FF Kumkum- Ek Pyari Si Prem Kahaani #1 - Page 15

sumit in the car fully determined that he will make kk marry vishal
thinking this he reaches vishal's house n takes his files n goe inside..they both have a lil chit chat...
vi - to sumit tumhari aur kk ki love story kahan tak pahoonchi... 😉
su - kahin bhi nahin...infact maine kabhi usse pyaar kiya hi nahin...
vi - what ???????
su - haan ...i don't luv kk
vi - no..no..no...tum mazaak kar rahe ho..tumhari yeh mazzak karne ki aadat abhi tak nahin gayi
su - i'm serious vishal...aur accha hoga k tum is sachhayee ko jald se jald accept kar lo...

sumit was helpless..he luvs kk but didn;t wanted to make her miserable so he decided all this drama..he wants kk with vishal
sumit leaves n vishal astonished to hear all this
sumit near his car crying 😭- yeh dard to mujhe sehna hi hoga..kk k liye..main nahin chahta ki kk mera intzaar kare😭...main to bas apne jaane k baad bhi kk ko khush dekhna chahta hoon 😭aur main jaanta hoon vishal se accha ladka kk ko nahin mil sakta... 😭
just then he remembers that he has forgotten HIS BT REPORTS IN VISHAL'S HOUSE....
vishal sees them n goes to pick them...
sumit rushes inside....
vishal opens them just then sumit snatches it from his hands - yeh meri hai...
n left 😉
vi - are to maine kab kaha k meri hai..lekin mujhe dekhne to dete ki yeh hai kya....sumit..are baat to suno
sumit sits in his car n leaves
su - agar aaj vishal inhe dekh leta to pata nahin kya hota...main yeh sachayee kisi ko bhi pata nahin chalne doonga k mujhe BT hai aur main marne wala hoon...

i knw it's too short but sum1 cont. or else i'll myself cont. after sum time 😆😆😆

ok i will continue.

next day sumit goes to kk's house.he goes to her room where she is sitting alone and crying.he himself cries.but as he enters her room,he wipes his tears.

k-sumit tum?
s-haan.
k-kahan chale gaye they mujhe choddkar.jante ho sab mujhse kehte they ki tumne mujhe dhokha diya hai par main jaanti thi ki mera sumit aisa nahin hai.
s-kumkum meri baat suno.......
kk-shouts and calls everyone
everyone cums
kk-dekhiye bhaiyya mera su aa gaya.....wo wapas aa gaya...bhabhi dekha aapkne.......dekh akshat su jiju wapas aa gaye.......su....i luv u ....main tumhare bina nahin ji sakti sumit ab tumse door nahin ho paungi...
(she is crying bitterly and hugging him tightly while saying all this)

everyone is happy hearing all this.
but su-baas......nahiin main tumse pyar nahin karta aur na hi tumse shaadi karunga....kyonki i am married....aur..aur tum meri patni ko dekhhna chahhti ho to ye dekho......he takes out a photo from his purse in which he and a girl is shown in wedding dress.he says ye hai mera pyar meri patni meri ardhangini TINA..
kk-is shell shocked.nahin su kehdo ki u r joking.....bolo na...main nahin manti....yeh sach nahi hai...ho hi nahin sakta........tumne mujhse waada kiya tha.......nahiin.......sumit jawab do....
su-nooo.........mera pyar sirf tina hai....tum ab mere like sirf ek ajnabi ho.....
kk-(crying helplessly)paraya kar diya mujhe ek pal mein......kuch nahi hoon main tumhare lye......jhuth tha hamara rishta... pyaar....vishwas.......sabkuch......jhuth na.....
she feels giddy and faints.
su-gets worried.kya hua kk....kk......tum thik to ho na......kk...he takes her in arms bur rahul stops him.
ra-nahin haath mat lagana meri bahan ko.....uski yeh halat tumhari wajah se hai....jao yahan se......leave...
su-goes away

su-standing outside kk's house.
a girl cumes out of the car.it's tina.ahe holds su who is crying helplessly.
su-ye...yeh sab mei wajah se ho raha hai tina...mere karan kk ki ye haalat ho rahi hai aur main kuch nahi kar paa rahan hoom......
ti-su pls control urself kuch nahin goga sab thik ho jayega..main aur vikram tumhara treatement kareenge aur bas ek operation ke baad sab thik ho jayega....
su-thaik ho jayega ....kya thik ho jayega? haan.....ek operation jismen meri jaan chali jayegi...tum aur vikram nahin samajh rahe ho....kuch nahi samajh rahe ho....
ti-ham samajhte hain tumhari haalat su kyunki dr ke saath hum insaan bhi hain......maine aur vikram ne bhi ek dusre se bahut pyar kiya hai.....


