FF Kumkum- Ek Pyari Si Prem Kahaani #1 - Page 16

Originally posted by: nature

though it's going slow 😛 😆 but still gr8 going !!!! 👏

yeh i know its a bit slow but i'm kinda busy rite now wiv exams n all...hopefully it'll pick up again when im free....n every1 else please continue contributing! 😊

...hey nidz does this mean ur a regular reader then? 😉

Originally posted by: ankuhujulover

wowwwww gr8 going henna...keep it up 😃

1 word as always! 😉

THANKS! 😆

hehe...vishal and sumit's conv was very well written!!! 😊

so far i have been a silent reader, but i think that i have to comment now. This story is amazing! 👏 👏 and so well-written. i can't wait to find out what happens next, pls continue soon

Originally posted by: raji05

hehe...vishal and sumit's conv was very well written!!! 😊

...well i don't think i can thank u enough times Raji...but onces again i'll say it...😆

....thanks alot!!! 😉

will write soon.....i promise 😊
i hv made a gud plot....... 😛

it was really gr8 part henna 👏 👏

at kk's house...
every1 is surrounding kk's bed (remember she is unconcious)
kk slowly opens her eyes
kk - sumit....
rahul almost angry n sad on hearing this
priya stops him from saying anything n makes kk sit
pr - kk...ab kaisi tabiyat hai tumhari
kk - bahabhi...yeh sab...main theek hoon...
pr - are jab tak hum apni kk se saath hain..tumhein kuch ho hi nahin sakta..
kk hugs priya n rahul goes from there
akshat - didi...ab app phir se behosh mat hona...hum bahut pareshan ho jaate hain..
kk - acha..apko didi ki phiq hai...
ak - hann...itni saari (he stretches his hands)
kk smiles n kisses akshat
pr - jao..akshat tum bahar jaakar khelo..
ak - kyun..mujhe yahin didi k paas baithna hai
pr giving him a stern look - akshat...
n he leaves...
kk - are bhabhi..aapne akshat ko kyunkaha jane ko...
pr - coz i wanted to talk to u
kk - plz bhabhi..agar aap chahti hain ki main sumit ko bhool jayoon to main aesa kabhi nahin kar sakti
pr - nahin..main yeh nahin keh rahi k tum use bhool jayo..yeh tumhari zindagi hai..tum jo chahe karo..lekin yeh mat bhoolna ki tumhari zindagi k saath kayee aur zindgiyaan bhi joodi huyee hain..hum sab bhi to tumhare apne hi hain...tumhein is haalat mein dekhkar hum bhi har din ek maut marte hain...tumhare bhaiya tumse kuch kehte nahin lekin wo bhi bayaan nahin kar sakte ki wo kitna dukhi hain....
kk becomes silent
priya continues holding her hand - kayee bar humein zindagi mein kuch ehem faisle karne padte hain...shayad tumhari zindagi ka sabse ehem faisla yehi hoga k tum apne ateet mein rehna chahti ho aur hum sab ko yoon hi dukhi dekhna chahti ho ya phir ek nayee zindagi shuru karna chahti ho....
she leaves n on reaching the door she turns back n says - tumhari ek banaavti muskaan bhi is ghar ko phir se zinda kar degi...
she closes the door n went...
kk thinks - bhabhi sahi keh rahi hain...main itni selfish to kabhi nahin thi...lekin main sumit ko kaise bhoola doon...wo mera sab kuch hai...par main koshish karoongi k apne pariwaar ko thodi si khushiyaan de sakoon.thodi takleef zaroor hogi lekin main...main khush rehne ka naatak to kar hi sakti hoon

she decides that from now onwards..she will have a fake smile on her face..n that she will never ever foget sumit...

Originally posted by: jiankshom

so far i have been a silent reader, but i think that i have to comment now. This story is amazing! 👏 👏 and so well-written. i can't wait to find out what happens next, pls continue soon

Thanks for commenting...it really does mean alot 😃

plz do continue reading 😳....and joinin in the fun

stay tuned...we've got a long way to go yet!!! 😉

WOW Amrit awesome part!!!!

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

(round of applause every1)

kya likha hai....wah!....mazza agaya!!!

honestly i could just imagine it as well!!!!