhare wajah se…dukhi hai sirf tumhare wajah sey….😡 😡

He thinks about how he pushed kk away….and how she pleaded to him…

Su:(shuts his eyes tight) 😵 inhe haathoon se usse apniya tah…aaj inhe haathoon se thukradiya…😭

he looks at his hands…He clenches his fist in pain…. 💔

Su: yeh sub se to bether hoga key mein sub such batadoon….jo waqt bacha hain mere paas who to hum khushi khushi guzaar saktey hain…😒

He looks at himself in the mirror with pity….

Su: par nahin mein itna khudgarz nahi ho sakta 😭….meri khusiyon key liye kk ki zindagi barbaad nahin kar sakta😭…sirf do pal ki khushiyon ke liye usse zindagi baar ka ghum nahin deh sakta…😭

He falls to the ground helplessly crying…he holds himself…😭 😭

The next morning su is at the office when he gets a call.

Su: hello 😳

Vikram: hi su

Su: oh Dr Vikram 😲…how r u?

Vi: yeh I'm fine…actually su maine tumse ek zaroori baat karni thi…

Su:…please kahein? 😕

Vi: bether hoga agar aap hospital tak ajaein

Su: teek hai 🤔…maine bus tori dare mein aata hoon!

At the hospital

Vi: su who jo kal humne test kiye the…unka result aagaya hai mere paas

Su: …itne jaaldi…😲

Vi: haan…aur reports se saaf zahir hai kay humey jald se jald yeh operation karna hoga…😳

Su: dekhiye maine aap se pehle bhi….

Vi: maine jaanta hoon su lehkin agar bachne key ko bhi chances hain to hume jald se jald treatment shuru karni chaheiye

Su: nahi …😒 abhi mere paas bohut kaam baki hain…yeh operation mein abhi nahin kar sakta…kisse bhi halat mein…😔

Vi: try to understand…

Su: tum samaj ni ki khosish karo 😡…yeh operation namunkin hai 😭…aur bachne kay chances bhi itne khum hai…is operation ka koi fayda nahi 😡…isse bather hain mein apni bache hui zindagi jeeloon 😒

Vi: dehko su umeed nahi chorni chahiye…its possible u can recover fully 😊…aur phir tum apni zindagi jee saktey ho…tumhari marzi se 😊

After much debate they come to an agreement

Vi: 2 weeks…do hafton mein tum waapis aao gaye iss operation key liye

Su: (nods his head) haan…😔

Vi: su please make sure tum aao…isse zyaada delay karna teek nahi hoga😳

Su: I understand vikram…acha chalta hoon phir 😕

He gets up and leaves….outside the hospital…

Su: sirf do haftey hain mere paas…kaise hoga sub kuch…kaise? 😭

so guys hope the story isn't going too slow for ne1...we've given u so many doses today...hope that makes up for last week...😳

very well written henna 👏 👏 👏
i'll surely write soon..

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25 pages 😃

Originally posted by: ankuhujulover

wowwwwwwwwwww whht gr8 write ups......keep it up everyone 😃

thnx anku...

we'll surelly keep the good work going

well done everyone........ 👏

amrit and henna .....u both are brilliant..... 👏 awesome 😊

.............okk the story.....

su is thinking what to do so that kk and vishal come closer.......he then clicks on something.....
he goes to vishal's house....
he reaches and rings the bell.........vishak opens the door.....

su:hi vishal.
vi (quite angry after what he saw) :hi.
su comes inside.......:kya kar rahe the?
vi:kuch nahi...tum batao....kahaan se aa rahe ho?
su:kuch nahi........bas life mein to itne tension hain ki..
vi:ohhhh to kk ab tumhari tension hai?
su:kk??
vi:haan kk. su tumne uske saath jaisa behave kiya maine sab dekha.
su understands what to do.

su:kya dekha?
vi:jyaada bano mat su. tumne kk ke saath theek nahi kiya.
su:oh cmon vi woh bekar mein hi peeche pad gayi thi.....aur ek min tum mere dost hokar uski tarafdaari kyun kar rahe ho?
vi:dost hoon isliye kehta hoon...mat dhoka do use......woh tumse bohut pyaar karti hai.
su:...par main usse pyaar nahi karta........aur tumhe uski itni fikr ho rahi hai jaise tumuse apna loge..
vi:haan apna loonga use use itna pyaar doonga ki woh tum jaise matlabi insaan ko bhula de.......

su is unable to stop his tears but anyhow controls his emotions and speaks.....

su:haan to jao uske paas.....
vi:chala jaaonga.......
su:tum ek ladki ke liye apne dost ko thokar maar rahe ho.....
vi:haan kyunki tu kisi ke pyaar ke laayak hi nahi hai........su isse pehle main bhool jaaon ki hum kabhi dost the...nikal jao mere ghar se........get out....

su goes away.......sits in his car.....drives a little........stops the car...and cries........ 😭 😭 😭