FF Kumkum- Ek Pyari Si Prem Kahaani #1 - Page 20

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i cannot bear it 😕 😕

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now see that kumkum know the truth on before her marr what do u all say .
sumit shouldnot die 😭

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Ok now i'll carry on...but its kinda long...

Meanwhilst kk is at home sitting in her room…she thinks about the night when they were supposed to get their wedding date fixed. She remembers…

*Flashback*

Sumit standing in the doorway looking at her. kk goes running up to him.

Kk: su tumne itne dare kahaan laga de? 😃

Su: (quietly)…bus office se nikal tey dare hogaye 😕

Kk: acha aao…sub humara intazaar kar rahein hai 😆

Su: tum jao main aata hoon 😳

Kk: ok per jaldi aana 😉

Su: nods his head

Su walks of to his room to get changed…kk goes back to everyone else extremely happy…

Su gets to his room shuts the door…he sits on his bed thinking of how to tell kk that he can't marry her…he sits there with tears in his eyes thinking…

….kk is still waiting for su to come out…

ve: kk yeh sumit kahaan hai? 😕

Kk: erm woh to change karne gaya tah…lehkin abhi tak nahi waapis aya

Ve: ja usse bhula leh…dare ho rahi hai

Kk: teek hai abhi aayi 😛

Kk goes to su's room n knocks on the door…but nobody answers…she knows his in there so goes in…she sees su sittin on the bed and joins him

Kk: arre tum ney to kuprey bhi nahi badley…

Su: woh mein…😕

Kk: sumit jaaldi karo naa sub humara intazaar karahein hai 😊

Su: lehkin…😕

Kk: mein kuch nahin suna chahtee…jaldi aao (gets up to leave)

Su: (grabs her arm to stop her) kk main tumse kuch kehna chahta hoon…😒

Kk: (listens unsure of what he is going to say)

Su: (unable to look her in her eyes)…💔 .kk mein tumse….sha…..

Before he can finish Veena calls kk

Kk: baad mein kehna….mujhe bahir bhula rahein hai… 😳(she kisses him on his cheek and smiles)…jaldi aana…ok 😉

Kk leaves and su is left with tears in his eyes…unwillingly he gets up and gets changed.

Outside everyone is really happy…su steps out of his room and sees every1s faces…there are really enjoying themselves….😃 😆

Su: tumhein kehna hoga!....tum kk ki zindagi aeise barbaad nahin kar saktey…

(he wipes his tears and looks for kk) 😭

Pundit: (to the mothers) aap ko khushi honi chahiye…kk se jo bhi shaadi karega usse bohut pyar karega aur usse bohut khush rakhega…

Both mothers are extremely happy to hear this 😆…kk also has heard and is blushing 😳…su sees her and holds her hand….she turns and smiles…😊he leads her away from every1 towards the terrace…

Kk: kahan lehkar jaa rahai ho sumit? 😛

Su: (not facing her) maine tumse ek bohut hi impt baat karni hai 😔

Kk:…per kya…😛

Su waits until they get to the terrace where nobody else is…kk thinks he is gonna start his shaytaani again…so just smiles at him 😃

Su: (serious) kk…dehko yahaan….turns her so that they are face to face

Kk: (playfully) hmm kaho?...😉.she leans forward and hugs him

Su: (thinks tearfully) bagwaan y are u making this even more difficult for me…how am I supposed to tell her this news when she has given nothing but her love to me…😭

Su picks up all his courage…managing to control his emotions…

Su: (serious) kk choro mujhe! 😳

Kk: (thinks he is messing around) erm…nahi 😛

Su: …kk 😒

Kk: tumhai kya lagta hai mujhe nahi pata tum phir se mazzak kar rahey ho? 😆

Su: shut his eyes tight he can't bare the pain….slowly he moves her away with tears in his eyes 😵

