FF Kumkum- Ek Pyari Si Prem Kahaani #1 - Page 21

Originally posted by: verni

hey bachcha henna and amrit gr8888888888 write up... 👏

dekho bachcha log...if u want something from me pm me.........i can't send pms can't edit anything and can't quote........only postttt 😭 😭

hope u wont take me wrong.....

No probs verni! 😉

wowwwwwwww wht lovely parts...

gr8 dearoos..keep it up

ok just a suggestion....,why dun u show a picnic or a day out in flashback...where sukk have gone out 😉 😳

This scene is as requested by Anku....specially dedicated to u! 😳

Su still sitting in his car…he thinks over rahuls words (or amrits words shall I say) 😆

"tumhari amaanat mere paas hifaazat se hai...jab chahe aakar le jaana"

After a long time su is feeling really relaxed and happy 😊…he shuts his eyes and for some reason a thought comes to his mind…

*flashback*

kk: su jaaldi karo…maine picnic aaj karni hai 😳

su: tumhare liye to kehna ahsaan hai naa…

kk: (looks at him and laughs) 😆 😆 😆

su: itna bhooj jo mujhe akele utana per raha hai…

kk: kya sumit…tum to bilkul bhi strong nahi ho 😉

su: (stops)…kya?..😲..kya kaha tumne?

Kk: yehi k tum strong nahi ho! (continues laughing at his expression)😆 acha mujhe samaan deydo main uta lehte hoon…(puts her hand out)

Su: nay nay! 🤔 maine kub kaha mere liye baari hai

Kk: acha? 😉

Su: haan…bus teek hai

Kk: chalo phir tumhi utao main kaunse actually utaney wali thi…😛 (walks ahead)

Su: teher jao samaan rukh kar batata hoon…😉(walks after her) 😆

They find a nice spot and decide to have a picnic there…kk makes su do all the hard work…(😆)….kk sits down…😆

Su: (looks at her annoyed) 😲 madam yeh picnic hum saath mein mananey aaye hain!

Kk: haan maine kub kaha key maine akeli manani hai 😃

Su: oh forget it….😕

Kk: nahi kya?...kaho jo tumhe kehna hai…😛

Su: (doesn't want to start nething so gives in) nahi kuch nahi kehna mujhe

Kk: acha!

Su: hmm....

Su lies down on kk's lap…😳

Kk: kya hua…takh gaye? (still trying to wind him up) 😛

Su: hmm (trying his best not start a fight) 😊

Kk: bus…itni jaaldi…

Su: aur nahi to kya….itni bagh door jo tumne karahi 😳(shuts his eyes)

Kk: looks at him and smiles…😆

Su: acha kk ek baat batao….

Kk: hmm…

Su: tum….is duniya mein sub se zyaada pyar kis se karti ho..😃(huge grin on his face)

Kk sees this and knows what he wants to hear….

Kk:….erm…….ummm 😉

Su: (open his eyes)😲….kya itna soch na pariga?...still waiting

Kk: arre moka do gaye to kuch kahongi na! 😆(laffing to herself)

Kk:….acha main sub se zyaada pyar….jis se karte hoon….woh hai….😳

Su: (waiting to hear his name) 😃 😃 😃

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Kk: ROHIT 😃

Su: gets up quickly…angry…Rohit se 😡

Kk: hi rohit…waves 😊

Su: (looks in the direction she is waving) 😲

A tall dark handsome stranger approaches them…

Rohit: hi kk…tum yahaan 😊

Kk: haan bus picnic key liye aaye tey…isse choro tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho?

Su: (looking from kk to rohit…he feels uncomfortable) 😕

They continue talking….and talking…at first su waits patiently….soon his patients starts to wear thin….

Su: (thinks)…arre intro to kara dehti?....kitna bhol tey hai yeh dono

Rohit and kk continue talking and rohit holds kk's hand 😳….su on seeing this becomes real jealous 😡

Su: (thinks) haath pakar ne ki kya zaroorat hai…door se baat karna!

Su not being able to take it nemore…clear his throat loudly…😳

Both stop and look at su…

Kk: oh sorry su…tum dono ko introduce karna to bhool hi gaye…(to rahul) yeh hai sumit 😳….(n to sumit)…yeh hai rohit….my best friend…😃(holds rohits arm)

Both su & rohit: Hi

Su keeps looking at kk resting on rohits arm 😡 😡 😡….he can't control his jealousy so he puts his arm around kk's waist and pulls her closer towards him 😳…kk just looks at su 😳…rohit feels uncomfortable…and so asks for their leave…

Rohit: ok then main chalta hoon 😳 😳 😳

Su: arre itni jaaldi…picnic nahi manaogey (mockingly) 😈

Kk: (gives su a stern look) 😳

Rohit: erm…phir khabi…see you then bye…😳

Kk: bye Rohit…(wave to him) 😊

Rohit: (walks off hurriedly)

Su: Big smile appears on his face 😃

Kk: (angry) tumne aisa kyun kiya? 😡

Su: (trying to be innocent) maine kya kiya? 😊

Kk: bano mutt sumit

Su: meri kya galti hai…😛

Kk: tum jaante the nah key woh chala jaiga?