now i m tired pls someone else continue

yayyyyyyyyyy!! finally the fanfic is going ahead!!
great pieces guys!! 😃

hey jj thomson...............u did a gr8 job........
well i was a lil busy sorry but now i m here again..........chalo amrit tum reality sambhalo aur main waapas imagination ki taraf jaati hoon......... 😉 😳

great going.
tina wahv 😃 .
actully there is some pro in my net so i cant write and also i am having exams.
sorry yar 😭 .
i hope su gets operated 😭

i'll surely will continue it
just wait 4 sumtime...intzaar ka phal meetha hota hai 😉

ok guys I'm back...actually I needed a break from revision...😆

so here goes...

Later on that evening su is sittin in his room on his bed wanting to be alone…

On the other hand Vishal has been thinking a lot about what su said…

Vi: Kya who such mein kumkum se pyar nahin karta?...nay…I don't believe this…sumit aise keh sakta hai….😕

he is very puzzled…he wonders and wonders…then has a thought…

Vi: Kahein sumit ko yeh to nahi pata chalgaya kay mein kumkum se pyar karta hoon…aur woh meri wajah se…humare dosti key liye yeh sub kar raha hai?.....😃

….par nahi sumit ko kaise pata ho sakta hai! 😕

He decides to call su and ask him weather what he heard was correct.

Su looks at his phone and unwillingly picks up…😔

Vi: (happily) Hey Su! 😃

Su: (putting on his normal tone) haan vishal bolo…😳

Vi: Maine tujhe se ek baat poochni thi…lehkin such such bol na…ok?...yeh na ho jawaab dey kar tum zindagi bar pushtao…😉(says this jokily)

Su: Kyun aise konsi baat hai? (confused)😕

Vi: batata hoon…pehle bol…such kehehga?

Su:…haan

Vi: (seriously) Kya tune kabhi kk se pyar nahi kiya?...kya who sub natak tah?

Su: (has tears in his eyes on hearing this)

After a long pause

Su: (trying to be strong) nahi…..kabhi nahi…pyar kiya…💔 he closes his eyes trying to stop the tears from rolling down his cheeks…saying this is really breaking his heart. 😭

Vi: to phir sumit mein tumse kuch kehna aur poochna bhi chahta hoon!

Su: kya…😕

Vi: Sumit mein kumkum se pyar karta hoon…bohut zyaada pyar

Su already knew this but on actually hearing this su is heartbroken 💔…he feels angry 😡…jealous…guilty …finally he manages to control his emotions. As vishal goes on su thinks to himself…

Su: (thinks) apne aap per kaboo rako…yeh hi to tum chahte tey….key kumkum ki zindagi mein koi aur aajaye…tumhe yeh dard sehna hoga kumkum ki khushi key liye! 😵

Vi: to su tumne kya soocha hai?...I mean kay tum khush ho naa mere liye?

Su: (his hearts telling him no but he forces himself to agree) haan…😵

Vi: dats great! Ab su tumhe mere madat karni hai..kumkum key kareeb hone ka koi raasta socho…😛

Su: vishal chinta mutt kar…is ka bhi koi na koi solution nikhal loonga.😳

Vi: Thanks Su…acha phir rakta hoon..bye! 😃

Vishal hangs up and su is completely shattered. He feels everything is slowly slipping out of his hands…

Su: (tearfully)😭 sub kuch chin raha hai mujse…pehle meri zindagi….aur ab mera pyar…sub kuch koh diya hai maine….sub kuch!...😒

He lays his head on his pillow and lies there longing to be with kumkum.

Su: ...mujhe maaf kar dehna kumkum...I'm so sorry...😭

ok dats it for now...back to revision i suppose...

...Hey one thing i gotta say but no1 take offence plz... 😳

the tina bit doesn't make sense...coz the wadwa's n kk's family know each other quite well...n the grown ups were for kk-su's love...they all were on su-kk's side...

...so i don't think that ne of the characters would believe su if he said that...so i fink that we should forget the tina part.. 😕

...unless ne1 else has an explanation..as to how it fits in with the story 😊

wowwwww gr8 going henna...keep it up 😃