Kk: (a little surprised looks at him) kya hua? 😲

Su: (tearfully) kk main tumse……main tumse shaadi nahin kar sakhta! 😭

Kk: (shocked) dehko su agar yeh mazzak hai…to its not funny

Su: (quietly) yeh mazzak nahi hai 😭

Kk: (watching his expression waiting for him to burst out laughing but he doesn't)…

Su: heartbroken on having to say this …💔can't bare to see kk heartbroken either so turns and faces away from her💔

Kk: completely shattered falls to the ground…crying helplessly 😭 😭

Su: wants to hold her and tell but can't…he goes up to her and puts his hand on her shoulder

Kk: (angry) haath mutt lagana mujhe…😡.

Su: stops himself

Kk: mere pyar kya yeh silah diya hai tumne…😡 😡

Su: mujhe samaj nai ki khoshish karo plz…

Kk: aab kya sumjoon main….mere sapno…armaano key saat kilwaar kiya hai tumne…(she gets up) 😭 😡

Su: kk…mein..😭

Kk: bus karo nahi suna kuch….kuch bhi nahi suna mujhe…(she runs of in tears) 😡 😭 😭

She runs through the crowd and goes to her car…priya sees her and goes out after her…everybody stops and there is silence…😲😲

Kul goes to find su…

Su is sitting on the terrace crying hysterically….even he can't believe what he has just done…😲

Outside kk tells priya that su does not want to marry her

Pr: shaadi nahi karna chahta? 😡...(angry) per kyun? 😲

Kk: bus nahi karna chahta…😭

Pr: (putting her hand on her head) arre nahi nahi kumkum aise kaise ho sakta hai..chalo waapis under…😊

Kk: nahi bhabi ab ko fayda nahi…

Pr: chalo chalker baat to karte hai naa...😊

Kul finds su on the terrace…su wipes his tears quickly…

Kul: Sumit tumhare aur kk key beech kya hua hai…woh itna kyun roh rahi thi? 😕

Su: (angry at himself ) Dil tor diya uska maine 😡

Kul: (shocked) per kyun…aise konsi baat hogaye?😲

Su: maine usse pyar nahi karta….uskey bare mein baat nah karein plz…(su walks off) 😡 😡 😭

Kul: (calls out to him) Sumit…arre sun to…(but its no use su walks off) 😕

Kul is left there standing shell-shocked….He goes and finds rahul…

Ra: Kya hua Uncle…kk se koi gaalti to nahi hui? 😕

Kul: (extremely ashamed at su's behaviour)…nahi beta

Ra: to baatiyeh su neh kya kaha? 😳

Kul: usse ne kah….pause (tears in kuls eyes) usse ne kaha ki who kk se pyar nahi karta…😔

Ra: (shocked) 😲 😲 yeh aap kya keh rahein hain uncle

Kul: such hai…su neh aesa hi kaha

Ra: (angry) 😲yeh nahi ho sakta…kahan hai sumit…😡

Kul: rehne do naa beta…😕

Ra: nahi uncle…kahaan hai woh mein jaana chahoonga ussne aeisa kyun kiya 😡

Su comes out…

Ra: (walks quickly to him) su kya yeh such hai…key tumne kk se shaadi karne sey inkaar kardiya hai? 😕

Su: (in a serious tone) Haan yeh such 😳

Ra: (very very very angry) slaps su ….per kyun kya doosh hai meri behan kah! 😡 😡 😡

Su: (also a little angry now but doesn't blame rahul) dehko bether hoga agar tum yahaan se chale jao 😡

Kul: (intervenes) dehko rahul tum jao hum baad mein baat kar baat kareinge please beta aab tum jao 😳

Rahul leaves still very much angered….😡 😡 😡 😡

*End of flashback*

kk has tears in her eyes…😭

kk: Sumit muhje pata hai tumhari koi na koi majboori to zaroor thi…warna tum aise khabhi nahi karte…main jaante hoon key tum muhje se ab bhi pyar karte ho! 😭