Su: haan to usse jaaney do naa…waase agar tum bhool gaye ho tumhai yaad diladoon tum yahaan mere saath aye ho 😡

Kk: (turns the otherway) haan to kissi aur se baat nahi kar sakti 😭

Su: (pulls her towards him and holds her) ❤️

Kk: looks at him very annoyed

Su: (softly) chalo ab gussa choro….smiles at her 😊

Kk: tries her best not to but ends up smiling 😆

Su: yeh hui na baat

They hug each other…🤗

Su: haan to baato nah tum kisse sub se zyaada pyar karti ho? 😃

Kk: (look him in the eye) kehna zaroori hai…(blushes) 😳

Su: nahi lehkin suna zaroori hai…smiles cutely 😊

Kk: comes closer and whispers in his ear 😳….tumse!!!....

***Flashback ends***

The word 'tumse' echos in su's mind…and he finally snaps out of it….he smiles 😊 to himself and drives homes happily after a long time….

😛 😛 awesome!! lots happening here eh??? first rahul gets to know and then the wonderful flashback!! very very nice!!
👏 great going people...
am wondering if kk will get to knw abt su's condition b4 or after the operation.... wow! this is really interesting...to be honest, I'm more interested in this fanfic than the actual serial now ... cause su's dying in that 😭 😭 😭 and here I'm hoping he won't!!

Originally posted by: raji05

😛 😛 awesome!! lots happening here eh??? first rahul gets to know and then the wonderful flashback!! very very nice!!
👏 great going people...
am wondering if kk will get to knw abt su's condition b4 or after the operation.... wow! this is really interesting...to be honest, I'm more interested in this fanfic than the actual serial now ... cause su's dying in that 😭 😭 😭 and here I'm hoping he won't!!

this means alot to us raji😃😃😃

do keep reading..we won't dissappoint our readers😉

i m lovin it.awesome pls continue
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Originally posted by: jj thomson

i m lovin it.awesome pls continue
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Surely will do once i have some new ideas!!!...

...stay tuned!!!!....😉

thanks a lot henna fr such a spl scene fr me 😳

loveeeeeeeeee d story 😃

so sumit drove back home after a long time 😊
he reached his place n had a lil smile on his face..
ve - aaj bahut khush ho
su - hmm...
ve - haan hona bhi chahiye...hum sab ka dil dukhakar tumhe bahut khushi mili hogi na...specially kk ka di todkar 😡 ...jayo..manayo apni khushi
unlike the actual serial..veena is totally with kk n loves her alot n wants her as her daughter-in-law

so veena goes from there..sumit didn't mind what she said..he was happy with the fact that rahul had known everything n atleast there is sum1 in this world who now knows his pain (apart from kk)

next day...
sumit called rahul - main kuch dino k liye ..... jaa raha hoon (sorry culdn't think of any place😆 😆 )
ra - kyun...
su - wahan mera treatement shuru hona hai
n he cuts the fone
rahul knows he can't tell kk the truth..but he can make kk know the truth 😉
rahul to kk - kk..yeh dekho..yeh ek bahut zaroori project hai jo main chahta hoon tum sambhalo..is k liye tumhe ......jaana hoga..wahan 2-3 din rehkar kaam samajh aayo..phir..
kk stops him n says - main akeli jayoon...
rahul thinks - u won't b alone..sumit will b with u..(it's the same place where he has gone 4 treatement 😉 😛)
ra - to kya hua...mujhe tum par poora bharosa hai..
kk agrees to go n starts packing her bags
meanwhile vishal came to their house n asks rahul where kk was
he didn't wanted him to disturb kk-su so he said she has gone to her friend's place 4 5-6 days who lives in mumbai itself n will return when she wants
vi - lekin kyun..
ra - us k saath itna sab kuch hua hai..thode din bahar rahegi to shayad uska mood theek ho jayega...isiliye
vishal disheartened on hearing this...
says - jab waapis aye to bata dena
ra thinks - no..never..tumhe to main kabhi nahin batayoonga wo kab waapas ayegi 😆 😆
vi - aapne kuch kaha
ra - nahin..nahin..kuch nahin..main tumhe 'zaroor' batayoonga us k aane par..don't worry..
vishal leaves..
rahul says - thank god..ek musibat to tali

so sumit left 4 .... n kk too
both of them r staying in the same hotel..but they don't know this thing...

kk is being accompanied by her secretary who's name is shalini..she is very sweet n fum loving...actually rahul has chosen shalini so that she can lighten the mood of kk

their stay at hotel...
shallu (shalini) cums rushing to her room - mam..mam...
kk - shallu tumhe kitni baar kaha hai mujhe mam mat kaha karo..it sounds very old 😆 😆
sh - ok mam..i mean kk...
kk - acha bolo kya kaam tha...
sh - yeh dekho..main abhi bahar balcony mein thi..jab mujhe yeh invitation mila party ka
kk - kis ki party hai
sh - are apne hotel mein hi hai...kisi k honeymoon ki party hai...hum bhi chalenge
kk becomes sad on hearing the word 'honeymoon'..she remembers how sumit promised her that they'll give a big party when they'll b out at sum place

shallu shakes her - kya hua...kahan kho gayi..
kk - hmm..kahin nahin...
sh - to hum chalenge na..
kk - tum chali jaana..main nahin jayoongi...
sh - kyun...mera itna acha mood tumne spoil kar diya
kk - oh ho..to tum chali jayona...main tumhe thode hi rok rahi hoon..
sh sits besides her - nahin..main akeli nahin jayoongi..
kk - are..tum darti ho
sh - aur nahin to kya..is anjaan jagah main kisi ko jaanti bhi nahin...
kk - oh god...
sh with a big smile on her face 😃 - to hum chalenge na
kk - haan chalenge..khush...
shallu goes happily n kk started deciding her dress

sumit will also come in this party...so lets wait n watch what will happen next 😉